Talk:Ranna Juliet/@comment-24087318-20131218112522

Review as Requested by KuraiJack:

I don't comment on Grimm Chance, or other fan-made martial arts. That being said...

The characters weapon design is actually quite nice, reminding me of Alice Twilight from No More Heroes 2, with a spider-legged exo-suit that had the function of the legs also attacking like they were blades. So it really helps me picture how it works for your character.

In addition, we're still not entirely sure Grimm leave behind remains. Freshly killed Grimm appear to let off a sort of smoke, suggesting they may infact, dissolve or disappear.

Also, her backstory doesn't reference how or why she's able to keep her age hidden and attend Beacon. Beacon requires transcripts of previous schooling and grades, which would more than likely give away her age, though it seems she was still admitted despite it due to an outstanding circumstance. (Which doesn't quite make sense, just because you want to go to a combat school with a specific person doesn't mean they'll move you up one year in training.  Not to mention teams are randomized. Nobody knows who'll end up their partner.)

Other than that, decent work.