Talk:Siorus Fitzroy/@comment-24678303-20180503224510

It looks fine overall, if a bit barebones, but the semblance's details put me off.

It says it gives them a small strength boost when connected, but if his Aura falls below 50%, it does the thing and damages his aura further and dazes those connected. I have several questions. What's the tethering range? How big of a strength increase does it cause, and what exactly does it entail, just a physical strength boost? Is there a range to his tether?

You also said that it drains 1% Aura every 2 seconds, then said it'd be active for about a minute and a half. That's not entirely wrong, it'd be 1 minute 40 seconds by my calculations, but that seems like a pretty poor boost for the effect it has on people when it hits half. It seems like it's just a countdown to dazing your teammates and committing self harm. How much damage does it do to his Aura anyways, and what all does dazing them do? Does it damage them as well, or does it just discombobulate them? Or does it act like a flashbang to the teammates he's tethered to?

Rejected for lack of details.

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