Talk:Clancy Servius Carlisle/@comment-24416658-20160322065120

Name falls under the CNR, thanks to trivia.

Backstory has some issues. His race cannot be half-faunus. When a faunus and a human mate, the resulting child is either human or faunus, no in-between. Along with that, liquid dust is not a thing, at least not one seen in Canon.

Weapon is fine. One primary, turns into two identicals.

Semblance cannot increase his speed and cause smoke to confuse opponents. It's one or the other. Along with that, there are no limitations, please add some.

Rejected for above reasons.

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