Talk:Amethyst Harler/@comment-13172690-20151128203318

Ok. One problem with this character and that is her bio.

It just doesnt sound right to me on the account of two things. First, a kid going at the WF... I don't believe that I can see that happening since i would think they would run away at the sight of the guns, especially if the kid had a helpless butterknife. Furthermore, with how you stated the Atlas part, it seems that they allowed you to be part of something which is nothing like weve seen in canon. I suggest that you get the broken arm and replacement a different, more believable way.

Also, if they go to an academy, they have to explain how they got in (fake transcripts, applied) there since I see a team name up there. What does it stand for and does it fit the color rule?

A suggestion, I would just say what the first name means to the color rule since some others may not know in your trivia.

Until these are fixed,

Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~