Talk:Merlin Robin/@comment-25924729-20181201073534

BURN THE WITCH!

Hehe.... sorry i couldnt resist :v, now lets have a look...

Personality section is alright. Appearance states that she has wings that let her glide, which is alright as it isnt sustained flight, as we've seen Yuma the forgettable bat boy do it in Volume 5, so theres a precedent and its alright.

The second paragraph of the backstory seems to be missing something. Her mother going as far as to.... what? Maybe you missed a word or phrase there, might wanna fix that.

Weapons are alright, her semblance is mostly okay too, albeit very versatile with what it can do. I feel the Wisps' range is too much, having a semblance that takes effect over 100 miles, even if it doesnt cause damage or have any ral effect but marking a trail seems unreasonable. I suggest you reduce that significantly.

How name Merlin represents a colour isnt explained on the page. You'll have to add that in the Trivia section.

Rejected.

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~RP Modertion team~