Thread:TheoldStone1000/@comment-33419273-20171021235518/@comment-33419273-20171101004530

i actually modified his words there. " Not to be rude to your friend, but having read some of his character stuff, he's not a good source for ideas on these things to begin with. His main character in his fanfic is pretty much an archetypal mary sue "fix everything" character down to the letter "