Talk:Las Saltus/@comment-24087318-20140831040936

Looking over the history in detail, the only thing really changed is the Semblance. The rest of the character just got polished in spelling/grammar and the like.

However, the Semblance itself is a bit undefined. It doesn't state how far she can see using this, or how exactly it picks up life signs. It can't be by Aura/soul, because that would make Grimm effectively invisible. Does it allow her to tell things apart in any way? Many questions. Very little answers.

In addition, even with her Semblance and other skills, she seems very well...blind. If an enemy has the same shape as an ally, and it's too loud for her to hear a command, she's essentially unaware of who's who, and could blast either one.

And unfortunately, OCs are now required to, when being reviewed, follow the Color Naming Rules set forth by Monty Oum himself. (Viewable here: http://static1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20131130235255/rwbyfanon/images/2/2d/ColorNameRule.png ) I cannot with a brief search, find a color behind Las Saltus that fits this. If I am wrong, feel free to add it to the characters trivia page.

For these points, Rejected.

~RWBY Fanon Administration Team~