Talk:Riala Zephyr/@comment-27743663-20170218180238

CNR, how does Rail relate to a color? Also, saying Riala is derived from Rail is a bit of a stretch.

Appearance is fine.

Personality is fine, just a minor note. Having the World Record for most jumps under the age of 21. That's likely true on Earth, but on Remnant that can't really be confirmed, and shouldn't really be a thing.

Backstory there's no basis for Beacon blocking paparazzi. It's likely less that, and more paparazzi can't get to it, since it seems the only way to is by airship. A note though.

Semblance has various issues. For starters, it lacks various demerits. It's not listed how long she can keep it up, so she can theoriitically just eternally gust away enemies while laughing away. There's also no cost for doing this listed, so she can also eternally gust enemies away while not feeling fatigued or have her aura drained. Creating a moderate tornado as well is largely /iffy/

Weapon is fine, but same issue as with semblance, "gale-forced strength" with little to no drawbacks in doing this.

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

- CNR

- World Record shouldn't really be a thing

- Semblance lacks demerits and clarifications

- Wind portion applies to Weapon as well

Small backstory note.

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