Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-24296957-20150113152446/@comment-25507515-20150115010221

Well...Not sure if this is a very good idea, but I decided to take a shot at this. Here goes nothing.

Chloe Chroma

Shifting...Multicolor hair. We may have a problem here. If you want to keep it, you better get a really good explanation for it. The clothing style and mentality do not match at all (quiet and flashy...). She is mentioned as a faunus...Of what species, with which attributes? Yet again, something is missing here.

'Carries a strong intellect' is quite...Vague. Does she have a good memory? is she good at theorizing, at analyzing? Is she particularly observant? While tolerable, this lack of detail is truly frustrating as it stops from getting a mental image of the character. . Her name does not fit : it is supposed to be linked to a color...Here, it is related to the notion of color instead.

From personal knowledge, time travel semblances are a no-go.

Finally and most obviously, she has no backstory. At all.

For these reasons...Rejected.

Denver Verde

A good backstory. The personality, while it can seem a tad cliché, works. You pay want to rewrite  it a smidgen, but it works. The weapons seems good enough, but you might want to precise where Denver stocks his arrows. Finally, I do believe students normally enter the university at the age of seventeen. Then again, Ruby happened, so we are here in a grey zone. For this reason,  your character is...

Awaiting canon info.

PS : you have quite a few typoes here and there, most likely things you forgot to fix. Might want to do an overall spelling check here.

Breyal Yolande

So...The backstory makes sense, the semblance is rather interesting.

The appearance is good, aside from one pont : Breyal is said to be a kangaroo faunus. What are her traits? If there are none visible, why?

The weapon is a tad confusing, nothing rejectable but you might want to add a picture to make it clearer. It seems quite original however.

Plus, sadly enough, while the rest is good, I cannot take your word for the name : despite rather thorough research, I could not find any gemstone, purple or not, related to either Breyal nor Yolande. As such...

Rejected.