Talk:Semblances and your OC - A Guide/@comment-24385282-20160221205703

Two of the OCs I'm working on have somewhat similar powers to those of canon characters, so I'd like to see if they're okay.

The first is Semblance of Disguise, nicknamed Shroud. It allows the user and small nearby objects (including, but not limited to clothing and weapons of limited size) to completely change what their appearance is temporarily, including complete invisibility (to the extent of Emerald's Semblance as shown in Beginning of the End). This has a limited duration, further limited by the total size of all objects included in the disguise (larger size:shorter duration). Outside of visual appearance, no other aspect of the person or object is changed. It has no interaction with Dust.

The second is Semblance of Flowing Force, nicknamed Stream. It allows the user to create a tunnel within which all objects are moved towards one of the ends. The tunnel size has no limit, however the user must be able to personally physically lift at least half of the weight of each object in order for it to move in the tunnel. Furthermore, while at least one object is being moved by Stream, the user is put under the physical strain of personally upholding half of the weight of the heaviest object in the tunnel. It interacts with Gravity Dust, changing its shape to a sphere that instead pulls all applicable objects towards the center. Objects that are too heavy are simply ignored with or without Dust interaction. It can only effect solids (including all Dust forms) and liquids, and has no effect on gases (or plasma (or energy (or anything else))).

I worry that Shroud could be too similar to Neo's or Emerald's Semblance and that Stream could be too similar to Glynda's Semblance. I tried to differentiate them as much as possible, but I'm not sure if it was enough. Anyone have any thoughts?