Talk:Marsali Roane/@comment-13593058-20180130053428

 Marsali Roane Review

Appearance
Appearance present.

Personality
Personality present.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Semblance acceptable.

Backstory
 Backstory acceptable, but noticably long.

Miscellaneous
 Colour reference noted.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- No contradictions

Review Summary
Well balanced and well writte. Maybe a bit too well written as the backstory is pretty length with descriptions of how an event happened rather than straight up just what had happened. Note that a profile is for the quick delivery of information, not story telling. You should do that with a separate page.

Other than that, good job.

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