Thread:Terumi666/@comment-26543176-20140202081852

Hi there. Just wanted to leave a messaged here about your team. Team DARK.

I just wanted to give you a friendly little warning before the reviewing staff see the memebrs of your team when you put them in pending. After reading them i believe that all of them need some serious work as all of them have some crippling issues that could hamper their acceptance, mostly I am trying to save you some time here.

Please, in no way here am I trying to offend you or anything like that. I just want you to know that as they are, the three members of Team DARK will get rejected when you put them in pending.

Doyle- Doyle will be rejcted due to him haing interactions with a cannon character (Qrow) this is strictly against the rules and will certainly mean he is rejected. He is also highly overpowered and much stronger than he should be. I would certinly advise removing his cannon character interaction and maybe tonning down his power level.

Arch- While less of an offender than Doyle Arch will most likely face rejection also. Due to his smblance not fitting the known cannon of RWBY and him also being like Doyle very very OP. This guide can give you a good bit of help with semblances. http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Semblances_and_your_OC_-_A_Guide

Roxanna- Roxanna will face rejection most likely due to her seriously unstable mental state and like Doyle and Arch being very very very OP. Her smblance or at least the chance to hit her enemies getting bigger will probably hamper her in being accepted, as it doesn't fit the known cannon of semblances, however the move speed idea is fine and works well.

All in all i just read your characters thought they looked kinda cool but i saw they had some problems. I hope this helps you and i rally hope they get accepted. Nice meeting you. 