Talk:Jeremiah Rust/@comment-24087318-20140917085835

Ooh, they're split up into two pages this time.

Not sure why you don't just use the 17 year old one as the main page and put the kid stuff in the backstory...that's what literally everybody else does, this style is just obnoxious and makes my work harder since I have to read two pages for the same content I usually get out of one.

(Not to mention a less keen reviewer would almost surely miss the second page.)

Faunus don't posess any traits based off the animal they're from. So far, beyond natural weapons/appendages, they only posess extra night vision. This trait even goes into Faunus whos animals typically don't have that to begin with.

After-images level speed without a Semblance is simply too fast. We havn't even seen Ruby do that, and her Semblance *is* Speed.

On the subject of his weapon, silences don't really silence the weapon to make it subtle, they just reduce the noise to a point where it's not going to cause hearing problems unprotected.

Rejected

~RWBY Fanon Administration Team~

Also a thing to keep in mind, as we've seen from newer episodes, bullets are incredibly weak against Huntsmen/Huntresses, being easily deflected, blocked or otherwise eliminated as a threat. Without a melee weapon as a sidearm or a transformation he's heavily out-gunned (ironically) by any other Huntsmen/Huntress.

And please...to make it easier on the Reviewers, and people who like to browse pages. Could you merge these things together or something? Like I said above. Two pages for literally the same content one is enough for.