Talk:Sable Désert/@comment-25487720-20150204192533

Too much weapons, read the rules about it. And also his semblance looks a lot like Ruby's. You might want to add or modify something. His name doesn't match a color.

Aside from that interesting charater but I think you can still improve him. Funny how I understood it was your first not because of the problem reffered above but because of the size of his backstory. Mine's backstory was/is huge XD. We all especially love our first OC I guess.

Well, let me tell you to prepare the lube 'cause first time always hurt. But it's worth it. I remember when my first OC had been rejected through and through, it still hurt a little.

I'm not here since that long but if I can help you in any way, just ask me. I'd be glad to help :)