Talk:Acteon Erasmus/@comment-24087318-20131231052506

Work In Progress Characters Do Not Belong In Pending

If you are still working on a character, do not place them into Pending. That being said, there are a few points that are grounds for rejection.

Aura doesn't posess any abilities unique to the user outside of their Semblances.

In addition, Glyphs are a Semblance, not a technology feature. Having it as how the weapon changes forms doesn't make sense when weapon transformations are mechanical in nature.

Also, the characters overall fighting style seems to be in two entirely separate parts: One where he uses his Flamethrower from his companies technological advances, and another where he uses the spear and shield defencively with his Semblance. They don't blend together much at all, nor does its melee form seem to utilize the advanced technologies that the Flamethrower element does, when it could to create a completely unique and interesting fighting style in that form.

Since this character is still in WIP, as well as Pending, I will not Reject it, but I will remove it from Pending. Please correct the above, as well as add any other things you have not yet, then re-submit.

~RP Moderation Team~