Thread:ImtheSteve/@comment-24828824-20150912225027/@comment-5490216-20150912231133

Oh. Sorry. It's just that some the paragraphs, particularly Moon's last post, are kind of disrupting the flow of the situation at hand. Feacha contemplating herself as a Faunus and a person after meeting Jericho in large detail while most of what Initiations are supposed to be, them being mostly action, just kind of makes the action stop as you read it.

I know there are rules concerning avoiding short posts, but long posts are better for emotionally driven RPs and situations. Survival and combat is usually done in shorter posts that detail reaction to attacks or making them.

I'm sorry if I sounded offensive, but I don't think the long, overly detailed posts are necessary for Initiation. Not yet, anyway.