Talk:Darian Rouge/@comment-13593058-20170517195130/@comment-13593058-20170604194745

Specificty does not mean extra detail. It means you must provide a clear cause an effect or certain out comes. My issue was that the addition of unnecessary detail which made the backstory a narrative rather than a summary.

Gary Stu is the male derivative of a Mary Sue which "is an idealized and seemingly perfect fictional character. Often this character is recognized as an author insert or wish-fulfillment." (Wikipedia) While not a rejectable issue most of the time, it is generally frowned upon by the staff. I included.

If you would like a chance to re-evaluate your character, I will let you do so and remove you from pending for now.