Talk:Bob Bobberson/@comment-17970636-20151204022749

Alright, let's give this a go shall we?

First of all there's zero attempt at signifying his Age, title and alias are similar but it's possible. How can he have the same name and nickname? Not fully understanding what you're going for there so some explanation would be lovely, perhaps it's the enunciation?

"Bob" isn't a proper Race, Species, Born, Handedness, Complexion, Hair, Eyes, Height, Weight, Social Rank, Team, Occupation, Job Types, Job, Special Skill or a weakness. Why is his semblance named Bob as well? Having a partner with the same name is possible, but teams have been shown in canon to be teams of 4, his team name implies 3, needs to be fixed. As for his relatives, were they all named Bob? Short for Robert I assume but that's quite farteched.

Backstory is woefully incomplete and besides stating what he is gives me zero insight into the character's past, why he would even be on this here fanon, and whatnot. Has he attended a combat school, has he been given training? What was his life like? Zero input about the aformentioned things has been put in and thus needs more expansion.

Moving onwards, "Looks like Beb" isn't an acceptable appearance section. You require to give more information, if it was in the FanCharBoix I might consider it, regardless, you've given no attempt as to explaining what he may potentially aooear as amd for that, well, yeah, you get it.

How does he act? Act like Bob is simply a very vague broad term as to how one can act. Is he appy, sad, if this is your first time making a character I can provide some asistance here, you aren't alone in this, do not fear.

What is Bob. Is it a chainsaw, is it tonfa? What are his weapons and why are they also named Bob? More clarification is required here. You also state that his semblance is named Bob in the FanCharBox, no allusion to his semblance is made whatsoever in the Weapons category, needs to be expanded upon.

And finally, the name Bob doesn't fit into the Character Naming Rule whatsoever and if it does, you need to elaborate on it. Regardless, you have an incomplete OC here and I look forward to seeing what you can do with him in the future.

Yeah, that's about it. Have fun.