Talk:Ash Westwind/@comment-24087318-20150617001356/@comment-25857155-20150617010256

He did attend a combat school at Atlas, which is mentioned in the first part of his Background. The "mercenary" work was just odd jobs around town, which I though was clear - I can clarify if you like, though.

Also, I had 5 o'clock shadow at 17. It's not that weird.

That's a pretty good idea with the semblance, though I rather like him being limited to only wind. Most of my characters are deliberately specialized - often overspecialized. It keeps me from trying to make them too  OP, since I do have a habit of trying that kind of thing.

Thanks for taking the time to review, but please take another look when you get a chance - I'm not seeing the issues you are, here.