Talk:Svart Niemann/@comment-24416658-20160731002612

Name works under CNR, but I ask that you add a trivia section detailing how. Google says it's Swedish for Black.

Appearance is alright, but the appearance for the weapon should be in the weapon section, rather than the general appearance section. Personality, while I'm at it, is also alright.

The weapon feels like it's missing some detail. You say that he uses it to charge forward and attack, but is that all the gauntlet does? Does it only charge? Does he attack with his head, so his hands blast him from behind? Please be more clear about how the weapons work.

Semblance is not allowed. A search on google through multiple channels says that changing attrition constant is basically changing the state of matter or structural intergrity, something not allowed no matter the restrictions. If this isn't what you were going for, please be more clear on that section.

Backstory presents some issues. Why was he being pardoned despite his crimes? Out of nowhere? Randomly being allowed a full pardon for attending an academy needs more explanation.

Rejected for above reasoning.

--RP Moderation Team--