Thread:DustpeltX/@comment-30114113-20161002045342

Thank you for your review. I would like to establish that the following is not intended to sound hostile, only factual and polite. I would also like to apologize that I failed to make a decent profile the first time. The reference materials were accessible and numerous. I've no excuse.

I can't say I enjoyed rejection, but hey... only rejection leads to improvement.

So I'd like you to take another look now that I've fixed some things. Namely the age and faunas traits.

However, I feel your judgment of my backstory was incorrect. It was complete enough to be getting on with and I plan to add the details once I see her in action. The same goes for the personality. Without seeing her in action, it's difficult for me to describe her personality.

Please note that I have no intention of making her mysterious. In fact, I'm confident that she's quite the opposite. Neither do I intend to make her overpowered.

I await your response with eagerness.  