Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-24296957-20150113152446/@comment-32064726-20150113202213

Chloe Chroma

You said she was a Faunus but did not statewhat kind or directly what trait she has. I belieive I can conclude that you were going for a Cameleon one, which ties in the changing Hair and Eye Color.

The thing is, Faunus only have One animal trait, and having both changing Hair and Eye color counts as Two traits. There's also no sort of background to be found to explain how or why she came to be, so next time add one.

Rejected

Breyal Yoland

Quite an interesting character, though I am not sure if her character traits she has go together or not. But that's more up tot he creator, and not enough to ban for.

HOWEVER I've checked, and I don't see where you included her Faunus Trait anywhere, just that she was a Kangaroo. Does she have powerful legs? Ears or a Tail? Maybe a hidden pouch? None of these traits, or any other is included.

Also, you mention she has a scar, where and how'd she get it? Possibly you could expand her backstory a little more, and explain the "whipping girl" part better. Just expand it a little bit more is all I can say.

Rejected

Denver Verde

Everything checks out, though should you choose to add/change something in the future, be sure to reread the entire post and make grammar corrections.

Accepted