Talk:Zedler Starr/@comment-5431934-20140209003821

I fail to see how A, when he first began experimenting, he was capable of controlling five people without being caught, noticed, arrested, or had some other consequence to physically manipulating said people, or B, how attaching two strings to the body of a person allows him to fully control them.

Placing it as a semblance, it is not over heavily overpowered but also out-of setting.

In addition, Aura does not have specialized effects that vary between users, so freezing people near him is a definite no-go.

For the above,

Rejected.

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