Talk:Talis Ebonmere/@comment-24678303-20160130103438

Okay, before i read into this any further, i have to call out this armor. This is LITERALLY Mjiolnir Armor with the power usage of FO4's Power Armor. Like, just about everything in the armor is not acceptable for use. ESPECIALLY given that Hunters and Huntresses have /no need/ for armor, ESPECIALLY armor this over the top and complex. In fact, that would be putting them at a SEVERE disadvantage. Plus, your argument about the Atlesian Paladin below? Yeahno. That was to be used by the Atlesian Military Troops on the battlefield, whom it is presumed have less training or Aura capabilities (or most abilities in general, for that matter) than full on Hunters and Huntresses. Plus, armor like this and the Paladin is FAR less durable than a Hunter's Aura. If a Hunter/Huntress's Aura drops in the midst of battle, relying on this armor would only get them killed. There's nothing that says all Aura can take the same amount of damage. Far from it, actually.

Long story short, you may not have this Power Armor with four weapons bulit onto it. Plus, multiple older versions of the armor??? Way to go ripping off Iron Man 3, bub.

Oh, AND it can fly, so that's a no on there too! I'm just editing in things as i find them!

Also, as Sammy said before me, Aura goes OVER armor and things, meaning that the "Aura being a second line of defense" is a load of shit. When a Reviewer tells you something isn't acceptable/possible, do not argue with them or try to reword it, because it doesn't work that way.

That Semblance is all sorts of no. For one...Just, generally, no. For two, it has multiple effects, which is a big no.

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~

Do note, this isn't even going into the backstory any. This is just off what i could find from the changes. Pray i am not required to do this character again or i may not be as forgiving, and far more thorough. Next time, do not argue with a Reviewer on points in your OC.