Thread:Jadefire62/@comment-26570606-20170509012111/@comment-26570606-20181118023813

Hmmm, Rava. Let me think. I know you said you want to add more to her beyond the amnesia, but I do have a few suggestions on how to make her more three dimensional that are kind of connected to her amnesia. I haven't checked her page in a while so I don't remember if she already has this, but I would suggest detailing just how her amnesia affects her. Like if she has insecurities because of it, or perhaps if she has some sort of reaction to seeing other people with their families, discussing their past, etc. If that makes sense. Since I'm assuming she wants her memory back, I think it could add some depth to her if we saw how she reacted to seeing others with what she wants that badly. I'll probably have a few more ideas when I'm rested, but another suggestion I have is to perhaps give her a quirk or two. Or think about what she likes to do for fun. That's what I try to do, at least.