Talk:Ape Peela/@comment-30530552-20171110191209

Let's take a look.

CNR Reference noted in Trivia.

Appearance is semi-okay...I still feel like his Outfit overall could use some more detail, but that's not a huge issue.

Personality is also pretty bare, but for what is there, it's alright.

So...he's a prince? I don't buy that. I do buy an entire village getting decimated; although that leads me to wonder the full extents of what Biva Grimm can do. The dialogue also is a bit unnecessary, given profiles are meant to detail the events only. Besides, you've already got memorable quotes anyway.

His weaponry is fine.

Semblance...I'm gonna have to say no on that one. Grimm control is a big no-no.

Still got some work to do for this page, I'm afraid.

-Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~