Talk:Vesta Lionheart/@comment-24087318-20141103075836

Team Name is still issue.

Weapon section till absent, but there's a link to the weapon so that's fine. I suppose.

Weapon has four different transformations/combinations, currently the Fanon has a maximum of three by its rulings. This is one too many.

Her new backstory...16 years old at the time? Only training being a book given to her? One to twenty odds from guys who likely know how to fight? Combine that with her Semblance being one that tends to tactically use Dust, if she didn't know it up to that point, how/why would she be prepared with enough dust to properly utilize it? Still a little weird how that stands out. Granted, Yang did clear out a nightclub before she started Beacon, but she likely had a lot of actual schooling at a school like Signal, as well.

Rejected

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