Talk:Chorna Bomba/@comment-26104528-20170407012909

The backstory has jumps that I'd like to see fixed. How'd she go from mistralin criminal to atlesian soldier?

Again, it's fine that you've told me some kind of limiter on the semblance. City-sized shield is a no-go, but a limit that's in more practical territory would work even better. I dunno, tell us the overall stats of a shield the size of the average minivan.

Everything else has been fixed, and this character is quite close but for now...

Rejected.

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