Talk:Teagan-Blaise Shouree/@comment-25197246-20140804180313

Here are my promised reviews, starting with the (easiest to find) featured one! But seriously.. make a team page OTL

Appearance is chill, I like the sassy look. The picture is already more than enough.

Personality seems almost sterotypical in terms of flirting, but when combined with the insecure issues...that does make her an interesting character.

Backstory: It wouldn't be the first time stories about jailtime and deranged parents were mentioned. The mafia/family part does stick out, and it gives room for more plot development later, I'd figure.

Weapon/Ability: Probably the weakest part of the page, in terms of contradictions. First of all, the sword is too heavy-- I understand the "tank' concept, but holding a 80 lbs sword would already be considered that. 150 is unrealistic, I would really recommend bringing it down to 50 pounds... most weapons should be manageable to handle, especially if Blaise wears out fast, she needs to be spending that precious energy on obliterating, not carrying a heavy weapon around. (And with a 50 lbs weapon, I'd imagine the user still being slow... 150? Maybe not being able to run O.o)

Err, I also find the gattling gun with the grenade launcher to be too many ranged functions. I mean, a heavy sword and a gattling gun is already awesome in and of itself. Maybe while you cut the weight, you can remove the grenade launcher function? That idea is already used by a canon character anyways, and I'd imagine her teammates can provide more ranged attacks anyways.

Hrm, that seems to be it for me. Next~