Talk:Hans Farro/@comment-25763181-20131011040204

Alright. So far, a backstory told in three perspectives and a weapon that is unique (Fanon-wise) are two big pluses right there. However, I can barely see any flaws in there. He can cover ALL ranges, and that can be a little bit of a problem, so I suggest fixing that. You have enough info to pass but I personally think that it can be written with more detail. Elaborate on his appearance, for example. I want to be able to draw that character and when you see the drawing you would say "that's exactly what he would look like."

Overall, nice OC. A little more elbow grease and you'll have yourself one fine character.

7.2/10