Talk:Ash Westwind/@comment-24678303-20150701144708

No changes from the last review.

Clarification would be very much appreciated. To me, Mercinary seems like a cop-out of sorts to explain their combat past. That can deal with any number of things. Yes, you did say he graduated a junior combat academy, but what prompted him to go there in the first place? Does he actually have any motivation to become a Hunter? These are key details for character development.

As for the Semblance, i must agree with Sel. If you're using Dust to enhance the effects of the Semblance, then i see no reason to not add a couple more effects to diversify the use of it. Just make sure they're not OP and they'll be fine.

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~