Talk:Elizabeth Orwell/@comment-24087318-20140102080525

Weapon needs more elaboration as to how it functions. "Dust-gun" is vague and doesn't show why it uses Dust crystals instead of conventional ammunition like the other guns in RWBY use.

As well, psychic and mental based semblances have not been seen thus far in canon, so we can't accept or make accurate judgements on them.

In addition, with how this one is worded, it seems to apply to everything, rather than something that stays specifically based for combat, and works with the Huntresses weapons, dust usage, and other skills.

As such, Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~