Talk:Kizutsu Tamashi/@comment-4773581-20131003004026/@comment-26388029-20131003054513

I do agree with your last statement. I also agree that you shouldn't sugarcoat criticism. But part of good criticism is listing the good that the author has, so he/she can know his or her own abilities while trying to focus on the weaknesses of his or her writing. And also, try to let people write the story they want to write. You could criticize a story like that all you want, but it's their own story. There's really not a standard for something like that, even if it may be shitty. And can most people really meet your standards? If I can't with my OCs, then a lot of people certainly can't.