Talk:Scarlet Johnson/@comment-25763181-20130919203831

Lol male version of Scarlett Johansson? I mean, sure, his name and weapon references to her, but the fact that he has marksman-class aim and a high IQ makes him a little bit of a copy. But, it's not a CARBON copy, so I'm fine with that. As I see it right now, your OC is a "Gary Stu" IMHO, which is BAD news to hear. Some flaws in the OC would solve the problem, like "doesn't excel in close range combat", since he is a far range fighter. Speaking of which, I suggest changing his weapon to something like a marksman rifle or a sniper rifle as a pistol doesn't seem to fit. But it's your call. YOU choose the weapon, not me. Overall, not a bad OC. If you feel offended, I've seen WAY worse. Trust me. I know.

7.5/10