Talk:Jazmina Del'Varak/@comment-26104528-20170910014302

Personality seems a little light to me; adding more wouldn't be a bad idea.

Semblance though is where I gotta turn this down; mind screw semblances aren't inherently banned but they are touchy and this one crosses too many lines. The biggest problem here is how this semblance is straight-up mind reading. Being able to glean information about a person that isn't obvious or from pure intuition falls under 'Force Weakness' to me. I appreciate the fact that she can't delve into someone's mind to find specific information (or at least it's implied she can't) but that's still not enough of a demerit.

While I'm here, there's a few other general issues: I see no time limits for its use, ill-effects from extended use, or any real demerits other than 'useless in combat'.

Rejected.

-RP Moderation Team-