Talk:Eliza Dove/@comment-24487330-20140207194850

Alright, now that I've completed Vincent's review, it's only right that I comment here as well.

Appearance section: This part looks good; it's organized and detailed, and I see no problems.

Personality section: Eliza sounds like she was an interesting individual; she seems to break the molds of the standard "protective maternal figure", being mischievous and headstrong rather than cautious and reserved.

Abilities section: Not too much detail here, but seeing as she's deceased, I think that's excusable. What is listed makes sense for her character; not only does her Semblance sound extremely useful, but her other abilities are a clear contrast to Vincent's, making them a more logical match for each other.

Backstory section: This part matches perfectly with Vincent's, which makes sense since they were so deeply involved with each other. The part at the end, where she leaves that notice in her Scroll, sounds a bit fanciful, but that's not to say that it doesn't work.

Weapons section: The idea for the shield is a novel one; not only does it conceal a gun, but it also acts as the sheath for her sword. On top of that, the limit on her max ammo capacity emphasizes the importance of skill and accuracy, reinforcing her image as a skilled Huntress.

Once again, this profile does a great job at telling the character's story, and the descriptions of her skills and personality sound quite believable. More worthy of note is the lack of personal misgivings; I can't think of any way that I would improve this profile over its current state, and considering how picky I've been in my reviews thus far, that's saying something serious about its quality. Definitely deserving of a 10/10.