Talk:"Undine" Pulcherrimam/@comment-24087318-20140114063056

Character has a few too many names strewn about the page, not sure if they're nicknames, aliases, or leftovers from revisions, as her backstory doesn't explain where she's gotten some of them.

She has a few too many weapons than we've seen in the RWBYverse so far. Canon characters only posess one weapon, or multiple copies of the same weapon, and simply have it transform into everything they desire it to be when they made it at Signal, and possibly other entry-level Hunter/Huntress schools as well. Another thing to be aware of is that Hunters/Huntresses fight with fighting Grimm in mind, who arn't easily distracted as people would be.

In addition, being a Princess to a monarchy in another kingdom is a bit excessively overpowered, given the RWBY world seems to only have four kingdoms.

As well, Signal is an academy for entry-level Hunters/Huntresses, and Beacon is where they'd go after they've had this training and the transcripts to show it. Beacon also only accepts students who are 17 or older, being younger than this you're only entitled to extreme exceptions from the Headmaster himself.

Things like her abilities, personality, and appearance need a bit more detail as well. (Clothes are a thing!)

Due to all these above, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~