Talk:Revenge/@comment-8182065-20131006003231

Oh my that was a nice read. I'm wondering though, since this is a part of a trilogy, which one came first? I think you should let readers know that if you put them in a certain order (also add links to them as well). Also let people know at first that the narrator is Yang; I got confused as to who was reading until the word sister came up. Otherwise very emotional and powerful. Nice job :)