User blog:Rezuko/WIP Weapon Idea Help

Hello, I finished Trigun recently and I made a weapon with a similar idea of Nickolas D. Wolfwood's Punisher, unfortunately I have no OC tied to it yet due to I have no idea who I could use (though I will be using it with an OC when I figure it out cuz I love the weapon)...anyways if you could help me find any errors, oddities or anything of the like it would be very appreciated.

(still a WIP so its not completely ironed out yet)

Here's the weapon...

Sinner's Redemption

Class: Holy Chain Revolver Rifle (HCRR)

Metal Type: Lightweight Onyx Steel Alloy

Description: Sinner's Redepmtion looks like a giant black metal cross with the words "Sinner's Redemption" etched on the each side of horozontal cross section of the cross.

Note: Sinner's Redemption (or just Redemption for short) is usually wrapped in bright red cloth, and secured by a white leather single strap and gold buckle

Sword: When trasformed the top part of the cross splits aparts and sinks into the middle of the cross exposing a handle for the use of two hands, at the bottom of the handle is a kunai like ring handle. as the bottom splits open, so does the longest peice of the cross, which like the bottom splits open and folds into the middle, exposing the long square broadsword like blade with a cylinder tube going down the middle of the blade.

Gun: By spinning the inner part of the large kunai ring, the middle of the cross splits in half and slides apart revealing a circular trigger guard and the automatic like pistol firing mechinism for the gun, directly above that is a slot that opens up revealing a rather large revolver cylinder, the sword then splits apart allowing the barrel to be able to fire safely, the gun uses a specially calibered round, which is a high impact variant of the .308 Rifle round. When a revolvers chamber is completely emptied, the gun ejects the cylinder from the slot to the side of the firing mechanism and a new fully loaded cylinder replaces it from the smaller horizontal cross sections, the weapon is then ready to fire again.

Note: Each side of the horizontal cross secton holds 10 cylinders for a total of 21 cylinders and 126 rounds total (there is always one cylinder in the chamber)

Note: Most of the case is hollow (like the bottom and top part of the cross) and is only used as a carrying case to reduce weight.

Pros:

Weight is used to increase the power of attacks. Enemies can't use weapon against weilder (due to the fact they wouldn't be able to handle it properly.

Cons:

Still pretty heavy even with weight reduction Hard to keep under control unless extensive training and conditioning has been underwent.