Talk:Denver Chase/@comment-17970636-20151216225424

Appearance section is woefully incomplete, what colour are his eyes, his hair. What kind of build does he have. What clothes does he wear under the cloak. etc.

Hihgly unlikely that a person with absolutely no combat training would be able to take down beowolves, especailly untrained in the proper usage of pistols. The recoil would be too much to handle for a ten year old, he didn't even have aura. And just roaming around killing more Grimm, yeah, no. Also, people don't get into Signal at age 11, they get in at 12-13 depending on when they're born.

I see 3 weapons, pairs of weapons only count as 1, As a result, take out your least favourite, the bow, the pistols, or the sniper.

No allusion to what his semblance is whatsoever.

How the first name relates to a colour isn't outlined in a trivia section.

If you need help on what a proper OC looks like in terms of description and such, look at Merel Serac.

Rejected.

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