Talk:Marryl Sheffield/@comment-17970636-20140418191652

You've cleaned her up well, it's just that her semblance.. I don't have anything against you for your ideas, but for some reason, it reminds me too much of Pyrrha's semblance. And seeing what you want to do, I recommend using Glyphs. Also, her range on her semblance is farther than the range we've seen on most ranged Semblances, which is 20 meters.

Reducing the recoil on a rifle makes it parctically useless. There are bullpup rifles that have little recoil, but stuff like handguns rely on the recoil to propel the bullet forward. As well as the fact that you haven't fully specified a time she can use the semblance for, you state roughly two seconds, but roughly is a term that can be interpreted in many ways.

Since you seem to like a certain range of semblances, and each of them relate to something, I recommend using glyphs that can levitate things for around 8 seconds within a certain radius, as well as with a certain height restriction.

Rejected.

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