Talk:Niebieski Zlota Tarcza/@comment-10337166-20161025160830

Usually I'd just link the guidelines and leave it at that,but since I know you've been told otherwise.

-The Maiden Vanguard Aliance or whatever it's called is entirely rejectable, remove it, no one aside from Ozpin's little council (so far as we know) know that they exist, so remove it.

-Characters have ONE primariy weapon that can transform up to 3 times, and a Secondary WHICH CANNOT TRANSFORM.

-Semblance is overpowered and does too many things, nerf it significantly, or remove it entirely.

There's a slew of other smaller issues with this OC but these are the major ones

Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~