Thread:Fedorastorm/@comment-25363089-20180221015901/@comment-26104528-20180223060721

I'm not sure if some of these are going to be acceptable. As I've told a few new writers: semblances should be single function (relatively speaking), multiple use. Mid range seems ok, but long and close range are what bother me. The thing that sets me off is how you want it to form armor or weapons up close(regardless of time limit or 'bending') which is pretty far-fetched from a storm.

Long range is strange: dropping a fire dust 'grenade' on a guy is no joke and neither is a tornado that can lift 4000 pounds, but having this be in the same class as a glorified taser is kinda wonky to me.

By the way, what is the range of all of these? Can he sic storms on snipers hundreds of meters away? Can the storm be outrun by a peak human being? I'm not asking you for a physics dissertation, but I wouldn't skip on details like this.