Talk:Ebony Smith/@comment-13172690-20150703031617

Very interesting character, though a couple of things to clarify.

First, your background. According to our rules here, you need to have a clear reason why she was bumped into Beacon when she was 16 instead of the normal age of 17. Please clarify this in your bio.

Also, your weapon and abilities. That section is too broad and it would need more explaination, especially the weapon and semblance. You can look to other people in accepted to get an idea.

Rejected for now.

~RP Moderation Team~