Thread:EvergreenLeaf/@comment-2193950-20160214050250/@comment-2193950-20160228212033

I've decided as a parting gift to tell you what would have happened in my story since I doubt it will ever be written now. Think of it as a parting gift.

Twisting Bedlam Soul
After Twisting Bedlam Soul: 10. Stormy May Day, they would have to confront Bors Viorel and his machine, then after defeating him they would have to fight Lionel Auriel and the remaining Discordia Assassins. It would have been revealed that Arthur Royce went insane after learning that his brother in law ordered a hit on him and instead got his wife killed. Learning that his wife was taking Ichor and confronting his brother in law he would learn he was in the pocket of "Phantoms".

Despite learning this he kills him anyway, the loss of his friends, his wife, and learned that a close friend was the cause made him snap. He develops the ideology (after thinking over his wife's last words which were "Change the world") he developed the philosophy that trying to make peace failed to even help the world and that in order to accomplish his wife's last world and free it from "Phantoms" he would make a world of Discordia where the flames of Chaos would forge heroes and from its shadows villains would arise but this forever war would mean that people would find their own ways of life that made their lives and deaths matter the most.

Rosso and the rest of Team ROSA would oppose that, even with Rosso being as battle hungry as she is, she refuses to let innocent people get caught up in the Hell that Arthur is trying to make. Arthur would then unveil "the Indrajit", Discordia's crowning achievement, a Kaiju sized bipedal mech with weaponry and ancient Vaciar technology to annihilate anything that it came across, the kicker being that it was no the only one and that if it reached a certain threshold it activate the thousands of other machines buried beneath Remnant to destroy any semblance of Order. Team ROSA and Team NILA would have worked together to destroy the mech (though I hadn't planned on how yet but doesn't matter now).

Rosso would have confront Arthur afterward attempting to stop him peacefully as he was her mentor, Arthur would then unveil that he had a backup plan, he would have place large amounts of Ichor (which is highly mutative) around the world and in key locations it would go off and turns certain cities into warzones. His blade the "Excalibur" would have be shown to have properties that make it similar to the "Holy Moonlight Blade" from Bloodborne, he would show his semblance which is a cross between Mukai from King of Fighters and Senator Armstrong from MGR (it would have acted like instant armor when he got hit but it would of had yellows veins and a rock like texture). The fight is tough but Rosso stands proud in the end. Arthur would tell her how to safely stop the bombs, he would then die after Rosso would stab him in the chest with his own sword. His last words would be for her to find the Phantoms and stop "His World". Rosso would be melancholy over having to kill a father figure regardless if it saved the world or not.

The story ends with Rosso at a loss of what to do but with convincing from the rest of her team, with even Amethyst speaking ala a Silent Bob Moment, and the rest of Team NILA they would travel to find out who these Phantoms are and how to stop them.

It would have a stinger where Arthur would speak to Carunt Ash about his plans and Ash would tell him that his success or failure wouldn't concern him as Discordia was a stepping stone for The Fantomas Organization.

Unknown Title
Two detectives are investigating Fantomas, it has the front of a charity organization but Melania Spade has a feeling there is more to them then after she directly correlates this organization with her losing memory of a year of her life.

After much investigating and fighting badguys they would learn that Carunt wanted to obtain a device that would have pulled meteorites out of orbits to obtain their dust so that he can use in his next plan. But before he can do any of that he wishes to rule Remnant (I don't know how yet but the song remains the same it don't matter now). It also would have been revealed that Mr. Ash is impossibly old, he was there when humanity discovered the wheel and fire, Dust and Ichor, it would have been revealed that he was this old via Soul Transfer where he would prepare someone for a ritual where his soul would transfer to a new body and it would shred the sacrifice's soul outright (very Master Xehanort inspired).

After they defeat him it would have led to a stinger that his robot caretaker "Mr. Gold" is actually a shell, what was in it was "Ash's Perfect Vessel". After years of experimentation, Spade's DNA, Ichor, very black magic, and the knowledge of centuries, Gold would have been his younger, stronger, true self that would be able to sustain the power that he had in his soul that was weakened due to weak vessels.

The Finale
This plot is very bare bones as I was going to form this later down the road as the grand finale and intended end of writing for this site (I would still make characters but no more stories). It would have been a big crisis crossover, with every main character up to this point working together to finally stop Carunt Ash.

There would have been the "Lords of Ichor", people that attempted to unlock god like power via Ichor but became monsters under The Great Leader's control.

There would have been a great reveal where Ash would have been the story equivalent of "The Nome King" from Oz. They would have fount a giant mountain sized monster guardian awaiting for Ash to fully tap into his god like power (with influences from Chernabog, The Nome King from Return of Oz, and Malus from Shadow of the colossus). Then there would have been a battle against his semi-powered form that would have unveiled the Lord of Ichor.

Finally there would have been a Father Balder like fight in his true form as our heroes had to fight him as his power started to influence the world (like before the final battle of Assassin's Creed 1). Then they beat him by sending him into space somehow and then there would have been some sort of happy ending (I never thought that far ahead).

Back to reality
I would have thanked everyone and told them that it wouldn't be the end but now it seems like a lie in hindsight.

That is how it all would have went, I'm sorry for this how long this turned out but if I don't get it down here now, you would have never seen this. So that is my last writing for this site, I hope you like my last gift and sadly I'll leave you alone forever now.