Talk:Orion Kane/@comment-24911350-20140514232830

The lack of synergy between his weapon and semblance means he isn't reaching his full potential. His weapon is also a little lacking in description, and could really use even a basic sketch, as it's hard to imagine how it could have 2 hilts.

There are a few spelling/grammar mistakes (remember apostrophes are for possessives) and it looks like you accidentally pressed enter at a few spots, leaving broken and momentarily confusing paragraphs. The picture of the girl at the bottom of the infobox also seems extremely strange, and I have to question its purpose. There's also no reasoning behind his "dragon breath" rounds, just saying that they're super OP. Remember that people survived Yang, and several shotguns blasts to the face. Those rounds must really be something special to be more, and definitely lethal at even greater range, but there's no reasoning behind them or detail.

His emblem is cool, but it seems unrelated to any aspect of himself except his weapon. That may be intentional, with Orion's history of rather thoughtless names, but if it's not, or you don't want that, it might be a good idea to find something more meaningful.

I like him though.