Thread:Amet Revfold/@comment-13172690-20140522225827

Hey Amet,

I wanted to see if these two were alright. If they aren't, how would I make them more acceptable?

The first is called Time Perception. The user would basically, even though time passes at the speed it normally does, see time moving at 1/10th of its normal speed for a certain amount of time. So, if there was a sneak attack coming in that, if they saw in time (normal speed), they could dodge, but the attack happens too quickly. They would be able to see the attack just as it begins, and get out of the way. The user could also use this to counter the enemy's moves and fit a counter attack in or to pull an ally away from an attack. Though the more it is used and the longer it is used for can wear down the person's aura a decent amount. Like if Inari used it, she could only use it three- four times in a fight even though she has high aura. If it is used more than they are able to, then they would collapse from overuse after or in extreneous cases, during combat. It would take her a few hours for her to recharge so she could use it again. A known side effect can be change of eye color.

The second is called Lunar Barriers.

This allows the user to produce a barrier to protect themselves and/ or their allies. Depending on how long it is used or how many times it is used, it can slowly drain the user's aura with each use. They could use it to reload or change dust crystals so they wouldn't be completely defenseless or to protect themselves and others when they are disarmed.

Please lemme know.

Thanks,

Ruby 