Talk:Leanne T. Holmes/@comment-27603392-20140514021846

So, to begin, I've noticed that you are using art of other characters. Not a rejectable point, but I just don't like the idea of it.

Her personality is overly described, and at some point, static, which doesn't feel human to me. You'd have a hard time keeping her in character when you RP. Remember, well described personality is great, but you need to give you character room to grow as well.

History wise, nothing to be complain about.

However, her ability is leaning too much in her favor: Intelligent, Strength, Martial Art, Maskman skill and Disguise ? You need to tone her ability down. I suggest taking away her strength/semblance/either martial art or maskman skill, as she's more of a brain than a brawl.

Rejected for now. Please notify me by replying to this comment (Do not send me a message on my wall) once you have finished editing her, and I'll take another look.