Talk:Gora Grump/@comment-24416658-20160322062101

Name checks out under CNR.

Appearance and Personality are alright. Goodness, he's a vengeful little pal.

Backstory is lacking. There is no explanation about what happened in between Signal and the Battle of Beacon. In addition, there is no reasoning behind him just leaving his parents a house. Also, please fix the grammar and punctuation.

Semblance needs to be edited somewhat, more specific. It's really not possible to change the weight of a specific part of an object. That would require changing gravity and mass.

Weapon is alright, though I ask that you describe how it transforms, since it sounds like it does.

Rejected for above reasons.

--RP Moderation Team--