Talk:Ponipakee Currenguy/@comment-27581494-20160305013614

ok so little review of what you got so far(im on a spree to give people helpful opinions i guess)

the character is quite interesting in the way he act's, reminding me of the mad hatter and such, but on a higher level.his appearance i can picture besides the eyes really,so nothing out of note there.the only concerns i have is his weapon and semblance, the weapon i can see, but the drawing platform, please replace a small barrier, as for the trisketch i suggest you use ice dust mixed with ink(to make it black) instead, and allow him the use of more dusts for further versatility.the semblance is currently one i can picture, but is still a little vague, though the concept is fully explainable(probably contradicting myself right now.)i suggest you make is that he uses water dust(again mixed with ink) so that he controls the water rather, as summoning is still quite unknown about and the only ones mention to have self acting summons is weiss and winter, so i'd make it the drawings he does rather imitate him.

not trying to pull you down, just giving you fixes.good job on the current parts and cant wait for the backstory!if you do put this up for review i wish you luck!

IIThe RunnerII