Talk:Artorius "Art" Scheherazade/@comment-933831-20141209095856

Mkay, your overall writing quality is actually quite good, but there's just a few outlying issues here. First off, the semblance itself is sheerly overpowered, and there's no playable "Mutants" in RWBY. Another major issue is the interaction with a canon faction (Cinder's)and the whole scientific experiment thing not really working much to begin with. As such Rejected.

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