Talk:Xantho Ricionzo/@comment-17970636-20160124010828

Alright, for starters, compassionate towards Grimm. Sorry but in a world where one is trained to fight monsters which are the Grimm, and to protect the weak and uphold the peace, that means slaughtering the creatures which threaten to break this, i.e., the Grimm. In the mass attack of Grimm currently in the storyline, all available Hunters being called to help kill the creatures. Moments like this shows how unfit he is to protect the people and why he shouldn't be wanting to become a Hunter in the first place. After discovering this, however, he still went through Signal and then is now in Beacon. With so many prospective applicants, why will the best Combat School in the region want to take in a student who's unwilling to kill what is needed to be killed.

Likes animals, but has a phobia of dogs, that's something more for a personality section, and slightly contradictory, although liking animals doesn't necessarily mean liking all animals, it's kinda strange in my mind, not really a point for rejection, but it's weird.

No inference to his aura being unlocked, how would he have his Semblance? Aura is unlocked via either training to unlock it, or someone else unlocking it for you, and nowhere in the Backstory does it state when his aura was unlocked.

Weapon is a weird combination between Mercury's and Weiss', the way he uses his bullets is also similar to Merc's. Regardless, the overall setup is different enough that it's acceptable, however, the fighting style is quite similar to Mercury's almost dangerously so as well as the fact that his legs aren't fully armoured and as a result, using them as a form of defense, or precisely, use kicks to defend against projectiles seems strange because he's got zero armour, and bullets do hurt and take out a fair chunk of aura if no protection is given.

The entire semblance is rejected, the mere concept doesn't work. Sorry, but there's no salvaging it, you're gonna have to completely remake that. Yes, that means completely reworking the character but that's life.

Psychological weaknesses aren't weaknesses because frankly, how willing is he to talk of his past to others, and if that's the only weakness he has then frankly, overpowered.

Rejected.

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