Thread:Aldrasos/@comment-27332019-20151205182543/@comment-25389303-20160402173149

Looks good so far, although its a little hard to read. I'm trying to avoid giving the whole drugs thing a 'Breaking Bad' vibe, and I think you got that. Medicus definitely seems a lot more human this time, even though some people on this wiki would say his childhood is particularly 'edgy' (I personally hate that damn word). Although I do think that the drugs company wanting to kill his fiancee is a bit much - I mean, they're just a company (or are they?!?). And is she dead?

As for how he'd get contracted...well, if Medicus worked for mobs in Mistral, then it is highly likely that he would get employed by one which the Patched have puppeted, since they are based in Mistral mainly. Then it is simply one of the gang members notifying Diaboli of his potential, and eventually they meet and agree to team up, with Medicus taking over the drug manufactoring operations of the gang.