Talk:Antares Trinity/@comment-8182065-20141109013915

You might want to use the "Fan Char Box" template as well as headers for cleaner organization (and more paragraphs to separate his history).

Also, to tell you right now, there are really only Humans, no "Sub-Humans" in Remnant, so "near immortal" people who can grow lost limbs and not catch fire, etc. are not able to exist per Fanon standards (its highly prefered to stick to canon as closely as possible). And Semblances have been shown to be physical so far, not mental, so the future sight idea is out for now (I've also tried the idea myself in the past, didn't work out).

Just some things that stuck out to me.