Talk:Ember Nightsparrow/@comment-24012109-20150713022044

Eurgh. I know how people feel when they explain everything that is everything on their pages, but you don't necessarily need to push every detail upon everything in a character's biopsy page. As someone reviewing this and as a reader, try to dumb it down considerably; it saves time, and saves the reader's sanity reading through all of that. If you have to write out everything, perhaps create more pages for it and leave a link on this page, hereby leaving a summary on the character's page itself.

Anyway, Semblances are not something one unlocks at a random age. Rather, Semblances are something after an unlocked aura and rather rigorous training can be obtained, and usually revolve around the personality/experiences one goes through and their innermore thoughts about them. Not all of the time, but they tend to have cohesiveness with the character itself.

The Weapon trigger thing....also seems redundant. If she could fire it without pulling the trigger, why would she even need triggers in the first place? I also think it's an idea that shouldn't be done, but that's beside the redundancy.

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--