Thread:Takeshi kun21/@comment-25363089-20160830215318/@comment-8182065-20160902064129

It's good that you're feeling better, but ouch on the teeth being pulled. :)

As for Margrit, there's quite a lot going for her.

Assassination training, placement into Signal and Beacon, becoming a master assassin, disappearing in a mission, being resuced by the "circus", falling in love, having kids, one kid gets nabbed.

I feel like if you wanna make it shorter you could take out the Academy life, and say she and Rosetta are both a part of the Seeker Order (because it also brings a question to why she'd be going to a Hunter Academy compared to just training with the Order).

The part of becoming a master assassin could probably be shortened, or altered so the scythe wielder she has to take out is the mission where she pursues that ranking of master.