Talk:Homura Ryusei/@comment-30530552-20171115184837

Let's see what we've got for Homura here.

- CNR is clearly stated and passable.

- Hmm...so he's a Japanese raccoon dog? Cool. Appearance is fine

- Personality-wise, while it's acceptable I feel some of the points (mainly towards the bottom) would be better suited for the trivia section unless they have a huge impact on his interactions.

- Weapon needs additional detail - size, whether and how it can transform, but aside from that, it should be fine for use.

- I would shift the 2 hours for the Semblance down to 1 hour for sake of actively using one's Aura to maintain an illusion. Outside that, good use of limitations.

- Backstory is about the same as everybody else's, but I would remove the point about mace-wielders being uncommon. From in-show examples that seems to be true, but we can't guarantee it is, unlike with scythes.

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-Overall, weapon and Semblance just need those small extra snippets of detail, and you'll be fine.

-Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~