Thread:Tierhalibelbrylle/@comment-7497475-20131223034044/@comment-24052959-20131227063429

He already pointed out your mistake.. But lemme list his point about your mistake down in a simpler way :


 * You are making Grimm createable. Grimm should be based on actual animal and cannot be created via cloning.


 * You are making Grimm turned into human. That still out of the setting for the canon at the moment.

Well, that's all I got from what I currently know.

Brte500 isn't trying to insult your work or something bad. He's trying to make sure that you created an ideal work that can be liked by many when you finished it.

You should be glad about it. Because If you were at the community that I was, you'll often to get insult instead of criticism. The community I were In was rather full of assholes. Worse, most of them ARE talentless. All that they are good for are saying "Broken Shit", "Fail", "What a piece of shit", and other cursing words at people's work. People like BRTE500 or people who able to give constructive criticism is very rare in there. That's why you shouldn't be offended.

"Only those who know their weakness/mistake shall truly become even stronger."

Through criticism, you can identify your weakness. Knowing your weakness, you'll get a pattern of what you shouldn't do so that you'll less making mistake. Thus becoming even stronger.

As long as you're able to take criticism positively and put them into action, I'm sure you'll make a great fanfic :)