Talk:Khione Vouno/@comment-27743663-20170902225024

CNR checks out.

Appearance is fine.

Personality is fine.

Backstory is fine.

Weapons are fine.

Semblance is the only problem I'd say. 50 feet just feels like too much, that pretty much covers the entirety of most of where you can fight. For a first year I'd feel more comfortable with something closer to 20 feet. With that as well, there's nothing noted about a duration, so could he just keep this up forever? Something like a limit is needed, especially for an AoE field that affects everyone. As a remainder though, don't forget that in team combat this will also affect his teammates as well or anyone else he's working with. Also, if you can, I'd give proximities of what actually defines the outer-ring and close enough to feel frigid is. The basic guess can be grasped, but it's moreso to help others to not ask in the future during RP's.

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

- Semblance range and duration.

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