Talk:Zane R Slate/@comment-933831-20140204185917

So, a few issues here, is that part of his whole point is NOT being a hunter, as if Beacon is just something people can sign up for and drop at will after graduating. When you graduate beacon, you are expected to be a hunter, and they simply wouldn't let someone into the school if they weren't going to become one. In addition, you have it listed that he lives off campus, something not shown to be allowed. Students seem to be required to stay with their teams in their rooms.

Also, I'd prefer you remove that part where it says even with aura, he's hard to sense. Thus far, there is no way to fool aura.

And as for his semblance... From the updated rules: " MANDATORY: Semblances MAY NOT include: Illusions, Mental/Psychic Abilities, Summoning or Transforming, Soul Manipulation, Shadows or Death."

These are a few things that need to be sorted out. Until then, rejected.

--RP Moderation team--