Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-24296957-20150113152446/@comment-25291880-20150115002219

Breyal Yoland:

-Backstory: Nothing wrong here as far as I can see, though it is a bit lacking in depth and detail. You also may want to add where she got her scar, as that's in her appearance section and it doesn't explain in the history section how she acquired it.

-Weapons: I love how the weapons go along with her faunus heritage. You may want to put her aura color though. I can tell it's probably purple, but just in case that would be something to consider to add.

-Semblance: A nice semblance that goes along with her weapons. However, it needs some more clarification. So she can hit 'weak spots'. but what exactly are these weak spots? Pressure points to render arms and legs inactive? Injuries like sprained bones or bruised body parts? And how long can she activate her semblance? Also, her second bullet point was abruptly cut off and her third bullet is also a bit perplexing. I would think that Grimm, despite beings soulless monsters, have their weak points and spots that a Hunter/Huntress can find if they study said Grimm closely.

-Trivia: I searched for the Breyel gem all over Google and wasn't able to find any sort of link to a jewel.

Because of the needed info in her semblance, and the fact I am unable to find the Breyal gemstone, rejected for now.