Talk:Feng Daiyu/@comment-30530552-20170413025726

Alright, let's see here.

Appearance is fine except for one thing: the Faunus trait(s). Canon rules state that Faunus have a single animalistic trait to them, not multiple traits. With Feng, this is a problem that needs resolving. as you have a tail and ears for Feng. Pick one.

Personality & Backstory are fine.

Weapon is an interesting concept.

Semblance isn't okay. Cutting / piercing through Aura, no matter how miniscule the holes may be, is considered OP...so, that's another problem.

CNR is fine. *Note, the Daiyu link is broken, and will need to be linked elsewhere, though a quick google search was able to clear up the issue

Overall, the character needs work, but you've got a good start on the character.

Rejected for: Multiple Faunus traits & overpowered Semblance