Talk:Messer Danam/@comment-24087318-20131217091217

Review as requested by TorrentAB:

To preface, I'll start by saying I won't comment on Grimm Chance in any way, that being said...

While the Semblance is very grounded in physics and science fact, it's portrayed as it's own secondary weapon, rather than playing with his current equipment and ability. Which, while it completely fits the theme of the character, goes against Semblances portayal as something used in conjunction with the Hunters other skills and abilities, their weapons, or their dust usage.

In addition, though it's more of a comment than a critique, he seems to lack a method of ranged combat, only able to work at melee range, or just barely beyond that. (To compare, Yang, the closest range character in RWBY thus far, is capable of using her Shot Gauntlets to fire fireballs quite a range, and while they're slow moving she can hit far away targets if she leads them.)