Talk:Colson Ebony/@comment-25924729-20190702135343

HOLY SHITE! This has been in pending since April. Sorry it took so long. DX

Appearance is the only real problem on this page. Faunus can only have one trait, whereas he has bat wings and ears, one of them will have to be removed.

Personality and backstory are alright. It actually caught me off guard, seeing he's a generally cheerful and positive dude. Its kind of a trope/wiki joke that bat faunus and bone themed weapon OCs are kinda gloomy, edgy types. He's definitely unique.

Weapon is pretty cool. Cool name, and clubs are also pretty rare, always good to see one. Semblance is good, well balanced limits and all. A bit of a waste imo, since you can technically make that just a faunus ability if he has bat ears and have a different ability as a semblance. But if you wanna keep this its fine.

CNR checks out. Uh... what do you mean "This character is roughly based off of the character"? Is that an incomplete senence or error? Might wanna fix it. Relationship setions are good, no other issues found.

Overall a very good character. Just minor things in his Appearance section to fix. Nice work, and sorry this review took so long :)

Rejected.

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