Talk:Cole Harrington/@comment-10337166-20160913105353

Nothing has changed from previous review, if you actually want to get this OC accepted I advise you to read over these guidelines http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Guidelines.

But to start you off

-Characters don't have 'genetic powers'

-Characters have a Semblance, and Aura

-Semblances have usually one effect not 12

-Weapons are actually fine, good job

-Backstory is somewhat cliche but a good place to start

If you want help I advise coming onto chat and asking for help AFTER you read the guidelines back to front.

Until then

Rejected

~RP Moderation Team`