Talk:Payne Sivale/@comment-10337166-20170110045727

Backstory is stil lentirely rejectable, you can't have OC family members being Leaders of Mantle and close with the Schnee dust family. Remove that entire section and rework it. Why would he go to Haven, if he first went to Signal? Not rejectable, just makes no sense to me.

Semblance, no idea what it does or how it works 'enchanting' himself would count as dust infusion into a person which is still rejectable. Grimm Weaknesses is not allowed, as cat has said, get it through your head.

Rejected

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