Talk:Cammo Deuce/@comment-13172690-20150217035700

Well it looks like you worked on your character quite a bit after the first review though i am still finding a couple of concerns.

The first has to do with your bio. With the school she attended before Beacon, I wouldn't say she was on the top of her class. You could say that she was one of the higher ranked students there.

The other has to do with your semblance. It is still improving but you did not place a limit on how much aura it takes up with each use. I would sugguest that with more power, more aura is used up.

Until these are fixed,

Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~