Talk:Navy Da Vinci/@comment-27383565-20150622182917

Hey! Am not a mod, but I like to help people with their profiles. Lets start out with the first problem I see, your semblance. "never-ending stamina" sounds really OP. How about you give a negative to your large amount of stamina. Give it a cool down or something like that. And go over your grammar a few more times. "she excelled at physical activities" Comes to mind. Also give us more detail into your characters backstory. "When she turned 11, she began to have a love for huntsman and huntress." Tell us why she began to love humans, what changed her mind?

Don't take what am saying as an insult. I only want to help. If you need anything else just PM me, or one of the mods.

-TheWhiteMage66