Talk:Ophelia Elizabeth Lyricia/@comment-17970636-20140429045725

Alrighty, good first OC, just a few issues that need to be dealt with.

I see her weapon has 4 transformations, now, the max transformations for a weapon is three, cut away your least favourite one.

What is her Rage Mode and what edge does it give her? Some explanation on that would be nice.

Her semblance is good, however, make it so it's only her voice that it can be done with and take out that bit about earthquakes please, as well as putting limiters on how much it can be used.

You haven't put in trivia how her name relates to a colour.

For the above reasons, Rejected.

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