Talk:Vespertilia Lavande/@comment-24296957-20140518141515

My only problems with her is that it says her weapon is incomplete. Whether that's because it's unsure about how high Inversion Fang's ROF is, or the weapon itself is incomplete, it needs to be taken out.

If she tries to avoid CQC at all costs, then whats the point of having the gun transform into a blade? I can understand if she needs it for instances like that, but it just seems contradictory.

Also, assuming Signal is like a four-year-high school, she couldn't have gotten in at 15, more like 13. I also feel like the backstory is a bit bland, and doesn't have a whole lot of character development. Perhaps flesh that out a bit more.

Almost nailed it, but Rejected for now.

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