Talk:Elle Rosu/@comment-24012109-20140824192456

Curiously, why is the font so huge for those two paragraphs?

However, I have to things to talk about: Her history and her semblance. Firstly, we do know that people do get into Beacon without going to a pre-training school, but the way you convey it vexes me as it is a VERY rare occurence. Think of it as passing those preliminary college tests without even going to high school for the knowledge- Extremely rare that someone would pass it by themselves. Ozpin even noted that as he talked to Blake about how she was so well trained on the streets to handle it, so some seriously good exposition would clear that up aside from just training aimlessly.

Secondly, her semblance needs parameters. What can she do with the lightning she can control? Is it actual lightning (Energy), or is it just specifically Lightning Dust? You did give a time of use and recharging, but how much is her limit, and does it strain her in those seconds? It needs fleshing out to give people a better idea of what they're dealing with.

Rejected on thus grounds for now.

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