Talk:Dear You/@comment-26045900-20151217095658/@comment-13593058-20151217185020

I'm surprised you found this randomly, let alone take time to read some of it. Thank you all the same.

I do tend to default to a more passive stance on narration when it comes to first person as it seems more relatable in terms of a character to the reader. Real people tend to be less determined in their train of thought and their minds might linger as they think so sometimes even the narration will trail of into something completely unrelated to the story. I love NiSiOiSiN's way of narrating things like this, its poetic and provides an excuse to fit in tiny statements that are huge revelations in everyday life.

Thank you for posting.