Thread:Maki Kuronami/@comment-13488655-20140121160239/@comment-10380701-20140123091007

Now that I had the chance to see you art style up close, I can provide some feedback.

For starters, your lines are a bit messy. You do them in multiple strokes instead of one. While it's mostly for preferences, you can generally improve faster if you learn how to only use a single stroke per line. There's a tutorial for this out there for clarification.

Once you start doing single strokes, you'll most likely end up with wrinkled lines, but that'll be fixed by practice.

Of course, you don't need to follow this, since you seem to focus on traditional art. If for some reason you get bored and want to digitalize it though, then you'll definitely need cleaner lines.