Thread:PisceanWaterbender/@comment-34796241-20190927015917

I want to request a review, so I can get some help with a story I'm helping an author get on here. Specifically, I need help grasping how to properly balance a semblance. If there's any other problems with it you can see so far, that's the reason I'm asking. If I have to get more in depth, I would like to talk on Discord about it for something more private. If you do review it and help me, thank you in advance. 