Thread:Jadefire62/@comment-27702078-20160924180723/@comment-26362067-20160924184047

First of all, just listing out the differences doesn't work. There's the other issues Seb pointed out, as well. That, and 10,000 is WAY too many wasps, regardless whether you say that's how many there usually are or not. 10,000 would probably kill his Aura. I'd tone that down, to, like, 50 or something - more than enough to deal with one person, or several.

Second, you're still basically copying Green Lantern, even with the differences you have listed. There's a difference between being inspired by a character, and basically pasting that character's abilities/weapons/powers onto an OC. For example, even though the weapon switches between modes, it's still basically Green Lantern's weapon. Blue Wasp is still, in essence, Green Lantern. You practically copied his history onto your OC, even with the differences. Change it up a bit. That, and as far as we know, Atlas is the only kingdom with a standing military, which, btw, is made up of robots, not people. Huntsman and Huntresses are the human military, really.

Also, a couple other tips: Name his weapon. Most weapons in RWBY are named. That, and you're really just stating he's a copy of Green Lantern in the Trivia. Say he's inspired by him instead. Not to mention that the differences list just helps people realize the overall similarity. Getting rid of it would actually be a good idea.