Talk:Iris Kojote/@comment-25924729-20190118133507

Very cute o.o

Child OCs are very rare on the site, and i like the concept of a kid OC learning to be a future Huntress, with a set training plan, planned weapons and all. She's an interesting character.

Appearance, personality and backstory are alright. SOOO cute, oh my god!

Abilities and semblance are good, they really give off a "work in progress" feeling, like she's only got a little knowledge on the basics, but once she learns stuff properly it can become a functional combat skillset, nice writing there. Mr Munchy is also a really interesting idea for a semblance. Slimes are nice~

As for her weapons... the wooden spear is alright, but the metal spear's description gets a little confusing. Like, im having a little trouble picturing how it looks and functions, where the spear and gauntlet go or attach to each other. Im imagining like a spear attached to a glove by a short wire or something, but im really not sure.

There are enough details about its function to get a grasp of its strengths and abilities though, and they seem okay. Adding details would still be nice if you ever resubmit this character, but thats optional.

Colour name checks out, and no other issues with tihs character. So yeah.....

Accepted.

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~RP Moderation Team~