Talk:Pearle Bengali/@comment-27743663-20170704004859

CNR, it's not noted what it relates to. While yes, the name Pearle is likely an obvious reference, it does need to be noted somewhere on the page. Typically people do this in a Trivia section.

Appearance, well, while rather bland and lacking in full description at least fills the basic amount needed, so it's noted.

Personality, also rather barebones and barren, not really going into any intricacies and just sticking to basic wording and combat. Well, what about outside combat? That's just me though, once again, fills the basic requirement so it's noted.

Backstory, what about before he was 4? Where was his family during this? what lead to him being kidnapped specifically? What did this experimentation do to him, as in where does it leave him now? As said before as well, how did he somehow escape? He was eight, I doubt even with experiments, he had the combat prowess to defeat a large amount of trained combatants such as the White Fang. The huge gap of 8-17 is still present as well, as noted before, and hasn't shown any sign of it being improved upon.

Weapon, well, assuming that's all they do, then it's fine I suppose.

Semblance, how long can this projection last? How far can it go away from it? How durable is it? Is it faster than him, stronger? His aura just can't suddenly go higher as well, there's been no proof to show anyone can do that, particularly with a semblance.

Tl;dr

Rejected on

- CNR not noted on page

- Several backstories issues, where does experimentation leave him. What has it done to him, does it give him any abilities, how did he escape, the huge gap of time is still there.

- Semblance is missing clarifications

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