Talk:Ardon Pepper/@comment-27743663-20161122230020

While he's noted to be a faunus, his trait isn't. Fix that and he's good, rejected.

Also while you're at it, I would recommend raising the cool-down up of his semblance up to 3 minutes, but that's up to you. Faunus senses aren't really a thing either, the only thing they get is their physical trait and night-vision. Backstory is cut off as well, last sentence fourth paragraph.

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