Talk:Elisa Dianne Windstorm/@comment-25763181-20131102020904

First, I would like to apologize for the delay. I'm REALLY busy with academics so I haven't have much time during the weekdays.

Anyways, this OC would probably be a "Goldilocks OC", as I like to call it. It's a great and well balanced character, yet I feel that some more detail would grab more attention should someone happen to stumble across this page.

Other than that, to say the least I'm quite struggling to find any flaws, as well as anything that stands out (except the weapon; a book would likely catch someone off guard in an RP, assuming they haven't looked at your OC yet).

Overall, great OC you have there. Just elaborate on some details and you'll have one hell of a character.

8.1/10

(BTW congrats on getting your OC accepted)!