Talk:Leonidas Flameheart/@comment-24262164-20140113173708/@comment-24262164-20140114062110

TorrentAB is right to some extent, in my opinion. What you're suggesting here is plausible and in that sense there's nothing wrong. However, I don't feel convinced that you've properly writen such a character. Like I said, I think that there will be a break down, and I wonder if you are able to either write it or avoid it. I review expecting more complete characters, so maybe you still have a break down in store for this character and just havn't written it; however, until you do I'll maintain this point.