Talk:Ravelyn Rouge/@comment-17970636-20151120160943

Alright, thanks for dropping such an interesting OC on my doorstep. Always a pleasure to read these.

Now, for the review.

First off, not one to give advice, but often points out one's flaws/weaknesses. Now, this isn't really much of a contradiction, but if one wanted to get right down to it, they could state that "hey, pointing out flaws is like giving someone advice for the future". So in essence, in a weird way, she is giving advice, especially if she states it in an observational manner.

Small error, miniscule really, Sun is from Haven Academy, in Mistral, and managed to get to Vale by boat, so getting there by airship isn't the only way, just a minor inconsistency.

Finally, just slightly confused, does she use both her hands for notching arrows? Or just one? If both, it'd explain the strength in both arms, just wondering.

Man having all those different arrows must be confusing XD Beetee ain't got crap on what she made.

That's really it, have fun!