User blog:Shazoto Touge/Indigo Nevermore (OC opinions)

I'm new to the RWBY fanon, but I have experience making OC's. I just wanted some feedback on one of my more recent OC's that I think would be good for the RWBYverse.

Name: Indigo Nevermore

Race: Faunus (specifically a Raven Faunus, shown by having dark red wings)

Age: 17

Semblance: Restriction breaker similar to that of Alucard's control art restrictions; has different effects in Voidess form

Weapons: Casull's Retribution (7 shot, long barreled .454 caliber revolver); Diamonds Constriction (7 piece energy chain whip)

Skin color: pale-white (similar to Ruby's or Yang's)

Hair color: light blue-violet

Eye color: Violet with red cresents

Likes: her teammates, studying, Ren to some extent

Dislikes: team CRDL (who does?), Not hearing what she wants to hear, math

Outfit: Lavender top with a red bow and acccents (also a yellow cresent on the left side of the collar, and a yellow sun on the right side); Violet skirt with white dots within angled red striping. Black sweatpants, Midnight Blue shoes with red accents; Red bow tie for ponytail; Black/blue/white cape over wings with a cresent moon on the inside.

Team name: NUBD (baised off the creatures of Grimm: Nevermore, Ursa, Beowolf, Deathstalker)

Personality: Shy and smart, but has a dark side (especially in Voidess form) due to a superiority complex at times.

Forms: Base) Most common, focuses on tactics rather than actually attacking.

Release state 1: Advent) Melee focused with emphasis on speed and strength; low on the defese side, so she can be taken care of if her enemie has the upper hand. (heavily baised off of Advent Cirno and Cloud from Final Fantasy)

Release state 2: Countess)  Flips the attack and defense, and loses a little bit of speed; drains power after extended periods of time.

Final release state: Voidess) Uses her own aura as a weapon, similar to a Voidwalker Warlock in Desiny. drains power after about 5-10 minutes in combat.

Other info: Cervo 225b2 is a floating, robotic companion gifted to her by Atlas. Helps with studies and combat tatics. Uses revolver as a last resort.

Birth place: a small village near Vale.

Indigo was abandon by her village as an infant, and was taken in by someone living in vale. The only known family member is her half sister, Tsuyoi, who is attending regular school.

Main influences for making Indigo were from Touhou, Hellsing, Final fantasy, and Destiny. The Touhou bits were her original design was baised off of Utsuho Reiuji, and her Advent form from Advent Cirno. Hellsing similarities are with the release states. Final Fantasy was also for the Advent form as Advent Cirno was baised off of Cloud. Lastly, Destiny with the Voidess form, and the design of Cervo being similat to the ghosts.

Of note, her Voidess form is similar in power to Yang's full power, as her base is similar to Weiss' (pre-glyphs).

I was going to have her semblance be dimensional manipulation, but that's OP to begin with, so I did the release states instead.

I hope everything checks out fine ouo;; Pls don't hurt me.