Talk:Cerulean Grey/@comment-13593058-20160323000719

 A Review of Cerulean Grey

Appearance
Nothing technical to note. Appearance does not interfere with Fanon Rules.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapons rule followed.

Semblance is acceptable.

No significant comment on fighting style.

Backstory
Nothing worthy to note, no contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and source checks out.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- No contradictions

Review Summary
Hmm, there's nothing wrong with the character superficially. I did enjoy his Semblance, it's quite simple and the mechanism/source of power is quite nice when incorporating his headphones. I like that he's not just wearing headphones for the sake of wearing headphones.

Though I would suggest stating how much Dust is stored in those headphones and if he runs out, what are some alternative sources he can sap electricity from?

The rights outweigh the wrongs here so I'll give it a pass, but I strongly suggest you fix that one thing. That is all.

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