Talk:Elidyr Asclepius/@comment-17970636-20151208035405

Weapons turning into jetpacks of a sort don't make much sense considering the shape of a kama as well as adding that there aren't any characters in RWBY that can have sustained flight via using their weapons. Yang, Ruby, Weiss all have little boosts and such, but none of them can fly. Remove that.

Black holes, here's some science. A black hole is an EXTREMELY strong gravitational field that sucks in everything, including light because they're literally a collapsed star. They're a result of a gravitational collapse and as a result, they can tear anything to shreds. Moving beyond that, the entire semblance is completely overpowered and poses no limits, revamp that completely.

There's no idea currently how the Beacon exam works, that there would be a panel of judges, however, is highly unlikely. Change up the entire last sentence of your backstory.

How the first name relates to a colour is not stated.

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--