Thread:LizzieRose/@comment-28257386-20140718010456

Excuse Ms. Lizzie, but I was wondering if I could ask you to do a review on a story I've written, A Pawn's tale? I would simply ask that you just give the story a look and tell me your honest opinion on it like if it is well-written, if the characters are ok, if I have given them a decent amount of personality, wether the pacing is good and all that jazz. I would also ask that you pay special attention to the character Zahn Fa, as he is the primary main character and I have a few doubts about how I wrote him. You seem like a very intelligent person as you have written a large number of Wiki pages as seen on your profile and that is why I am asking you. I know it doesn't say that you do story reviews, but I was curious if I could ask you to do that. At the same time, you appear rather busy, so you are welcome to decline to review if it doesn't suit you or if you are busy. I will respect that decision. You are also welcome to take a look at the Character page links and provide your own input on my OCs if you desire.

Thank you for your time. 