Talk:Amber Grün/@comment-30530552-20170417212532

Alright, here's my two cents on the character.

CNR, I have to say no, considering that Wiki rules dictate that the first name or some combo of the first and last name need to have the color reference to work. The Grün portion however, is fine. This can be your main color, since the first name's color doesn't necessarily need to be the main one, just a color. Make sense? Alright, let's move on.

Appearance is all good.

Backstory seems fine to me, except for one minor thing. How'd she get her piloting license? More imortantly, how would she have the time or money to get it, considering you mentioned she had a low income family?

Weaponry works.

Semblance & Combat, I'd advise reducing the amount of time she can use her Semblance, as that could potentially stray down into OP territory. 2 hours is a bit much. The "literally makes herself explode if she overcharges" part seems a little overboard as well. As for combat purposes, "can keep fighting for hours" is a bit excessive, but is more of just a wording problem than anything.

Rejected for CNR, a bit of missing backstory info, Semblance, and lack of exhaustion.

-PisceanWaterbender, reviewer-in-training