Talk:Rosalba Winter/@comment-30530552-20170413160659

Really interesting character here. Let's have a look, shall we?

Appearance is fine.

Backstory & Personality are fine, though the backstory could've been a bit longer. I would ding you for not mentioning how she unlocked her Aura, but it was implied through the backstory. Next time, I would recommend mentioning that.

CNR checks out. For future reference, I'd recommend linking the source sites so reviewers don't have to spend a lot of time digging, but Rosalba's meanign was easy to find so all's good.

Weapon is fine, though next time I would mention what the name refers to...even still it has a very neat basis for it.

Semblance is fine and dandy.

Overall, you did a good job for this character. Accepted.

-PisceanWaterbender, review-in-training