Talk:Vesta Lionheart/@comment-24087318-20140114121020

Character has been in Awaiting Canon Info long enough that it needs Re-appraisal due to new Information following the conclusion of Volume 1

Not sure what parts of this are Awaiting Canon information, but there are two issues that need addressing.

Faunus only posess one PHYSICAL trait from their animal sub-species (Cat ears, Bull horns, Monkey tail, etc) They do not posess multiple features.

As for their abilities, Faunus only appear to have increased levels of night vision, across EVERY species of Faunus. They don't have things like enhanced hearing, smell, sight, or posess things like natural claws or more pronounced teeth. (look at Blake, only has kitty ears, nothing else.)

Moving onto her Semblance, it posesses three too many abilities for a Semblance. They're not that loud in form and function, or as varied. Suggest consulting http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Semblances_and_your_OC_-_A_Guide for ideas and tips on what we know about Semblances so far, and how they can be best incorporated into an OC.

Due to this and the above, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~