Talk:Deimos Ignite/@comment-24296957-20140914025759

Alrighty, so. Here are my issues.

First off - so far as we know - semblances are supportive, and have no offensive capabilities. Even illusions don't do direct damage. And also...that semblance, while you describe it as something like Tailed Beast Bomb, is more equvalent to the Vermillion Cannon when Naruto was overtaken by the Nine Tails' Cloak. But I digress. At any rate, nothing can absorb a natural substance like Goku's Spirit Bomb. That should be fixed.

As far as the weapon goes, I'd re-word it to a standard rifle. An MG implies a very heavy roud with very heavy recoil, and is usually mounted as a turret. And an electric shock that explodes on impact? I'd have to think about that.

And while we're on the subject of the weapon, it's a bit too OP. 'The sword has the ability to cut through hard substances, but not its own metal. If someone tried to counter with the same metal, the weapon may be badly damaged, maybe even broken.'? That leaves a bad taste in my mouth. If that's not changed, that'll be an issue, as well.

And also, there needs to be a relation to color in his name. Add that to Trivia, please.

For now,

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--