Talk:Schwarz Smert/@comment-7489529-20150527210912

I'm no reviewer, but i can give you some basic tips to help get accepted.

1. The proportions are kinda wonky. A person who is over seven feet tall often weighs much more than 175. Maybe make him shorter, or have him weigh more.

2.Tierens are superior mobile suits, and can easily best any gundam.

3. Mat black? I think you mean "matte black."

4. This character could use less black. Just my opinion, though.