Talk:Tsuki Sukaretto/@comment-13593058-20180325031205

I'd like to address her backstory first. There are several instances where I can question why a certain detail was ommited. The first instance is in regards to why Tsuki's father knew all these combat related skill despite being just a butcher. Him being a part of the White Fang is not much of an explanation.

Another thing I think the character as a whole would benfit from is an explanation as to why her personality is as you described. Strictly reading from thr backstory doesn't really link to her personallity/character at all. In fact, she seems more proactive than you described. Not grounds for rejection, but just a general pattern I'm seeing.

Other than that, no contradictions.

Accepted

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