Talk:Cole Harrington/@comment-10337166-20161027162433

You're really inconsistant on the limits of what he can lift with his semblance as you're saying contradictory things. Your page is also really badly put together, I'd advice looking through accepted and modeling the page after those OC's

His backstory NEEDS formatting, plus you don't explain anything in it, why did he have to run, what happened to his parents, what is he doing now. backstories need to answer the basic questions about an OC

Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~