Talk:Asriel Liengsky/@comment-10337166-20160828122256

Oh my God, okay so cool OC really, but holy fuck me Jesus, could you make that backstory any longer my god.

Alright so........I don't even know where to begin, for starters, I think he might have too many weapons? Dual swords, rifle, AND armbands which he can use to manipulate dust? correct me if I'm wrong.

His semblance is......Interesting? I feel like it might do too many things, but, that's just me. Honestly, if you want his backstory to be that long, move it to a fanfic and summaries the main points in his actual article because right now it's way to hard to read.

Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~