Thread:Riftling/@comment-23914585-20140107101044

I was really impressed by the look of your Team DGTL, especially the original art, and I can't wait to see T and L come into the picture. I'm a lurking member here at RWBY Fanon with only the beginnings of a page for a criminal team. I liked your character design and I was wondering if you would be interested in helping me flesh out some character traits in my team once I finish the team profile and start on each member's page next. One of my main challenges for two members is their weapons. In the past, both characters are primarily melee brawl types who used whatever fell on the ground if they really had to use a weapon. I also like Diana as a character in a lot of ways.

What made me want to message you was how she reminded me of my own character Langley. The design for him is supposed to be a "prodigal son" type who's brilliant and has a great store of Aura but he takes it all for granted and he wound up abandoning his community because of their expectations. I feel like he and Diana have a lot in common by their natural talents, but then are worlds apart in terms of attitude and outlook. I've also been trying to think of an Aura Semblance ability for Langley to have that he could eventually learn how to use it and make himself levitate. I made up Langley without an actual history/myth character, but I decided to liken him to Peter Pan. The dashing young rogue who defies authority and makes the adults look like idiots while he does it.

I wanted to see what you think about that before I went further. Thanks for reading my exposition wall! ^^; I'm...trying to fix that. 