Thread:RWBY Ruby Rose/@comment-30315955-20150316153419

Samantha, thanks for reviewing my OC. I believe I fixed what you asked for, but let's go through this.

I deleted one of his weapons, so now he only has one. Also, I removed the part about Paramount Flame targeting weak points. I also changed Paramount Flame's page to fit with Haiyang's page.

You said his skills were OP, so I changed "master" to "proficient" which I think is acceptable. Plenty of RWBY characters are "proficient" at martial arts. but only characters like Neo are masters. So, I think that should be good.

About the dust, I ask you one gigantic favor. Please please please don't reject it because of that part. There is no way I can get rid of it without changing the backstory entirely, which I really don't want to do, especially because it took me a long time. I'm sorry if we don't know everything about dust, but it was just a shot in the dark. So please please please ignore that bit, I am begging with my heart and soul. You have no idea how much that means to me.

I also changed the name confusions, but I don't know how to remove categories. So  