Talk:Terrel Couronne/@comment-24262164-20140116165840

How I review

Interesting. You're character is fairly unobjectionable, with a solid background and feasable equipment.

The one point of contention on his history is that you say he started seriously studying how to defend himself in response to the bullies. However, he was also at a combat school so he would have already been studying combat. My point is that it seems like his combat skill wouldn't start increasing that much with the bullies.

His armor has an interesting feature. First of all, its the only armor that I don't feel bad accepting. I love it. You say it's made of a gold though. Like, real gold? Real gold is heavy and easily bent so not the best thing to make armor out of. I have a thought on how to make this work though, if you havn't thought of it yourself.

I was going to call out the weapon for being aimed against humans instead of grimm but I think I'd let it pass considering his history and the other uses for the steam.