Thread:Maelstrom14/@comment-26130256-20150331193500/@comment-26130256-20150419055124

That gives me some more info, thanks.

As for the rest of the plot, which I think you were trying to explain in that second paragraph, I had two main ideas:

1.) "The short way."  Azzie and Iris go to the docks to stop Luc and his men.  Big fight ensues.  Story probably ends soon after.

2.) "The slighly longer, but maybe cooler way."  Azzie remembers an old con game his uncle explained to him once:  The Grecian Retreat. (this may need a better name)

In the old days, when one Group wanted to off a Target in another gang, they would act friendly and propose a joint operation against a common, third Enemy (capitalized so we can tell the difference). The Group and Target charge at the Enemy, but the Group withdraws/retreats at the last second, leaving the Target all alone and outgunned against the Enemy. If you know your Bible stories well enough, it's the same trick that King David used to off Uriah after he slept with Bathsheba (To refresh your memory, 2 Samuel 11:15-17 ). If it's good enough for ancient Jewish kings, it should be good enough for mobsters.

So Azzie and Iris show up at the docks, and Azzie "pretends" to work for the Cardamom family (*sly wink*), proposing a tag-team job breaking into a bank or something. Iris either helps by acting like a specialist Azulius hired or just making some safecracking gear, depending on how well she acts. Everyone breaks into the bank, cops show up, and our heroes dissappear, leaving Luc with his hands in the cookie jar.

At least, that was one of my ideas. Your thoughts?