Board Thread:Role Plays/@comment-7497475-20131210110217/@comment-7497475-20131213082335

(something to avoid is autohitting. For example how you said Wolfe threw Arian over his shoulder. Ideally you should say  "He saw an opening in Arian's attacks, then aimed to use her momentum to throw her over his shoulder"  This shows what you aim to do, but allows your opponent to show how their OC would react and fair against yours. I've found the best way to layer each post is;

Your reaction to theirs, what damage you take, if any. How you avoid it, thoughts about the move etc.

Then I try to put in what your OC thinks about this, whether they are doing well, how their opponent is. It's a good time to have them think about a plan, or changing something.

Then what your character does, what attacks they aim for, attacks they attempt to land and so on.

Other than that, nice posts.)

Arian rolled to her feet, not expecting the throw. Her shoulder was sore from hitting the ground, but didn't impede her fighting.

This guy isn't half bad, then again, I am not a stellar example of melee skill.

She could see anything to give her an advantage, though if she could get some distance that could give her the upper hand. Darting in, Arian aimed for his foot, then brought the staff up, hoping to catch his chin. Planting the tip of Silver's Edge behind her, she flipped over backwards. Pressing an indent, the staff transformed. Suddenly, she was holding a bow and ready to use it. Quickly placing a standard broadhead on the string, she pulled it back. Lining up his shoulder in her sight, her fingers slipped from the string, the arrow released at it's target.