Talk:Alice Vermilion/@comment-25924729-20190421142630

0/10. Lies, she's not part pikachu! D:

Appearance and personality seem alright, not much to note there except its quite well written.

Backstory has some issues in the beginning parts. More details should be added for plot relevant events, such as who beat up her father and why? What was the picture she saw that inspired her to become a Huntress. Questions like this should be answered as they play a large part in shaping the character, and knowing such hings helps to understand them. The other sections of the backstory is fine.

Onto combat sections... as cool as it sounds, her semblance cannot be allowed to create sentient clones, as the only clone semblances we've seeen in he show seem to posses only very simple intelligence, nothing to the level of having their own personalities and having conversations. At the very most, they should only respond to direct, simpl orders from Alice herself, not act of their own will. Limits like the amount of damage each clone can sustain, as well as possible time limits they can be maintained should also be specified.

Her weapons are really cool, especially he wire gauntlets. I can imagine them being used for a very flashy and unique style of fighting, and definitely fit her grappling style. Her Dust blades are also alright, but you must specify exacly how many she carries with her, for review purposes to see if its reasonable or not.

Naise try, but needs a little fixing at parts, mostly just more added details and stuff.

Rejected.

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~RP Moderation Team~