Talk:Rosanne Kulta-Blitz/@comment-5726563-20140216012541/@comment-5726563-20140216015049

You're very good at describing things, and the appearance was quite detailed. The yearning for friends is a bit cliche, but makes sense. Trying to imagine Teacher is a bit hard though, as it has way too many variations. You might want to try cutting down the variations, and then combining Blitz into it. I wouldn't say she is ready to be accepted, as it seems like there are still quite a few things that could be edited to fit. Try to get a few different peoples opinions, to help you out. I'll try to send some people to give you advice.