Talk:Elvira/@comment-17970636-20131126190528

Alright, here's my main problem with this character.

"Elvira is good with her survival skills and is a good close range fighter, but her sniper skills is where she shines."

And

"Elviras main weapon is a double-edged black fire sword called Datora. It can be turned into a lance that can fire a variety of projectiles depending on the dust being used. Its main attacks are fire based, The blade is violet while the hilt of the weapon is black."

In no way, shape, or form does it explain how the lance fires projectiles. In all the situations within canon, and even in fanon, there has been some kind of firing mechanism for dust propelled shots. Unless she's channeling her through the weapon, it doesn't make sense. Since a lance is a kind of medival spear used in jousting back in the medival ages, it really isn''t built for firing projectiles either. Please put more detail into how the weapon works to avoid problems like this in the future. Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--