Thread:JackWasup/@comment-22439-20140829170946/@comment-13488655-20140904125933

Seemes like a person with a gentle smile who's actually a hard-boiled tough guy.

a few parts were confusing, but a bit of rewriting should fix that up. :) (Was mostly due to the 'hasn't got a mean bone in his body and afterwards saying that he's likely to strangle jerks)

You put in a lot of detail and deserve a thumbs up for effort. ^-^