Talk:Eventi A. Takeshi-Meso/@comment-5431934-20140207215536

Although not a very significant issue, please remove the references to some form of rechargeable Dust, as we've seen nothing of the sort in the show, with characters simply purchasing more.

There is no mention of why Galland was so simply destroyed - did it have no garrison or armed forces to protect it? Were none of the inhabitants capable of fighting or contacting outside sources for assitance? As per the new rules, fan-made towns are required to have some form of protection, as it seems unlikely that such a place would last for any significant amount of time whilst lacking any form of protection.

It's still quite hard to believe how eight Beowolves were capable of killing 85 trained humans, keeping in mind that humans have aura and are thus highly resistant to harm. With this in mind, one of two issues comes into play when dealing with Eventi's weapons: Either A, they break the restriction on automation in weapons by reacting by themselves to protect the wielder, or B, she is merely highly overpowered, as she is evidently more powerful than 85 guards at only the age of sixteen. There's also still the discrepancy where you claim it took minimal effort for her to kill the beowolves, yet exhausted her to the point of fainting.

Still no explanation of why exactly any of this must be kept a secret from the other students - her goals aren't anything out of the ordinary, and her age isn't anything overly exceptional, considering that nothing out of the ordinary really happens for fifteen-year-old Ruby.

For the above points,

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--

The complete lack of another source of Dust outside of Galland, although quite odd, is not cause for rejection, although it is quite strange that they had neither a stockpile of Dust, nor had they attempted any form of excursion to retrieve more dust from Galland, nor had they simply reached out to another source for it.

Still the confusion about why they would be riding horses in a futuristic setting with airships and motorized vehicles.