Talk:Koral Grey/@comment-25924729-20181119115024

Really short character page... needs a lot more details to work.

Her appearance and personality are very short and vague, could use some improvement and elaboration, especially with her outfit., but not really rejectable.

Unlike those two, failing to elaborate her semblance and weapon is grounds for rejection. Its current state is too vague for anyone to get an impression how strong she really is. You should add details like how exactly her weapon fires the lightning projectiles, how many it can fire, how much damage each one does for her weapon, and stuff like maximum strength she can reach with her semblance and the exact time limit it can be used.

Entire backstory section is absent, this is also a mandatory requirement for the character to be accceptable for RP.

Colour name reference isnt explained. I mean, i know Koral can be a variation of coral which is red. But you must mention this in the page.

Rejected.

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~RP Moderation team~