Talk:Carmot Arken/@comment-31408668-20190304034650/@comment-31408668-20190312205629

Good on you for taking the review so well. As for your notes, here are some answers;

The detail and such can stay on this page, it was more a note to make you aware that it might seem long, which can sometimes be a bit hard to get through if someone wants to get to know you character.

There is no problem related to Carmot's placement in the Vytal Festival. The "minor problems" part refers to the section as a whole. If you look at the other sections, they all have a "no problems here" or "no major problems". This is an indicator for me and other reviewers to know where there might be problems with a character. So don't worry about this one.

As for the Semblance... I don't know. Considering how unanimous the decision was to reject it, I would recommend trying something else.