Talk:Cinnamon Rogue/@comment-25924729-20191110132607

Oh this is interesting, a Harvey Dent style crooked lawyer, getting some Jekyll and Hyde vibes off the guy too~

Appearance and personality seem pretty solid. I know you handle cunning and manipulative characters very well and I'm interested to see where this goes.

HIs backstory has issues though... if the real world's legal systems can be used as a comparison, even if he is unusually intelligent and fast tracked his studies and career, 28 is much too young to have an established career as a famous and respected judge. Theres many years of studying, training and qualifications to go through, most people dont beome judges until ages 50-60, not even taking into account having a secret identity and job as a criminal mastermind taking up part of his time and slowing him down potentially.

Sorry if i sound a bit anal about this, i study law irl so details like this bother me a bit.

A very good reason for how he managed to achieve this a such a young age should be provided, or his age increased to more believable levels.

Aside from that, his weapon and semblance seem alright. Do note a lethal poison can only be used against Grimm or against human opponents with broken auras though. His overall skillset is relatively weak so i'll let him have a deadly poison to balance out, but please keep in mind RP rules about not kiling anyone's characters without permission.

So... yeah, overall a very neat character. Just the issues of beleivability in the backstory.

Rejected.

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