Thread:Aldrasos/@comment-27332019-20151205182543/@comment-25389303-20151205183730

Well...Firstly, you could add a 'quote' template for the top of the page, which will make it look a little neater, but that's your choice.

For the name, the forename needs to relate to a colour in some way, e.g. meaning a colour or making you think of a colour. Alexander is Greek for Defender of Men, apparently, which fits RWBY very well, but doesn't seem to relate to a colour. (I'm assuming he is going to be clad in black, btw)

In RWBY, you can have one weapon that can transform into three modes. For example, Ruby's weapon is a sythe, a sniper rife, and also has a sheathed mode. You don't have to have one, but nearly everybody does. You can only have two weapon maximum, or one weapon and some sort of fighting style/martial arts prowess, in case you didn't know.

A little more detail would be good, but I'm sure you're intending to do that anyway.

Apart from that though, he seems to be coming along very well.