Talk:Aurelia Riore/@comment-27743663-20170223223207

CNR checks out.

Appearance is fine

Personality is fine.

Backstory feels incomplete near the end, no mention of her leaving the jail or joining Beacon.

Semblance, what's the max range these pulses can go? As a side-note, fail to see some of the properties it gives. At best, I could see a propulsion one, as aura acts as a force-field, or the healing one as aura does in fact heal wounds. But the others seem just thrown in there without any basis for it.

Weapon is fine.

Tl;dr

Rejected on

- Backstory feels incomplete

- Semblance clarification on range

- Some effects of semblance seen thrown in with little basis for it

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