Talk:Máni Sveinbarn/@comment-13593058-20160806224255

 Máni Sveinbarn Review

Appearance
Nothing technical to note.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Semblance is kind of iffy. Grounds for rejection.

Backstory
Nothing worthy to note. No contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour reference acknowledged but name should be used.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Semblance complication

- Rule side-stepping

Review Summary
Colour name rule should apply unless there is a good story reason not to use his colour name. A name being easier to say is not a good reason for switching names.

Controlling reflected light seems rather pointless to me as you might as well control actual light and achieve the same thing. However, the application here seems too strong with no reasonable counter.

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