Talk:Marissa Jager/@comment-11591668-20131116050223

Volume 1 Inspection:

I was actually going to make this ridiculously long paragraph about the parts of this OC that I thought wouldn't fit in, which was the cyber arm and the missiles on Steel Lion, but the cyber arm was approved, and I remembered Junior's weapon, haha. The Semblance still troubles me, but considering how ambiguous Semblances are, I can't really say much about them, especially considering how tanky the RWBY characters are to begin with, and Aura's existence.

Passed.

~OC Quality Inspector Runato