Thread:Tierhalibelbrylle/@comment-7497475-20131209094513/@comment-24052959-20131212003842

Hey son, when I was 11, I used to be like you. I made an incredulously Overpowered character for a canon series just to satisfy my personal ego to try to be "epic" and "badass" which is exactly what you did with Bryan Wolf.

Wanna know why I stopped? Because I realize it was pointless. Overpowered character can solve most of canonic apparent issues yet ruining the story excitement at the same time. The story would become linear and boring. And don't even think about making a 4th wall breaking excuse such as making the character saying "The author thought the chapter would be very short." when he is facing a problem that he actually can solve as an excuse to prolong a chapter. Because If you use that, it will ruining RWBY original charm.

Even if you have the skill to create 3D model, animation, video rendering, and drawing to realize your idea, the only person who will be entertained by that series is yourself. Although it may impress several ignorant people.

Overall, these just won't working out. Trust me, I felt it, I witness it, and I'm not the only one. There are also many other people who try to propose their idea to the company who created the canon but most of them are rejected. Wanna know why? Because their ideas are a total self-insert to satisfy personal ego, the concept is out of setting, insensible, and thus incompatible. And I'm not talking about RWBYverse only, its pretty much apply to most of existing canon series.

I may be an amateur writer, but you know what? When I learned the ettiqute of developing a character, my originalverse story is accepted at least by my local bookstore hiring staff. How do I manage that? I go with 2 main protagonist who has their own pros and con, and they don't solve problem easily nor they can took care of the main antagonist's underlings easily let alone aware who's the antagonist him/herself is. I'm pretty much several step ahead here, son.

Now here's the catchphrase/slogan from my 2 main protagonist (which contains subliminal morale lesson) for you :

"Come, deliver your flaws to revelation!"