Talk:Hǎiyáng Castellan/@comment-24678303-20150520172540

Well, just about the only thing I can still see wrong with him is the In Battle section. I read through them in detail and, while it does claim the more OP abilities are just for the Fic, all of them seem too…Video Game-ish. Like, rather than something that you’d see a character here have, they seem more like abilities possessed by a character in an RPG. Truth be told, I am not sure you can have these in general, even if they are claimed to be used by manipulating Dust.

An ability or two with a specialized Dust is alright to add onto the Weapon & Combat section, but I fear these just do too much and there’s too many. If it were up to me, I’d say to keep Illusion and Vortex Point, as they seem to be the most balanced of the bunch, plus they still have tactical advantages. You’d just need to tone down Vortex Point’s power a slight bit (ergo, make it have around the same power as, say, a fire hose, or a tad bit more), then he’s good for Accepting.

The problem with having the abilities lies in that you have a good, pretty powerful weapon already (not OverPowered, mind you, but relatively up to par in terms of scale), but it doesn’t focus on using all of these abilities specifically. If you were to make something like a Mage character (in example, a character that uses a specialized staff that uses Dust to cast ‘spells’, such as how Glynda does), then I could see them having this many abilities. But, on top of the weapon itself, it would just be way too powerful. Rejected, hopefully for the last time.

~RP Moderation Team~

Also, I’ve mentioned it before, but what’s with the seemingly unrelated picture next to his Semblance…?