Talk:Ash Westwind/@comment-24678303-20150529132246/@comment-25857155-20150530020425

First, thank you for taking the time to review my character - it's appreciated.

I'll change the height to full standard - forgive me, height in inches is what I have grown used to thanks to my career.

Question: Why should I avoid comparing to canon characters, when everything is based in the same world as those canon characters? I will edit that out regardless of your response, I am just curious of the reasoning therein.

Hai, hai, I'll change the bit about his family. His "best friend" was his girlfriend, and she went a little bit crazy upon finding out he was going to be leaving, and wanted him to stay at any cost - it's a response similar to those that might be found in persons with certain mental disorders, like those related to Borderline Personality Disorder (I think I got that right, at least). I will clarify that as well.

I say again: why not base weapons off of canon weapons, as long as they are not the same thing? Derivation merely states what gave me the idea for it, anyway... but, if it bothers you, I shall change it.

Modified Atlas-25. IDK, had to make up some shit. Got a better idea? :P

Yeah, in retrospect, the semblance is a bit... well, it's pretty damned OP. I'll fix it, along with the others, I suppose.

I do know VERY well how using a scope works. It does not completely restrict your view, no, but when looking through a scope one tends to be very much more focused on their target than the things around them. I will clarify this as well - he is not blind to what's around him, just not as attentive.

Alright. Give me a couple hours here to fix this character and my others. :3  Thanks again for taking the time to review.