Talk:Diaeresis Azura Lazurite de Verse/@comment-24087318-20140101010351

Re-review due to added information Post-Judgement:

Some of the characters weapons and abilities seem rather difficult to decipher and are confusing and contradictory.

Her sword is a larger broadsword that is comprised of six smaller swords, however, some of these pieces have ranged forms or can transform independantly. There's also no listing of what happens if she is disarmed of any of these.

Her style where she juggles swords while attacking seems too elaborate to be anywhere decently practical, in addition, having an explaination of what she does with the swords she's not using at the given time.

As well, explaining the individual parts could be done in separate paragraphs instead of one larger block to save on confusion.

Regarding her Semblance, we havn't seen Semblances that are used directly on weapons to increase their striking power or damage. It seems bland and while it does work with her combat style, it doesn't make anything unique: it just makes her do what she did before better and it doesn't quite fit the spirit of RWBY and how characters have combat styles based on a summation of every part they have.

Due to the above, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~