Talk:Cole Carules/@comment-13593058-20160323034626

 A Review of  Cole Carules

Appearance
Not much to judge on a technical level.

Personality
A reasonable personality. No contradictions and has justified responses.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon does not contradict with existing canon weapons nor the Fanon-Rules, but...

Semblance... take the shot of what?

Backstory
Nothing worthy to note. No contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and acknowledged.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Semblance inconsistency

Review Summary
While the Semblance isn't really reject worthy there is a point in there that confused me. While the eye is active, how does it allow him to take the shot? The shot from what? That doesn't even make sense. What's the shot?

As well, the weapon can't be visualized, you start out with a revolver, which is a handgun. Then it has a scope on it, okay sure, I've seen that happen, but no way is just extending the handle of a revolver going to make it a katana. It's a knife. The barrel is never going to be long enough to be a full on sword, let alone a shortsword. If attaching your bowie knife on it somehow extends it then I'll have to ask if you've ever seen what a bowie knife looks like. At that point it'll just be a bayonete, not a sword.

That's just way too many components that don't form together and unless you can explain it better or draw a relatively neat diagram, I will unfortunately not accept this weapon design.

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