Talk:Antares Trinity/@comment-24573568-20141215234211

Okay, there's still a lot of issues here.

Firstly, it's kinda difficult to state "Pandora is a place that had a civil war", when the only known kingdoms are Vale, Vacuo, Atlas, and IForgetTheOtherOne, and the other settlements are just basically villages. A village isn't exactly a place for Civil War. It's kinda impossible to teach one how to fight before they can walk

Also, "No one cared/helped" is a bit out of place for the setting. RWBY isn't one of those settings where seeing a guy bleeding out and ignoring him is totally plausible. Speaking of which, his being able to travel that far and not die from blood loss after a presumably rather harmful shanking is kinda just no, and wouldn't his aura stop the stabbityness?

See above about the team thing, unless the base was like in the wilds or whatevs. And why the living helldragonsnakes would a doctor let a patient leave before healing like that?! That's like, #1 rule of Doctor Stuffs!

It's a bit odd that he believes Grimm have aura and yet goes and teaches people to go kill them genocidally (in his mind, probably). Also, why the FudgeNuggets does he believe such at thing?!