Talk:Luna Primula/@comment-31408668-20190521224924

COLOR NAME REFERENCE

Color name reference is recognized. Luna is a Latin and Spanish word meaning moon.

APPEARANCE

Short, consistent, gets to the point. I like the display of the emblem in a more unusual spot. No problems here.

PERSONALITY

The nervous extrovert. The personality works. I can't find anything wrong with it, and it's good to see some real effects from her past. No obvious contradictions. No problems here.

BACKSTORY

The backstoy is easily digestable and it delves into something I feel like I haven't seen on the Fanon too much, that being someone who isn't physically fit to be a Huntress still becoming one. I really like that. Otherwise, everything seems rather straight forward. No stepping on canon toes. Noted absence from the 40th Vytal Festival. No problems here.

WEAPONS AND COMBAT

The weapon is within guideline specifications. We have a single transforming primary in the form of Invicta. A spear that transforms into short swords seems very viable, and it's very nice to see someone using a family weapon. However, I do wish it was described a bit better, such as how long the spear actually is. Good note on how the weapon actually transforms unintentionally on occasion. Minor problems here.

As for Luna's combative ability, it is not clearly defined, hence I will assume it is average. No problems here.

SEMBLANCE

Luna's Semblance seems fine. It is a very specific form of terrakinesis, and isn't too crazy. It has two limiters, that being a range and size limt, as well as a fatigue limiter. No problems here.

CONCLUSION: ACCEPTED

I do like a more nervous extrovert, it's a nice change of pace from what you often see when someone is a considered an extrovert. I really like Luna taking the mantle from her grandfather. Overall, solid effort.