Thread:Aldrasos/@comment-7455957-20160331083534/@comment-25389303-20160403140241

Wow, thanks for the feedback! I can't say I ever thought my writing anything special, and I'm still pretty new to RP's as it is.

As for tips...there's not much I can say which you aren't already doing. I make it so that my character's actions are defined by their personality and mood. So, for instance, Smiler's an unhinged killer who's bored, tired, hungry, irritated and soaked by the rain. I just made it so that his actions and thoughts reflect that.