User blog comment:Ragadorus/Basic RWBY Fanon Roleplaying Tips/@comment-17970636-20131204044913/@comment-25363089-20140901012242

I for one cannot see anything wrong with that set up but if your wanting to improve it. From what i seen in other rps i have read. I would put the character who is speaking name next to it as well as in put what they are doing(im new to this rp stuff so if im wrong on this stuff don't get mad at me.