Talk:Hǎiyáng Castellan/@comment-25924729-20150304072642

What exactly do you mean you by "you want it to look like Citrine's page"? As far as i can see, this page already has the right format. Also art doesnt come free, you have to pay people to draw for you. As for the linking, i've helped you link your weapon to this page.

There is one minor flaw i've found. In his semblance and his weapon page, you say he has interacted with Cinder and Neo before. Unfortunately interacting with canon characters is not allowed here, you'll have to edit that or face rejection.

Other than that, its a pretty good page. The backstory especially is interesting. Good job. :)

(Not an official reviewer)