Talk:Darcy Sewig/@comment-13593058-20160228061336

 A Review of  Darcy Sewig

Appearance
Nothing technical to note. Faunus trait established. Appearance does not interfere with Fanon Rules. No additional comments.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rule followed.

Semblance does not contradict Fanon Rule.

No significant comment on fighting style.

Side note, further explaination of Dust usage would greatly improve understandablity of fighting capablities. Ice Dust application noted but others were not. Not grounds for rejection but only minor clarity.

Backstory
Nothing worthy to note. No contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and source checks out.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- Nothing, move along.

Review Summary
Ah, sheep Faunus, refreshing. I'll be honest, I only got to this character after seeing her photo in the gallery. Stroke of luck? Perhaps.

There's nothing structural wrong with the charater, I quite enjoy her concept. However, if there was one thing I could change, it would be the origin of her weapon. Yes being a student of Signal would explain it but like everything else, why does your character prefer a claw weapon? Her backstory doesn't really explain it nor does her personality. It's not a very big deal but does add a bit of extra deph to the character.

Other than that, good job. I really did enjoy reading this.

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