Thread:EvergreenLeaf/@comment-24261143-20160224170550

Acknowledging the updated guidlines, I understand that whole deal about summoning-based Semblances, which is why I want to ask you this concerning that rule. I'm planning on creating a Semblance for one of my OCs, which is the one below if considerations might be made: (If any staff sees this, you may also answer it in place of Leaf) (Apologies if this is too long, BTW. I needed to describe thoroughly).

Serpent's Shadow - Itzcoatl materializes an illusionary shadow serpent with red eyes. To activate this Semblance, he commonly throws his chain forward with his arm and hand held out, then his eyes glow black that causes the chain he threw to become that shadow serpent that allows more damage. To note, the chain is inside the snake. When grappling by wrapping the chain on anything or anyone, the generated shadow snake would not coil around but bite onto it. Opening/closing the snake's mouth is the job for Itzy's hand. Alternatively, if he wants to enhance his chain whipping via Semblance, the shadow becomes a snake's tail instead of the head. After using his Semblance in an attack or not, it dissipates shortly after.

The Semblance, however, is very limited and fragile. Using it repetitively, continuously or constantly puts a lot of strain on an arm he's using due to the ability being somewhat "powerful" to control. Moreover, the shadow serpent can easily be dissipated when Itzy is bumped or attacked unexpectedly (or shot sharply on any part of his body, impaled, pierced, etc.); and since the shadow serpent is illusionary and needs a solid whip-like object (i.e. the chain) to maintain form, anything can remove/interrupt/break the chain (Note: chain is breakble and its length limited) within from its side will cause the serpent to dissipate, too. Frankly, the serpent doesn't easily dissipate when using it while whipping (although hurting Itzy still works) and its head is somewhat solid (since it technically hits).

I'd appreciate seeing an answer, opinions, or suggestions about the Semblance above. I didn't put the Semblance in his page yet 'cause I want to be sure. Thanks in advance. 