Talk:Lazuli Lani/@comment-24678303-20150211202514

Her Apperance only covers a tiny bit of what she wears, but otherwise doesn't describe what she looks like.

Her Personality and Backstory are really short and require more details, as it hardly tells me anything about the character.

I see an Ability, but she lacks any sort of weapon.

Overall, this character seems really incomplete. There is a severe lack of details describing much of anything in the article, plus there is no weapon, so i don't know how she expects to fight Grimm...Or anything, for that matter.

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~