Talk:Starling Leadswell/@comment-27743663-20161116215157

CNR there's an inconsistency. While it's noted in trivia her name allues to Starlight, her color in the Charbox is listed as wine red. If there is somehow a correlation, please note it. If not, please fix this inconsistency.

Appearance is fine.

Personality is fine.

Weapons are fine.

Semblance there are some issues. So, this semblance is crazy strong. Like, phenomenally. It also has a ton of uses. That's not the problem in of itself, but it is related to it. For something so powerful and versatile, there needs to be a limit for how long she can keep it up, applying to each different "law," because with an indefinite time with a semblance this powerful there's going to be problems. A maximum range would be appreciated for the same reasoning as well. As a small note, light isn't selective and affects everyone it hits, as will this semblance, so keep that in mind.

Backstory is fine.

Tl;dr

CNR has an inconsistency with trivia and charbox.

Semblance needs a maximum casting and range since it's so strong.

Until those changes are made, she's Rejected.

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