Thread:Aldrasos/@comment-27332019-20151205182543/@comment-25389303-20151207191744

Also, on the page you have his name being Alfred Nobel and Alexander Nobel. Neither name easily relates to a colour, so if you decide to take my advice and not have him be 90 (let's be honest, it is a little far fetched) I would just take the normal route and give him a name that fits. Something like Medicus Nobel, as Medicus means doctor and medic in Latin, and doctors are usually associated with the colour white (just look up 'doctor' in google images)

All that being said, the backstory is a lot better than before. I suggest you use a comma in your sentences though, as it does look a little...untidy.