Talk:Blake Lionheart/@comment-30530552-20170528183700

Let's have a look at your changes.

For backstory, I'd like to note that Haven is the equivalent of Beacon Academy, only in this case it'd be in Mistral. Unless he transferred out, or he was taking part in the exchange for the Vytal Festival, it doesn't make sense. If you were looking for a Signal Academy-type instituitio, Sanctum is the Mistralite version.

Dust section works, CNR was noted in the Trivia section.

Overall, all you need to do is do a small bti mroe explaining on the schooling situation since it's a bti confusing. Once that gets done, you should be good to go.

-Rejected.

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