Talk:Emerald Verona/@comment-30530552-20170811170352/@comment-31978836-20170815065121

Takeshi kun21, the point I'm making is that the plot points can be avoided. I don't HAVE to have them in my characters' descriptions. However, those are the exact things that you (the moderators) keep rejecting my characters for. There's so much here in my character descriptions that are also being taken extremely at face value. Like PisceanWaterbender's comment " That's not even mentioning the fact that archaeologists bringing their kids to explore potentially dangerous temples with Grimm around seems a little gutsy if dangerous." Come on! Gutsy? A) Dig sites aren't supposed to be dangerous. And B) These are adults who are huntsmen as well as archaeologists, so they wouldn't just all willy-nilly go in there without proper scouting. All that takes to understand is a little common sense. That scene simplified: The dig site was supposed to safe after doing recon and scouting the area and it turns out that it wasn't like her parents thought. You all are people yes? With brains of your own? Then why am I explaining my characters so much that I can't have any character development as the RWBY characters also develop? Because whether you see it or not, my characters are being rejected for lack of development that I'm trying to grow with the whole RWBYverse. All you (the moderators) are seeing is that lack of development, instead of actually thinking about where the writer might be trying to lead you. The questions your asking are a few of the ones I want asked, because that means I'm writing well and that you guys want more. But just because ypu want more doesn't mean you reject a character for that sole reason. My characters follow the guidelines basically to the letter. So why are you still rejecting them??? I've looked at the accepted characters. A lot of them have half the content I do, yet mine is rejected, not their's? I'm trying to be a part of something here, but I can't be if this is how the system works.