Thread:Delta-06/@comment-26571677-20160208221237/@comment-25924729-20160423130842

Alright, i've thoroughly dissected Alva's page and here's some thoughts:

I like her backstory and personality, the backstory in particular was afun read, and really fitting, as in, i can see how that backstory leads to her current personality.

Onto her appearance, um... red, yellow and green plaid shirt? Nothing wrong with it, just, seems kinda contrasting to the rest of her outfit and character in general, but it does add to her "creepy, mentally unstable, doesn't give a damn about normalcy" attitude, if that's what you're going for.

Weapons and fighting style are good, i can see how they balance out offensive and defensively, with weakness in speed and mobility (bit of a non issue, since she doesn't move much in battle anyway). I see some small spelling errors in the weapon section, notably "per hand, pet second" and "hey can also disarm quite easily", you might wann@ fix that. Also, the blue rings on her fongers which recall the claws, how do they work? Magnets? Dust? I see you've used the same thing with Ixina, with magnets, but you should elaborate on that so first time readers will understand.

Yep, she's good for pending, and after that, GG to whoever RPs with her.