Talk:Xanthus Raserei/@comment-26388029-20140715194509

First of all, nice backstory.

Second of all, what the crap is that weapon.

I have to give you props for being incredibly detailed, especially in the weapon area (which I'm still trying really hard to comprehend). I do love how you describe the backstory and his change in character so vividly, yet makes sense. Makes me jealous a bit, tbh.

However, there is one thing that stands out a bit strange to me. If the philanderer part of his personality didn't change, then wouldn't he have a different kind of interaction with Vitellus? I mean, I do understand that she was her package. But even so, he could have flirted with her in some sort of way, just because she is the opposite sex. Might need to explain a bit on that part.

Since I'm here, be careful about designing the semblance. Doing nearly anything with light can be considered an Illusion semblance, so some caution there.

Other than that, really nice work so far.

(I think I understand your weapon now. Basically, to those who don't comprehend this at all, the chemicals produce an exothermic reaction, creating energy. That energy is then transferred to the oxygen particles. Since it can't release its energy anywhere else [due to some quantum physics or shit], it transfers that energy to the iodine, which in turn releases the light needed to produce a laser. I think.)