Talk:Leukon Innocentius/@comment-25924729-20190703055818

Review of the typical 12 year old man child on the internet. What life decisions have led me to this ;-;

Appearance is kinda endearing actually, reminds me of when i was seven and would stick my hand into pringles cans and call it a "Super mega army gun". He's like that, a little kid and really cute for it.

....gets a little less cute moving into personality section. This... is pretty much Twitter and the average Youtube comment sections personified. Really gives off the feeling of absulute dicks you hear on r/entitledpeople and such. I know you went into making this character with the goal of making people want to punch him in the face. well... it worked.

Backstory is all right, liked the part where he needed teacher's help to pass, to be reasonable and justify him making it despite having almost no useful Hunter skills. The last part and his overall character just makes me imagine him pulling a Trump and yelling "I will build this soda rocket pack, and my team will pay for it!"

The Relationships section is... empty? Is it incomplete? Or do you wanna remove it?

Onto his weapons, im surprised you didnt make him a literal keyboard warrior. I was half expecting to  see him run around smacking people with one, or at least typing commands to his doll to move it.

So his actual weapons are alright. A robot that runs onTay AI and a shitty gun that im sure Ifrit told him was a good idea. Fairly useless like you like them. It would be good to include short descriptions of them in the page instead of links leading elsewhere, but both are sorta acceptable.

Semblance is incredible... its somehow both the most useful part of his arsenal by nature of not being useless, but also completely redundant. I mean, thats kinda what Dust does by itself already, no need for a semblance o.o. Normally i'd ask you to include limits like time limits, power, size of objects he can cover etc. But this is an exeption, cause no matter how OP you can make this semblance, i see no way he wouldnt suck in a fight by virtue of everything else being made of literal rubbish.

Other equipment is fine. A flaming ball over the battlefield screaming insults at people is fun to imagine. I can honestly believe the reason he sucks like this is cause people genuinely hate his personality and are TRYING to get him killed.

Fun character. Im torn between wanting him to suffer for being a prick and watching how he gets into RP hijinks for amusement.

Accepted.

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~RP Moderation Team~