Talk:Damek Dunstan/@comment-24087318-20131220202022

Character is well written, semblance is okay, but I'd suggest toning down its level of detail, maybe letting its farthest point be inperfections in armor, rather than going so far as to seeing alloys and metal purity and composition.

In addition, his Weapons and Abilities say he's perceptive of his environment and surroundings, but his Weaknesses list "no sense of direction" which is a little confusing and contradictory. And a dislike of complexity also contradicts the Semblance specifically.

Due to the above, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~