Talk:Sonata Gem/@comment-13172690-20150626183320

Ok a few problems present that have to be addressed:

First, all first names must mean something that is color related in which this case this character does not. Please fix that.

Secondly, in personality, you can say that she is colder than most people instead of addressing Weiss. I suggest you change that.

In your bio, we havent seen anything that relates to religion in the world of RWBY, especially worshipping grimm so I would try something else for that.

Lastly, your semblance. From my perspective, I see the extreme speed boost thing too similar to ruby's with her speed based semblance. To avoid this, I would turn it down to 30-35 for length. But I wonder how she isn't deaf from the sound wave boost speed.

Until all these problems are addressed,

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~

Not part of the review but, I would add a picture to show what your weapon looks like for a better idea of its appearance.