Talk:Pierce Caruleut/@comment-24087318-20140112113608

~Due to BRTE500's status as Chat Moderator and not Reviewer/Administrator, Character needs to be Re-reviewed~

Characters backstory makes no mention of how/why they were accepted into Beacon academy and got a Team, or how she aquired her weapon.

In addition, Character backstories cannot involve Canon characters/organizations beyond Ozpin and the various Hunter/Huntress academies known to exist. Saying they encountered Romans gang breaks this rule.

The characters Semblance isn't something we've seen capable of being in Canon. Semblances are combat oriented, and work with the characters weapons, skills, dust usage, and other abilities to produce one singular combat style as far as we've seen. For examples of this, as well as what we're aware Semblances are canonically capable of doing, consult http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Semblances_and_your_OC_-_A_Guide

Due to the above points, Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~