Talk:Bryan Hyacintho/@comment-24087318-20131223105325

Page lacks detail concerning weapon and history.

In addition, something that's a large axe that turns into a minigun would probably be decently weighted, not light and unencumbering.

Suggest writing more depth to both his weapon and how he uses it, and the characters history to better explain his situation. Keep in mind that Beacon is a combat school that requires transcripts: records of previous schooling, and due to its nature of being something similar to a police academy that deals mainly with Grimm, characters with a long history of a criminal record more than likely would not be accepted into it.

Due to the above, Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~