Talk:Amet Revfold/@comment-4806269-20160221023743

His profile is mostly alright, but there's something in his abilities that sounds contradictory to me: it is mentioned that 1) His semblance makes him, beside other things, to attack with great precision, and 2) it's also mentioned in his fighting style that he strikes "quickly and effectively", yet in his stat chart his precision is one of his lowest stats. Does this mean he's only that precise when he has his Semblance active? or he's always precise?

His Semblance's explanation lacks a bit of clarification; does it have some kind of limit, such as a time limit? He can't keep it active forever. Also, I think it would be good if you mention if he has some kind of weakness; I read his profile and I only see mentioned that he's great at a lot of stuff, but he needs to have some weak point, specially considering he's just a student.

Rejected for now.

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