Talk:Rufus "Satan" Nemesis/@comment-4182273-20170516033259

having read through Rufus's bio I'll admit to liking most of it but if you'll allow me to suggesting a few things; first off being a Faunus is a great idea a raven isn't the best idea animals like the dragon, snake, or goat fit the symbolism more second personality wise your missing satans most important attribute pride Satan weather its the bible or paradise lost is a narcissistic megalomaniac who always believes he's in the right. I have some more thoughts but I feel like a jerk for critiquing your work you put so much time and effort into