Talk:Sakari Zavist/@comment-10337166-20160504232422

Reviewing to get nory off my ass yes I checked the character history thanks for asking~

Anyway you did fix most of the backstory issues, though I'm still calling this OC a through and through fuckboi (LOL).

The semblance is still an issue, I put it to a few people I trust and one said it was acceptable, and others didn't. From what I read and what you've told me, it's an illusion controlled by him, which also has an aura shield, and can do complex stuff as well as 'see' and all that jazz. This isn't really a simple or acceptable illusion as it acts more like a summon than anything else

Rejected

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