Talk:Sapphyre Nilshikha/@comment-14090705-20140801033921

Very well done. I would specify her ethnicity, though

Appearance: Great look visually and quite detailed. The gold really makes the outfit pop. To me, she appears to be a modern Native American archer.

Personality: It seems as though you trying to combine a cheerful persona with a repressed one. Not the best combination in my opinion, but it makes sense with her history. The cheerful personality is more apparent though.

Weapon: The most unique I've encountered in terms of transformation. How is it that the blade bends? My guess is that it is made of individual components that become rigid when in blade mode. Does she also use arrow attachments? Another note, might want to color in the weapon picture.

Abilities: Pretty well balanced. Her semblance is rather unique in itself. Splitting a projectile into multiple projectiles is pretty neat.

Backstory: Nicely done. She's had it rough as a rich kid, which makes her all the more interesting. I get the feeling that what her family is doing is not, strictly saying, legal.