Talk:Lumière Marteau/@comment-13593058-20160806222001

 Lumière Marteau Review

Appearance
Nothing technical to note.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Backstory
Nothing worthy to note. No contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour reference acknowledged.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Side stepping of rules

Review Summary
Nothing wrong with the character, but I can't help but notice that the writing uses his alias instead of his actual name.

Intentional or not, I can only assume that the character's name IS "Eren" but because of the Coloured Name Rule, you were not able to do that and side stepped the rule by giving him an alias instead.

I can understand some reference using his alias but this seems a bit too fishy.

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