Talk:Marisa Carmine/@comment-27743663-20161206231531

CNR checks out

Apperance is fine, just a note that 5'9" isn't small for females. That's above average in most cases.

If you're going to use another character to describe an OC, I'd recommend linking them if they have a page. Other than that, it's fine, if completely barebones.

Backstorry is fine.

Weapon is fine.

Semblance, a note. How would you even calculate "total HP healed?" It's fine if it takes 1% of her aura, but use a system that's easy to grasp and not so subjective.

Tl;dr

Rejected on semblance demerit.

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