Talk:Yu'Long Diāo/@comment-25924729-20181213093029

Interesting character, getting a lot of Guan Yu vibes from her, not sure if intentional or not.

Appearance and personality are alright, I'm sorry, reading about her outfit the only thing that comes to mind is this :v :[http:// https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/powerrangers/images/6/6f/PRS-megagreen.jpg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/180?cb=20120110072754 https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/powerrangers/images/6/6f/PRS-megagreen.jpg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/180?cb=20120110072754]

The backstory got a little confusing at parts, like when she met her siblings. I assume metaphorical siblings, like other students? Similar to how she and the Master have a father-daughter type of thing going on, other new students would be considered family too? I can't imagine she would be able to find her literal siblings, given she was abandoned as a kid by her parents and has no real way to find them. (But if this is the case do explain it), either way, it's better to reword that to avoid confusion.

Some other parts of the page could also use extra explanation, like the reason she chose to become a Huntress in the backstory; limits of her semblance like the distance she can blow the mist, distance it spreads once blown out, how it affects the environment or the environment affects it etc. Minor stuff mostly, and her weapon is alright.

Rejected.

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