Talk:Nigel Stark/@comment-27743663-20170307030118

CNR checks out

Appearance is fine, but do note his age. He's in Beacon, that's dandy, but how old is he? It's fine to assume he's the needed 17, but just as easily without the info directly stated it could be said he's 14 or 20.

Personality is fine

Backstory, they can't be named the Tunnel Snakes, simply for the reason their reason for choosing the name doesn't work as that game doesn't exist on Remnant.

Semblance, how long can he keep it up for? As it is now it's indefinite and he can alter most anything as he pleases with little demerits for it. And if it's air currents of the object, could what's the largest of heaviest he can go to?

Weapon is fine.

Tl;dr

Rejected on

- Age needs to be noted

- Tunnel Snake name shouldn't exist

- Semblance lacks demerits and clarifications

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