Talk:Liam Hearts/@comment-17970636-20151127030820

Alright, interesting OC, just a few things.

First off, only 58 kilos and 6'5"?! this guy should be blown away by a passing breeze! He's beyond skinny, he's just bone density and organs!

Looking at his fighting style, I can see that he could pistol whip people as well as do reflexive dodges with his body, and the lack of stamina isn't surprising.

However, the fact remains that he should be getting carpal tunnel as well as tinnitus because with his weight he simply cannot have enough muscle mass to be able to handle the amount of small arms fire he is giving out (unless the pistols are modified to have less recoil which I didn't read/potentially missed).

Then moving on to his semblance, while practical to his use, it's also potentially overpowered because he could grab someone and then teleport something into their body, the paramemters on what he can teleport and what he can teleport things into isn't really that clear, it's actually quite vague. This leaves him to be potentially overpowered in RP situations simply because "holding on one's hand" doesn't really say much as to what that thing can be. Holding his girlfriend's hand and then teleporting a ring onto it as a form of proposal could be kinda cute though....

Moving back to his strength, disarming people seems kinda unfeasable simply because, well, he just can't have the muscle mass to be able to pull off such a feat even if they're shorter than him, he can have strong grip strength, but, well, you get my point.

Moving forward for the last time, it'd be nice if his grappling hook got some parameters as to what the maximum weight is that it can hold.

Finally, trivia needs to state how name relates to a colour (it's fucking obvious, I realize but) it's necessary kinda.