Talk:Mantis Esen/@comment-25924729-20191025133211

Cool character, gives me a lot of Mirokuji Yuya vibes from Re:Creators. Must be the personality and glasses..?

Appearance and personality sections are alright, sounds like a cool guy.

His backstory has issues. Even if it's supposed to be vague or unknown to readers or characters there must be a proper backstory included in the OC page for review. Another detail missing in his infobox is the guy's age. It's a minor thing but important to estimate how experienced he should be in certain skills. You must add a full backstory section and mention his age in the page.

Weapons seem alright. The semblance is great, very unique, and I can see quite a lot of creative uses with that.

CNR works. No other issues found on the page.

Rejected.

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