Talk:Sanguine Youngblood/@comment-13593058-20160724223701

 A Review of Sanguine Youngblood

Appearance
Appearance is acceptable.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Backstory
Acceptable, but a tad too short.

Miscellaneous
 Colour reference checks out but colour reference should be mentioned in a Trivia section.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- N/A

Review Summary
THERE IS A GOD.

Jokes aside, very good rhetoric; that's something I don't get to see everyday here. Keep up the way you write in all future pages.

You should also try to elaborate on why your character is the way he is. The backstory does not provide much and it is almost always nurture and nature that drives actions.

Finally, I would include your colour reference in a Trivia Section. I should have rejected you but since the rest had no problems, I allowed this to slide. Please fix this immediately.  If you require assistance in the matter, please feel free to ask other Fanon members for help. If you believe there to be a misunderstanding or mistake, please contact me via message wall or another reviewer.