Talk:Cizin Pech/@comment-30530552-20170428042356

Alright, let's take a look.

CNR...eh, it's a bit of a stretch but it works.

Appearance is fine. (I'd like to note, however...that you have 204 cm. listed for his weight...I recommend revising that, whatever it was supposed to be. Not a rejectable thing, just something to note.)

Backstory seems interesting enough.

Weaponry, in my opinion he doesn't need 8 types of Dust, but maybe that's just me.

Semblance, how large are these grave constructs? Until that's answered, sorry, but I don't think I can accept this, Fedora. Other than that necessary info, it seems pretty well balanced.

-Rejected on the noted issues above.

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