Talk:Ragla Ermont/@comment-14090705-20140801203632

I'm sensing a bit of the standard warrior here.

Appearance: Like you said, "regal yet conservative". Her outfit seems like a modernization of Roman battle attire. Personally, I would make her a little heavier (muscle weight). Also, her emblem looks like five oranges in the shape of a star (not a critique, just an observation).

Personality: Typical for a warrior that has been through what she's been through. It's nice that she also has artistic likes. She seems to be the glue that holds the team together.

Weapons: Very unique in terms of functions. It is very rare to come across weapons that don't transform or have a ranged function, and even rarer to not to have both, yet it is just as effective as those that have both those functions. The weapons can also combine.

Abilities: Once again, very well balanced, but I would not consider her a tank. Her semblance could use some work. Maybe instead of simply protecting herself from fire, she could also engulf her body in it. Also, being a swordfighter, would she know Shahr'Kaii, a sword fighting technique that I created?

History: A warrior's journey. Pretty good, but not all that unique. What type of animal is the Grimm based on? Also, might want to go more in depth with the Deathstalker attack.