Talk:Antares Trinity/@comment-26543176-20141214011548/@comment-26543176-20141215073123

You've improved him somewhat though the backstory is still cliche as all hell, but I doubt you'd do much to fix it. Aside from that your spelling and grammar as well as your general sentence structure is still sub-par leaving much to be desired. Some of the more glaring spelling issues I noted before are still present.

He still gives off a very, special snowflake, mary sue vibe all of his mastery's and whatnot, but aside from that I do think you've made several improvements, so you're on the right track. However, I still suggest buying a dictionary, or at least trying to use spell check.