Talk:Cyzarine Bluthardt/@comment-EvergreenLeaf-20151129094743

Well written and interesting to read. The fact that she began her training from such a young age explains how she's developed so much in terms of her capabilties.

However, looking at her fighting style, regardless of how weak her body is as well as her conditions such as PTSD, colour blindedness etc, she seems a bit too perfect. And you allude to her being an engineer/hacker, however, no where in your backstory does it allude to when she was taught those disciplines. If it was in one of the links I apologize, I didn't take my time and read it through.

Moving on, interesting Semblance, however, it seems like you simply took Weiss' glyphs and turned her movement related abilities into your own. Not saying that's a bad thing, just how it appears to be from this perspective.

Yeah, other then that you have yourself a fine OC, have fun.