Talk:Geist Morder/@comment-27603392-20140516014509

This character lack of personality. In addition, his weapon and ability need to be described further than what you have in his page.

History is a tad cliche with the whole "parents is killed", not that I have a problem with it, but you could use some explaination on why he wanted to go to Beacon and how he was able to even get there, given that his family is poor.

Rejected for now. Please notify me by replying to this comment once you're finished editing him, and I'll take another look.