Talk:Sigal Konani/@comment-5431934-20140107010709

The only issue I have with this character is the somewhat-ambiguous semblance, which this says speeds up the attacks of hjer pack. This doesn't make sense - is her pack the only thing affected by her semblance? This, from the wording, seems to be the case, in which case the semblance doesn't seem to fit. Proceeding under the assumption that that was indeed your intention, what about the backpack allows her to speed it up? If she had never gotten training in engineering and made that backpack, would her semblance then be useless? There appears to be nothing about the backpack that lets the semblance manipulate it, and even so, it is entirely too specialized to be of much use.

Until the semblance is cleared up or improved, Rejected.

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