Talk:Urdin Meadows/@comment-10380701-20131009052044

I suppose the first thing I'll point out is that layout. You should place his image in his character infobox. >_>

Meanwhile lemme start by saying his backstory is like the exact opposite of Jaune. He knew the idea of losing something or someone important and it's consequences. His guilt over Raleigh's death was handled nicely instead of being overdramatic and it didn't dominate the rest of his backstory.

His constant training also didn't make him overpowered, instead it's deconstructed. His training caused him to develop a buttload of social flaws. That's actually pretty interesting.

Overall, he's definitely a well-rounded and well-written character. I can see him starring in a fanfic if you ever do one.