Talk:Estelle Argent/@comment-13172690-20150210174834

Well this is an interesting character. Though a couple things need to be addressed.

In your biography, you stated that she decided to go to Beacon Academy though from what I have read she has not gone to any combat school (Signal, Sanctum, etc). Most of the characters have attended one before they applied though people like Blake had passed the test without going but had a good reason. Could you clarify how she got into Beacon?

The other problem is your semblance. It sounds solid though could you elaborate on it a bit? It kinda seems confusing of how you worded it. From what you have it sounds like she's using the energy but from her aura? Either way, the draining effect from it should be a little more pronounced even with a strong aura. Maybe drain quickerwith each use or something along the line.

Just a couple things for clarification.

Rejected for now.

--RP Moderation Team--

Not part of the review but I commend you about the detail that you gave your saber. Nice work. ^_^