Talk:Inari Tsukiakari/@comment-24087318-20131231222557

Previous issues appear to be addressed, except her weapons.

It's quite confusing as to how they work. How exactly does the dust energy work to reduce combat fatigue, and if she's not proficient with either shooting or stabbing, why does her weapon focus on these capabilities.

If she's a Dust based magical fighter, she should have more sorts of attacks and varied abilities for both close and far ranged combat, that use Dust to augment their effectiveness. (Weiss using Dust for magical ranged attacks, or elementally imbued physical strikes)

In conclusion, character needs more explaination on her abilities and powers, and if she's a Dust based fighter, how she uses Dust, and what kinds, needs more elaboration.

Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~