Talk:Rochelle Red/@comment-27603392-20140517113322

Personality and History is too vague. How did she managed to enter Beacon without going to any combat school and/or acquires a transcription to Beacon ? Further more, how can Ozpin just simply "put" her to Bryan's team, seeing that the team getting paired in initiation is completely random.

Weapon isn't out of place, but you need to elobrate her ability/Aura/Semblance.

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