User blog comment:StarlightAT/Original Story Synopsis/@comment-13488655-20150219224729/@comment-5290299-20150220135720

......now your advice just reach vagueness....T^T

I posted this to try to get advice to make it more appealing and creative....i know it needs to be improved on thats why i posted the blog in the first place...

All i got from this is expand/add more on the summary which i cannot do....

I get you are telling me it needs to be rewritten but not exactly how....