Talk:Ochre Lancelin/@comment-17970636-20151207172953

Well written OC, just a few discrepancies you can easily fix.

To start off with, his semblance is all good and well, just, can he walk on ceilings? According to my knowledge of physics (which really goes up to a second year university level so forgive me if I'm incorrect), walking on the walls is theoretically possible via increasing of the coefficient of friction and making the friction force greater than the gravitational force being applied on his body, however, when upside down, there's nothing but normal force and gravitation force acting upon his body via a free body diagram. I didn't read anywhere that he could potentially walk on ceilings, but no limit like that was described either, so I'm unsure slightly about that. This isn't a point for rejection, just so you know, just a question from a slightly baffled person.

However, his entrance to Haven, while I can understand his backstory is focused primarily around the history of the families, and such, starting from the age of 15, that means he is already past the age at which people generally start going to a regular combat school in order to learn how to fight, that being said, it's not fully outlined whether or not he joined Haven as a first year student at the age of 20 or not. Normally that being the case would be a point of rejection for a Beacon student, however, being a Haven student, it leaves some door opens. Regardless, please give more information about his combat training and why they would accept him into Haven because of it and feel free to resubmit to Pending.

Rejected.

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