Talk:Black Weston/@comment-933831-20130816193441

I'm afraid this character doesn't really fit RWBY. Like... At all. The HFB and possibly the Nanosuit are blatant rips from Metal gear Rising, and dimmensional travel is not allowed. There's trying to exploit the setting, and then there's completely ignoring it. You don't even mention the RWBY universe, nor any of its components, such as Dust, or Beacon academy, two major staples of this roleplay. The main thing we're judging here is how well the character fits into setting, and this character doesn't fit at all. Additionally, the armor's second form is entirely overpowered, so please revise that. When you're done with the edits, resubmit to Pending.

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