Talk:Lucri Rellik/@comment-24087318-20140912025634

Semblances cannot include soul and/or aura manipulation, among other things. So a Semblance to split ones soul isn't Accept worthy.

Also, characters may only have two weapons maximum, with copies of the same weapon counting as one. And Only one of these may posess transforming capabilities, as his prosthetic counts as a weapon since it's outfitted to be such, this character currently has a total of three weapons, one over the limit.

His gauntlet also posessed a power that directly interfered with an opponents Aura, specifically their Semblance. As we havn't seen anything that does that, this is also Rejectable.

His backstory, of having had his aura locked by an outside force, also doesn't fit since as per the rest of this review, stuff that buggers with other peoples Auras/Semblances/Souls havn't been seen in Canon, and therefore arn't allowed yet.

Due to all the above stuff, Rejected

~RWBY Fanon Administration Team~

In addition, all the wordings like he's 100% smart and 120% perfect and only gets into fights he knows he can win....nobody is that perfect, not even Batman. He's been beaten more than a well churned butter. You may want to tone down the amont of absolutes and unbeatable things he's written to have. Nobody likes mary-sueish characters in that regard.