Talk:Douglas Merle Randall/@comment-24490414-20160510213022

(Not a reviewer, but it wouldn't hurt to provide some advice.)

Does he have both wolf ears and a tail? Faunus are stated to only have one trait, so you might want to clarify that.

The way you're wording his abilities is as if they're semblances on their own. Abilities are meant to describe what the OC can innately do, whether trained or part of his nature, with no boosts nor fortification when used (this is what semblance is meant to do instead). You might want to avoid heavily using RPG terminology in this case.

Personality section is rather bare bones. Wouldn't hurt to expand on that.