Talk:Cain Viper/@comment-24087318-20140101065747

Aura doesn't posess the ability to heighten eyesight and reflexes, those abilities are done by Semblances. That being said, a Semblance would do either one of these things, but not both. (Rubys Semblance only does Speed)

In addition, regardless of where his abilities come from, having above average capasity in multiple areas (Strength, Speed, Reflexes) ends up coming off as overpowered. The character as strengths in all areas, even for his age, wether he's 38 or 15, it makes bad character. (If you played Pokemon, even Team Rockets boss got beaten by a kid.)

That being said, the Children of Grimm element to this character...the organization is completely canon breaking. They're too powerful, and have a reach and influence that would interfere in Canon events.

As well, it's highly paradoxical that a cult based around the idea that the monsters that have been plaguing humanity for as long as anyone can remember as the worlds hope and salvation would manage to aquire so many sane, important and powerful people to even spread this far. (Compare with the Children of Atom from Fallout 3, They have a VERY similar premice, being a Cult that worships atomic bombs for the death they spread. They're basically confined to one town, and are only tolerated because they helped found the town, even most of the residents dismiss them as hopeless fanatics)

As such, due to this organizations immense power, authority, and the interferance with the canon both give, I cannot accept any OC that involves them until it is fixed and toned down as well.

Due to the above points, for both the Character, and the Children of Grimm organization, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~