Talk:Marion Berry/@comment-27743663-20170307031952

CNR checks out

Appearance is fine

Personality is fine

Backstory, only thing I'd say is mention her current whereabouts, namely due to RP-ing reasons. Rather inconvenient for the other party if they don't know what the character is doing at present, unless you don't plan anything for them. As for her age, if that's the one during the tournament, then at present she'd be 31.

Semblance is fine.

Weapon is fine.

Tl;dr

Rejected on

- Vague backstory end, could lead to RP confusion. Most other characters get away with this because their present location is given, or they're explicitly said to be deceased.

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