Thread:Ragadorus/@comment-28257386-20140804214320

OK, so I saw your review, and theres a part I really don't get.

So, one of your reasons for the rejection was that the backstory was "unfinished" simply because I didn't specifically mention him attending Beacon, even though I labeled him as a Beacon student. Why exactly is that such a problem? I included all the important or interesting parts of his backstory that led up to him attending Beacon. I don't see what the problem is. I didn't bother mentioning him attending Beacon because he's supposed to be just a first year who just got off the airship. There isn't much to say other than "He graduated Signal and is now attending Beacon." 