Thread:JayHart/@comment-26362067-20150730020153/@comment-26362067-20150918124031

I... haven't gotten any farther. *sighs* I just don't have any ideas for him right now. I mean, I do know his basics of his background, but the problem for me has always been keeping a flow with the writing, rather than being choppy and disconnected. I like things feeling like they connect to each other; like, each paragraph leads onto the next.