Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-27603392-20140704110526/@comment-5041507-20140725042014

Idina Caliber

Firstly, the name/color connection seems more than a bit questionable to me. I think it's good enough, but just barely.

The Appearence section lists her hair as indigo, but the sidebar and all the pictures have it as purple. Again, not a page-breaking flaw, but something to be aware of.

Being good at cooking is an ability, not part of her personality. Enjoying cooking would be part of her personality. Easy mistake to make.

Minor backstory issue, paragraph 1 has her modelling for the front of a magazine, but then at least two years passes before she joins Beacon. That means she was at most 16 when she started modelling. Now, it's very possible for a 16-year-old to be *ahem* developed enough for that, it's just fairly unlikely. If the time gap were any bigger than that or if she had started Beacon at 17, then there might be a problem. As is I think it's probably fine.

250 milli-amps is more than enough to kill any human being. You might want to scale that down a bit. 50, tops, would be a reasonable limit on that. You also might want to list in the weapon's section that they can shoot bolts instead of just electrocute on contact. It doesn't mention that until the abilities section as is.

On a related note, it seems to me that her Semblance wouldn't be extremely usefull because she would be equally covered in moisture as compared to her target. Lightning arcs to the nearest conductor, which in this case would be a damp Caliber.

Details on private jet perhaps?

Final verdict: Accepted, although I would suggest decreasing the output on those boots. Welcome to Fanon ( =