Talk:Stephan Noir Kalashnikov/@comment-23309369-20140413192844

-This review is at request of EvergreenLeaf-

Basic Note: I am not among the reviewing staff, as such i will not be deciding whether something is considered canon or non-canon. With this in mind I will be focusing on what I think needs to be mentioned and not necessarily what should be changed.

Well this OC seems fairly well made, aside from the slightly clichéd backstory that has an interesting spin on it. As for the rest of him, he has an appealing visual design (in my oppinion anyway) and he has some good quirks about him. I think his sidearms seem a little underpowered at range for his line of work, if they WERE powerful however, then his sniper being such a force would make him overpowered so it's good to see that. While on that subject, seeing that his only melee capabilities are two guns with knives on them, regardless of the sharpness of the edge, gives him a very clear range of damaging and range of killing, long to medium range seems to be his killing distance while close to very close is his damaging range (thats how it looks to me anyway), as regardless of the sharpness of the blades, they are still knives on pistols that have a relatively small calibre. Even if they were massive bayonets on miniature railguns they would definitly be somewhat awkward to use in any fashion other than stabbing as bayonets aren't designed for swinging since the weapons they are on aren't designed to be swung. Though I'd like to have a more in depth description of how he actually uses his weapons, whether his stance is balanced or if his grip on his sidearms allow him to spin them to attack and defend for example are both not explained.

His personality seems a bit clichéd what with the dislike for humans, but I can understand where it's coming from, and its nice to see some parents who weren't nommed by Grimm but rather they were evicted by racists.....ok maybe its not THAT much of an improvement but its a start.

All in all, the fact that his best skill is his sniping and that without it he seems extremely limited in his capabilities for killing and fighting seems to work out well for his character as it keeps him from being too OP.

If I missed anything in this review I'll let you know (most likely in chat)

Hope he gets accepted soon bro.