Talk:Nova Blackwood/@comment-24490414-20150713230236

Not an actual reviewer but someone who likes to give feedback time to time~

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I'd be wary of the tidbit about the level of interaction with Ozpin and the part where he and Chojiro fought in the war. We only know that Ozpin's super old but whether or not he actually participated in the war is still up in the air. And Ozpin teaching Nova how to build his weapon may be pushing what is acceptable in the OC/Canon interaction side of the rules.

Your semblance needs limitations especially if he can apparently destroy walls with just his finger. Hell, I'd advice limiting the semblance itself as it's already OP with the ten-fold increase in his abilities. I do like the idea of using Nova's anxiety as part of his semblance but overall the semblance needs tweaking.

Hope this helps! :)