Talk:Amet Revfold/@comment-24087318-20131231053741

Faunus heritage is not known to give any abilities other than Night Vision. Having extra sensory perception and speed because of Faunus heritage is NOT known to be true, and having a mastery of stealth and hand-to-hand combat on top of all these abilities is starting to encroach on overpowered. His stealth ability speciically also doesn't match his weapon at all, which seems to be based on being loud, fiery and destructive.

In addition, his backstory does not explain why or how he has his weapon, and having more weaponry than just Potenza isn't fitting with the spirit of RWBY. Characters in canon don't carry knives or other secondary weapons beyond shields: They have everything they deem nessicary as a feature or function of their primary weapon. In addition, the sword having the lightness of a rapier, but being able to cleave stone is quite overpowered and nonsensical.

Also, eye color does not seem to be a perfect way to tell someone is a Faunus. Blake has golden yellow eyes and nobody questioned her as a Faunus. Your character WILL however, likely have to find a way to cover up his Tiger ears.

His clans meditation doesn't seem to make sense. Meditation can soothe, calm, and help with focus. But how or why would it give a boost to ones agility or other PHYSICAL abilities?

Due to the above, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~