Thread:Verity Evermore/@comment-37031238-20181103203158/@comment-37031238-20181104020922

Holy gosh, thank you so much! This is going to help a lot with the backstory and the development of the character. As for the backstory:

I was thinking that the higher ups didn't like her marriage with someone who wasn't a faunus, which is something I tend to write about, since my characters usually have a darker past, but try to move past it as the story goes along. So, thanks for all the new things to think about, it's really helpful.

Personality: Thanks so much for liking it, I was never good at personalities, so that boosted my overall confidence a ton! x3

Semblance: I would really like help with this, I was thinking since she is a ōdachi user, that it should be something with her horns. (like a certain radius of where she could detect aura, and micro-movements, also air-currents, that has a time limit, which could potentially tie into an assassin trope, which I tend to love in stories and RP! Also if you'd like to RP sometime, I'm down. I'll dig 'et.) So, tell me what you think on that. (Also, if you'd like to be my character reviewer, I'd also love that, since your "paragraphs that no one likes to read" were catchy and humourous, which provided with with a couple downright laughs. So cudos on that.)

Tallness: I was thinking along the lines of really short, potentially borderline midget, so that could've been a fun trope for her to have, as she tends to get upset a lot. Or maybe along the lines of say... 5'? 5'2"? Since I'd like the adorable factor to stay.

The art: I don't really know where the art came from, my friend found it on Google, but he does tend to have a lot of characters in his galleries, he tends to collect pictures. :P

But thanks again for the help! Also, I hope we could be friends! also I hope you read the in between the text things, so you could be my character reviewer, since I love essays. (that's not weird, right?) So! uh... hope you respond? xD -Maestro.

P.S I love your grammar, stay true to the path of correct grammar.