Talk:Cyzarine Bluthardt/@comment-Arkhosia-20141117021600

I think it'd be best if you adjusted the semblance a bit. The whole idea if th semblances are supposedly to act as augmenting allies or ones weapon, so is suggest maybe changing the Vector Manipulation to be focused on altering speeds? Maybe she uses it to boos the speed of her attacks and/or movement, and can also use it to slow an incoming attack instead of the thing you're using currently. It fits the entire Acceleratoresque trolling the enemy idea, while making it less of a weapon in its own right to a support power. Think a Level 3 Esper, not Level 5.

Also, I'd suggest removing the whip capability of the weapon. You want a Player Character Weapon, not a Boss Level Weapon.

Don't take this the wrong way: I absolutely love solid the concepts you're using, and it's kinda lame the power level is too low for it all.