Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-27603392-20130909025137/@comment-26388029-20130909033908

Welp, it's come to this.

Two archenemies face each other to fight for the chance to go to the second round. For God! For Glory! And for...

What was it again?...

Ah, never mind. So. Two very well-written characters. This was a very, very close one for me.

The effort is evident in both characters, as they are very well described in detail. However, keep in mind that the history doesn't need to be long and boring. It just needs to describe the important events in a person's life. (People, if you didn't notice the tabber template at the top of Verda's page, I suggest going there for more description about Verda.)

Nox is very interesting as a character, kind of like a lone wolf that looks out for his family. His methods, though, seem quite bloody to use. In addition, he has multiple weapons, something which does not bode well for me, because I like a character having a trademark weapon, not some obscure equipment that you use for every situation. It makes it seem that your character is a soldier, not a warrior like the regular Beacon attendees. Overall, he seems like an asshole with guns. A very dangerous asshole with big guns.

Verda was quite more descriptive, having tabs on top of the page to describe each section of him. He has a comedic purpose in this Fanon, something which I have rarely seen in characters in this Fanon. If you have a character like Jaune in the Fanon, lols would be endless, and the Fanon would be a better place, metaphorically speaking. Overall, he seems like an asshole with guns. A very dangerous asshole with guns. With some comedic relief.

Overall, it comes down to personal preference, whether you like a sadistic, dark character, or a more lighter, comedic character.

My vote is for Verda.