Thread:Horace Horakhty/@comment-8182065-20140307090554

So hello, welcome to the Fanon first of all, glad to see more people around making their OCs known. Only wanted to give you a bit of a heads up after seeing a few things on your character (kinda always staring at the wiki activity). You're starting off good, just needs some refining.

Just to let you know, Bird Faunus are acceptable, but for now they cannot have wings, as it hasn't been seen in canon; for now any and all bird faunus are grounded at the moment until we learn more about RWBY in general. 2nd, he's missing an appearance section, I know there are a few things listed in his profile, but it's still needed to give others a full description of his character.

Lastly his history section: it's alright to add some funnies in, but you should know that students can't just barge right through the doors of a school and start going to classes. Horace would need to do the proper paperwork and such to get him into Signal, just as Beacon would.

That's all I wanted to point out, if you would like some advice/constructive criticism feel free to ask anyone. Try to look around at other OCs as well, check out a few guides, and also check out the link below as it gives a guideline on what the mods will be looking out for when judging. http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/RWBY_Fanon_RP_Moderation_Team_Base_Guidelines  