Talk:Rouge Vulpes/@comment-24087318-20131215092743

Character does have a few points so far that need work.

There's contradiction in the Personality section, having him described as carefree and reckless, but strategic and calculating in battle, and then focuses on brute strength? It seems to whiplash between fighting smart and fighting strong, contradictorily.

In addition, being a Faunus has not been shown to provide any sort of boosts to sensory perception other than night vision, regardless of their animal counterpart. They also don't have a "bloodlust" trigger when near death.

His Semblance requires more elaboration, why wouldn't he just use fire dust to achieve the same effect? What are the differences and limitations?

Also, at the age of ten, it's not likely that a group of children would manage to take down a Beowolf. Lack of training, weaponry, and knowledge.

Given the combination of the above, Rejected.

(If character is still a work in progress like the header says, I'd suggest not placing them into the Pending category. That's reserved only for OCs that are finished and awaiting review.)

~RP Moderation Team~