Talk:Jericho Corey/@comment-17970636-20140417221759

Quite the interesting OC. Well written, and you write with a sense of maturity and understanding which is nice to see.

I just have one issue with this character, and that is his rage. It certainly isn't beyond believeable that an OC could injure over a dozen people, it's just that, what kind of people did he injure? Were they trained in combat? Also, what set him off to get that angry? A bit more explanation there would be nice.

His semblance is also not that far out of the believeable, it's just that binding one's weapon to oneself has not been seen within RWBY yet. We know that there will be a mage (Velvet). And that the characters have a certain affinity with their weapons, but binding has not been shown to be present yet. Also, it's very similar to Pyrrha's semblance of Polarity, consider changing that up a bit.

For the above reasons, Rejected.

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