Talk:Ape Peela/@comment-27743663-20180323044125

So onto backstory, well, some gripes here and there but that's less relevant for a review. I will ask what on earth Biva Grimm are, since they seem preeeetty important, but oh well. Anyway. There's no exact listed year for Remnant, so saying 2001 isn't exactly helpful. I can assume you did because your OC is 17, but there's really no point since we don't know if Remnant's conventions are the same. So I would just remove it altogether.

Ontooooo the semblance now. No. As it is now, I can see the effects you want to give, but you're grasping for too much and getting nothing. I would really just focus on one thing for now. For starters, there's no set range for where he can get bugs, and there's also no set limit either. Or how long it lasts. Also it somehow works as a charm effect on bug faunus because. I would really just streamline it and focus on how it can influence bugs over directly control or something like that, but that's really just me.

Anyway, tl;dr Rejected on: - Semblance issues and overall limitations such as - No set limit, range, or capacity either - Too many odd effects, acts as insect control but also somehow a charm

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