Talk:Blood Raserei/@comment-13593058-20160228195301/@comment-24080120-20160229050601

I like this review. Seems like I need to study more on how his whole setup work. But I just need to mention that there's a sentence there somewhere (Please understand that I've been gone for a year, I think and I don't remember much on how I wrote this and where I wrote certain stuffs in this OC) that says " An air compressor is installed below it, but Blood made sure it was portable but can pressurize more air efficiently. It also has a different canister for hydrogen with reinforced steel to make it impregnable, with a different chamber that can hold the pressure to prevent it from exploding within. The air compressor also has a device that can change the gas to hydrogen.   "

Guess I should've changed that last sentence to "change the gas canister of the air compressor to the hydrogen canister". I'll be sure to edit this OC further.

About the semblance, yeah I didn't read this before I submitted it. Solid air? What the hell was I thinking the last time I edited this? it's like Solid-gas. Makes no sense at all. I'll reword that. Really really really helpful insights. This OC'll probably get rejected again after I edit it, but I'm actually looking forward to more constructive criticisms. Thanks for the review.