Talk:A Minor/@comment-4809613-20171227224549

Lilac and Ayame. Interesting subplot! I wonder how they'll grow a bond together! Probably Ayame will reveal that she's not as professional or "composed" like how she always acts. On that note! Do delve into how Lilac and Ayame know one another in future chapters! I'd like to see if they knew much or perhaps very little. If little, they should get to know one another, and on a journey like this there's little room for not making friends, lol.

You're getting much better at describing characters you introduce too! I can clearly picture them as I read the story.