Talk:Ezylryb/@comment-24087318-20140106021507

His weapons (Lanceblade and Clawshield) need a little more explaination as to what they do beyond a name.

Beyond that, there also appears to be the issue of the character appearing as an export from an existing fiction. However, as he's not simply the character placed into the RWBY world, and has a few points from what I've seen that fit into the world and lore, I can give this a pass. Though the entire page needs more detail and elaboration onto how he got to where he is exactly, given his age and experience, as well as his current position as a Teacher at Beacon. (How did he even get that role? How does he know Ozpin? Things like that.)

As such, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~