Talk:Fuego Rojo/@comment-27743663-20161124013128

Well I mean, the page itself is fine, if lacking in originality and rather basic. The Charbox and "Special Skills" isn't however. For future reference, if you're going to give some skills, make a section for them to list some limits.

He's accurate, sure, that's fine. Dodging bullets at point-blank? Multitple times? No. It's fine having enhanced strength with his arm, but you need to note how it's possible for him to hack electronics with it, and the limitations of it. You don't note he has cybord eyes in his appearance, so if he actually does do that. Armor is fine. Rejected.

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