Talk:Rowena Burrows/@comment-25924729-20191111133734

Alright, issues are fixed.

CNR is explained, icing people's insides is no longer possible.

The thing wih Ozpin still feels very personal, kinda skirting the edges of acceptable limits on canon interaction, but still somewhat better than the old version. I guess its okay...?

One detail i forgot to mention in the last review: Not really an issue with this character herself, but in the Relationships section one of her teammates is a prototype intelligent android? We dont allow that unfortunately, and have rules in the guidelines limiting how intelligent and personable you can make an AI, nowhere close enough to pass as a human student in an Academy.

I won't reject for this, since theres still too little detail to make a fair judgement of him, and even if there were its that character's problem, not this page's. Still, please take note of this. I just felt like it would be best to give you a heads up so you dont waste time working on an unacceptable character concept later.

But yeah... back to this character itself, i see no problem. Nice work :D

Accepted.

If you have any questions please DM me on wikia or discord.

~RP moderation Team~