Talk:Asriel Liengsky/@comment-10337166-20160908102512

Semblance issues, and backstory length addressed, however I feel like the weapon issue was not, through my reading.

I'd advise altering the weapon section to JUST his current weapons, because as it stands now it's somewhat confusing to go through and read

Currently Rejected but much much closer this time  good job man.

~RP Moderation Team~