Talk:Zaitun Rashid Al Zachary (Zait Al' Zec)/@comment-13593058-20160710231843

 A Review of "I'm not even going to try pronoucing that"

Appearance
Nothing technical to note.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Backstory
Nothing worthy to note. No contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and source checks out.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- N/A

Review Summary
Decent story but I think his character design needs a bit more work. While designing a character BASED on another character is completely fine in mine and everyone else's books, having a very similar one isn't very creative in any means. Not that he isn't a good character, just food for thought.

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