Thread:Crimsonalloy/@comment-25851029-20141214200534

Was wondering if you by chance had time to provide a review before I humbly place my OC in front of the firing squad that is the highers that be (aka, official review. Feels like Al would be getting out of prison...). I read that you provide two different reviews, and while I would like the entire thing to flow well (the grammar mistakes, what doesn't fit right to be noted, etc.) I don't quite know if I want the tier 2 review (where does it show up? Email? Message board? Bottom of the sheet?) I thankfully have just received a sheet makeover by ThanhnuFia (and gotten the Alias to work in the FanCharBox, now I just have to trim that down so it's short and to the point). Beyond all that mumble, would you per chance have time to "provide critical thinking" about Algernon Rusting? Most of the sheet is sadly written in basic information mode (like an RPG sheet with limited space, almost like a DET report) hence the worry for the Michelle review (it will most likely fail all formats, APA, MLA, you name it. I didn't think to expand the writing so it flows into a story, mainly because the story should come AFTER the character is made). Would you be able to pick it apart and see if it has any discrepancies? 