Thread:Lazerninjastudios/@comment-13593058-20170522031058

Since you have about 6 OCs in pending, all of which have the same problems, the review team has decided to concentrate all outstanding issues into one page. The issues are as follows:

Meiyo Clan Enterprises

Supposed interational corporation that is essentially too big to exist without a definite mention in Canon. The rule of Fanon is not to separate our characters from Canon but rather have our characters blend in as part of the Canon world.

The presence of giant flying gunships; standalone, mass-produced military grade equipment; strong ties in the history of the Kingdom of Atlas; etc. presents itself as contradictions to the above rule of seamless integration into canon.

13 Brotherhood

Repeated problem of impossible integration into Canon as it contains clear ties to Meiyo Clan Enterprises property.

In addition, the true neutrality of this organization suggests an omniscient view on the ethics of the world, which by itself, is a paradoxical feat.

Contact and acceptance in the organization is too vague and unobtainable.

CHARACTERS

Lector Shockwave

- Lecter attempting to sound like Electric is too far of a stretch.

- Personality conflict, a robotic sense of function does not mesh with humour

- Acceptance and affliation with 13 Brotherhood not described well nor is it acceptable

- Dust Tattoos are not confirmed to exist nor are they confirmed to function

- Semblance has no limitations

Aero Windrider

-  Semblance has no limitations

-  Acceptance and affliation with 13 Brotherhood not described well nor is it acceptable

Sunset Pheoni

- Backstory assumes a well known legend/backstory already present in the entire kingdom of Vacuo

- effect of said legend affects far too many to not be noticed in Canon

-  Semblance has no limitations

- Acceptance and affliation with 13 Brotherhood not described well nor is it acceptable

Ao Terabyte

- Arm needs detailed explanaition of limits

- Number of secondary equipment exceeds maximum allowed

- Acceptance and affliation with 13 Brotherhood not described well nor is it acceptable

Orion Starblast

- Personality clashes with the values proposed by the 13 Brotherhood

- No mention of purpose or lasting effects of said experimentation in backstory

- Armour contructed by afromentioned inconsistent Meiyo Clan Enterprises

- provides too much utlity and offensive capabilities with little drawback nor a reasonable runtime

- presents itself more as a main weapon rather than a secondary

- Semblance has no limitations

- Acceptance and affliation with 13 Brotherhood not described well nor is it acceptable

Hachigo Burakku

- Elemental Style not described nor mentioned anywhere

- Backstory

- Includes issues still present and mentioned by u/Nice Things

- Affliation with 13 Brotherhood is it not acceptable

Conclusion

All character will be removed from pending and automatically rejectected until either affiliation with said factions are removed, or issues plaguing the factions themselves are rejected and reviews of characters affiliated with any other factions does not require additional reading of another page.  