Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-24296957-20141130191712/@comment-24416658-20141201070737

(Out of context: *wipes hands on pant legs* Let's do this.)

Jiat Blaine

The backstory is a great length. Very well fleshed out, nice and simple explanations. No makor problems seen there.

I was going to say something about the whole "constantly on a screen", but the character is written in a way that makes it plausible and believeable.

The weapons seem slightly plain, as well as the fact that they're not transforming/combined, but that's personal opinion.

Only major issue is the name. The rules state that the first name must be color, related to a color, etc. I know the surname applies, but rules are rules.

Rejected, but only because of the name.