Talk:Kizutsu Tamashi/@comment-4773581-20131003004026/@comment-4773581-20131003022743

It's not about being a pro or an amateur, it's about you literally doing one of the biggest don'ts in character making, barring parodical characters.

Even most amateurs know to avoid certain things. Making a Mary Sue is one of them. Another one is the whole "so beautiful it's a curse" schtick, which can actually be done right, albeit very very rarely. In this case, however, it's done just like pretty much every other awful rendition of the trope: girl is beautiful, suffers because of her beauty, and yet endures the suffering without any deep or long-lasting emotional scars or trauma, and just keeps an overall sunny outlook on life, determined to shower the world in kindness and make everyone everywhere her friend.

It's so cliche-filled that it makes one want to forcibly remove one's intestines by vomiting.