Thread:JackWasup/@comment-28857181-20150509062421/@comment-25363089-20150604041434

(Its cool life is important i get it and yeah stuff happens.)Any ways i am trying to figure out a way to better write my oc's backstory.Cause right i feel its ew.But thats me.

This is what i have.

Any advice or help will be great.I just want have that feeling that its good and that if some one reads it they can say that is believable in the rwbyverse.