Talk:Marias O. Newastral/@comment-17970636-20151228021938

Backstory is quite incomplete. At what age did her father die, when did she start at a combat school (if she did) where did she get her weapons, why does she want to become a huntress (does she want to become a huntress?). What combat school is she attending, did she attend a primary one. Etc.

Semblance needs a time limit to how long she can use it and/or a cooldown time.

How does the planet Mars relate to a colour (I get it, but it's for others, not me).

Rejected.

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