Talk:Sora Knight/@comment-25487720-20150307171141

Twelve, know ho to use a gun and can fight a dark man-eating beast. I mean if he had even fight at least ONCE before, okay why not. But here he litterally decided he knew how to fight and use a gun out of nowhere. Oh and a twelve-years old coldy killing someone rather than freaking out. Well, that happen.

Prefer to secretely burry his parents in the forest rather than looking for the police. Yeah totally not over their loss. And what about his sister? How did he survive for five years?

Also, little advice for his semblance: strength is classic. I don't mean you shouldn't use it that way. I mean one of my character has a strength related semblance. What I advice you to do is to add something that make it different than plain strength.

Well, I'm bad with explications so let me give you an exemple: an OC of mine, as I said, also has a strength-related semblance. But it's a destructive strength, which will inflence his whole life and personality. And it has an other even more destructive level.

You see? Try to make it more than just "he has a strength semblance". Or you can just make it sound more comlexe