Talk:Roxanne "Roxy" Fujiwara/@comment-10337166-20160711003614

Small personality issues, you talk about how he she hates authority and mouths off and is a rebel. How is she even a functioning member of the Atlas hunter school? She'd just be kicked out for being insubordinate unless she was a prodigy of some sort, which she doesn't seem to be. Consider fixing this.

Her weapon description is 'A hoverboard like Reese's' no, you can't make a copy of a canon weapon your weapon, I know it doesn't turn into them but the description annoys me and makes me think it's just a copy.

Until such time as these are fixed

Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~

(PS: Aside from that, cool character, good first attempt)