Thread:ZackOJ/@comment-26362067-20160505161811/@comment-26362067-20160511152858

Well, first note: It's "Vale", not "Veil".

I also suggest expanding on his personality.

Not sure whether the Semblance is good... Gonna have to just toss him in Pending to find that out.

Besides that... not much. I still think you would benefit from putting more info in all-around, with all your OCs. I mean, they're kinda bare-boned, right now. Not much depth, if you know what I mean.