Talk:Clover Kojote/@comment-25924729-20181204022726

Pretty cool character, lots of interesting little bits all over the place.

Appearance, personality and backstory section are alright, nothing to note. She sounds like a creepy lady, in a fun, wacky way.

Abilities and semblance are alright. Really cool idea for a semblance really, though I kinda feel the wind and gravity Dust do the same thing, one of them may be redundant.

Her primary weapon is alright, versatile but well balanced enough, I do like the detailed descriptions of the hand gestures, adds a nice touch imo.

For her secondary weapons, you should specify how many bombs she can carry with her at all times. Do note there is a rule limiting the number of grenades an OC can carry as a secondary weapon to only 12 at a time. Since her bombs function similarly, they're subject to the same rule, maximum 12.

Last issue, the page lacks an explanation how her name relates to a colour. I mean, I understand how Clover is a valid name, but you must add it to the page regardless.

So yeah.... Only very minor issues with this character, very close to accepted. Good try.

Rejected.

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~RP Moderation Team~