Talk:Yulon Xueshan/@comment-14090705-20140801064506

Alrighty then, I feel she is the textbook definition of a cooperate businesswoman.

Appearance: "Great for the battlefield and the boardroom" should be the sales pitch for this outfit. Humor aside, this is a great outfit. Her appearance is moderately serious, which corresponds with her personality.

Personality: Pretty standard for a typical CEO-in-training. At least she is not full of herself.

Weapons: The only unique portions of them is the extra long blade and the string that connects it. Might want to be more clear on the 3rd trait of these fans. I couldn't follow what it was when I read it.

Abilities: Once again, pretty well balanced. Not sure what else to add to it. Her semblance is a pretty good substitute for full flight, and the limits are well defined.

History: Really explains why she is the way she is. It's not the most interesting backstory I have read, but it's well structured and keeps the reader engaged.

Okay, next.