Talk:Kurai Jack Jade/@comment-24052959-20131201001917

Seems I'm late.. swt ^^;

I'm still at vacation though.

I think I'm not gonna be much of help. But for now I can advice you to...... Ah hard to explain. It is around the part where Kurai got into the court when he injured the "son of politician".

Anyway, here comes me....

Does Kurai travel a lot during that period of childhood? Did he ever travel out of Tenth during that time?

If no, then I advice you to change that bully's father status from politician into mayor of Tenth. As well as that, make him banned from all combat school in Tenth or at least the region of Tenth he lived at, NOT all Vytal. It just make no sense to have him banned from "all" combat school just because one kid reporting him. I would also suggest you to make Kurai rarely or never go out of Tenth. That way,  it will makes sense when Kurai had nowhere to go after got back from the court. Because if Kurai never or rarely go out of Tenth, he will feel that Tenth is his whole world. Therefore he had "nowhere" to go (while not considering other town outside Tenth or his region).

Also this, give him a reason why would he defend faunus... Perhaps such as giving him a childhood best friend who happen to be a faunus. Make him know that faunus aren't all bad because his faunus childhood best friend helped him subconsciously to realize that.

Sorry for my grammar though, and I might missing something ^^;