Talk:Solaris Phoenix/@comment-24678303-20180217210710

Alright, the only issue I can really see with this is the Semblance, though it's a pretty big issue at that. The Semblance lacks any set limits on duration, size, and how exactly they come out, which is to say are they just elemental shapes in whatever size they were drawn or what? The other problem here is that you were using elemental Dust types, till the last one, which just says "Cyan Dust". What kind of Dust is that?

Rejected due to the above problems.

~RP Moderation Team~