Talk:Kurai Jack Jade/@comment-24087318-20131220053738

Review as Requested by Ragadorus:

The characters weakness is a bit of a contradiction: "No Aura based abilities or attacks" Aura doesn't have either of these normally. It only acts as a personal protection from harm, allowing them to block and deflect attacks, as well as characters weapons act as conduits for Aura. What this does exactly we don't know, but its theorized this is why blades beat bullets in terms of stopping power and strength.

In addition, Telepathic attacks of any sort of nature havn't been seen so far. So we can't assume anything about them. As well, Dust doesn't seem to show an ability to levitate weaponry. The only character that's posessed this is Penny, and she's done so probably through a combination of strings so she remains in contact with her weapons, and the aformentioned weapons acting as an aura conduit.

The characters blade being able to absorb powerful attacks is a little overpowered, especially when being added to the rest of the characters skills, weaponry and abilities.

While I do not typically comment on fan-made martial arts, I feel this character knowing some doesn't quite fit, given they're already STACKED with equipment and various other weapons they're trained to perfection in. It's too many things that are too strong.

Like a previous review stated, the Semblance needs more elaboration. Why would lightning provide these benefits, or is it just how they look when manifest? In addition, the color black seems to be reserved for Grimm as their motif. Even Blake has more of a purple-ish aura when it's shown.

Also, if he was banned from entering a professional combat school, why is he even in Beacon? By law he's not allowed to be involved with the school.