Talk:Gwenn Wayland/@comment-27743663-20180325031235

CNR checks out.

Appearance, you say 5'4 but the box has it as 5'8. So that's an inconsistency, and I would really just ask which is it.

Personality is a thing, sure.

Backstory is there and nothing really pops out as rejectable.

Weapon, it just cuts off halfway through, so the full thing isn't even done being described. It's just left there incomplete.

Semblance, well, I have several gripes with it, but the only real thing that's rejectable is the effect of how does it give off heat but also manage to then magically cool metals suddenly. I'd ask why the metal then floats around her and not other things, but really it's just metal bending, so it is just the sudden cooling after the heating up that seems like a contradiction.

Tl;dr Rejected on: - Incomplete weapon section

-Semblance inconsistency