Talk:Yin Uroboros/@comment-30530552-20170505222846

Let's take a look.

CNR works, Yin and Yang are typically associated with black and white, respectively. Interesting surname, and how that could possibly be attributed to the character's personality or story.

Appearance is all good. One question though...how old is she? It was never mentioned in her profile or her appearance section, which is problematic because I need an age...it's mandatory. It's alright if you forgot to add it, because it's a real simple fix. I'm going to assume for now she is close to graduation or freshly graduated, based on backstory.

Personality works.

Backstory, age is a necessity again, but it looks all good.

Weaponry works, and as far as I'm aware, you seem to be within the weapons limit.

Semblance; you've got good demerits on the range and the exhaustion after her Aura falters, but with as much power as you've put into those projectile, the amount of regular and rending projectiles needs to be limited a bit more, since Aura usually gets exhausted much quicker when using one's Semblance numerous times in rapid succession. Much better than your previous entry, however.

Thankfully, you've also put in credit where credit is due with those images / gifs.

Overall, you've got a great start, just needs a little bit of touching up.

-Rejected on: lack of definitive age, and slightly OP Semblance.

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