Talk:Rahul Apalis Slate/@comment-24678303-20150212165754

Okay, first off, the formatting on this character page is really...Bleh. I'd reccommend going to the chat and asking for assistance if you don't know how to start making the page.

Now then, team S.P.E.C.T.R.U.M can not be a thing. Teams in the RWBYverse consist of 4 characters at any given time.

The Semblance looks WAY too OP. It's hard to make much out of it (I don't think you can have a "360 Area that is total defense"), but if i'm understanding it correctly, it is like a Bubble Shield from Halo. Plus, with his fighting style, it is like standing in one with an Energy Sword.

Overall, the article looks very unattractive with its text walls and lack of formatting. Also, i'm not so sure about that name, so some clarification on it would be helpful.

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~