Talk:Weldon Dread/@comment-17970636-20151221070508

Ruled by emotions, but can concel them, sorry, contradiction right there, people who are oftentimes led by emotions have a crapton of difficulty concealing them.

No pirates in RWBY, a pirate based OC is fine, however, directly speaking, no pirates of the sort.

Sword and buckler are already two weapons as a sword and a sheild count as two weapons, and then she has a crapton of third weapons, keep your favourite two.

Cruel streak but prefers to talk her way out rather than go into battle, contradictory.

She was born a faunus, but the rest of her family wasn't? That's not how it works.... two faunus can give birth to a faunus, however, if a human and a faunus have a child, it's a 50/50 deal, was her mother a faunus? You really haven't specified.

As a side note, I know you didn't create that piece of art that you display, as well as the fact that the first name doesn't releate to a colour whatsoever, neither of them.

Rejected.

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