Talk:Silver Galahad/@comment-933831-20151026083827

There are only really two issues here, but they're doozies, so bear with me here. The first is the breaking of the rule where OCs can't be interacting with Canon characters, like we see here with Ruby and Velvet. Idolizing Pyrrha is fine, because she's famous and it's reasonable OCs have heard of her, but coincidentally, you chose two of the more introverted characters to have Silver be friends with. That's easy enough to edit out. The next issue is the bigger one. His semblance breaks a vital rule in avoid making overpowered semblances. One of the most important rules for making semblances is that they may not enable you to autododge attacks, or autohit, this one more being an issue for the former. No matter the attack, you could dodge it with a five word post. As I've seen semblances of this type plenty of times, you're probably better off coming up with something else from the ground up. As it stands though, rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--