Talk:The Blacklist Killer/@comment-25363089-20150613233931

I say tone down some things and just really think about some things.The idea is good.But how you wrote it is well like Hype said.Just think about some things in the personality and backstory and really think of how your character would react to things.There are some personality tests you can do to figure out stuff about him.Just google search personality test and take some and then think of how you can write it out.I mean i see this character being a rogue character does his best to stick to the shadows an only attacking those who get lost an or seperated from their group just stuff like that.

Just giving you some helpful advice on things is all.