Talk:Mizumi Odayakana/@comment-26362067-20160114143144/@comment-26362067-20160115144525

Makes sense.

Few tips: With the Neo Force, you're gonna have to explain how they came together, how they got training, etc. Also, since immortality is kinda OP... Though I get it if it's something like the Artemis' Hunters, where they're immortal unless they break their vow of forsaking men or fall in battle. Still, though, bit of a no-no.

Btw, the rules state that while the mods will allow being accepted into Beacon at 16, but not 15, as Ruby is the only known character in RWBY to be accepted at that age. They don't wanna take away her spotlight, if ya know what I mean.

You know what, I might as well just give you the link to the rules of making OCs: Guidelines. Mainly the ones labeled "MANDATORY" should be read, but the ones labeled "DISCRETION" are probably things to make note of as well.