Talk:Garnet Agatha/@comment-25924729-20191222070320

Pretty interesting OC, but with a few problems.

In the appearance section, her looks anc lothing are fine but we only allow a maximum of 2 prosthetic limbs. Both arms and legs count as 4 individual limbs, so you will have to reduce 2 of those prosthetics to comply with the rules.

Personality seems alright.

Backstory shold be clearly stated, even if the character herself or users are not supposed to know what happened, it must be included in the page for review. Aside from this i'd suggest explaining in more detail about the event where she lost her limbs and parents, especially since its an important part of her character with serious effects over a long time.

Relationships section is alright.

Her actual weapons seem alright, but its arguable whether or not her prosthetics would count as weapons too. They kinda sit in a grey area where they can be used in a ight, but are not specially designed for that, so... I would suggest committing to one side or the other. Either remove the combat capability or the prosthetics, or make them full on secondary weapons but remove one of her current weapons, or integrate them as one.

her semblance seems okay in concept, but a small nerf is needed in the wind dust section. Being able to blow someone 3 blocks away is just way too powerful. Othe Dust types that can be enhanced using this semblance should also be kept reasonable, power wise.

CNR is valid. General spelling and grammar issues aside there are no more problems with this page.

Yeah... quite a lot of changes needed, but this character can be saved. Nice try anyway.

Rejected.

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