User blog comment:Winter Edition/Original Character Creating Guide/@comment-4109747-20140118062614/@comment-8182065-20140125195945

If you want advice, I'd suggest creating separate pages for these characters, so you can go into a great depth with explaining them and so they can get a proper critique in. Here in the comment section isn't the best place for a whole character's bio (well 3 actually).

Also I believe there is already a Team HART on the Fanon.