Talk:Cobalt Richter/@comment-24678303-20151027181445

Okar, re-review. Let's get started.

Let's start with the age. He is 16, which is the minimum for Hunters/Huntresses when given a good reasoning as to why they were moved ahead two years, which i can't find at any point in the Abilities or Backstory. In fact, he looks about average in most regards. The most i can find is that he may have started a year or two early, which should not be the case. The usual age for people entering Signal (or the equivelant elsewhere) is 13, assuming the full term is four years, meaning they would get out at 17 at the least.

While on the topic of the Backstory, it says that he trained under the likes of Qrow. Canon/Fanon interaction is not allowed.

The Semblance is good, but not to that extent. While it can weaken some things, as stated, it is not allowed to create Earthquakes, no matter how small, as that would likely cause countless unwanted damage to the surrounding area.

Another reviewer also brought it to my attention that the weapons and gadgets count is too high. The weapon itself is fine, as are the workshop-type tools, but the grenades/mines are taking it too far in terms of firepower he has.

Aside from those, it seems alright, though i dicourage the use of the 3D Manuever Gear in your characters profile picture. While i am aware that it was made in an online character creator thing or whatever, i still very much discourage the use of pre-made weapons on the image, especially something so specific and recognizable as the 3DMG. While it is not an order to change it, it is my professional suggestion that you change it whenever you have something to replace it with or at your earliest convenience.

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~