Talk:Sen Ye/@comment-26104528-20171111070125

Backstory and Personality are missing a number of things. What's this dark side of him all about, especially if you've based him off Dr. Jekyll and a 4 sentence Backstory will not cut it. I really don't have much more to say other than: write more.

Semblance's absorb bit needs limiters. You're not seriously going to try and submit an OC who can eat a nuclear bomb can you? The shiled bit would also benefit from one. I get that it's sort of a '1-and-done' deal but still: no invincibility semblances and the writing here is really implying that.

Rejected.

-RP Moderation Team-