Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-24296957-20141130191712/@comment-5426254-20141201233350

Since I enjoy making characters and analyzing their pros and cons, I guess I will take a shot. For now it's just Amet Revfold.

Boy, am I having a field day with this.

Background: This comes off as something tricky. He obviously has a backstory full of sadness, but it seems a little extreme, coming first from an esteemed background, then being demoted to an ordinary life. And it becomes a little apparent that his attempts to foster race relations with Faunus will cause skepticism, especially with the disappearance of his clans. May cause some concern, but not much.

Personality: It becomes clear that even his major weakness of social awkwardness cannot counterbalance the many positive attributes about him. Major concern.

Abilities and Powers/Fighting style: OH MY GOD. First, he has super reflexes as a Semblance. Second, Aura cannot be used as a special form of vision- only for blocking and healing. He also has too much of it. Third, he is super smart in terms of combat, able to analyze every proven combat situation. Fourth, his martial arts technique gives him a peerless amount of battle focus. Fifth, there is no fixed range, or any other statistic to prove the damage, range, or fire rate limitations, among other factors of the Dust fireballs from his sword, making it possible that the fireballs shoot quickly, at long range, at a fast rate of fire. Moreover, his weapon is a one-handed, heavy-hitting great sword, but he can hold it as if it was light. An exact magazine capacity is required for Potenza di Fenice, for how much ammo he can load, to prevent infinite fireball spamming. Sixth, he also has an impregnable defense with his gloves, functioning as backup weapons/shield. Seventh, his CQC skills are super proficient. Eighth, he is basically the Remnant equivalent of Code Geass' Lelouch vi Britannia- a person that is peerless in strategizing and thinks ahead of the enemy, and not helping this is that his family taught him their tactics, as well as providing him with specialized Dust that shoots his fireballs. This kid has it all, and can give Pyrrha Nikos a run for her money.

Because of these reasons, Rejected.

Another thing to note - if his family specializes in Dust research, and holds a large chain, then shouldn't his family's fame be approaching the Schnee Dust Company?

-Gundam Legilis