Talk:Darian Nightshade/@comment-24901923-20140728231639/@comment-24901923-20140729223405

Your edits have improved Shroud considerably, but I'm still worried about it's ability to grapple, and that it's "solidified darkness" appearance makes it look like shadow manipulation, even if that's not what it is. The fact that it's a construct is also shaky. Look for ThanhnuFia(Flora), BurningHype, Tsubori, and EvergreenLeaf on chat for better input about it if Amet can't be found. Call me Nappa, and Shingeki no Kyojin(Ray) are both good soundingboards, too.