Talk:Robyn Sakura/@comment-25924729-20200213071910

Very nice character, ive seen her in Pending for a while now but only now managed to get to her, so sorry for the delay ):

Appearance is good, nice artwork. Personality is alright. Backstory was actually very good, thats a very unique dynamic she has with her mentor figure, really brings out her personality while showing off a healthy, kinda bitter sweet relationship. It was fun to read.

Weapon and abilities seem alright. I think her semblance could use some solid limits in maximum range she can see and time it lass before she starts getting those headaches, but it feels a bit nitpicky to reject just for that. Especially when everything else on the page is good and the semblance itself is very simple and relatively weak anyway. I let this pass, just a suggestion to add those limits if you ever resubmit her.

Relationships and Trivia sections are alright. CNR checks out. Im surprised there isnt a Robin Hood reference in there o.o Though Green Arrow is based on Robin Hood and she's based on him, so.... indirectly?

Anyway, nice work.

Accepted.

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