Talk:Reneé Chartreuse/@comment-30530552-20170912023329

Alright, let's take a look at Reneé here.

CNR makes sense, no issues there.

Liking the personality.

Appearance is fine.

Weapons and Combat Abilities are reasonable enough, as we've seen that combining two weapons into one distinct form is possible on a couple occasions. You also followed guidelines on number of weapons. No issues here.

Semblance, let me get this out of the way...most of the stuff you've listed could be just as well accomplished via Wind Dust, though this seems to have greater control. Second thing is, while the overall scope and strengths of the actual ability are good, I think the time limit is a bit much for that level of power. I'll leave the adjustment you make to your discretion, but feel free to ask what I think on my message wall, or another reviewer if you care to. Other than that, seemed reasonable enough.

Might just be a lack of mentioning it, but...did Reneé's parents just leave her all by herself to go on their missions, did they trade off all the time, or call a babysitter/nanny? From what it sounds like, they're abandoning a less than 10 year old on multiple occasions, who probably couldn't fend for herself the way a teenager could for the most part.

Overall, very good start. Simply address the outlined issues above, and you'll be good to go.

-Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~

Feel free to contact me or another reviewer if you would like to discuss the issue further for any applicable reason.