Talk:Nero Zelená/@comment-24296957-20140630161831

Now, while this a very good first start, there are some issues.

First off, there isn't supposed to be any sort of Fanon-to-Canon interactions. However, you can say that this OC knows the teams rather than being friends with them. Also, the part of being the long-lost-brother of Lie Ren should be taken out, because that's cause for rejection.

Now we move on to the weapons. An OC here can only have three, two technically. What I mean by that is there can be a pair. For example, a broadsword and dual-SMGs. Adding on to that, only one of the weapons can transform, and can only have three different forms.

We don't know if there is such things as black dust, so that should be taken out. And there also needs to be a relation to color somewhere in his name. For any questions regarding Dust and Weapons, click here.

For the above,

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--