Talk:Rina Cooper/@comment-25924729-20191230105217

Pretty decent character, but has a few issues overall.

Appearance and personaliy sectionsa re alright, nothing to note there.

Backstory could use some more deails on crucial bits. How and why did she survive the Grimm attack when everyone around her was killed? Why did she become a huntress? There are the two important questions that need o be answered to understand the character's story and motivations, but more detals on other patrts of her backstory would be appreciated too.

Relationships section is fine.

Abilities and weapons sections are good.

Semblance has issues though. We dont allow transformation semblances, including transforming to mimic another person or object's appearance. You could keep the same effect, its all nicely balanced already but maybe change it to illusions or something? I also dont understand what you mean by human-faunus hybrids. If you mean the children of a human and faunus marriage that just makes them regular faunus or human, theres no such thing as hybrids in the show, that part should be rephrased or removed.

Lastly, name does not comply with CNR. Googling it shows that Rina means joy or melted depending on the language, but no colour can be derived from those. If there is a color connection somewhere you should explain it, otherwise please change her name to one containing a colour.

No other issues found. Good try, just some stuff needs to be fixed.

Rejected.

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