Talk:Reiku Hogosha/@comment-24087318-20131231235728

'''Character appears to have had many significant edits since last Accepted. As such, a re-review is nessicary. '''

In the future please re-submit changes back into Pending for re-appraisal.

That being said, there are a few issues with your character.

The multiple weapons, while explained, cause the character to not fit the spirit of RWBY. Characters only have one weapon, or multiple copies of the same weapon, that either transform, or posess multiple ways to fight with melee, and either guns or Dust usage.

In addition, his ability to turn Aura into attacks like ki-spheres isn't explained. Nobody has used attacks like this in Canon other than Penny, who uses her weapons to help guide the attack. And given the characters other weapons, it adds to him having simply too many weapons and methods of attacking that are entirely separate from eachother. I would suggest removing weapons, combining them, or otherwise consolidating these powers into a singular fighting style.

Furthermore, his backstory has a few contradictions concerning his character. If he's a wanted criminal, why would a Huntress take him in as a mentor. They're not police, but it's not beyond their duties to assist in apprehending or dealing with criminals when they can.

Going further back, while the character was only 11, he was comiitting many grand heists and crimes that would make him receive significant attention by the police. And given his inexperience and age, it's very improbable he was not caught earlier.

Due to the above points, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~