Thread:JackWasup/@comment-4974591-20160807192222/@comment-25363089-20160817011318

I think with the Weapon and Abilities section you could put your weapon at top then go with Combative abilities and Non combative ablilities to better explain his strengths and weaknesses when it comes to combat. Cause the whole Manipulation and Scheming part could easily be left in the personality part and breifly put in his combat by saying something along the lines of him perfering to lure his oppents into traps his friends set up or to get them to lower their guards by not seeming like a threat before lunching at them.

As that can better explain how he is a schemer and manipulator without using the words. An makes sound more exiciting. ^-^. Plus he has to have some stuff out of combat he is good at or at least isn't totally bad at. ^-^ Like is he good at cooking or does he burn every dish he makes. It just fleashs him out more and gives him a way to make friends outside of his team by joining a club. ^-^ Other than that everything looks alright to me.