Talk:Robin Arashi Vitian/@comment-5726563-20131219040959

Alright, everything seems in order, though you do have a part where it says they are warriors protecting the village, but it also says they weren't skilled enough to beat the thieves. It's not rejectable material, but you may want to change that around, so it makes more sense. You may want to check your grammar as well, but other than those few things you are good.

Accepted! Welcome to the Fanon, and have fun!

-RP Moderation Team