Talk:Lucri Rellik/@comment-933831-20141210031053

Main issue I see is the... scale of the events in the backstory. Your character takes on an actually pretty major role in massive international conflict. Besides that, the White fang seem to not have opperations in Mistral, all their work focussed to Vale. Try to avoid making characters set if they could appear in the show, as well as factions, such as the "Top Mistral anti-terrorist group". Given how much of the show deals with terrorists, if they go to Mistral, chances are such a group will be mentioned. As such, Rejected.

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