Thread:JackWasup/@comment-13488655-20180415031048/@comment-25363089-20180522173739

O.O That is some good describitioning both food and character wise. I need to get on that level for my characters.^-^ Which is why I've been looking up videos. On becoming a better writter as. I want to get better at my writting and story telling specially if; I'm gonna try and make a webcomic. I might have terrible drawing skills but dang it. I'll at least have a great story to tell. The art can get better with time. ^-^

As I don't want to just give brief discriptions on my character's actions like. Luna sneered at her little brother and Nickelae sneered right back evenly.. Instead have it be like. Luna stared down her little brother with a loathsoming gaze as if; She were staring at a worm or peice of trash on the street.

Upon meeting his sister's gaze and seeing her expression nickelae gave her a eqaully loathing gaze one of hatered and malice for all the torment she brought upon him; Since he was just child his and her relationship was one of udder hatered for each other.

Luna for how wasteful and lazy her brother was of his skills. Nickelae for all the pain and hulimation she rained down upon him and flint. There was indeed a thick layer of tension between one so thick; It couldn't be cut with a knife the only thing keeping it at bay; Was the domineering gaze of their mother and the bard that was the kitchen table.

Something like that. ^-^ As it shows and tells the reader the relationship and personality of the characters. ^-^ What their feeling and seeing at least..that is what. I've read about so far...I might of missed used some stuff in the discription and I'll get better. As I want to get better as a writer and eventually tell my own story. ^-^