Talk:Ardent Sylvanas/@comment-30530552-20171110191932

Okay, let's take a look.

CNR needs to be listed in Trivia. I see what you're doing, but it's per site rules.

Appearance looks good.

Personality's good.

Weapons seem simple enough.

Semblance time limits need to be adjusted. Perhaps make the 2 minutes the maximum amount of time and not half an hour? Also, how big is this "hurricane" of his reaching?

Backstory doesn't have any major contradictions.

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Pretty good job so far on this, but it still needs work.

-Rejected.

~RP Moderation~