Talk:Hibiscus Aurum/@comment-17970636-20151214051501/@comment-27389942-20151214204951

Would the semblance be considered acceptable if I

1. Clarified a change in weight rather than general density

2. Clarify increases effort/fatigue proportional to increase in weight

3.Clarify geater effort relative to an objects distance and time since contact

If not what other changes could be made without completely altering the concept?

Also, do you mean a proportional increase in size? Lastly, could you please define what you consider a limiter and what I could add? Thanks for the feedback.