Thread:Fedorastorm/@comment-26130256-20150523201509/@comment-26104528-20150523224229

Your entry is perfectly fine. Definetly adds a very nice twist to this RP without screwing up the plot. Now to answer your questions...

1. you can pretty much just leave any questions here, or leave them in the thread itself.

2. That's part of the reason I end each of my posts with a list of clues and/or testimonies from witnesses. These are things that Stahlfritz may have missed and so your OCs have something to do.

To answer inconsistencies.


 * Yes, Grei is the dead guy


 * In this case, there are holes in the wall that would resemble a shotgun blast, and buckshot pellets can be found in the walls, but only that. Grei's weapon is a harpoon gun so make of that what you will.


 * Unless you find bills and junk mail interesting, there's really nothing in that letter.


 * I had originally planned for Grei's weapon to be in the room, but missing a component. McKringles kinda beat me to it so I worked around that. I can't say anything else without spoiling so...


 * Grei's apartment isn't THAT high-class so it lacks security cameras


 * The knives are indeed from the kitchen, but still don't match with what the angle/depth/etc. of the injuries

Thanks for asking and telling me something: I need to be WAY more specific in leaving clues.