User blog comment:SkittyTheTwit/Kyron Bondad (My OC)/@comment-8182065-20141005011735

He likes the RWBY wiki? Breaking the fourth wall!!

Anyway, there isn't anything wrong with having a crush on a canon character; just steer clear from saying they're going out, he asked her on a date, anything that implies a direct relationship other than aquaintanceship.

Also its good and all that you mentioned him being weaker than the older students at Beacon; however, the lowest age the fanon is accepting is 16 for Beacon students (with a reason explaining why, could just be as easy as they've skipped a year due to mass studying, or did something extraordinary and was recognized by a Hunter/teacher).

You're definitely gonna have to explain what his weapon is and does though if you plan on having him be reviewed. Most importantly don't forget the naming rule; its an absolute must especially since we learned why it exists two two episodes ago.

All in all its a good start though.