Talk:Emerald Verona/@comment-30530552-20170811170352/@comment-31978836-20170820081900

"Anyone can say their OC is smart, but how smart? That can lead anyone to believe she can be a total genius on Einstein's level, or gets a constant ratio of passing grades in class." My description of the "intelligent gleam in her eyes" That's just another short way of explaining part of her personailty. Have you never met someone that when you just look into their eyes, it feels like they know something that you don't and they know it? That's what that phrase is referring to. I guess I need to make the description needlessly long instead of thinking that my readers could understand the five words in the phrase? Is the "intelligent gleam in her eyes" phrase not straightforward? Should I use only 2-syllable words in my description? Takashi kun21, Am I writing for a audience of 4th graders or people who are 16+? And "   No mention of them being Huntsman could even be implied, because of the lack of that small detail." It's RWBY, every character is implied to be or have connections with Huntsmen. Are you serious? If you couldn't imply that her parents were Huntsmen, you have no business commenting on someone's character. I am taking some of your suggestions into account though, and I'm using that advice on my other characters as well. Good luck in the Fandom and write well!