Talk:Calder Indivar/@comment-24416658-20160305031909

For the name to fit the CNR, the first name must follow it. Please change this.

Backstory functions alright. Personality and Appearance don't have any big problems.

Weapon is also fine. One primary that transforms into two, and the gloves count as secondaries.

Semblance has too many functions that are unrelated. You'll have to pick one of them.

Rejected for name and Semblance.

--RP Moderation Team--