Talk:Celia Delon/@comment-25924729-20191227060120

Very simple character, but fine nonthe less.

Appearance, personality, relationships and backstory are all okay. Nothing much to note about them.

Abilities are fine. No semblance to review which is okay too.

I feel like her weapon could use a lot more detail and descirption. I cant even tell what kind of gun it is, let alone imagine a shape or how it can possibly work. Just calling it a gun can mean anything? Small pistol, rifle, minigun etc. You really should go into more detail about stuff like this. Its also advised to mention how many bullets the gun can use, to get a better idea how powerful it becomes when Dust is infused in.

As for her CNR... its a little loose? The connection being that the letters in the name and the colour are the same isnt really acceptable. Celia Delon does sound similar to Celadon so there is an argument there, and a quick googling tells me Celia means "heavenly", as in the sky. There could be a CNR found there too. either eay i suggets you use one of those instead as a CNR.

No other issues found. Just some small changes needed.

Rejected.

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~RP Moderation Team~