Talk:Sarah "Crimson" Raglan (Canon)/@comment-30530552-20171008001726

Alright, let's take a look at your character...

CNR reference needs to be noted in a "Trivia" section, which your page lacks. Additionally, you cannot use a nickname or a middle name to denote your CNR reference as per site rules, it must be in the first name at minimum.

Her personality's alright.

You're missing an Appearance section, as you must describe how your character looks in case someone cannot view your image, as per site rules.

Weapon's decent, though the transformation time seems a little impractical in combat.

Semblance I find a little implausible, not necessarily from the use of Dust crystals to power it (which seems way impractical) but especially that given that its effects don't really match the crystal you are using for it. Red crystals are fire, Blue crystals are Water, Steam, or Ice Dust depending on the shade, Green is Wind, Yellow is lightning. The effects of red aren't too stretched out, and neither are the yellow ones, but the other two don't really match the base types in possible effects.

Backstory-wise...since she doesn't have an age, it makes it very unclear about where she's located on the timescale...which isn't a good thing. I'll also say that, while the events themselves are plausible, given you mention 7 years with her son, and she graduated the year before RWBY attended (presumably at the age of 27), I believe it still qualifies as alternate universe because of that "future events when canon hasn't yet reached that point in time" discussion we had before.

All in all...given the lack of clarity on the page, this will be removed from Pending and placed into AU just to keep with Canon events.