Talk:Gris Smoke/@comment-24087318-20141016115354

You could use to paragraph space that backstory, bud. It's kinda a giant brick of text.

If he could afford getting into Signal, they'd likely provide a dorm as well.

The town was called Mountain Glen, and the backstory of how it was destroyed doesn't match at all the characters current history.

"Automail" isn't a concept in RWBY so far. There's speculation that robotic limb replacements may be possible...but this isn't Full Metal Alchemist.

One wonders how for all his foolishness and young age and unskilled behaviors, he doesn't DIE to any of the sevral attacks he;s had Grimm do to him, it's beyond suspension of belief that one doesn't just kill and eat him by now.

Blood and Dust explosives would just be a bloody mess, literally, and serve no purpose. The gun wouldn't work at all unless it was a part of his Semblance that allowed him to do something like that. And since he already has a Semblance...why not just use regular bullets?

Semblance having multiple *different* abilities is no different than having multiple Semblances. One ability only please.

Abilities with his dead eye and Aura would be something that falls under a Semblance. We have never seen a canon character utilizing special abilities like this as WELL as having a Semblance.

Due to all these above points, Rejected

~RWBY Fanon Administration Team~