Talk:Dawn Bellerosé/@comment-25924729-20190705085719

Very cool character. Striking design, interesting semblance and weapon. I love it.

Appearance... small thing. Its debatable whether having blades on her shoes make them count as weapons or not. But given that her main weapon is pretty simple and doesnt break the 4 point rule, whether the shoes are weapons or not, they are acceptable anyway. Its optional to add them to the weapon section, just something to note.

Backstory and personality are great. Easy to read and follow, nice work there.

Fighting style, semblance and weapons are very cool. I like them. Some small issue to note on the weapon though, Impact Dust isnt a thing anymore... i mean, they used to be a thing and what our wiki considered White Dust before it was revealed as wind. The stuff that makes weapons hit harder is usually interpreted as Gravity black/purple Dust or any fan made mixture involving Wind or Gravity.

Im not sure if this is a case of outdated information, in which case you may wanna change it to Gravity or some other Dust instead of Impact; or you are trying to make a fan Dust type, and if so you should explain that briefly on the page. Again, this isnt a problem or rejectable, just a very small thing to take note of/ consistency fix. Whatever Impact Dust is, its use seems balanced enough to accept. Sorry if this comes off as a bit nitpicky.

CNR checks out. Relationships and trivia section are good. No other issues found.

Accepted.

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~RP Moderation Team~