Talk:Kurai Jack Jade/@comment-14295500-20130814064912/@comment-13488655-20130814083311

I'm sorry, I completely forgot about the artist image thing. Most parts of it (Due to my drawings always looking like chibis I rely on photoshop,) came from this book called 'shojo wonder manga art school', I think the artists namme is Supittha "Annie" Bunyapen, the city background I got from Google.

The appearance, I never thought about it like that.

I made him a cyborg because I couldn't decide if he should be a human or a fauna, and since it was already shown that the world of RWBY had advanced robotics I thought it would be a good idea.

The powers list, I thought this wasn't that much when I first got here, but I do see your point about the 'genius intellect'. Swordsman skills, I thought that him coming from a line of strong hunters would help that one out, the powers not working together thing, I'm not too sure about that, I've seen villans with over 40 powers and it worked. Skills of dust, I was pretty much just going to use air step. The copies, I was planning on putting a small time limit on them. As for him being a psychic, he isn't, M.A.D. is just only a firewall for the mind.

Personality section above the weapons section, good idea, but last time I edited the page I messed up the text and somehow removed the contents box. No true personality, I thought calm and composed was a personality, I even threw in a few more stuff in. Dark and mysterious loner, darn that's what I was hoping to avoid. I gave him men and an organization he respects to work side by side with him to avoid it.

Emotional connection, I have no idea how to do that.

Thank you for taking time to review my character, I'll try to see If I can make some ajustments to him.