Talk:Cascade Evans/@comment-25924729-20190601134303

Another really short character, its almost becoming a signature style for your writing at this point.

Apearance, personality and backstory sections are all pretty alright, nothing to note there.

His page lacks a weapon section, even if he doesnt have a weapon, you must say so on the page itself.

His semblance seems pretty basic, could use some better defined limits like the amount of water he can control, range which he can draw the water from, for how long can he control it, possible weaknesses etc, to get a better grasp of his power.

CNR checks out. Nothing to note in the Relaionships section. Nothing else to note.

Pretty good, just needs a litle work on the weapons and semblence sections.

Rejected.

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~RP Moderation Team~