Talk:Cole Sidian/@comment-17970636-20151216013506/@comment-17970636-20151216055525

Well, thanks to me actually scrolling up in chat I was able to find out about this, and first off, the tone you take in this reply to the review makes me sound like some sort of fool. I'll let you know that I read every single part of this OC, I wasn't born a reviewer yesterday.

Zero repercussions as in in corolation for what his semblance can do, the repercussions are not severe enough. To put it in perspective, one of my OC's who has a similar semblance can go blind and go into a coma if he uses his semblance for too long, and he isn't even as powerful as this.

Blinking out of existance, you really take me for an utter buffoon? I know what it means, it's just plain dumb that an OC would "die" by increasing their speed, and the comparison to Ruby Rose means that if she moves faster she'll blink out of existance, sorry, yeah, overkill.

The entire paragraph in the trivia section that describes his "awakening" in terms of semblance is just sheer cheese. Alternate universe granting him powers? A different him turning into a thunderbolt that came across and decided "Hey, ima help the current me out" The simpler I make my reviews, the more faith I have that the person reading the review is smart enough to figure out via hints, I don't need to go in detail like you've forced me to here. Honestly, I'll treat your OC's with the same modicum of respect I do of people who create OC's with so much Edge they can slice a tank in half via their mere words if that's what you want.