Thread:Cat-Soup64/@comment-30803571-20170307052709

Okay, removed any mention of eating grimm.

regarding the semblance being active since birth, Qrow mentioned his had been active since birht so i took it as a possibility, still changed it though, now he got his semblance later on.

as on the "passive being active indefinetly", i'm not sure what you meant there, if you mena the part about him being able to stop his digestive tract, the drawback would be him being unable to do anything with his digestive tract while stopped. he's not digesting things, he can't use the "active" parts of his semblance, he can't poop nor urinate, etc; if the digestive system does it then it's not being done while stopped, which could lead to some serious health issues in the long run. I thought this was obvious enough so i didn't mention the side effects of having a non-functioning digestive tract. but if you think it's necessary i will.

if there's anything else i should change on Albion Vartanian  or i misunderstood any part of your review pls tell me. 