Talk:Dianthe Nikoleta/@comment-30530552-20170528001555

Let's take a look here.

CNR is passable, since pure can be associated with white.

Appearance is fine.

Personality is fine.

Backstory is a little jumpy at times due to weirdly placed periods. A note for future reference though, reviewers don't like sifting through long backstories, as they're meant to be general and describe one's life in roughly 3 to 5 paragraphs, which you've gone beyond. I myself am okay with longer ones, but I'd recommend doing some trimming to make it a bit easier on readers. One thing I'll say, you've forgotten to put in her role during the Battle of Beacon (assuming she partook in the battle), which is what you need to add to make it all work.

Semblance, fighting style, and weapons are all okay.

All in all, you simply need to add a reference to Battle of Beacon to the backstory and you'll be good to go. I'd also recommend doing some backstory trimming too.

-Rejected for now.

~RP Moderation Team~

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