Talk:Micheal Korry/@comment-8182065-20130813203617

The one thing I have to say is, he seems a little too imbalanced and there are some holes in the backstory in my opinion. Don't take this offensively, just giving out some constructive critisism.

You're missing a lot of information about his life still, for example since he's supposed to keep the history of the world, how was his life growing up? We understand that he learned a lot, but was it all from a book and another person's word? Were there examples involved?

Also one cannot simply survive on knowledge alone; you need some actual experience depending on the situation. If he ran away from home how would he have handled himself with no weapon or survival training? If he was in a forest for example, Micheal might have learned how to hunt from a book, but a book can only take you so far. If he had gone camping or something in the past and learned how to fend for himself in the wilderness, you should include that as well. And there's the matter of what happened when he ran away too: where did he go, did he just stay in a tree in his front yard, did he scale mountains or move to a different continent? Also all that travelling couldn't have taken place while he was 17.

Also when he learns to fight with a spear, how does he manage to master it in such a short time? If you have heard the saying "Rome wasn't built in a day" then you should know that it takes time to accomplish anything. And Micheal was able to create a "powerful weapon" that easily? Trial and error is a big part in any sort of story, character, and the problems they face.