Talk:Leah Violet/@comment-24296957-20140704143217

I feel like the OC could be fleshed out more, though all the basics are covered.

Though...the fighting style and the semblance. We haven't seen any sort of semblance in canon that directly affects Dust, like amplifying it's power. As for the fighting style, she uses a bow, which would imply some sort of ranged combat. To give it more of a CQC vibe, you could give it bladed limbs. For me, seeing a bow without any sort of CQC capability is disconcerning. Also, if you could add how many bows are in the quiver, I'd appreciate it. 30 is a solid number.

Just some tweaks and you should be good. If you don't know what to do for a semblance, you could always say she hasn't found it, and wait for more info before adding one.

Rejected for now.

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