Talk:Talis Ebonmere/@comment-13172690-20160122051525/@comment-27356798-20160122060831

Okay...

1. The jaw was intended mainly to hold the horn, as you really need to have that to support the horn. I was intending to explain where the horn goes with that. Whatever, fine. Removed the elongated jaw, hope I still get the point across.

2. Other than the fact that they both deal with electricity, the two semblances are literally NOTHING alike. One generates, the other absorbs. Whatever, I'll change it up a bit, but seriously, nitpicky here. I can't change the semblance entirely without seriously ruining the character concept.

3. There are already weapons in the RWBYverse capable of taking a lot of damage (Like the atlesian Paladin), which require more than one huntsman to take down. Not only that, but this is supposed to be a tank OC, one that can take and deal a lot of damage.

4. Removed Siege form, which is 1/3 of the forms of the armor. Since the armor had 3 forms, it should have been fine according to the rules (at least, I was told it was fine). This also removed the energy shield and gauntlet spikes. Hope that works for ya.