Talk:Hitori Kazami/@comment-13593058-20160816211551

 Hitori Kazami Review

Appearance
Nothing technical to note.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed. However, range of Dust usage is non-specific as well as ammunition or runtime on Dust. (see the Dust is a limited resource rule in Fanon Guidelines)

Semblance is strong and acceptable but lacks standard range in terms of AOE circles. 5 AOE circles seems a bit too much. Grounds for rejection.

Backstory
Nothing technical to note.

Miscellaneous
 Colour reference acknowledged.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Weapon range and resource not included

- Semblance range an strength needs to be adjusted

Review Summary
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