Talk:Grau Faraway/@comment-13593058-20170901181343

 Grau Faraway Review

Appearance
Appearance present.

Personality
Personality present.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed. However, a more specifc operation time in terms of ammunition should be noted.

Semblance acceptable.

Backstory
Backstory is nice and compact.

Miscellaneous
 Colour reference noted.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- No contradictions

Review Summary
Normally I would hate most military-esque OCs but this one is nice and compact, which is nice for a change. The only thing I would change is to be more specific on how much Dust he carries to generate a finite about of ammo. Not rejectable, but a nice thing to note.

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