Talk:Kyran Chrom/@comment-27743663-20180203192614

CNR checks out

Apperance is fine.

Personality, split personality is something actually really quite hard to nail down, and in most cases is done distastefully. But, that's not really something rejectable now. Normally anyway, but the thing is, you list him as having multiple and even mention that several times, but only have the main two listed of "persuasive and analytical" and then "big and scary and aggressive." So without context, he could just whip out any personality out of a hat at all to fit whatever situation. The thing with split personality as well is, you can't just change between them as you please. That's not how it works. It's a mental disease. At that point, it's just acting.

Backstory, his semblance is noted to be there, but he would need his aura for there. It's not listed anywhere else before that he had it unlocked, where, or by whom.

Weapon, they're pretty standard overall, so they're fine.

Semblance, I'm going to say no. Simply because how broken manipulating energy is. Practically everything you have written for it is just a no.

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

- Split personality, or the actual term you're looking for DID, is a mental disease and isn't something you can just "control." Switching between personalities is not a possibility.

- Backstory inconsistency of having semblance/aura unlocked, doesn't say from where.

- Semblance is broken as all hell.

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