Talk:Blake Lionheart/@comment-13593058-20170323055633

 Blake Lionheart Review

Appearance
Description of appearance present.

Personality
Point of personaility made.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon and Semblance rules followed. Dust section seems to be incomplete?

Backstory
How would a kidd barely into his teens be able to apply and be accepted into a police force? Does not make sense.

Miscellaneous
 Colour not referenced in trivia section.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Backstory contradiction

- Incomplete Dust Section(?)

- Colour not referenced in Trivia section (Guidelines)

Review Summary
Not bad, just some minor mistakes. I'm not questioning the fact that a kid could be a detective but the fact that it is worded as if he applied to be an official investigator in the police during his teens which I don't think seems very reasonable.

Your Dust section only contains one type of Dust when multiple was mentioned.

The colour must be mentioned in a dedicated Trivia section despite the obvious reference.

For future references, please try not to use the same names as canonical characters. While not rejectable, it is looked down upon. (Your Blake Lionheart versus RT's Blake Belladonna)  If you require assistance in the matter, feel free to ask other Fanon members for help. Alternatively, you may consult my  character creation guide   for further information regarding my reviewing process. If you believe there to be a misunderstanding or mistake, please contact me via message wall or another reviewer.