Thread:JackWasup/@comment-13488655-20170813053250/@comment-25363089-20170904034200

Alright! :3 An just like that she is ready for Pending! I think. I might have to redo her backstory a bit; Which is fine. I'm gonna go over it one last time. Do a double check make sure everything is where it should be and if it makes sense. When i read it out loud. Backstory is generally where i get ding with reviews i either miss something or don't give the right time frame. Like with their age and stuff. With Rosetta I see her growing up a little bit in Vacuo hence her dark skin and her outfit. She was breed for the desert life. But Mom wanted better for her and what better place than Vale.

An well when she met Margrit they were basicly two fish out of the water. Both outsiders to a new world kind of thing. Margrit pratically raised in the forest of Vale; Thus hardly any interaction with humans or faunus. Rosetta Born in Vacuo but got ship off to Vale. An well knew nothing but the wilds of the deserts and well fighting.