Talk:Vienna Stahlern/@comment-17970636-20160107072621

You state that she breaks bones and can easily pin people to walls by their necks, the pinning thing is fine, just, makes her sound super-freaking strong. And the breaking of teeth, people in RWBY have aura that's powerful enough to endure blades against skin and shotgun blasts at point-blank range. I doubt she'd be able to break a hunter in training's teeth so easily as is implied but at the same time you're being vague with who's teeth she breaks and if she does so at all.

It's a minor clarification issue so it should be easy to fix, regardless.

Rejected.

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