Talk:Aqua Fuyu/@comment-24087318-20140113062406

Character well made, however.

Weather based Semblances are something we've seen in Canon already, with Glynda being able to use Glyphs to generate things like storms that fire sharp shards of hail. Just being able to produce weather effects with Semblance alone isn't likely as well, it's possible that Dust may be a requirement to providing certain elements like Ice and Lightning. Would suggest reading over http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Semblances_and_your_OC_-_A_Guide for ideas and tips on Semblance creation.

In addition, we havn't seen weapons that use raw Dust as ammunition to produce cryogenic or other effects directly. Though allowed to a degree, likely if the weapon was capable of this it wouldn't use bullets or shoot conventionally either. Think of Weiss' weapon, it uses Dust alongside her Semblance to produce magic-like effects, but the rapier itself posesses no conventional firearm.

As well, having him be championship level of anything is a little overpowered and prevents other characters from matching/rivaling him. Would suggest lowering or nerfing his accomplishments.

Due to these above points, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~