Talk:Eli Leictreach/@comment-16141060-20130821175336/@comment-1618120-20130821225626

Thanks for the review. The last name is Lightning because I wanted it to represent his colour which is electricity but I'll try and see to the names, I did it for Rufus, why not Emile. Only 3 things on this page are of Halo. Oh yeah that's true, Ozpin probably wouldn't accept him, I forgot to explain where it was. The Halo stuff I agree with you, the part that I'd say was less Halo was the History on the 2nd paragraph, as I made the group devious. I was actually inspired by the image above to do a dark backstory, I really don't know why. But don't worry it'll breakthrough once my fan fic goes on nicely. I'll try and update Emile all lot more, you'll see! I won't be changing the weapon however, it just simply fits him in a way. I think I'm inspired from this review to do better. Editing it now!