Thread:JayHart/@comment-26362067-20151001023730/@comment-25857155-20151002013842

I did not really see anything wrong with her background, though you could probably stand to combine a few of the paragraphs and maybe divide it into sub-sections to make it easier to read. Her weapons are fine - after all, Silver Artemis uses Dust arrows as well.

You may want to mention that she uses the blades sparingly, or something - or maybe she's not as good with them as the bow, or just mention the delay in switching between weapons. Y'know, something to show that she's not Legolas. =P

I think she's fine, though her semblance seems a bit - it works, just not quite with her character, I guess? I dunno. Seems fine to me overall, though.