Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-24296957-20141130191712/@comment-24678303-20141201182140

Iona Angelo Before I start, I will note that she shares a first name with one of my characters. I didn't know that Iona meant Purple Gem, so thanks for that. Anyway, I noticed a lack of meaning for her last name. Being Angelo, which of course comes from Angel, I'd like to assume that it means bright/white colors, but clarification would be nice. You say she's a Brown Fox Faunus, but I see a severe lack of defining traits of a Faunus, such as claws, ears, or a tail. All Faunus have SOME sort of trait, so it'd be a wise idea to add one of those to her. I like the backstory and all, but I have one issue. Where did her scar come from? Obviously it's a pretty big defining trait, but I don't see anything in her history alluding to that, unless some generic bullying in the past was the cause. Other than the above, she looked fine. Rejected for now, but if you fix the above issues, you should be good.