Thread:KuraiJack/@comment-25363089-20170518151347/@comment-25363089-20170716035657

Yeah some parts are. ^-^; I'm having some issues with his backstory so i removed a few things that i felt weren't making sense.

Its getting there but i'm struggling with getting the right time frame for some parts. As I see him meeting either Rasuk or Onxy first then then who ever second. Then after that and getting into the circus and becoming pros at it. They meet Margrit and from there the 40 days of h. Happen and well. I see him not taking a combative side to it. At least not at first. An well its when his circus is destroyed that he does. An its when they beat the bad guys. That he finds out the monster that Rasuk became during those 40 days and nights. Or rather the monster he always was. Which caused the team to break up and him and Rasuk being enemies. An how Nickelae and Alyssa got to visit Uncle Koray.

I see rasuk being a man who lives for conflict a warrior to the bitter end never losing that fire inside him as he lost everything to humans and he wants to see it all burn and to see his own kingdom rise from the ashes of the old one.