Talk:Torrent "Shinu" Messorem/@comment-24087318-20141006104851

I was wondering how they pass on the martial arts in what seems to be a matter of moments or even a few hours, considering he was able to do it while bleeding out on the ground, but I found it on the Grimm Chance page itself. Considering it's a good part of his backstory, it should properly be located on the main page as well as the side page. Not a Rejectable thing, but something to keep in mind for readers.

The link to the "2 gigajoules" thing is broken, in addition, Joules arn't an energy of mass/force. It's an energy of well...energy. Heat, electricity, etc.

Though, on the energy topic. Two gigajoules is what you generally use to power your house each month in the winter. That's a LOT of energy, and is kinda Rejectable for just being too crazy strong if somehow he actually does have thunder fists or a falcon punch of whatever. Again. Broken link. Can't read shit, captain.

His weapon is said to make use of different dust types, but the types arn't shown or elaborated on.

Due to these, Rejected

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