Talk:Yuri Burakku/@comment-27743663-20161215024310

CNR checks out, just note you're relating you're relating the Lily in her name to pink down in trivia too, since not many people look at the Charbox

Appearance is fine.

Personality is fine.

Backstory is passable.

Weapons are fine, the 3 is still there with only 2 listed.

Semblance isn't. For starters, a 10 second cooldown for a smoke-screen that covers 40 ft is too little. Raise it. Aside from that, making the smoke out of thin-air is a no,. To give a brief explanation, it would require chemical science that requires energy to break the bonds and rearrang them on atomic level, and there is no pure carbon in the air to do that since carbon is solid at room temperature. It also takes about 6,500 degrees fahrenheit to change its state, so not happening.

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

- Semblance

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