User blog comment:Rukatin/OC Help/@comment-24286038-20131227080629

Alright I'll weigh in and contribute my 2 cents. Feel free to ignore me or just use bits and pieces of what I suggest.

Your biggest issue with Fridolf seems to just be the bone armor and some plot holes. For the bone armor the easiest way to fix it would just be to change what kind of bone it is. The characters father was an actual hunter so any real life animal could serve and a replacement (if you wanted you could even use bones from multiple sources) the key here is that it just can't be a grimm bone because we don't know how their bodies work exactly.

Then the backstory, the only way I can think to keep basically the entirety of your story and still be approved is to explain the group that adopted the character was a splinter of the White Fang. The distrust of humanity is the core concept of said group, so some would want to raise an unbiased child and others would want to use their enemies children against them. The papers are another matter that can go about 6 different ways, your character could have had fakes made, he could have stolen them from someone else, the faunus that raised him could have sent him to said combat school, the list goes on.

Again just my thoughts and opinions feel free to use or ignore them as much as you like.