Talk:Dusterious Winters/@comment-24678303-20160127073601

Okay, looking a lot better now. I like the detail of him being a Siberian Huskey faunus, nice touch there. Though, still a couple issues.

The Semblance is a little overpowered and has been deemed a bit too similar to Emerald's in that it can be focused on one person to make them disappear from their vision alone. However, a Semblance that makes him mostly invisible would be acceptable, as long as there is something like a slight shimmer to signify where he is, or the like.

I still need to know what colors Dusterious refers to. Just put the CNR in the Trivia and you should be good.

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~