Thread:Taki-Tan/@comment-25363089-20170630031257/@comment-29264888-20170705045819

Hmm, literally commanding birds is something you have to ask a reviewer about. Summoning birds made out of aura should seem fine though.

I'll think on suggestions.

For the RP, the idea is fine, but it seemsvery short plot wise. We can still do it if you're looking for a short RP though.

For the first idea, do you have a reason why they would try and steal from my faction? I haven't completely finished the description of my faction other than them being bodyguards. What I haven't explained yet is that they also do things for economic purposes as well. Other than that, there's still more being planned.

For the second idea, it can work. But again, the plot is very short if all we're doing is hiring my faction and testing them to see if your OCs want them. Unless there is some larger reason to why they're hiring them, I don't see this plot going far.