Talk:Sylvestre Felis/@comment-25924729-20181215075926

I really like this guy, the entire page is overall very well put together and written, i can see and respect the time and effort that must have went into this.

Appearance, backstory and personality are alright, mesh well together, easy to read and sympathize with the guy.

HIs weapons use many replacable knives/claws, but since throwing them is an improvised thing and their intended purpose is more for being fired by the gauntlets, i guess they can be treated as ammunition instead of real weapons in themselves, so no issue with the weapon limit rule. You could specify how many spare knives he carries though.

HIs semblance is probably the most iffy part. Slowing or speeding up the physical movement of objects and people is alright, but doing the same for reaction speeds gets a little overpowered and unfair, and steps into the realm of mental manipulation, especially when doing it to another person's OC in a fight (Though doing it to your own OCs or himself isnt recommended either). You will have to remove the parts about affecting reaction speed.

It also needs more details regarding the Post Fall power boost, you mentioned the range and area of effect has increased, but to how much? You'll have to specify that. Aside from this semblance, his other abilities are alright, and no issues elsewhere on the page.

Rejected.

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~RP Moderation Team~