Talk:Olympia Tremaine/@comment-10337166-20160928111333

Alrighty then so back to this again

Same sorta stuff strikes out at me, still seems to have 2 faunus traits. I need you to say her Faunus trait was her wings and is now the stumps of them. mention she has hair what color etc.

Weapon, need you to let me know what types of dust she commonly uses etc etc etc

As of recently a written appearance section is MANDATORY along with a basic outfit description. I'm also going to need you to add that to Pembe. No need to put her back in pending, just let me know when you do it.

As of right now Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~

Additional notes. Same sorta stuff really, your tropey faunus abuse is still there though it's an actual basis for the character rather than just thrown in. Is her movement basically an extreme white fang? Like they listen to Black Veil Brides, and Olympia listens to screamo. Some more description would be nice.