Talk:Azul Desuske/@comment-10380701-20131102150007

So remember that feedback I owed you? Yeah, I'm 24 hours due on that. Does it come with interest rate? XD

Well, for starters, his outfit... is awesome. And you're a pretty good artist. That's another notch on my ever-growing jelly meter.

His backstory is mostly okay and makes him a pretty solid character. I particularly like that you played with the "Ozpin accepts X student" card by making their meeting a bit more unique, and I can see Ozpin doing that to other students at his leisure time, beating up Beowolves with his mug.

Then he performs the AZUL experiment. ...Not quite sure what to think of that. But I'm not putting it past Ozpin of all people.

Azul's status as the Ice Prince reminds me of White Trailer Weiss, who generally was considered lonely and quiet. That's not a bad thing, because from our RPs, I can see that you've actually done it well.

I'm curious, why does Lost to Dust happen? This was never mentioned in his backstory. The worst Dust exposure we've seen so far is Ruby's rainbow-colored sneeze.

And now thanks to this character and Viola, I'm tempted to make a theme for Maki...