Thread:McKringles/@comment-24617443-20160104134908

As you can guess it, I have a few notes about the OCs that you borrowed. Of course I know you won't be able to copy them exactly but I thought I'd just say it for the sake of it and if we may RP together again in the future and you may happen to use my OCs again for something.

(But really I'm doing this because I wanna do it so :v)

Firstly, almost all of the... inconsistensies I guess, are of Summer and let me say this right off the bat. I purposely made her to be the confusing, nice sometimes, and rude on others type of character. Also, I very much expected that you would make a few small (but for me obvious) mistakes with her.

One, she's usually silent and usually uses her facial expression to show her reactions to others and won't speak unless she needs to. She's pretty much indifferent in terms of reaction too, and shows the same or even less amount of emotions that Akiba.

Two, she's a hardcore "military enthusiast" and loves acting like a soldier, hence her loyalty to her teammates and even Estelle because Akiba said so. Her loyalty shows no bounds as long as someone she trusts gives her the A-OK.

And lastly, which is what Browning just went through, is that she is very defensive when people question her course of action and especially her morals. She pretty much said it herself so I won't be saying that here but she's prepared to question or downright berate anyone, even her allies, who directly questions or looks down on her beliefs.

Oh yeah, then there's the one little mistake with Douglas. He calls people below his age or rank as "kid", and is very lax in terms of speaking. Think about a care-free, laid-back, and somewhat childish friend talking to you, and that's how he talks. Though he will get serious at times, but in your posts case its not that much. Oh yeah, he's quite cranky when it comes to listening to the higher-ups, like a teen grudging over his teacher.

So yeah, I just built this wall of text for the sake of me doing something. But then I do hope that we can get into more RPs together, that's no lie, so this is also for convenience in the future but that's it for now.

Oh yeah, its good that you posted! I thought you flaked out or something happened. Good thing that's not the case. 