Talk:Saria Khuruf/@comment-17970636-20151123070114

How does the name "Clouds at Night" allude to a colour? More elabouration required.

Why did he want to become a hunter? Most characters have a reason, and his isn't fully defined.

Also, it'd be more appropriate to label him as a "Ram Faunus", although sheep have horns, Ram are more commonly known to have horns, just a suggestion, not an error.

Having a weapon that large would be quite unweildy and hard to use, especially with a face that large. Consider toning down the proportions.

His semblance appears to have no limiter to it, how many times can he use it in a day before he's tuckered out?

That's about it, have fun.