Talk:Anamonea Bluciel/@comment-25924729-20190509083845

Pretty interesting design, i imagine that she would be fun to draw or see animated :)

Appearance is short but nice. Personality is alright too, theres a small error there where you call her Anastasia, might wanna fix that.

Backstory has a small issue that needs explaining. Following the timeline, she met her husband at the Vytal Festival, dated him, married and had kids which are at least old enough to walk in the current time. This is impossible, since all that would have had to take place in just about one year, according to the canon timeline. It may be possible to explain this as they met in a previous Vytal Tournament, which happens every two years and would put events in a more believable time frame. The way its worded now just sounds like you are referring to the Volume 3 Vytal Festival. If it this, then the time is too short for so many things to happen, and you will have to change it. If it isnt and they actually met at a different Vytal Festival, you should explain it that way.

Onto her abilities and semblance, she seems to have very high stats all around. Granted, RWBY people are apparently slightly physically better than normal humans, and she is an older veteran huntress. But it is still too much, especially considering she has very few weaknesses to balance it out. I suggest lowering her stats slightly and adding a few more weaknesses.

Her semblance seems alright. Theres's no weapon section on this page. You must have that section, even if she doesnt use any weapons it must be specified.

Lastly, Anemone refering to flowers as a CNR is too vague to be a CNR. There are just too many species of anemone flowers to bring to mind a specific colour. You should change the name to refer to a specific type of anemone, or change it entirely for it to work.

No other issues found. In general the page could use more details and explanations on things, as well as requiring the fixes mentioned above. Good try though.

Rejected.

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