Thread:Takeshi kun21/@comment-4974591-20160821022607/@comment-8182065-20160827102237

Other than a few grammatical errors and some repetition, Viridin looks fine to me. Last thing I'd say touching up on is his Semblance. It's a lot better now, but it's the comparison to Canon characters, "...and like Neo, his illusions are accompanied by a teleportation ability."

First strike: Comparing the two will make the reviewer believe you may be copying and pasting a currently existing Semblance for your own character.

Second strike: It's unsure if Neo actually can teleport. She may have just used her Semblance to fake a transportation and hide her appearance in the train car.

Third strike: Teleporting is a separate ability all together, leading a reviewer to think you have two Semblances, which is an automatic no.

After looking over that, you should be fine with submitting him in Pending for a review from a staff member. And I'd be happy to look at Slater too if you'd like. :)