Talk:Takanashi Kīro/@comment-13593058-20160611031708

 A Review of  Takanashi Kiro

Appearance
Not much to judge on a technical level.

Personality
A reasonable personality. No contradictions.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Semblance is... okay.

Backstory
No comment.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and acknowledged, however...

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- N/A

Review Summary
Not much to say about her but , I would appreciate if the names were switched around to a western arrangedment rather than the Japanese as it is rather confusing to see "Takanashi Kiro" an assume "Takanishi" was first name rather than her last name. I was about to reject the character for not having a coloured first name before I read the trivia and remembered that Japanese presents the family name before the given name.

You're lucky I'm a weeb. Not grounds for error, but I would advise changing it for those who are less observant.

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