Talk:Mikado Troika/@comment-27743663-20170316024143

CNR checks out.

Appearance, fine overall, save for the armor. I'll get to that later though.

Personality is fine.

Background is...so, he's from a fanmade Kingdom? Thaaat's a large no. We don't accept fanmade Kingdoms. The latex life-support suit thing on its functions just  seem odd  to me as well, and more specificially, criminals and /Grimm/ envious of his heritage? Grimm. Moving on, who on earth are the conversationists? That aside, we don't know Remnant's healing capabilities, so a suit keeping someone alive perpetually is largely questionable, as is using Dust as its power source. The armor in general and how it works/what it does is a no.

Semblance, how exactly does his semblance work? So projectiles don't hit him, and he...somehow is able to boost the strength of his own? The concept of the "perfect missle" is also highly rejectable. Besides that, it has no demerits. What stops him from keeping it up forever, and from what range can  he do that? That's redudant though since it's rejectable regardless.

Weapon, "infinite supply" of ammo is a no. Trolka Dust isn't a thing either, so being powered by it is a no. Largely though it's multiple functions and ammunition are iffy as a whole.

Equipment, this goes into  the functions of his armors being rejectable by default.

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

- Fan-made Kingdom

- Different  Armors in general and their functions

- Semblance as a whole is odd and doesn't make much sense, lacks demerits, concept of "perfect missle."

- Weapon, infinite supply of ammo and all the ammo in general.

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