Talk:Alabaster Heart/@comment-13593058-20160322230514

 A Review of Alabaster Heart

Appearance
Nothing technical to note. Appearance does not interfere with Fanon Rules.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapons rule followed.

Semblance is acceptable.

No significant comment on fighting style.

Backstory
Years skipping in backstory is lacking in detail and may contradict with Guideline Rule for Beacon acceptance age of at least 16. Candidate for rejection.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and source checks out.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- No contradictions

Review Summary
 Mostly lacking in depth really. The Semblance is also kind of weak an

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