Talk:Murtan Ohanzee/@comment-17970636-20160324173738

The heck are the shadow hunters and why are they despised(?) by regular hunters and society? Much mroe elaboration is required.

He completed training and managed to become on the level of a hunter in just one year albeit staying in a lab for the most part during the ages of 13-16? Ridiculous and unbelievable. Change it up.

So he lost his left arm and still managed to keep on fighting effectively? Can't see it, change it up.

There are degrees of mind fuckery that we allow as a semblance, that's not part of it. Change it up.

How does the first name relate to a colour?

Rejected.

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