Thread:Vanity Chaos/@comment-28257386-20140625020609

This might seem a little weird, but could I possibly ask you to do a review of my story? http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/A_new_home,_a_new_life

It's a compilation of stories centered around each member of my OC team, and so far I finished the prolouge and the first short story, and I'm currently working on the other 3 and an epilouge. It's basically slice-of-life stories with dashes of action here and there. (Maybe that's not an accurate description) I ask cause you seem to be a rather prominent and knowledgable person on the Wikia. If you do review, I would also like to ask that you pay special attention to the action sequence and tell me your opinon of it. I'd also like for you to pay extra attention to the character Rouge and what your opinions are on her. Also, as a warning, this comp. acts as a sequel of sorts to my previous story, so the characters will be referencing events that happened in that one, so some things might fly over your head, along with some characterization and such. If you would like to read that first, I could also provide a link to that story if thats alright with you. 