Talk:Chroma Chrysis/@comment-13593058-20160815154319

 Chroma Chrysis Review

Appearance
Nothing technical to note.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Semblance is... interesting to say the least. Thoughts in summary.

Backstory
Nothing technical to note.

Miscellaneous
 Colour reference acknowledged.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- No contradictions

Review Summary
The Semblance is treading some thin ice there with the generation of ranged weapons, which I assume include fire arms, but considering his background as a blacksmith (which in this universe, we'd just assume a blacksmith as knowledge on every single weapon known to man including fire arms) I guess he could visualise every component of a gun to make one.

However, I'd put a little more specific detail or provide examples on exact number of strikes certain melee weapons can take or exactly how long it takes to craft a ranged weapon like a bow versus a pistol. Describe the viability of each during combat, but that's not really grounds for rejection, just food for thought.

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