Talk:Alice Weston/@comment-13488655-20130816173035

Review. (I wanna get in on the fun.)

Good job in giving credit to those who helped you.

A human dragon hybrid isn't exactly canon in the RWBYverse, but you could get away with it if you said she was a fauna.

Good description with the weapons. (She might be a bit OP.)

Her personality makes her sound like a female version of Deadpool.

The backstory doesn't really suggest that she's Blacks sister.

The part about her family and friends was a good touch.