Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-26452496-20161219061137/@comment-26104528-20161222231302

Allright, I'm liking what I see but there are two big burrs that need to be taken out.


 * Don't reference outside works in the final version; it looks absolutely terrible and unprofessional. Try to refer to the character from an academic third-person perspective. Again, look at Accepted OCs or the Main Wiki so you know what tone to use.


 * It's perfectly fine to have your own main villians, but characters that get put into Pending are automatically assumed to exist in the same world as other characters and most importantly, the canonical cast and events. You'll need to leave references to Grimlock, Cinder Fall, and this "Stone of Chaos and Order" in your fanfic and fanfic ONLY . Truth be told, your fic will most likely have to be in the AU section as well.

All in all, this guy has seriously improved from where we started.