Talk:Revan MacLeod/@comment-8182065-20130819232016

Looking at the character now there is still a bit of overpowered-ness in his fighting abilities. His backstory is also pretty cliche with the whole revenge deal (I should know because I made a character with a similar revenge goal, but I stated that he got over it once he joins his team), and "I'm becoming a Hunter to defeat all evil." I'm pretty sure that's what being a Hunter/Huntress is about anyway in regards to fighting the forces of Grim.

Also some holes in the backstory as well: He forged a sword at the age of 10? That is not really possible unless he was an aspiring apprentice of his father, uncle, or whoever knows about smithing in your story. If he is, you might want to add that in. Same thing for his Dust pen. I honestly can't imagine a 10 year old pulling something like this off at all unless they were Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius.