Talk:Perovskia Nōhime Lloyd/@comment-24911350-20140603154433

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Her appearance, personality, and abilities are all consistent and well done. The only issues here are with her backstory.

"Warlords of the sea" for a nickname for people who just go fishing during storms is incredible sensationalizing and misappropriation of the word. It also says that she used "Water Lotus" to propel themselves to the surface of the water, and it doesn't explain what Water Lotus is anywhere else on the page, or even mention it again.

The reasoning for their training is also pretty weak, "Some Grimm were coming towards you and you escaped? You'll be a wonderful huntress some day". What they did doesn't really indicate anything about their ability, and they still would have drowned or been killed by the Grimm if it wasn't for the townspeople.

Her future page is also the exact same as this one, maybe with some rearranged information, it's kind of pointless really.