Talk:Tony Viola/@comment-933831-20140729075754

So, first problem I see in his backstory is the location of origin. While we do allow new locations to be created, specifically calling them "...   a scientific more advanced place than the rest of the world..." is not allowed. From what we have seen, Vale is the technological capital of the world.

Another issue that I see fairly often is people having their character reject Dust. This is something that's basically impossible in-setting, as Dust powers everything. It'd be the equivalent of rejecting electricity, but even moreso. Bullets use dusts. Phones use Dust. Cars use it. Weapons, lights, factories, everything. To reject dust is basically despising the sole reason humanity survived on remnant to begin with. These kind of things need to be addressed. Till then, Rejected.

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