Talk:Scorpion Armada/@comment-4806269-20150329022854

There are some issues that need to be adressed:

- She's lacking a backstory.

- It isn't mentioned which kind of weapon she has and how many transformations it has.

- Please be more specific with her Semblance's range; if the range is too big, then it'll be OP and therefore rejected.

- Mention her Aura's color.

- Mention how does her first name follows the naming rule; how it relates to a color. If it doesn't, then change her first name with one that follows the rule.

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--