Talk:Scilla Hrimfaxi/@comment-25924729-20181109074227

Appearance, personality and backstory are present and good. I like the backstory style, easy to read yet has all the important information and details.

She is missing a semblance and aura section. Even if she has no semblance or aura, you must say so on the page.

Aand... for the elephant in the room. That primary weapon sounds like an absolute nightmare to fight against, holy shit...!

Id say the sunburst missile is the most iffy. Specialist or not, giving anyone a weapon so powerful its only meant to be used in a state of emergency is very hard to believe. Not being able to track targets is also not a valid weakness, since its 400 meter damage radius would make it extremely difficult for a target to run or avoid anyway if it hits anywhere near them. I suggest to nerf its power to be more reasonable.

The other missile types are alright, and i kinda like it when OCs use real world weaponry instead of Dust and semblances. However you should mention how many missiles she can carry and fire at a time, as they are very powerful and heavy weapons, the number she can use is a serious factor to consider.

Her drones are also considered weapons by the rules, as they fire missiles and therefore can be used in battle. A character can only have 3 weapons, so giving the drones combat capabilities on top of her existing two weapons is over the limit. You'll have to remove one weapon, or remove the drones' combat ability.

Rejected.

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