Talk:Salem Caeruleo/@comment-5431934-20140207140716

The only concerns with this character lie in its 'Despair' armor mode.

It states that said mode uses his life-force in his blood for fuel, or something to that effect. This doesn't fit what we know about either RWBY nor actual blood - not only is blood not a very good fuel itself, but it was never hinted or suggested to carry one's life-force in the show, nor that said life-force could be used as a source of energy.

The only other concern would be how the concept art section mentions him having wings and a tail whilst in despair mode, despite no mention elsewise in the page, and no explanation of such a phenomenon - do they pop out of the suit? Does he grow them? Was this something you removed from the character but missed here? In short, requires more elaboration.

For the above points,

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--