Talk:Scarlet Korina/@comment-13593058-20170809232226

The missing pieces of the backstory have been written and seem ok, but I still find it very hard to read the backstory for Scarlet, especially the last part about her leaving Signal because her adopted family died? When did that happen? For what reason? What significance was Clancy to her?

Not really enough to warrant rejection but absolutely something to fix.

Grammar is again an issue but nothing new considering your lack of mastery of the English language.

Accepted

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