Talk:Stone Doors/@comment-25924729-20191112035416

An interesting concept, clever and analytical tanks are not a combination seen often, I'm interested to see how this works out.

Appearance, personality and backstory sections are all good, no issue there.

Weapon seems fine too. Can confirm Empoleon looks badass with the wings.

Semblance is a little iffy... I mean, its a very creative idea, i like it. In terms of power and balance it's alright, the predictions it makes has flaws and can be overwhelmed or be simply wrong, but mechanically, im not very sure how it would work in the RPs we do here... There's 3 ways i imagine it could work OOC, none of them particularly fair.

If he makes a prediction before an action happens, and it becomes true, you effectively tell your RP partner to behave exactly like you say, which is sort of bunnying...? Generally not fair to the other guy.

The other guy could also purposely not follow his prediction, especially now he knows the outcome is good or bad for him. In competitive RPs like pvp, some users simply choose when its convenient to let a prediction be true or not depending on if it benefits their OC in a situation.

Alternatively, you could also abuse the semblance to justify your OC predicting stuff he should not be able to know,or as an excuse to perform unreasonable feats using "I knew you were going to do that all along", treading on godmod territory. Im not saying you would, but the fact you can possibly do that makes this semblance a problem.

Point being... this semblance has the potential to be either extremely broken, or extremely useless. Its definitely better to either change this semblance, or severely nerf it with limitations or conditions to its use.

Its really hard to explain concisely in a review like his... erm, if this sounds confusing you could head over to Discord chat, there's people that could explain in detail and help you work out the details there.

CNR works, no other issues found on this page.

Rejected.

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