Talk:Cole Harrington/@comment-25924729-20190102050338

Not really the best or worst character I've seen. A little generic actually, but let's see...

Appearance and personality are alright. No comment on those. Backstory is fine too, albeit really edgy...

Weapons could use a lot of extra details. Like, as it stands I can't even tell what kind of sword it is. Long or short? One handed or two? Would also be nice to add details like what Dusts it can use and what effects it has. But in concept, seems okay.

Semblance is alright, we have rules against weakness identification types, but that's only for mental or non-obvious weaknesses, not physical. Heck, an observant person could probably do the same thing without a semblance. Limits and stuff are alright, but it should be less effective against human beings as their bodies are protected by aura, making it hard to strike any pressure points.

A lot of details in the Issues, Strengths, Weaknesses and Limits sections could have been easily included in the personality and abilities sections imo. It does make reviewing and reading really easy, its just a little unusual, and no rejectable problems there.

Accepted.

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