Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-26452496-20161219061137/@comment-26104528-20161221204043

Personally to me, the backstory really is a pretty standard issue Batman/Eren Jaeger knockoff. Adding more stuff likely won't help you as much as doing something different. Again, changes are up to you.

Given his age, toning down the stats will help with believability.

Also, nobody's first OC is perfect. The fact that you went out to get feedback shows you want to write quality material. I'd honestly say you're at a decent point and all the OC needs is some buffing up of rough edges.

One more thing: don't just copy the google doc onto the fanon. Look through the accepted OCs and try to match thier format. THAT'S how you make the page look presentable. If you've worked on the main fanon, the editing controls should be very familiar.