Talk:Azurine Zaffer/@comment-30530552-20170717011151

Let's relook at this.

Good on you for adding Dust types to the weapon. I'm also going to assume the "burning through flesh" thing is only for people with locked Auras or their Aura being broken, since you didn't specify that.

Semblance, you misunderstood me. I meant that your information and emotional detection were okay too, and that it seemed overnerfed...forgive me for being unclear on that with my wording. As for now...the 2 & 1/2 minutes thing is even more OP than before...because in battle, you could have 10 moves coming within 3 seconds depending on your attacker's skill or speed. Now, amplify that by 50 times, and you see why that's a problem? Perhaps doing something like 4-5 moves ahead would be a good balance for you. Your consequences also still seem a little bit on the heavy side.

You got rid of the supercharge, so that's good.

Your backstory also seems to have been shortened a bit. While it's still long, it's a bit more concise.

Overall, just work on the Semblance & the small wording issue for the weapon and you're all set.

-Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~