Talk:Raven Sanguis/@comment-10337166-20160504233107

You make some mention of a tea in his personality but no mention of it anywhere else, this needs elaboration.

His personality makes no sense, so he's basically pissed off and angry all the time, and he hates everyone? Is what I got from reading it, I'd advise fixing this by changing some stuff. Also he can't have regenerated his eye's Aura isn't that powerful. Also how does his 'team' function, if they hate him and he hates them 'evident from the growling, and his leader you know poking out his eyes.'

Backstory makes no sense, I tried reading it and couldn't.

Rejected

-RP Moderation Team-