Talk:Afon Lorem/@comment-17970636-20151216205951

The "few years at Signal" is what irks me. Signal students spend 4 years in training before moving onto Beacon.

"Cut through almost anything" this also bothers be because of how vague it is. "Almost anything" means that he could cut through diamond, other weapons, etc. Tone it down a bit to say that it increases the balde's sharpness or such, "almost anything" is simply just too broad a spectrum.

Semblance has next to no repercussions from using it, exhaustion is something to be expected from overuse of semblance, however, no range is properly defined, what mediums it can effect, once again, the spectrum is just too broad.

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--