Talk:Siegfried Drachentöter/@comment-24052959-20150515071215/@comment-8182065-20150516093758

Here's a bit of a second opinion: I'm siding with Sam and Avatar on the matter, and I would suggest to follow the guides that were linked as well as taking a look at some of the other OCs on here. Your character, is "too perfect" and no character should ever be truly perfect. Think mainly from an RP perspective where you're dueling against another OC who has mastered 50 fighting styles, and yours can barely hold a sword. Doesn't seem fair does it?

There's no balance at all that I'm seeing with the character. In his abilities, I'm seeing a lot of strengths here: being able to regenerate limbs with his Aura, leaping over tall buildings, superhuman reflexes, etc. but no real weaknesses. The stats that you gave him should not be that high; even after graduation, he shouldn't have perfect stats in all areas. If he works best in the strength department, give him lower speed, or high durability in exchange for weaker attacks, think along those lines.

The Semblance is too much as well, as it constitutes too many different abilities (firing beams, creating barriers, summoning floating swords). Rather than dealing with an either/or situation between offense and defense, he pretty much excels in all areas. And a note, Aura Manipulation isn't allowed as Aura is pretty much your life energy you're throwing away.

Adding along the unnecessarily high sense of heroism, generic backstory, and personality (also dragons. Dragons are pretty overrated IMO) I would have to classify him as a Gary Stu. It's nothing to feel bad about however, as most people do create OP characters at some point starting off, but along the way learn to balance them out properly.