Talk:Seti Khemet/@comment-31408668-20190321201830

COLOR NAME REFERENCE

Color name reference is recognized. Seti is a rewrite of the name Set, which is the name of the Ancient Egyptian God of chaos, storms, deserts and violence.

APPEARANCE

Short, concise, to the point. Nice touch with explaining his eyes. Nothing to detract from. No problems here.

PERSONALITY

The withdrawn caregiver. A rough shell that breaks open to reveal someone dependable. It's an interesting turn on what you would expect from someone with so many characteristics of a snake. I would be interested to see how he deals with betrayal. No obvious contradictions. No problems here.

BACKSTORY

Short, yet somewhat eventful. Again, as much as i don't use it myself, it's interesting to see some anti-faunus sentiment. It's also very good that this has an apparent effect on him that still carries over. No stepping on canon toes. No noted placement in Vytal Festival. No problems here.

WEAPONS AND COMBAT

The weapon is within guideline specifications. We have a set of dual, transforming primaries in the form of Apep's Bane/Neith's Hunt. As a weapon, the khopesh is a personal favorite of mine, due to it's form and still very appropriate function. Then connecting them into a bow is simple and works. No problems here.

As for Seti's skill in combat, they are not clearly defined. However, with this, I make the assumption that they are about average for a bowman and swordsman. No problems here.

SEMBLANCE

As a Semblance, I feel Pharaoh's Gale is now balanced appropriately. While it is not mentioned, I assume it drains his Aura at a not insane, yet not too low rate. The range isn't insane, and it is a nice touch that it changes depending on his temper. The speed is also not too insane. And yes. It does fit his soul to a tee. No problems here.

CONCLUSION: ACCEPTED

Seti has been given the work he needs to work, and he can now be unleashed on the RP like the sandstorm he can become.