Talk:Krisis Bloodstone/@comment-27743663-20161229185841

CNR is fine.

Appearance is fine.

Personality is fine.

Backstory, it's fine for her mother to be a Huntress, yet I'd have to question why Ironwood would ask for her directly to join. And go personally to deliver the news of her death. General's are busy people, plus the fact he's a head-master. Taking that time outside his work to just go console one person doesn't make much sense. On that note, having Ironwood as a family friend and mentor to Krisis crosses fanon-canon interaction too much.

Naming him as the top student to Atlas' equivalent of Signal also is a no. No level of prestige for a fanon OC should be like that, and it's unfair to other OC's people have made enrolled there at the time to just shove them aside and say yours is better and just the best. As for the singles round, that's impossible. We already know who made it the singles round, and no one's OC was up there.

Semblance is fine.

Weapon is fine.

Rejected on:

- Heavy fanon-canon interaction with Ironwood

- Prestige level with labeled best of Atlas' Signal

- Impossible to make it to the singles round of the tournament.

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