Talk:Blaze DarkHeart (fixed)/@comment-24296957-20140903142522

Alright. Here are my issues. And note, I'm not being mean, i'm simply following the RP Moderation Guidelines and what we've seen in canon.

So, reading his weapon and abilities, I see that he can heat up his blood...? But his semblance is fire. So here, you have two semblances. Not to mention the many, many adverse side effects from high blood temperature - thinning, boiling (which would induce the bends), and a general raise in body temperature would very easily kill someone. Clinically, the body can't handle 105 degrees Farenheit. To boil something like blood? It's much higher than that, let alone be able to create fire out of it. And being able to speed up your bloodflow doesn't mean you can move faster. An increased heartrate is potentially very dangerous. Like, Blaze could very easily die of a heart attack.

And honestly, some of these abilities don't make sense. Not to mention this OC is screaming OP. How do you make a sharp flame? How do you simply stomp the ground and make flames erupt from it? And how can he imbude his sword with fire?

A semblance constitutes a singular ability, so far as we've seen in canon (and what's in our guidelines).

And now, we come on to his actual stated semblance.

Now, while having a fire semblance is completely fine, think of the drawbacks to it. A flame needs oxygen to burn. So while you can have this fire semblance, Blaze would run the risk of suffocating himself with it - because the fire is using the oxygen he would otherwise be using to breathe.

Having....a sixth sense....? And one that senses danger? Er...I can't let that pass. A.) We haven't seen it in canon B.) It's OP C.) That's something Aura can already do - increase your perception.

Having the Dust infused into your actual body? Clothing is one thing, and so if weapons. But your own body? We haven't seen it in canon, and it's hard to comprehend. Dust is a single-usage thing. It doesn't regenerate. So there'd be no point in using it, let alone explain how a reaction activates it.

For the above,

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--