Talk:Alice Weston/@comment-13488655-20130826070123

First off, the species, there hasn't been a half dragon human in RWBY, so the admins aren't going to let that slip by. You could make her human and let her wear the scales of a reptilian Grim.

Appearance, well you don't have to tell us her size, just explain what she normally wears and if there's a reason behind her choice in fashion.

Personality is fine in my opinion.

Powers need to be toned down a bit.

Backstory needs to be improved. (You need to explain what shes been through to make her who she is now.)

As for the notes, you should put the questions in your comments.