Talk:Akane Sasha Ackerman/@comment-25582638-20141117063535

' Cinder was enrolled into Beacon Academy  after completion of her education at Beacon '. You might mean Signal?

There are some grammatical errors on the third paragraph. Better check it.

From my point of view, the backstory is smooth. Her  personality should reflect from her background (just a reminder), especially after that incident with the Nevermore. I'm interested getting to know her more ;)