Talk:Stehlen Texan/@comment-27743663-20170213213143

Backstory, I still doubt someone like him, a high-class Sniper for the Atlas Military shouldn't exist. Mainly because the Military from Atlas seems more Specialist based as shown with Winter, and saying he was "just behind Hunters" is going for a stetch as well. But eh.

Weapons and Equipment, list his equipment actually in his equipment section. Don't leave it floating on the charbox. He still has his mentioned battle-armor with grappling hook and jetpack. You can either have the shotgun, the jetpack, or the suit and grappling hook. Choose. What exactly is tactical gear anyway? As in, /what is he actually carrying/. Just saying "X Gear" gives no details on it.

Semblance, 400 feet is infinitely too far. He has no time limit so he can keep it up forever. And there's no set amount of people listed he can give itt to, so it's essentially infinite. How does "becoming a tactical visor" even work anymore? His mind would constantly be on over-driving calculating everything little detail around him, making it near impossible to get anything done. Besides that, how would it classify an "enemy?"

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

- Secondary  Weapon limit breached

- Full equipment is not listed

- Semblance lacks several demerits

. Semblance wouldn't be possible much in the first place

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