Talk:Chrysos Aggelos/@comment-24087318-20141022121905

Character needs to specify wether his wings allow or don't allow him to fly. By the Fanon rules, Avian Faunus that have wings cannot support flight on their own, and require assistance from something.

His weapon is interesting, but if it's separated so three elements are on one end, and the other three are on the other, they need to be sorted as to which are on what end.

His semblance needs more elaboration on what exactly it does, since it's not very clear. Especially with what's his SEMBLANCE and what's his WEAPONs powers.

His speed, from behind an ability outside of a Semblance or other enhancement, is still simply too fast. Tone it down a lot.

Rejected

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