Talk:Clayton Radley/@comment-24296957-20140723143203

OC to be taken out of Pending.

And there's a reason for that ^

Looks alright to me. Though...the backstory. How did he kill the two? With his shotgun, or by some other means? The OC is complete, but the backstory needs a bit more leaboration. Mostly the aforementioned. Because how he did it will dictate his rejection or acceptance.

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