Talk:Nova Blackwood/@comment-4806269-20150901215917

I advice you to fix the redaction and grammar of this character's profile, since it's really hard to read/look at (at least to me). The profile itself is alright, though I find his Semblance's explanation somewhat contradicting; how can he "stay calm as much as possible" for keeping his Semblance on without issue if it's activated by a state of fast heart rate/anxiety? Please fix that. Reading more about his backstory before waking up in the hospital would be nice to see, too.

Rejected for now.

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