Talk:Klorin Mure/@comment-25924729-20191107140652

Wow... well then, this one's definitely a very unusual character, lots of unique ideas. I like it.

Appearance is ugly, dear god... gotta give credit, not many people would have the guts to make a character straight up unflattering like that. Backstory is really harsh, i like this kind of everyday conflict that could happen to just a regular person, not the usual melodramatic huntsmen shite. It feels very real, like it could actually happen to a guy, which just makes it sadder.

Personality is neat too. Funny thing, that was actually the last part of the page i read when i reviewed. Reading all the other parts gave me the impression he's a quite disgusting, desperate and unlikable person, then the personality part says exactly that, people are supposed to think hes a disgusting person at first glance. I dunno if thats intentional, but it is clever and very fitting.

Weapons and abilities are alright. Unconventional weapons and skillsets are fun, would be cool to see him raid a janitor's closet like an armory and rig a building with tons of Home Alone style traps made of household items.

I was a little unsure about his semblance. Its an interesting idea but would force opponents into an extremely unfair disadvantage in a fight, and be nearly impossible to block to the point of almost being autohit. But other users seem to think its okay, given it does very little actual damage and blinding semblannces have been accepted in the past... He's also pretty much a walking onion, holy shit.

CNr works, no other issues found. very solid character, i like it.

Accepted.

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