Talk:Adrian Topper/@comment-24087318-20141016070959

Semblance needs more detail. What's the range it can work at? What's the exact effect? Are there any counters like light? Can Huntsmen/Huntresses avoid it if directed at them? How long does it last? Things like that.

Team Name still isn't addressed. See comments in last Review as to why.

Rejected

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