Talk:Aeden Vesting/@comment-25924729-20181128093057

Good character, reminds me of something i would write really, good understanding and clever use of equipment and the rules to make him strong and interesting, can see a lot of thought and work went into him.

Appearance, personality and backstory work out fine, they mesh well together and make sense. Weapon and semblance are complex but fair, teleporting LMG spray is a terrifying thing to go against, but sounds really cool and flashy.

I am a little unsure about the Spearflight. I mean, being able to fly an aircraft similar to a Bullhead, a Huntsman grade troop transport craft at the age of 17 seems a little unbelievable. But i will give him a benefit of the doubt, since his family has a history of flying and they have been teaching him for many years. The legal age for earning a PPL (Private Pilot License) is as low as 17 in some countries. So it is plausible he had the skills necessary to pass the test immediately upon being eligible, and can fly at a ridiculously young age. I'll let it pass.

So yeah... aside from that, no real issues found.

Accepted.

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