Talk:Akane Sasha Ackerman/@comment-26060252-20141120003448

Well I'd make a few changes to this over all. 1: Remove the references to Armstrong and Napoleon. They don't exist in RWBY-verse so just say that someone is very muscular, or that they're very driven.

2: I'm not 100% sure on this but I don't believe that shadow-teleportation will pass as a Semblance. Shadow manipulation (or anything really involving shadows) is generally frowned upon so you may have to change that up a bit. Also I noticed several places were you refer to her as 'Red'. I'd change those to her given name just in the profile.