Talk:Asura Bailey/@comment-25857155-20150624192517

Gonna drop some peer review stuff here. :) 'Tis all opinion only, so don't stress it too much.

Wings are a risky thing to include - they can go wrong easily, given that they are kind of useless appendages if the character can't use them to fly (which if I recall is a no-no per fanon rules). I would go with feathers in her hair or on her arms instead.

Heterochromia is also a risky thing to do, since it is fairly overdone and one of the more popular traits of the common Mary Sue. Both are acceptable, but risky.

And one more thing. I really like the weapon design (mostly), but the scythe part seems a bit unnecessary, not to mention impractical - the staff wrapping up I can understand (folding frame tech and all that), but I don't see how a blade made in the same manner could be effective.

Anyway, there it is - my opinion. XP I hope it helps a bit.