Talk:Gea Gray/@comment-24087318-20140116005156

Character is good, has an amazing concept with her weapon, but a few things are outlying.

It's said that her Gauntlets control the weapon, but how? Magnetism? Remote control? What's in her weapon that allows it to be remotely steered if it's the latter? It's also not explained if she can use it as a melee weapon by holding onto it by a handle or not.

In addition, the character is described as small and not that strong, but her weapon is six feet big of iron and not only does she wield it, but can throw it quite far.

The jetpack idea is okay, but could use more detail as to how it's powered, how long it can last, and such. Though you could get rid of it if you have her boomerang become self-propelled and guided: she could ride it instead.

Her Semblance doesn't seem to be too fitting, acting as an entirely different attack instead of working together alongside the rest of her weapons, skills, Dust usage and abilities. Suggest looking at http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Semblances_and_your_OC_-_A_Guide for ideas and examples of what Semblances are as far as we know.

Due to the above, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~