Thread:Jadefire62/@comment-26570606-20170509012111/@comment-26570606-20190123020751

Oh! It hasn't changed then hehe. I really hope that the gang can beat him, from what I've heard he's quite a villain. And oh damn, but is that just for the specific arc? What I would suggest is looking at their backstories. See if there's anything you can pull from that. Like, if they had a falling out with a family member, perhaps they could have a bit of their arc building up the courage to make things right. That might be a bit small-scale, especially since things seem pretty intense, but I hope my point is still clear. Character development arcs are always hard though. It's especially hard to decide if you want them to have a big, prominent one (ie Prince Zuko) or if they should be more subtly done. Ohh, the whole sibling relation just wasn't necessary? I get that (that's what I've done with literally all my romantic subplots XD). I'm curious about Wolf and Jade now, since they seem to be linked closely. But yay! I hope that the introduction can be successful! And yes Possessor first XD, it sounds spooky and I'm excited for it.

I get what you mean! It would be awkward to take all the glory and that stuff. Everyone's gotta have at least one character get some glory (I know that that is poor grammar but I'm running on a few hours of sleep), to me. No one should have all their characters do shit and be the ones bad guys are after and be the strongest. I've kinda dealt with that? It wasn't like super bad and maybe I'm paranoid and percieving it wrong but I have some writing friends and I tend to notice that sometimes they turn their focus to one character and they kinda get all the glory (like they're the one the bad guys are after, then they beat the bad guys and everyone like worries about this character), before turning to another character (most of the time belonging to the same person as the first character) temporarily, occassionally repeating the above process, and then sometimes moving back to the original, sometimes moving on to another (which just leaves me confused, like "who are the bad guys targetting? I'm not attached to this person wtf do I do?", etc.). And granted I did miss a lot of the planning stages of this writing thing due to me prioritizing school, but when I came back in I was like "wtf? I would like the spotlight for five mintues pretty please". And that was when I discovered my whole "I need to be prominent" thing. Yay! Storytime!

Well, I actually must correct myself, this character would either be best friends or friendly rivals with Kaili, depending on how they meet XD. It would be quite an interesting meetup. Actually, NTHK is probably the OC team that reminds me the most of my own characters. If that gives any context.

Feel free to steal it! Idk I just didn't click with it. I like it but at the same time I was kinda "eh" about it, if that makes sense.