Talk:Mint/@comment-24678303-20150211213334

The first thing i see wrong with this page is a lack of content. There is only one sentence for each section, and they don't really tell me anything about the character herself.

Next up, Canon Character interaction. 'Cinder's Faction' isn't a thing as far as i know. She controls Roman and Roman controls the White Fang, that is it. The only subordinates she properly has are Emerald and Mercury. Plus, her two nicknames are given to her by Roman and Emerald.

While i am interested in the fact that you based this character off Neo and made another Ice Cream-based Character, the above make it unacceptable.

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~