Talk:Holly Londres/@comment-25924729-20150305111331

Love the way you worded this page, simple and direct,yet with a good deal of detail too. The symbol and weapon name are really cool too. I have to suggest you further add a few details though. People may not know what a " Covenant Sword" is, and i dont get the color reference of "Holly". Maybe you should elaborate? Also the weapon translated name meaning is usually left in the trivia section, not the top. And if the character has been reentered to pending, you should remove her from rejected. (Not an official reviewer)