Talk:Revan MacLeod/@comment-25151516-20130818164754/@comment-8182065-20130818170822

You missed one mentioning of dragon in his personality. Also you don't have to make your character based off of a fairy-tale, but so far he looks alright.

One thing I'm seeing though is that he deals deadly blows with both a katana and a bow. You might want to end up changing that because it leans toward a sort of OP (over-powered) character. The key is to make a character perfectly balanced in fighting skill compared to others. So maybe change/remove "fatal" from his Battle Style. Fatal, deadly, etc. are good descriptive words, but are best used for like a signature move in my opinion.