Talk:Sliver Thorncaster/@comment-24911350-20140515000448

--Review--

Again, minimal synergy between semblance and weapon in active combat. But unlike the others so far, the semblance doesn't really have any issues, and the weapon only has one.

It's the barbed wire launcher. It's fine in itself, but I just want to be sure you know how much wire will fit in the haft of half a spear. Keep in mind that you'll then need to reduce that number a bit more, because having barbs like you describe will take up a bit of space within it. I'd also recommend turning that into a whip-like weapon that's pulled out by centrifugal force instead of a launched one, because launched ones need propellants that you don't mention.

Fix that, and mention a reasonable range for the barbed wire, and you're good.