Talk:Leonardo R. Tsukiakari/@comment-13593058-20170704011126

 Leonarda R. Tsukiakari Review

Appearance
Description of appearance present.

Personality
Point of personaility made. It is however, too lengthy.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Semblance is okay but lacks any specifics in terms of strength. As of its current discription, it is an absolute barrier and in turn and absolute block. Grounds for rejection.

Backstory
Backstory has no contradictions. It is however, too lengthy.

Miscellaneous
 Colour reference acknowledged. Grandfather clause applied.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Semblance contradicts Guidline rules on absolute blocking.

Review Summary
Nothing I didn't mention above.

I'd also like to stress the point of length for backstories and personalities. Since you were a past reviewer, however, I'll save you the whole spiel as you would proabably know better. It isn't rejectable but it affects how enticing the page is. I for one thought it was a chore to go through both the backstory and personality section due to a multitude of things.

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