Talk:Galene Venatorum Viridia/@comment-24087318-20140106001529

Character well written, Semblance is alright. But a few things stick out.

Part of the spirit of RWBY is the weapons: Characters have weapons that often, in some way, either change their shape, or contain multiple methods of combat. Even Jaunes shield changes shape to a degree, and it's an antique. As well, RWBY focuses on characters fighting things at close range, likely due to a comment Pyrrha said concerning Weapons behaving as Conduits of Aura. Aura put into a blade or other physical weapon hones it. Makes it stronger and more durable. Strong enough to pierce the hide and carapace of many Grimm that otherwise shrug off things like bullets, much less arrows. Having a character that uses a bow is fine, but RWBY is not all about ranged combat. Hunters are trained and capable of fighting at close range as well.

In addition, concerning the characters Semblance, this ability would likely assist in giving the character skills concerning something up close. And it needs be said that Semblances do have a point of exhaustion. We saw Weiss at the end of the Nevermore fight run an entire line of Glyphs up a wall, then was shown bent over afterwords, exhausted. And in the event Aura levels are found to tie to this, if she uses her Semblance too much, or takes too many hits to her Aura, she may not have the energy to pull back her bow anymore, since her Semblance is required for it.

Suggest writing more details on things to add to how they'd fit in the RWBYverse, as well as fill some holes with the character concerning RWBYs lore.

Due to the above, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~