Talk:Marcel Skye/@comment-8182065-20130818183953

So just like Maki, I saw you're round in the OC contest. I have to say that I like the unique idea about the skates as a weapon a lot. The problem with his other skills like sword fighting and his hand-to-hand combat are that they aren't well explained like his rollerblades were. You could take out "MasterSwordsman" because it's description makes him sound like a novice and change it to trainee swordsman or something. In my opinion though, I think Marcel would be a great fighter with just his razor skates and the karate skills. It makes him more original as a character because I haven't seen it done before.