Talk:Chloe Liakada/@comment-30530552-20180222183917

Alright, let's take a look here.

CNR checks out (I've used the name before as well).

Appearance looks good, with the appropriate details described.

Personality is fitting.

Weaponry and Fighting Style check out, no major concerns there. Out of curiosity, are there any other types that Chloe uses, or are those the only 3? If more than just the 3, I'd recommend adding that extra note to it.

The Semblance can work, but I think it could benefit from a slightly more specific depiction of the time limit and the effects that come with it, but isn't a gigantic issue since the Semblance itself is already for the most part adequately balanced. Not having read the backstory yet, that's my only gripe thus far.

Backstory, three things that could use a tad more detail:

1) You mention that the village Guardians have a "term," and I was hoping you could clear up just how long that can be.

2) You also mention that between the ages of ten to fifteen is where Guardians are found...how much power and significance do they have within the village, and assuming a young one like Chloe is enacted and they have some level of influence, would someone temporarily "stand-in" for the role as the new Guardian receives the training necessary to be the Guardian?

3) How they helped out at Beacon during the attack and where they were would be nice to know...it's one thing to be helping out with evacuation to the safe-zone, and another to actually be at ground-zero somewhere in Vale or at the Beacon grounds fighting off the hordes and rogue Atlesian Knights or Paladins.