Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-24296957-20141130191712/@comment-25015424-20141201203453

I'll review Iona Angelo since everyone seems to be reviewing her.

Her appearance seems okay, as I haven't seen anything wrong with it. Appearances in general rarely affect characters in my opinion, at least from the RWBY-verse. You didn't state what is her faunus feature though.

On her backstory, it'd be helpful to state at what age did her new parents start teaching her how to become a huntress. The backstory overall does make sense, but where did she get her scar? I'm assuming in the fight where she discovered her semblance. Adding the story of how she got the scar would be appreciated.

Iona's personality - It is, I have to point out, kind of overused, but that doesn't affect her overall rating either. That's all I have to say about her personality for now.

Her semblance is speed, or stacked speed. It seems interesting, plus it has its downside. I see nothing wrong here, either.

Both your character's first and last names mean a color or make you think of one. Iona translates to Purple jewel, while Angelo reminds of the color white. Though, her last name's meaning or connection to a color isn't in the trivia.

I'd say accepted, as the only issues she has are small ones.