Thread:Decathartique/@comment-25924729-20150125133822/@comment-4806269-20150125165114

Sure thing. I'm going to make a sketch with my suggestions for design, if you don't mind; I'll post them here today.

Personality-wise, I think you haven't given her an actual reason for her to behave in that way; there's ALWAYS a reason for behaving in a specific way, even if that character behaves in a "crazy" way (yeah, mental issues happen for a reason). Let me formulate this issue in this way:


 * Why is she a "crazy bitch"?


 * What does she find "pleasurable" from being sadistic and bring pain and havoc to people?


 * Why she doesn't always behave in a "crazy" way? Why does she has self-discipline and puts it on practice, even if she could easily behave in her default sadistic way?


 * Why is she willing to help people, killing Grimm, even if she has killed people before and enjoyed it, and could easily keep killing people instead of Grimm? Is there a spark of goodness in her, or she's evil? Or she just doesn't give a damn? If she doesn't care, why she doesn't care? Is she secretly looking for social approval, and kills Grimm instead of people for archieving that?

If you reply this questions, then you'll get a stronger character personality-wise, since you'll be giving her a raison d'etre; she wouldn't be crazy "just because you want to", but because she has her own reasons to behave in that way.

I hope this helps!