Talk:Gaea Buckwheat/@comment-24087318-20131216030137/@comment-24087318-20131216091153

Everything checks out. But unarmed fighting styles would be better suited to a martial art of some sort. There are sevral in creation, such as http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Grimm_Chance, and http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Five-to-One. Both are designed for fighting Grimm opponents, as well as people.

Alternatively, you could take advantage of transforming weapons, and include a melee weapon that your rifle transforms into, possibly one that uses the grappling hook feature to some effect.

There's hundreds of ideas you can use, but unarmed combat alone, while possible, needs a little more elaboration on how it'd let you take on a big beastie like a Grimm.

Rejected, but you're very close now! Don't give up!

~RP Moderation Team~

(PS, terriffic art you've done, thought that deserves mentioning.)