Talk:Deus Ironwood/@comment-24416658-20160504051419

I see Rain showed you the guidelines already. As such, I will be lenient. It's what I do.

Canon-Fanon interaction is only allowed in two cases: Ozpin and Ironwood acting their jobs as headmasters, and some teachers sending students on assignments (the latter is limited to RP). Having your OC be the child of a Canon character breaks this rule, and mostly puts your OC above the rest in a manner that isn't really fair. Sadly, right off the bat, this OC has been rejected.

I'll help you out a bit more, though. The name, Deus, does not work with the CNR, or Color Naming Rule. However, if you specify if this does work, please add that to the trivia.

In the realm of mechanical limbs, there is a maximum of two, and if they're weaponized they count towards the weapon limit. Having almost his entire body be mechanic is not allowed.

Also, this may or may not be a thing, but refrain from just using Genos's art as your OC's. While he is based off Genos, as stated by the trivia, you still have to credit the art in the Trivia.

I know you're new here, and I'm doing my best to be nice, so I'm really sorry if this comes off too strong. I'll be removing this OC from Pending, so that you can change it up. Just remember one thing.

Your OC can still be great. It doesn't need to be related to any Canon character. The point of this wiki isthat we make characters that are their own people, and aren't great because of previous relations unless we make them ourselves.

If there is anything you need, feel free to message me or any reviewer/admin. Welcome to the RWBY Fanon, I hope you'll enjoy your stay here.

--RP Moderation Team--