Talk:Adrian Topper/@comment-24087318-20141014071325

Alone isn't really a color. And Team Names also fall under the RWBY name guidelines.

His Semblance of shadow manipulation is a little overpowered, having multiple abilities and all that. Try to cut it down to one with multiple similar uses, and/or tone down the general power of its defence, since it can protect his ENTIRE TEAM for two whole minutes. Which... Shadows arn't exactly tangible...things would kinda just go right through them. So why would they even inflict damage or act as a barrier? What's the process there?

Rejected

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