User blog:LtCptSuicide/Semblance help.

Hey all. I wanted to get some feedback and opinions on some Semblance ideas for an OC Urdin Meadows between his current, and original Semblance whhen he was first written way back in early Vol. 1

Current:Force Blast-Urdin can generate a radial blast of energy around him ranging in power from barely feelable to highly destructive. It grows stronger the more emotionally unstable he becomes but (what's not currently wrritten on his page) physcally exhausts him as he uses it.

Original:Breserker's Rage-Urdin's Semblance makes him stronger and faster as he becomes more frustrated,angry, or generally upset sending him into a blind rage. While he is incredibly strong and much faster than normal (though still realatively slow compared to many RWBY characters) he'll lose his reasoning ability, attacking anything that stands in his way, friend or foe. This ability cannont be triggered conciously but is triggered once he's ht a point of emotional distress. He usually doesn't remember what transpired during the Breserk phase and once it has exhausted him he typically blacks out, becoming essentially helpless until he comes too (The longer it's used the longer he needs to recover)

Obviously both probably need to be tweaked and I'm to tired to go into all the minute details. But I just thought I'd put them both out there to get some feedback to help my thought process. Thanks all!

~Cheers!