Thread:KuraiJack/@comment-25363089-20140914232207/@comment-13488655-20141104071404

Try the same style, but more, relentles and brutal. Devoid from all mercy.

What you need to do is write it in a way that makes it look good.

Like, what is it about his insane side that makes it a key feature for this character? How is it that a lover of justice has evil in him?