Board Thread:Role Plays/@comment-8182065-20161103082555/@comment-8182065-20170209102007

"Can you remember anything else?" Mason urged him to continue. Raine had struggled to speak, shaking his head as though there was nothing more he could say. "Please, there are many civillians that have been taken by the Coven of Lost Souls. Some are even close friends of ours."

Raine had then taken a deep breath. "From what I can recall there's... an initiation of some sort. Essentially, trying decide who would live, and who would be fed to the Grimm," there were a lot of painful memories trying to surface in his mind, but he did his best to fight them off for the time being. The last thing he needed was to have a mental break down. "Those who pass the test, get a front row seat to getting hypnotized into working for the bastards."

"I can only imagine how tough it must have been..." Amy sympathized with Raine. ''So, that means most of their henchmen are innocent. They're all being used as puppets...''

(I would say no. If you think that there is something lacking about your OC's, just do a bit of revision. What got you thinking that idea anyway? o.o)