Thread:Tierhalibelbrylle/@comment-7497475-20131209094513/@comment-4773581-20131211103115

So is being so implausibly overpowered that the plot of the entire series would effectively end purely because he's too strong to be overcome. And having something, by which I mean magic, explicitly stated to be nonexistant in RWBY, is also verboten. And the whole not-on-a-team-but-still-attending-Beacon-as-a-student thing. And having numerous weapons that are several times more powerful than the combined might of every wapon and ability shown thus far in the series proper (the WMD glove is easily the biggest offender you've made, but the anti-dust sword is apparently, somehow, a bigger offender). And probably a few other things that I can't find in the mess, but I'm sure you get the idea by now.

There's not much besides his arbitrary and highly superficial attachments to canon characters and the offhand mention of dust that makes him a RWBY OC. You need to work on fixing that.