Talk:Nina Browns/@comment-7489529-20140103214458/@comment-7489529-20140103234023

Good finished product! A good blend of strengths and weaknesses. The next step of development would be to giver her a semblance. However, semblances can be tricky. You may go through quite a few before getting one right. All in all, a good "hard worker" character. Just try to remember to slow down when making these things, alright? Going through multiple OCs too fast, you can... Miss things. But dont let that stop you from contributing! Great job!