Talk:Anya Kobayashi/@comment-25924729-20191113122740

Pretty good character, sounds like an absolute cinnamon roll. Would protecc :D

Appearance and personality are alright. Very cute.

Some issues with her backstory, as of the current time in the series Beacon Academy has been destroyed by the Fall of Beacon and students no longer study there. Therefore, she cannot still be an active student ath the current time. Maybe you can have her study at a different academy instead? Or have her be a Beacon student that left after the Fall and now does something else?

Semblance and weapon seem alright, if a little short. Few weaknesses and limits stated especially for the semblance, but simple pyrokinesis should not be too powerful anyway.

The whole page in general is a bit lacking in details... it may be better to explain a little more about things next time

Problem with her name. All RWBY characters name must follow a "colour name reference" rule, meaning their first name must mean a colour, sound like a colour or make you think of a colour. Anya doesn't seem to fit any CNR. Coincidentally, Kobayashi means "little forest" and could be a valid CNR if you want to use that? Otherwise, you must change her first name to have a CNR.

And... thats all, just some small issues to fix and deails to add if you want. Nice try.

Rejected.

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