Talk:Atratus Vulturas/@comment-13593058-20160811193005

 Atratus Vulturas Review

Appearance
Nothing technical to note.

Personality
 Point of personality made.

Weapons and Abilities
 Weapon rule followed.

 Semblance is vague in terms of how an object is marked for teleportation. Grounds ofr rejection.

Backstory
 Unlikely, but passable.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced acknowledged.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Semblance details

Review Summary
I will flat out say that teleportation Semblances are my least favourite as they are really easy to abuse even with any sort of limit. In this case, while there is a reasonable 2 minute cooldown, the sound of instant teleportation does not sound very good to me as it's still a guarenteed dodge at one point or another. However, since some sort of teleportation is allowed, if you include how an object must meet conditions to be teleported to, I can let it pass.

The backstory is kind of strange considering how criminal you described his enemies to be, why would his enemy dismiss and then nurture him for just saving his wife's wallet? Doesn't make much sense.

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