User blog comment:ThereGoesKira/New and would like some opinions please!/@comment-27147483-20151230002401

First off, welcome to the RWBY Fanon Wiki! I'm on the newer side as well, I just joined last month. But the people here are pretty awesome, and you'll make friends in no time. If you ever wanna talk, I'm AwesomeSauce14, but you can call me Sauce or Awe (most people do). I'm usually found hanging 'round the chat.

Anyway, your characters seem really interesting, and I like your team name. One little thing though: The first names need to be the ones related to a color, so you may need to flip a few people's first and last names. though I think someone already mentioned that. Other than that, you seem pretty good. Just be sure to read all the guides (trust me, they help), and if you ever need help, feel free to give me a shout!