Talk:Dean Hinto/@comment-24911350-20140521205444

I'm sorry, I was just reading over some pages in boredom, but I can't ignore this one.

-The article name should contain his whole name, not just first name, which also breaks the colour naming rule which came from Monty himself.

-The infobox is illegible with the colour combination of the bakground and text.

-His semblance is ridiculous, it truly made me laugh and hope this is a joke character. Out of all the functions, only Aerokinesis and healing are the ones that aren't entirely out in any fashion. I don't know why you would think it's acceptable to have 6+ semblances under the thin veil of one unfathomably OP semblance.

-Weapons are conduits of aura, they do not react to it, just as nothing else has ever been shown to react to aura except people. Even if we were to pretend that Lunatic isn't OP with its base function, it's not going to increase Dean's strength or speed, and trying to get super dense and strong unfolding aura-reacting armor that increases speed and strength past the admins is honestly pretty insulting to me even with the small part I play on this wiki.

Trying to pass off Accel's 6 functions as one weapon is just as ridiculious. Even if half of them were allowed at all (which they aren't), energy manipulation and energy weapons are not mechanical functions no matter how you want to look at it, even if the mechanical devices you mention were capable of any of those functions in any way. Energy generation is the only okay part of that, and "Weapon Configuration" is too vague to know anything just from the title, so I can't really say anything about it.

The deepest the weapons get is "it's like that because I say so lol", which is terrible writing and worldbuilding on top of the dozens of canon, logic, and rule issues.

Please, pelase, please, please, please read these over, and check out some accepted characters and their weapons and semblances. I really don't want to be mean, but this is really just offensive as-is, even leaving out all the places marked WIP.

http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Character_sheet_base

http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Semblances_and_your_OC_-_A_Guide

http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/RWBY_Fanon_RP_Moderation_Team_Base_Guidelines