Thread:EvergreenLeaf/@comment-24261143-20160130171258/@comment-24012109-20160130183333

Passerby Hype has the answers to your questions.

1) No, and no. The only thing you are free to revise is grammar faults or inserting things such as art or music. Any change into anything else SHOULD constitute a resubmission into Pending. As for the schedule, the reviewers just do it when they have free time to toil away. Reviewers are people with lives, the same as the rest of us.

2) Weapon seems okay, but I'm no honest example. Though, one would believe that Integrity would be the shield, and Brave would be the gauntlet. Weakness lies within the fact that it lacks force on it's own.

Semblance may need tuning. Absorption semblances can be fickle to actually utilize, and this one needs his hands to be outward. Not to mention, there's no mention of what happens if he gets whacked while trying to store up energy. Does he lose focus and the ball explodes? Does it just dissipate and run around in a frenzy? The problem here is that there's no real weakness to it.

3) http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/MediaWiki:Emoticons