Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-27603392-20140704110526/@comment-25584579-20140724205740

I'll... Review again, is that okay with you? My past review is kind of lame.

I'll start with Crystal Nelde.

She does seem to be a bit underweight. A few pounds, that is; Somewhere around seven. Her physical appearance is well described, and there are little to no problems with that. Even without her picture, it'd be easy imagining what she looked like. I don't have anything more to say about that.

Crystal's weapon is possibly one of the most original I've seen. Faith seems effective in close-range combats. Yet, I cannot pick up how would she manage to fly with Trust. I'm sorry if I have this wrong, but I don't think a human would be able to fly with a small object such as that. Her ability is really creative, and I have no problems with it.

Her personality, also, is well described. Although the first part does seem a bit overused, when one looks closely, she is good material for a leader. Her reactions to being asked about her past are somewhat realistic, seeing how her best friend was killed and all. The reason for her being warm and devoted may come from a fear of losing someone like she lost Peri.

Her backstory, Shattered Wings, doesn't seem to be finished. In fact, it's stated the page is being revamped. If it's about to be continued/revamped, I guess I won't review it now.

Overall, Crystal would be Accepted.