Thread:PisceanWaterbender/@comment-33025752-20170920015212/@comment-30530552-20170929174549

Alright, so looking at her Semblance.

Recommendations, requirements, & questions are in bold.

Attribute-boosting Semblances are fine, but like all reasonable Semblances on the Wiki need their limits defined. Here's what you have so far:


 * You've mentioned time is a factor. I would recommend defining this amount of time, because otherwise it's up in the air. Otherwise, define it as "as long as her Aura holds OR holds to n degree."


 * There's an Aura drain for sustained use, which is amplified if she uses it on herself. As a general rule of thumb this applies for most, if not all Semblances, with only 1 conjectural example of the contrary in the show (Qrow, seemingly). Is there a sustained rate for the percentage of her Aura she loses in a specific amount of time for a specific level of boosting? How does the base strength and other "stats" of affectees factor into this, if at all? How much does it change if she only affects herself OR only one other person?


 * Affectee must be in her line of sight unless she's affecting herself. This one's good.


 * One prowess at a time. Depending on what you decide with your timing and Aura loss, you could potentially turn this to two for an additional cost of sorts, such as decreased duration or greater Aura drain; your choice there. I'd also recommend describing what's considered "mental prowess," because that might vary from person to person.


 * Maximum of two affectees at a time. I also like this limit you've set.

'''Final question for now: Does the boost stay full strength the entire time it lasts? '''

Most of these questions can be answered together, and I merely ask this many because by being vague, you do a disservice to yourself and others; To others by not knowing what your limits are, and yourself for the potential to make your power levels inconsistent (such as Coco's strength in the Volume 2 finale vs. her strength during Volume 3.)

Hope this helps you...if you decide this Semblance doesn't work, let me know and I can try to provide a follow-up. Alternatively, you could also ask in the @fanon_help_chat on the Discord, I'm sure people have some ideas there, if you haven't asked yet.