Talk:Tala Tyrson/@comment-17970636-20151227111012

Backstory is somewhat incomplete as it appears that at one point, she's 12, Grimm attack, and then boom, she's 17 and at Beacon. No clarification as to what happened during those 5 years, what kind of training did she get? did she go to a combat school before Beacon? They head to Vacuo and then back to Vale? Not quite sure what you're going for there.

Semblance needs a limiter on how long the shields can last as well as a limit to how many times she can use her semblance before her aura is depleted or a cooldown time before she can use her semblance again.

Rejected.

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