Talk:Atlan Sealegs/@comment-13593058-20170428014247

 Sanuye Sinclair Review

Appearance
Description of appearance noted. Mention of Faunus trait missing.

Personality
Point of personaility made.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed but lacks essential detail. Examples include number of rounds in magazine (standard modern assault rifel magazines are 30 per mag), heavy ammunition is too broad a term and implies too little of its full capabilities, Number of rounds carried lasting about a certain duration, length of transformed spear.

Semblance is okay but weird in terms of current control. What is the range on both aspects of the Semblance? Strength? There is essentially no limit on this Semblance.

Backstory
Clear, no contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Faunus trait missing

- Semblance undeveloped

- Weapon undeveloped

Review Summary
Character effort reminds me of another user on here who pumps out numerous OCs each of which lack more detail than the last. Please put more care and effort into what you write.  If you require assistance in the matter, feel free to ask other Fanon members for help. Alternatively, you may consult my  character creation guide   for further information regarding my reviewing process. If you believe there to be a misunderstanding or mistake, please contact me via message wall or another reviewer.