User blog comment:Blume313/rwby team part-3 prototype - looking for help on this one/@comment-26104528-20150307175708

I'm no reviewer, but you'll definetly have to either get creative with his name or just make his first name "Harkin". Last names cannot be used in the color rule. period. personal experience as well.

I'd also stop with having him buddy-buddy with the canonical cast. We've got a rule that dictates "no canon interactions". Sorry, but none of the other OCs on here have any relation beyond maybe general knowledge of existence.

2-weapons only, but you can solve that just by combining his pistol and knife.

Also, instead of stuffing everything into your blog, just make a page (tap that contribute button in the corner) and put it into "Pending Character". It'll be easier to read, you can always go back to edit it, and it practically guarantees a professional reviewer will get to it eventually.

Other than that, you are good my friend.