Thread:ZackOJ/@comment-26362067-20160505161811/@comment-24490414-20160506010024

 Well it looks like Zeke's been looked at by one of our actual reviewers since Zack put him in pending (and then it promptly removed since they require completed OCs with actual descriptions in appearance, personality, weapon, etc). Best to look at that since reviewer suggestions take priority.

 There isn't much I can say to improve on for now other than to be a LOT more descriptive, as mentioned earlier. The core sections you'll need to fill out are explained in the Character sheet base if you haven't seen it yet. Semblance and weapons especially need to be elaborate in what they can, cannot do, their limitations, etc. ("How does a mere wrench become a full-sized flamethrower?? Is the wrench a lot larger than what you'd expect wrenches to be?" <--Answering these types of questions can definitely help us and especially the Reviewers visualize better.)