Talk:Orion Kane/@comment-25857155-20150605134816

Alright, my review, per your request.

Ok, I like what I see thus far. :)  The reckless attitude is very... well, it's realistic.  That is to say, I would likely be quite exasperated/annoyed with this character.  If I can figure out what kind of reaction I would have to meeting a character IRL, then you're doing pretty well in my opinion.

I absolutely love the weapon - especially the name, which seems to reflect the character's sense of humor quite well. Also, 'tis quite direct, though it might be a bit impractical to hold. Then again, he has practice using it.

His semblance seems well balanced at first, but basing the weakness period on how LONG he spent buffed seems to make it a bit broken. It seems like he could just spam the 6x strength every 3 seconds, the way you describe it. Maybe if you weakened him for a time based on how much he strengthened himself instead, and reduce the time reduction per multiplier by just a bit? I dunno, just a suggestion.

History. It's "Vale," not "the Vale-" Unless you mean "the Kingdom of Vale." Let's see... it doesn't sound like he made it through Signal "quietly," exactly, though perhaps "smoothly...?" Or maybe not. Eh, just rethink that adverb. =P

All around, I like him quite a bit. Not too over-the-top, a bit quirky, far from boring... well-rounded, looks like. Though, the weapon and semblance don't seem to compliment each other very well, now that I look at it (not that I did a good job on that either XD).