Thread:Jadefire62/@comment-26570606-20170509012111/@comment-26570606-20170626230739

Yeah, I have a dog. She lets everyone think she's dumb, and then when everyone is convinced of that, she steals their food and laughs at us all. :P

XD, my problem mainly came from trying to include canon characters as well as OCs. I wanted everyone to have their big moment, and when I forgot certain characters, I worked too hard to make them relevent again. :P

That was actually the biggest problem. Too much comedic relief. And then when I tried to make it serious, it didn't work and everything seemed forced.