Talk:Trigo Cardamom/@comment-17970636-20151214000340

Upon notice, it has been brought to my attention that this character was used in an RP before acceptance. NPC's are one thing, however, using a character in an RP which you explicitly had not even created a page for at the time is against the rules. I do not know why Fedorastorm did not inform you of this as I believe that said user has been on these forums for a while. Whilst there are people saying that this is a bannable offense, this is the warning you are being given. Any future events of the like and your account will be banned for a week. This is simply a formal warning, the rules of RPing with accepted only characters exist for a reason, we cannot afford the rules to be violated. As a result, there will most likely be a forum moderator in the future watching over the RP's. I'm sorry to state things like this but it's necessary to prevent anything in the future. If your RP hadn't been completed, the thread would've been locked until further notice.

Now for the review itself.

While people are violent drunks, being drunk is simply a lack of mental inhibitors, and those who are violent while drunk are most likely supressing violent tendencies while they are sober, in a sense, being drunk means being your "true self". In essence, if he was drunk, then he'd just become an even happier sadist, in a sense.

How old is he? Failure to state an age is grounds for automatic rejection. Claiming it is one thing, however, having the skills to back it up meaning he could match someone who uses telekinesis move for move is what makes it bad.

His fighting style makes no sense as he's basically combining 3 distingtly different styles and forcing them to meld together, the precise deliberate blows with a swaggering formless style just makes no sense in my mind.

If he's gonna use his shotguns like Escrima-Sticks then he's gotta remove the stock to make the weapon slimmer, adding onto this, the reload mechanism's going to become two handed. Technically speaking, realistically, unless there's a specially made holster for this weapon, a lever action reload will have to be done with two hands, all weapons require both hands to reload anyways, stuff like Yang's weapons are quite different from this.

The resonance frequency would only work with sound based weapons, the resonance cannot affect the gun nut of the weapon allowing it to fire it stronger, in short, it doesn't work.

Tolerence of alcohol doesn't mean they wont get a hangover, as hangovers are caused by dehydration, there's also the fact that he wouldn't get drunk because his liver is able to break down the alcohol rather quickly without allowing it to go to his bloodstream.

Must state when he was born in the backstory, XX years before doesn't cut it.

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--