Talk:Austin Argento/@comment-24678303-20150712165246

Well, I was going to rip on this character for the first name being Austin (since I'm pretty sure it has no actual color relation), but then I saw the trivia. That's...Actually pretty clever, so gg for that one.

Though, I must ask, why is his nickname Shirley...? It is just about the only part of the CharBox that really stood out to me, since there doesn't seem to be a reason for it.

All I can say about the weapon is that he is either really edgy or just /really/ likes chains.

Jokes aside, it breaks the weapon limit rule. You can have Two different weapons, or Two of the same. Given that these are sort of both for all of them (given that they work the same, but have different effects), it breaks both rules. Cut two of them.

So the Semblance...Can't be used without the flutes. That's not acceptable. The Semblance needs to be capable of being used as a last resort if a weapon fails, so basing a Semblance around a weapon/item is not a smart thing. Besides which, there's no reason a Semblance like that would come naturally.

"Sparta-like kick"

...What.

As for the backstory, from what I could read (as it is in large paragraphs and I'm having vision issues without my glasses), it was kinda all over the place and dark, but I didn't see much wrong with it.

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~