Thread:KuraiJack/@comment-25631224-20160208155744/@comment-13488655-20160208171138

You need to add a lot more detail to the character in general. o.o For appearance, what body shape does she have? What's her complexion? What benefits does her clothing give her in combat?

For personality i think you need to have a bit more to her attitude than 'rich girl with trust issues. o.o Try using this http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:KuraiJack/Creating_three_dimensional_characters to help plan out her character a bit more. :) It'll help with habits, personality quirks and hobbies for Rosalie.

As for fighting style, try to instead of saying 'master swordsman', look for a good swordplay fighting style and a specific sword or dao to go with it. Same with hand to hand combat. ^-^ I personally suggest one of the eastern martial art styles. :)