Talk:Elroy Osmail/@comment-27743663-20180130235857

Not much has changed of this character from before, but he's still rejection worthy all the same. Reason being his Dust.

Or more specifically, his two special variants.

Flare's effects are pretty fine, just list what makes it up, from the effects itself though I can guess something like Wind and Fire?

Goldwind I'm much more questioning on, for two reasons. Which type of Dust exactly would somehow give these effects, and also Dust is shown to be mainly "elemental," so how would it give the effect of giving short bursts of increased speed to someone?

Other then those two everything's pretty fine.

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~