Talk:Revan MacLeod/@comment-2135507-20131005061136

Okay so here is the thing. This character needs work, and a lot of it before he can RP.

He has too many weapons, most RWBY characters should have only one, it makes it more personal that way. Second, he is WAY overpowered, perfect defense and attack? He has to have a major weakness or something he's just not skilled in. Also, his personality is kind of...Too perfect? A tragic past character that wise beyong his years and also funny and witty and a perfect warrior is stagnent and gets old very quickly. Not to mention that one of his quotes directly rips off Doctor Who. References are fine but when you just take quotes it's not cool.