Talk:Kurai Jack Jade/@comment-4773581-20140126162803

Before I even get started, "Faunus" is both singular and plural, just like "Sheep" or "Moose". All instances of "Faunii" and "Fauna" should be replaced with it.

Now then, to start with, samurai wielded more than one type of sword (Katana, Odachi/Nodachi, Tachi, Kodachi, Wakizashi, Uchigatana, and even the polearm-like Nagamaki). The one you're thinking of is probably the ever-famous Katana, but you need to make it clear which "samurai sword" you mean.

Secondly, if "destroyed" is supposed to mean that it got shattered into little shards, then "reforging" would basically be "melting the pieces down and rebuilding the whole thing from scratch". What they're actually capable of doing should be elaborated on, as well as why they glow and why they're worthwhile weapons despite having visible cracks in them. Cracked weapons, even if "reforged", have a tendency to break easier than uncracked weapons.

I'm not going to comment on 521 itself unless I get asked to review that by Maki, but you should explain how he's able to predict his enemy's movements, as well as how he finds his opponent's rhythm.

Personality-wise, the whole "enigma" and "not much is known about his true personality" thing is a lazy cop-out. Even if it's not known to anyone else, it still exists. The fact that you don't describe it at all tells me that you don't even know, probably because you haven't bothered to go that far. Unless a character is in an ongoing story and their page is just being up-to-date with said story to avoid possible spoilers for things that haven't happened yet, things like that should be defined on their page, regardless of whether or not anyone else would, or even should, know about it.

With the history, the lack of any information about this mysterious "master" person is the biggest issue, as he's a very prominent figure in the backstory, and everything he does is very peculiar. The hidden bases are especially strange, as how the construction process of something like that could go completely unnoticed is baffling, and I doubt that virtual training is a thing in the RWBYverse (for non-cybernetics, anyways). Also, missions and training are two entirely different things. Unless you're some supergenius prodigy, you need the latter before you can even think about doing the former.

On another note, holy hell do you have a lot of accepted characters.