Talk:Rowan Crusoe/@comment-24087318-20140118032044

Semblance is quite overpowered and doesn't quite fit with RWBY, we've seen characters use magic by combining glyphs with dust, but that's about it. In addition, a fire based one would be too similar to Cinders in ability, who's a canon character. That is against the Fanons rules.

Her personality is a bit contradictory, with the girl being happy, upbeat and optimistic, yet flying into an uncontrollably violent rage when angered. Seems weird and a bit sueish.

Her backstory is a bit improbably, surviving literally by herself at age Ten not only on a deserted island, but on one filled with all sorts of Grimm. Also, it should be included in the backstory how she got the scars her appearance section describes her as having. In addition, it could also be described just what exactly helped build her the preliminary form of Wildfire.

Due to the above, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~