Thread:Tierhalibelbrylle/@comment-26543176-20140418161222

Hi Tier.

Due to your most recent fan fic, "When the Wolf Meets the Pack" Particular members of the staff have noted multiple problems with your story, I have been asked to deliver to you a warning about this, in the hopes that you will rectify your actions.

1) Your fic has huge character, cannon interaction which is not permited. Putting aside the fact that you had Bryan interact with cannon characters on multiple occasions within the fic which is frowned upon here, as it can lead to dangerous and confusing situations. You also had your OC Bryan, beat Ren, Yang and Phyrrha in a fight. This is strictly against the fanon rules as OC character and Fanon character interaction should be kept to a bare minimum if any at all. However you had your character not only fighting, but beating three of the strongest cannon characters as if it was a simple and basic take, in which he had to put no effort. This makes your character ridiculously OP ashe can fight 3 Cannon characters without breaking a sweat.

2) The chapter "Bryan vs Ren, Phyrrha and Yang" was a direct rip off/plagerism of RVB season 9 episode 10 "introductions" link bellow.

http://roosterteeth.com/archive/?id=3525&v=more&s=9

Plagerism is in no way shape or form, an acceptable thing for any self respecting artist to do. the fight between these 4 was ripped almost scene by scene, word for word from this episode of red vs blue. This is in no way for an acceptable and self respecting member of the fanon to act. You have blatantly plagerised an entire episode of RvB which people worked very hard on and used it in your own fight. This is a serious offence on your part and could very well get someone in trouble, if a writer from RvB took offence to this. At the very least you should have credited the design of the fight to episode 10 (If the fight were not so cannon breaking).

I would highly recomend that you change your fic so these infringments on fanon rules and on our on dignity as writers and artists so that this fic may be enjoyed here. I would ask that you remove the fight between the three students at the very least. As well as changing the fight so it is not so obviously a rip off of RvB season 9 episode 10. I hope that you change your fic or make it better so it may remain on fanon. However if you do not wish to change your fan fic, then I recomend removing it from this sight, and moving it to another sight such as. Fanfiction.net, or AO3.

Thank you for your time and good day

~Jordan~ 