Talk:Megan Candelaria/@comment-27743663-20161224170922

CNR, doesn't really work. Pet-names don't count in correlation, since those are personal and perspective based. You could about slap anything related to the word and call it a pet-name.

Appearance is fine.

Personality is fine.

History doesn' work, since Brann's semblance as a whole wouldn't work. It contradicts several things on the guidelines. Honestly you could have just used normal drugs.

Weapon, could just have a handle in the interior of the chakram.

Semblance I'm going to have to say no on, since it essentially works as Unlimted Crystal Works that in the sense that once it gets going you're not stopping it. Having something like being able to make crystals everywhere in sight is inherently broken. She could theoritically just cover someone's entire body in crysttals and be done with it, or just jam their weapons with crystals. I can also somewhat see the logic behind needing to be in contact with the ground as well, because crystals and minerals, but honestly would prefer if it had a more effective cost than just that and light fatigue given how the semblance's power is. Something like some of her aura so she can't just spam it.

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

- CNR

- Backstory: Brann's semblance

- Semblance

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