Thread:JackWasup/@comment-13488655-20160807062742/@comment-25363089-20160827015306

Ah alrightie well i think i fixed up the grammar issues to the best i could do with some help. ^-^ But other than that hmm maybe its how i got it worded is what throwing me off. I know what i want her to be just having a hard time finding the right words to describe her is all. Maybe I can try and pick out key words to describe her like Manipulative and stuff like that to help word it better.