Talk:Cole Gambel/@comment-13593058-20160306222844

 A Review of  Cole Gambel

Appearance
Not much to judge on a technical level.

Personality
A reasonable personality. No contradictions and has justified responses. No additional comments.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon does not contradict with existing canon weapons nor the Fanon-Rules.

Backstory
Nothing worthy to note. No contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and source checks out.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- N/A

Review Summary
Honestly lacking in a lot of things in general but has just enough information to be accepted.

I would advise going over the formatting and wording of the profile as there are several repeated uses of words that make some sentences utterlu redundant or simply lack impactful meaning in their statements.

As well, while there are defining characteristics, they are far too general for my personal liking, this makes Cole a character in my books, but not a not a person with a real interesting story or someone I should really care about.

Please try to use paragraphs and different types of fonts available through the editor. You can look at previously accepted OCs to see how they formated their profiles. It simply makes it so a reader does not have to put a lot of effort in keeping track of where they are.

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