Thread:RWBY Ruby Rose/@comment-25363089-20150122031211/@comment-13172690-20150210033251

Sorry it is taking so long to reply back. He seems like an interesting character yet the page is pretty confusing. I would advise that before you revise anything that you should check and correct the spelling in your profile. After that, it would be much easier to read for the other readers and the reviewer. Even I am having some difficulty deciphering it.

Though it does need more organization especially in the personality. Though its pretty good through there are a few things to tweak. But you'll get there.