Talk:Mystique Rust/Future/@comment-24911350-20140521230827

I'm not an admin, but I can tell you that this is going to be rejected at least for the semblance effects. While bird faunus are allowed, usable wings as the animal trait are not. The page makes no mention of her having wings, but that part about using her semblance "to give her more lift" makes it seem like that's what's going on.

I think it's also important to note that flamethrowers are not long-ranged, and you should keep in mind that being inside the gauntlets, their supply of dust for fuel will be very limited, and she'll have to do a lot of reloading. Bronze is also a fairly weak metal and would  be made even weaker, or even melt under those kind of temperatures, so you may want to change the material, or just change that to "bronze-plated", and leave the exact composition unsaid.

And this isn't something that will keep you from being accepted, but also keep in mind that knowing pressure points won't do her a whole lot of good. Aura is the operative factor in a battle, and it doesn't matter if someone is hit in a pressure point or not, their aura takes the hit the exact same regardless of where it is on the body. If you're out of aura, there's a good chance you're nearly dead and exhausted anyway, so you're not going to get much real use out of that skill.