Talk:Pembe Aldemir/@comment-24416658-20160912001920

Pembe does work under CNR.

A basic outfit description is required without art present.

No issues really present with backstory.

Weapon needs more. How does she cast the attacks just by having dust? Usually, one needs to use their semblance to "cast" anything involving it.

Semblance has some issues. How much control over the smoke does she have, I.e. How many smoke clones? How well can she use it? Can she force smoke down someone's throat? Need more limits and explanations.

Rejected for above reasons.

--RP Moderation Team--