Talk:Blaze Crucible/@comment-24012109-20140723135535

Hm. Seems like you have worked on the character abit more from previous admissions. A note is that I do wish you do go into more detail into Fury and Strife. Also, the application of her semblance to the motocycle seems okay, but you may want to add a detail such as, "while it is moving", as it could be percieved you could be saying that she could stop on a wall and fire her cannon off of said wall. However, besides that, I find this character to be:

Accepted.

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