Talk:Mystique Rust/@comment-24911350-20140603164708

--Requested Review--

It looks like the things I mentioned before are all fixed and improved on, and no new ones have arisen in either.

If there's any slight problem, it's that her nickname seems entirely unrelated to anything but her appearance. Having separate pages for child and future version still isn't working all that well. It's the same page again, so you end up with a page and a half of information between 2 pages, so neither feels complete.

But apart from that, it all looks good. Everything clicks and meshes well. I'd recommend expanding on the fighting style though. She and Tyto were both trained at the same place, but there's nothing saying why they both learned such vastly different skills that could have been a great help to both of them.