Thread:Zeon1/@comment-13524376-20130802213357/@comment-4072803-20130802215358

Icarus Review
Pros


 * Interesting connection to Weiss.


 * Good image.

Cons


 * Ability to read any language? Eidetic memory? A bit Stu-ish, I'd stay away from that.'


 * Try to give characters weaknesses, I don't really see any here.

Ariana Review
Pros


 * Good Dust usage, very well done.

Cons


 * The characters name as stated in the page doesn't match up with the page name.


 * Kind of Mary-Sue-ish background.


 * No real weaknesses.

Natasha Review
Pros Cons And thus, I finish these reviews. I hope you find them useful.
 * Once again, good Dust usage.
 * If she has as much experience as you say, then why is she at Beacon in the first place, since she appears to not need it.
 * Lack of weaknesses.