Talk:Alabaster Czar/@comment-13593058-20161111033705

 Alabaster Czar Review

Appearance
Description of appearance present.

Personality
Point of personaility made.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Semblance acceptable.

Backstory
Backstory is acceptable

Miscellaneous
 Colour acknowledged but reference source is not present. Grounds for rejection.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- No contradictions

Review Summary
Two things in particular: one, the wording, grammar, and rhetoric of this page needs improvement. The amount of run-on sentences on this page makes it borderline unreadable. Please review your wording and sentence structure in your spare time or have someone help you with wording.

Two, while I have the full right to reject this character for not following one simple rule of not including yoru colour reference in the trivia section, I have opted not to. Make sure you fix this.

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