Talk:Kira Myst (Canon)/@comment-25924729-20190211123533


 * Puts a tiara on*

KIRA QUEEN! BITES THE DASUTO!

Hue... Couldn't resist sorry :v, let's see...

Personality section is alright. Appearance seems good too, though it would be good to describe her physical appearance in the section too instead of just her clothing. (That drawing makes her look a lot like Elsa though~)

Most of her backstory checks out, until the part about the Thief of Inheritance. As far as we know, aura isn't selective or predictable in a way that every 3rd child in a bloodline will have it stronger than her siblings. In terms of how it affects her abilities it's alright, her aura is strong, but not too powerful or anything, you just cant make it a special case because of her inheritance or anything.

Her weapons and general abilities are alright, but moving on to her semblance theres some issues again. Aura itself can be used to create shields and projectile attacks, however those items are made of aura itself or seem to be energy based, not actual solid matter, as that would fall under the category or aura manipulation. The part of her semblance about converting aura into matter is unacceptable, at most, they should only be energy based constructs or similar.

In addition, you should specify limits to it, such as how much aura is consumed making each spear, barrier or chain. Due to the rules on chain semblances, you must also specify any ways that the chains can be broken or escaped from. Complete, inescapable or unbreakable restraints are unacceptable.

Lastly, i have looked at the wikipedia page her name links to. There are several valid CNRs there, but yo should specify onw and add it to the page itself instead of just leaving a link.

So yeah.... overall, not a bad character, Nice try.

Rejected.

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~RP Moderation Team~