Thread:Verity Evermore/@comment-37031238-20181103203158/@comment-26570606-20181105004713

No problem! I love to help out.

I think that that's a great way to look at things, I feel like it shows the conflict between humans and Faunus (which canon RWBY hasn't really shown much of, no shade just facts). I'm glad I was able to help! I doubt that she'd get rejected by reviewers because of those reasons, I just think that they'd be good points lol

I'm fond of characters who are cold but have good hearts. It's a trope I quite enjoy, I admit. Though I like how you worded it - "she tries to be a good person". Not "she is a good person". I really like that wording, to me it shows that she's not perfect.

I'm honestly kinda... shit at Semblances XD. 2/4 of my main characters don't have one because I'm simply not good with making them. Since these aren't my strong suit, the most I can really do is show you this. It's a rather helpful guide on how to make and limit your Semblances. If what you have doesn't conflict with anything on the page, I'd say that it can work. I'm pretty sure there's another guide somewhere but I'm not exactly sure the link.

I like doing the shortness factor too! I have one OC with that (not a RWBY OC, unfortunately, so you won't find him here), and I think it's fun to do. You can make jokes about it (I'm short too lol) but also make kickass short people, which I honestly kinda love. But we also have to be realistic with heights. I know a character who is 4'11 and apparently 18, so I feel like that could probably work (granted, said character is a character in Doki Doki Literature Club, a visual novel, and apparently visual novel characters have to be 18+, so people speculate that she's not actually 18 and that the creator said that to avoid trouble). I'm not the right person to ask about heights either, it seems.

Hmm, google? Hopefully that won't give you any trouble. I swear I once heard that you couldn't use images that weren't made by or for you, but I've seen accepted OCs with art I found on google. So I probably am remembering things wrong. You know, let's forget I said that one part :P

I'm always happy to make friends! And I'd love to be there to help you out with characters. Granted, I can't actually accept them XD, all I can do is give pointers, but if that is what you desire, I'd be happy to do so! And loving essays isn't weird! As we can tell I like writing huge-ass review essays.

I WILL ALWAYS USE PROPER GRAMMAR TILL THE DAY I DIE XD