Talk:Intro To Monster Hunting Saga One: The Signal/@comment-13488655-20130817060744

Review.

Try to say where they are before the action begins.

Good job with the sidekick character, he helped explain what was going on and did most of the talking.

Signal is just a combat school, Beacon is the one for hunting monsters.

Try having the heros be able to take more hits before suffering serious injurys otherwise you might give the impression that they are very weak.

Seems a little extreme at the end. Try for the villan to be less evil through his mistreatment of the good guys and more through how he says things, I've seen some villains who you just despise without them even throwing one fist. A good villain is one based on yourself, all your bad traits all the stuff you wish you could do when your angry, this makes the villain. (I was studying how to make a good villain for a long time.)