Talk:Cole Harrington/@comment-13593058-20171118103001

 Cole Harrington Review

Appearance
Appearance very bare bones with the generic shirt and jeans combo. Not exactly grounds for rejection but would benefit greatly with more effort.

Personality
 "The Hero" p ersonality. Not rejectable but basically describes a good 90% of the OCs on here.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Semblance lacks notable detail. What exactly does being able to see pressure points do? What are pressure points anyway, in case some people don't know? Grounds for rejection.

Backstory
 Backstory lacks detail in all areas. Grounds for rejection.

Miscellaneous
 Cole probably isn't a good argument for the colour cobalt. Furthermore, "People's Victory" and "Warrior" don't really inspire any sort of colour. Grounds for rejection.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Backstory lacks detail

- Unacceptable name for proposed colour

- Vague Semblance

Review Summary
Seeing as this isn't the first time this character has been reviewed. I don't think there is much I can say here to help you. I've pointed out the issues as well u/Nice Things that still seem to be a very prominent problem.

Good luck.

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