Talk:Jenga/@comment-27743663-20160218064204/@comment-13593058-20160219011308

I love the way you phrased this in a well constructed manner which shows me that you truly took the time to read it.

Thank you for you time.

I'm also glad that you were able to pick up what I was trying to convey! I was kind of concerned that a writing style like this which purposely negates the environment as something important may rate as a negative point. Which you stated in two parts where it seems like it, and its true in some ways.

I like to think that where this conversation takes place is besides the point, though I do think you're right that maybe a little more detail from the characters themselves which hint at the location might help with the immersion a bit other than having the Alice acknowledge that their mother is around. I'm so happy you mentioned a warm house setting for it too, I think it was exactly the kind of atmosphere I wanted to convey!

Ah, as well, the fact that you mentioned that you had siblings of your own really fortified the feeling that I nailed the conversation correctly, I'm happy you mentioned it. I'm an only child and I rarely even get to see my friends interact with their siblings too.

This was the exact kind of critical response I was looking for. Again, thanks for your time!