Talk:Terra Shade/@comment-30530552-20180228022431

Alrighty, here we have Terra...

CNR, no issues there.

Appearance and Personality are fine.

Weapons section, while just a pair of kusarigama is fine, I would appreciate some description of the limits of the weapon. How far can they reach? Any differentiating features to tell they're hers? What can she use them for? Stuff like that. That way, it would lengthen the section so that it doesn't seem unnecessary.

I'll assume her Semblance would extend to 'normal' crystals as well, even if it's not listed. That threat also BETTER be just that, a threat. While feasibly possible, I do think that preposition's a little strong to be realistic within the scope of the universe we've been shown currently. Regardless, considering the overall lack of availability in most environments, I'd say her Semblance is pretty close to balanced despite carrying around a source with her, it just might need an "effort" sort of thing to add to it. I'd also like at the very least a "theoretical" description of the possible effects of manipulating a Dust crystal, since in roleplay not having that information means you could "ex machina" your way out of situations without effort, which isn't fun for anybody.

Hmm, so is Shade her real last/family name? Hmm. Interesting backstory, although what you're presenting currently is that she lived alone for 4 years, training in a Signal-level Huntsman/Huntress Academy. I doubt she had enough money to last until then...perhaps make it so that she was able to earn room and board through an agreement of some sort? Aside from that, backstory is fine.

Overall, Semblance just needs a couple more details, and the one backstory issue fixed, and once that happens you'll be good to go.

-Rejected for now.

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