Talk:Shane "the guiltless" Quillen/@comment-17970636-20140707224233

Alright, let's take a look here...

First off, we don't know the timeframe which RWBY is set in, so being born in the year 96 is really a shot in the dark. Remove that.

We don't know how the Schnee Dust Company pays people. It could be that each worker is paid over a million bucks, or next to nothing, again, a shot in the dark.

Also, it is known that the Schnee Dust Company uses faunus labour and dislikes faunus. He's not a faunus, so if his parents worked for the company, the fact that they didn't get paid enough may very well be false.

His weapons make no sense as katana's are generally short, and having handguns attached to them, or being part of the weapon, makes no sense. The image in my head makes these weapons off balance and hard to use, not to mention impossible for fast slashes, which is what he seems built for.

Not only that, fighting on top of his weapon gives him NO space to dodge and NO space to move to swing in. It's odd and improper, he's not Sasuke using his lightning katana to disable one of Deidara's mines.

A semblance that controls gravity to that extent is uncanonical and unrealistic, not to mention OP. Creating a gravity field with a region with gravity already in it to that extent wuld cause a huge imbalance between the forces and eventually cause a complete collapse of that region. Not only that, but semblance has been shown to be an internal thing that helps someone in battle, glyphs are one thing, but they don't have their own gravity and whatnot.

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--