Talk:Noble Glasblazer/@comment-30530552-20170425215759

Alright, here we go:

CNR works.

Appearance is fine, although I would like to note that according to online BMI charts, with his dimensions Noble is severely underweight, not just slim. I'd suggest adding a little meat to his bones and/or decrease his height a little bit, just so that it doesn't seem unhealthy. Otherwise, you could actually say he's underweight. It's not a fully rejectable problem though, just something to note.

Personality is fine.

Backstory, one minor point that needs changed - you've written " He is unbelievably over joyed when he is finally accepted into Beacon Academy," which makes it sound like he's currently attending. As of V3, Beacon is shmutz due to the BoB. I recommend one of 3 things to fix this: 1.) You can have him attend another school. 2.) You could increase [or decrease] his age and make him a graduate [or not attend at all, in case of a decrease]. 3.) You could make a minor edit and have him be affected by BoB and not be in current attendance at Beacon. Either way, it needs fixed.

Weapon & Semblance are fine.

Rejected for the noted Appearance & Backstory issues above.

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