Thread:XIIIOerbaDiaVanille/@comment-27603392-20130611000438

I agree that they sounds very harsh with your character (and I hope that you haven't done anything, well, stupid yet).

I've been trying to tell you about this the last time we talked about OC and whatnot, but since it's very hard to me to change your mind, it resulted to that post on Tumblr. Now, I'll ask you: Do you want my honest advice to help you become a better writer or are you going to let a bunch of strangers hurting your feeling because well, that's pretty much how most MarySue blogs works, and it'll end up hurting your feeling even more. The choice is yours, but frankly, I'd say this: I've made a similar mistake a few years ago, and the last thing I want is you to go through what I've gone through. 