Talk:Hitori Kazami/@comment-24678303-20150511171732

Once more, the Semblance is WAY too OP. Again, an 8 year old being able to INSTANTLY kill an attacker is too edgy and I for one thing that it would have had a VERY profound effect on his emotional stability. Plus, the Semblance being able to stretch out HALF A MILE from the starting point is out of the question in every way, shape and form. Half a mile is about 805 meters. That is EIGHT football fields. That’s a longer range than most small arms. Even if his Semblance was acceptable in the first place, this is NOT okay. Tone it WAY down to, say 10 meters.

Moving on to why his Semblance wouldn’t be acceptable in the first place, it doesn’t seem to have any sort of limiters on it. It doesn’t say how fast it goes, so I’m assuming it’s an auto-hit, which is a big nono, it can be used on its own as a weapon (and an OP one, at that), can be used as shield and use minimal Aura? Wow, talk about godmodding to the max with this.

Basically, that whole thing needs reworking. Having it able to bind/immobilize opponents would probably count as godmodding, since when it is used on someone, it takes away all ability for them to move.

As for the backstory, seriously, stop trying to have an EIGHT YEAR OLD kill some intruder instantly with his Semblance, because that ain’t gunna fly.

On a related note;

“He can move when using his Semblance, allowing for a rapid amount of unavoidable hits."

Uhh, no. If your character is moving that fast and able is able to hit opponents without giving them any sort of chance to move or otherwise defend themselves, it needs a major nerf.



Rejected for all of the above.

~RP Moderation Team~