Talk:Canopy “Cano” Verdant/@comment-25924729-20200118082823

Lmao Green Green. I love this OC just for that joke alone.

Small issue in her infobox profile, no age is listed. This is a very minor thing but useful in determinin the beleivability of certain events or abilities an OC has. I assume she's around 17 to 21 since she is in a Beacon team, but it may be best to clarify anyway.

Appearance section is very well designed, personality sounds likable.

The ending of her backstory is a little vague. Stuff like the time she entered Beacon, how or if she even managed to perform during the Vytal Festival, and what she did during and after the Battle of Beacon are poorly explained or absent. These all seem to be important events in her life, and are mentioned elsewhere in her page with upgrades and stuff. I think the information here is vital and should be explained more here too.

Weapons, abilities and semblance all seem alright. Quite unique and could make for a rather flashy fight, i like that.

Relationships section seems good, the part with Sylvia is a mood. CNR checks out, no other issues found.

Overall a very good OC, just could use more explanations on her backstory and age. Nice try

Rejected.

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