Talk:Ferro Duellante/@comment-24087318-20150531230301

Lone wolf personality? Check

Steel Grey-Blue eyes? Check

Hipster clothing? Check

Stubborn and antisocial? Check

Cliche Done-before weapons? Check

Bland but powerful semblance with way too few limitations or elaborations? Check

And his favorite color and even Aura color is black.

Jeez, could it get any more cliche? Just make him a Wolf Faunus and he's everything I see too many times on too many characters.

A bit harsh, maybe. But the thing is, characters like this arn't fun to roleplay with. At all. Ever. People RPing with them have to stretch to get them into activities and it's an un-fun effort getting antisocial OCs to do things to kick an RPs story along. Plus nothing about this characters is particularily unique. I've seen it all before.

Not to mention that Black isn't really a color associated with Aura. Even Blake, the character that literally represents the color Black, has a deep purple aura. Not pitch black. That color's typically reserved for Grimm.

The Semblance could use some work too. Teleportation like that? There's no limitation or restriction that's been listed. No range cap, or how long it takes him to activate it. As it stands it's simply *too much* and too powerful. You need checks and balances mate.