Talk:Automne Reynard/@comment-13593058-20160301073813

 A Review of  Automne Reynard

Appearance
Not much to judge on a technical level. Faunus Trait present.

Personality
A reasonable personality. No contradictions and has justified responses. No additional

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon seems too similar to Weiss Schnee's Mrytenaster with a Dust chambered Rapier.

Semblance has no contradiction and seems quite unique.

Backstory
No contradictions.

Kinda fucked up.

I love it.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and source checks out.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Weapon too similar to Canon

Review Summary
So close, oh so close. I was so excited too because of the Little Prince reference and the screwed up backstory was interesting. The weapon similarity was really your downfall. Semblance also seems interesting in its non-combat applications but seems limited to only organics so kind of weak.

 Other than that everything else checks out. Just change weapon.

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