Thread:Takeshi kun21/@comment-25363089-20160830215318/@comment-8182065-20160908061949

Oh yay new stuff! ^_^

Hmmm.... I see two different possible routes to take.

1. If you're gonna go for the "parents want a better life for child" route, make it so Margrit's parents were a part of the Seeker Order, faked their deaths/went into hiding, trained Margrit in the ways of an assassin, she goes to Beacon and graduates, gets mission to infiltrate the circus, falls in love with Rasu and he turns over a new leaf away from crime.

2. They stay in the Order, Rosetta is also training in the Order, Margrit tries to get her Master title, loses the fight and gets lost, found by the circus troupe, Rasu and Margrit fall in love, Rasu wants out of the circus for a better life.

The first idea I think would fit a bit better, mainly because the Order doesn't necessarily seem to show up again after Margrit stays with Nightingale Circus, and the ending you have right now leaves a load of questions to be answered (how her target found her, why she wanted to kidnap Sylvia, why not go back to her own life since she was only defending herself, etc.).

Her current personality also fits a bit better with the first path imo.