Talk:Kaltis Wahrsucher/@comment-3542404-20150828085336

Appearance: to point I suppose, personally I don't like laying out information like that, but it works.

Backstory: intriguing, why should it have to be Ozpin though? You'd think he's got a lot on his plate already, he doesn't seem like the sort of person central to a conspiracy either.

Personality: bit bland, literally. Kinda focuses on a single aspect of how he's cold and the single drive to be a journalist, nothing about potential buttons which could be pressed or why he became a huntsman-in-training.

Weapon: Pretty clever and original (alternatively could use the stick up his ass as a backup). Not much, if anything, is mentioned on how he wields it (yes you mentioned the forms it could take, but not his actual combat style). Side note: completely lacking in ranged combat, he seems like the kind of person who'd have some kind of contingency in place for most situations, including ranged combat.

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