Talk:Hazel Watership/@comment-24087318-20150121041404

Semblance is much too vague. How many clones can he make at once, how do they have elemental properties, how long can they stay up? Durability? Pretty much any and every sort of description and elaboration required.

His history, and personality sections are equally as vague and underdeveloped, and his weapon could use more description too, specifically around the types of Dust it utilizes, and how.

All in all, this character needs much, much more detail almost universally.

Rejected

~RWBY Fanon Administration Team~