Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-27603392-20140704110526/@comment-25228627-20140828203251

Tianee Musk

I'm gonna do this in parts.

Appearance: (the appearance of a character doesn't really affect them being accepted or not, so, not gonna review this part.)

Personality: If she acts mature and has an above average IQ, wouldn't she be acknowledged as a grown-up in the first place? Also, doesn't she hunt reindeer too? Overall, very nice character design. I can imagine an interesting rp with it.

History: I imagine falling off a cliff would do more damage than just a broken shoulder, but if it's a small cliff, understandable. Wouldn't she bring her weapon to a hunting trip in the first place, especially when she's going out alone? How would she hold back the Ursa with just her bare hands (assuming she had no combat experience/training)?

Weapon/Abilities: Her preferred way to finish an enemy contrasts greatly with her personality, but still very cool. As for the aura, elaborate. How does it make the kill more painful? Aura has not used for offensive purposes in canon, nor has it been transferred to weapons. Her semblance, does it freeze both her and her opponent so they can't move at all? Then it would just put them in a stalemate and wouldn't do much at all. When a ranged attack is blocked, does the attack dissipate or is it just stopped for a few seconds?

Overall, I really like this character. Creative weapon and history, and I like the allusion to Bambi. Her personality, history, and weapon are all tied together very nicely. Though if I were a reviewer, I would put it in "Awaiting Canon Info" due to the aura thing. (If that's not a choice, then accepted.)