Talk:Teal Clover Ayelet/@comment-13593058-20160807140952

 Teal Clover Ayelet Review

Appearance
Nothing technical to note.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rule followed.

Semblance is lacking in detail such as the range of rune placement. Invulnerability falls under the "No Limit Fallacy". Grounds for rejection.

Backstory
Nothing worthy to note. No contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour reference acknowledged.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Semblance contradiction

Review Summary
The character itself has no problems but the Semblance is a bit too simple, or rather it's lacking in detail. How far can the runes be placed? You have only specified how big the explosion is. The defense rune cannot provide invulnerability as that falls under the "No Limits Fallacy". In essence, no invulnerability. You can however have a strong protective shield that is breakable.

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