Talk:Kuprium Caeruleum/@comment-5999656-20180104203455

Hey! Just adding my two cents.

So far your character looks pretty good. One important thing to keep in mind, though, is that semblances must have limitations, otherwise characters could hypothetically use them indefinitely. Most people include this in the form of a time limit and/or physical strain on their character.

Also, Kuprium's personality is slightly contradictory. So he's both timid and introverted, but also reckless and charismatic? It might be good to elaborate more on when he has these traits.

Overall, he looks pretty good for a first OC. Looking forward to seeing his backstory.