Talk:Alexander Vermilion/@comment-24678303-20160122025250

Okay, starting with the CharBox. What the hell is " macedonian"? Second, how is "sleep" a Job, Job Type and Special Skill???

Next, the bit about "saying god dammit when facing grimm" doesn't really tell me anything about the character himself and just seems unneccessary.

His personality is rampant with contradictions. Also, "in his mind getting hit is a pain". WHAAAAAT? YOU MEAN THEY AREN'T FIGHTING WITH FOAM SWORDS AND NERF DARTS?! I NEVER THOUGHT BEING HIT WOULD BE A PAIN! /sarcasm

The Semblance needs serious nerfing. 45 minutes is FAR too great a time. Freezing the ground around him is right out, as that means his Semblance not only heats things up, but freezes them as well. Plus, he can effect ''the weather?! ''No sir, that will not fly.

Oh boy, we got an edgelord over here. Let's see, he wasn't upset when his parents were killed by Deathstalkers, he somehow survived three days in a well that he also dove into, plus he survived a year on his own in the 'desert. 'Not only all of that, but he also has no previous combat prowess at all. He did not train and it does not say when he entered a combat school.

CNR is also not listed. I know Vermillion is there, but CNR applies to first name only, and being someone with the name Alexander, i do not know of any CNR for the name.

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~