Talk:Geist Morder/@comment-24296957-20140518135008

Alright, here's the verdict.

I still feel like Geist needs a bit of fleshing out. For one, his weapon is quite bland. How did he get it? Did he create it on his own or did Lucas give it to him? And although magic is not a 'thing', you could say it's magic to Geist because he hasn't seen anything like it before. But otherwise, it's really just Unknown Science.

Also, students who apply for Beacon go through Signal to do so, unless those applications are submitted with forged signatures and statistics. So is Lucas a teahcer at Signal? If so, why not just bring Geist into the Academy in the first place? The backstory needs some re-wording.

Now...for his semblance. A semblance implies a unique trait to the individual that ties into their weapon and fighting style to make the OC unique. Now, while a shadow semblance is non-canonical, speed dust is also non-canonical.

For Ulfur...i'll be honest. There's nothing in canon about having a pet fight alongside someone, but...just don't overpower it. Maybe even do something like Kiba and Akamaru from Naruto.

I also don't see where his name alludes to a color.

Rejected for now.

If you feel the need for more explination or a re-review, don't hesitate to contact me.

-RP Moderation Team-