Talk:Hǎiyáng Castellan/@comment-13172690-20150316011547

There are still problems that have to fixed.

The semblance passes with the amount of limits (since I asked)  though he cannot have two transforming weapons. That is against the rules here since only one weapon is allowed to transform. Paramount Flame's bommerang function cannot target weak spots on its own even when it is thrown. That's too powerful. Also change up the edits on the page whch the weapon is on with each change.

Again with what the previous reviewer mentioned, the skills are OP. Master martial artist and swordplay? Thats too much. It takes years to master one thing and longer to master two especially at his age of 20.

As for your bio it was fine except the part with the dust infusion. We do not know the full extent of infusing dust into the body or what it would do. There are also some errors within the bio concerning names.

Because of these problems,

Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~

Also, not part of the review but when you place a character in pending, take off its rejected catagory.