Thread:Lux capacitor/@comment-26441997-20150804095538/@comment-24617443-20150804120432

One thing you can fix is the weapon. As Alex said you can't have more than 4 weapons and forms. You said that the weapon is "taken apart" into four daggers attached to chains around his body. Its better for you to simply add the chain to the weapon as to create essentially just a weapon with two forms instead of having them split apart as this would make 4 individual weapons, which is above the 3 weapon-limit of Fanon.

The semblance is okay now from what i'm reading but don't take my word for it as the reviewers are better at spotting things than me.

That's as much as I can help you with, your character is a-ok other than the what i've said. If you have anything to say then say it alright.