Talk:Storm Brunswick/@comment-25924729-20181202131654

Hi there, welcome to the wiki.

So i noticed you're making your first character, and decided to take a quick look. Noticed a lot of potential issues on this page, so i thought id let you know.

Our wiki has very detailed rules and guidelines when it comes to making characters for roleplaying, to keep things fair and canon friendly for everyone. Have you read them? Because in concept alone this character breaks many, many major rules. The most serious of these include interacting with canon characters, veing involved with canon events in a way that alters or influences the timeline, and knowing things no character should know.

Simply put.... you cannot include the canon cast of RWBY, such as Salem, the Winter maiden etc in his backstory, or any other character. You also cannot be involved in canon events in ways big enough to alter or influence their outcome, such as attacking the Winter maiden. Lastly, you cannot know information that the show explicitly stated nobody else aside from Team RWBY and Oz's faction would know, namely the existence and location of the Maidens and Salem.

Technically i am a reviewer, and this character is in pending. But since you're new here and probably havent read the rules yet, i wont outright reject him for this. I will remove the pending and let you rework him into something more reasonable, after reading these guidelines of course. https://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Guidelines#Character_and_Profile_Creation_Rules

If you have any questions, feel free to DM me on Wikia or Discord. You can also visit the wiki's Discord chat group, there are tons of friendly users there that can help you with your OC, tell you the do's and dont's, and give general tips and ideas how to make a good one.