Talk:Mira Ciar/@comment-24087318-20140829053505

Everything about this character is good, but the Semblance could use a little more definition, how long she can keep it up, how fast it lets her go, etc. Things to differentiate it a little from Ruby since we've got rules about things resembling abilities too close to Canon characters.

Rejected, but very close.

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