Talk:Kenji Bruin/@comment-24678303-20150212134353

Hmm, although most of this character seems to be in order, i did spot a few problems.

First, i would like to know where this "Menagerie" place is. Otherwise, the Backstory looks good.

Secondly, the Weapon and Semblance, while quite original and interesting, seem to be a bit OP. Killing a King Taijitu in one shot, even if it would make him fall into a coma, is a bit far-fetched. If you can tone that down a bit, then it should be fine.

Otherwise, he looks good. Fix the above and you will be solid.

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~