Talk:Coal Eisenturm/@comment-13172690-20151202035451

Alright, a few problems here.

First, how does Cole work in the CNR? First names have to allude to the CNR Monty designed. If Cole does work, please put its meaning in the trivia. Some people may not know without looking it up.

Secondly, your weapons. The sword gun was fine but the 9ft robot in the hands of a 21 year old? Thats a BIG no. He would have to go through a lot to just hide it. Please get rid of this.

Lastly, his semblance. There has to be extreme limits on it since that could be considered breaking our semblances rule of "Any Semblance that, in essence, allows its user to dodge almost any attack sent their way, and/or counter attack that same attack before the opponent can feasably react, is vetoed. Doesn't matter how it works or what limitations are put on it." Please put a large limit or change it.

Also with that in mind, you will have to change your bio if you choose another semblance.

With these points,

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~