Thread:Strider Trinity/@comment-69.118.211.238-20141130220237

dude so far I'm looking at your page and there are no progress in getting your character out of the   special snowflakeness hole to be honest. I looked at your page and there are things that have to be fixed. I'm not trying to be rude about it but it just concerns me for a while when I looked at it, also read it the contents of the page as the reader of Strider page and see what things have to be fixed. Also Strider is not a color material first name for a rwby fan made character. I hope you take the time to  look over page for any errors.  