Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-24296957-20150113152446/@comment-26388029-20150114051325

Hmm. Something different. Okay, let's do this.

Breyal Yoland

...Searched ALL over the nets for the "breyal" gemstone. Only thing I found in Google images was this:

https://www.google.com/search?q=Breyal+gemstone&espv=2&biw=1920&bih=955&nfpr=1&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ei=_da1VJDcC4_-yQSh_4DICg&ved=0CAcQ_AUoAg

If you're going to put in a not-well known term, you'll need to put in a reputable source of where it says it's a gemstone.

Additionally, I don't see any mention of a Faunus trait on this character. While the rules don't SPECIFICALLY state that Faunus MUST have a trait, I have not seen a Faunus in the show without one. Unless I am mistaken, this will need to be remedied.

Semblance could be iffy, but with the limits in place, no issue there. Apart from this, and due to the issues above,

Rejected.

Chloe Chroma

While I did search up the meaning for this, and while it does make sense, the name meaning isn't included in the Trivia, and not everybody would just go searching for the meaning of an OC's name. I would say that this needs to be fixed to clear up confusion.

Additionally, it says that Chloe is a Faunus. Of what type is not mention, although it could be inferred to be a Chameleon. Nevertheless, same problem as the first issue. Include the type of Faunus to clear up confusion. And if you do decide to do that, then be sure to establish what the trait is as well.

Funny how the issues here are incredibly similar.

Rejected.

Denver Verde

The only real gripe I have with Denver is his semblance, which is extremely similar to Weiss' semblance in terms of utility. Then again, people have made glyph semblances that have been accepted, so I guess I can't complain.

Accepted.

-Ray