Talk:Alabaster Heart/@comment-24087318-20140909064023

Ears wern't changed from previous review, still issue that needs to be addressed.

Semblance is alright, but could use specification of how large the glyphs are, and where he can place them. It seems potentially overpowered if he can just place one right under his opponents feet, and while they're unable to move, finish them off before the fight even starts.

One key thing to think about is while certain abilities are cool and all, think about them from an RP perspective. If things allow what's essentially god-modding and auto-hitting, it's not fun to be on the other end of that, and it's more than a little overpowered if they're able to end a fight before it starts, even if the Semblance has a drawback that limits its use.

Sometimes you only need to use it once anyways.

Rejected

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