Talk:Celeste Burne/@comment-24087318-20150617020158

Faunus traits don't match up. As far as we're aware, beyond obvious things such as claws and prehensile tails, Faunus posess no additional traits beyond night vision. Nor would they lack this if their animal of origin doesn't typically have it. (Sun could see just fine in the darkness, in spite of being a monkey, which is known to be a diurnal creature.)

"Unrevealed" aspects of the character or their equipment is something frowned upon on character pages, as it could allow the writer to sneak potentially Rejection-worthy things under a Reviewers radar, as such, the panel on her weapon will have to be elaborated on before it can be properly judged.

Similar case with the Semblance. "Unclear" needs to become "Clear".

Rejected

~RWBY Fanon RP Deputy~