Talk:Summer Astraea Aurora/@comment-17970636-20151123064035

Alrighty then, fine OC, just a few issues I noticed.

Although it's more than likely there are people with the same name in the RWBYverse (or at least on here, the amount of people with the name "Jade", having a name close to a canon character's name seems kinda iffy for me right now. Not sure if there's a rule against it, just my own personal gripe.

Moving on, seeing as how heavy her entire setup would be, it seems unlikely that she is built for a "hit and run" kinda tactic and more of a slow heavy hitter, even with the hoverboard functionality, just doesn't seem like she has the speed for it.

How did her adoptive father find out that he was responsible for throwing the grenade? It doesn't seem unlikely, just something that needs to be elaborated on.

Other then that, she's Gucci, have fun.