Talk:Ko Kono/@comment-8182065-20130921222922

I know you just made this, but giving a bit of a helping hand since your info is quite minimal.

I think you should add a bit more to his personality. Since he's an extortionist, what does he usually bargain for: money, Dust, equipment, booze? Because he likes to get drunk (at 18 too, my...), tells us how else he feels besides arrogant. People who drink tend to feel a lot more than one emotion, they can be sad, happy, angry, anything. Try to add in something that shows us what makes him tick as well, because his personality makes him feel like such a 2D character.

You can keep the expert swimmer in, but I'm not so certain on the walking on water bit because it's not thoroughly explained on how he learned that skill. Withsanding attacks without twitching sounds OP in a sense, because people can only take a hit til a certain point. And explain about his weapon more; what exactly does it do since it's powered by Dust (Also what is an osteotome exactly)? Don't just add things willy nilly to make him fit into the RWBY-verse.

And you're also missing two important things, one being a backstory/history section. Since he likes to get drunk explore that idea. You didn't say he was a real party type, so maybe the source of his drinking comes from a depression of some sort? It's important so everyone can get more of a feel to your character, make him sound relatable.

And the last thing is don't forget to add him to the Fan Made Character category, Pending when you feel he follows the rules of the RWBY-verse.