Talk:Elysia Vixen/@comment-10337166-20160323025806

I don't like how this character is basically just a bunch of random video game things mashed together to create a cohesive whole. As of right now reading this is just a mish-mash of video game weapons/abilities, that make no sense working together.

Previous issues with the semblance addressed However this character is so riddled with bad writing and rip offs that I can't let this through. Take a look through how you've written this, and please put in some more thought to this rather than just slapping a bunch of memes onto a page.

Rejected

-RP Moderation Team-