Talk:Saige Cristallo/@comment-4806269-20160228190255

In first place, I have the feeling you wanted to say she's rather asocial than antisocial; there's a big difference between not being interested in socializing/not being good at it and in constantly going against authority and breaking the law; if she was really the later it'd be contradictory to her to be like that since, ya know, she's studying in an academy and being a good student (and there's no mention of her being involved in illegal activities in her bio as well); so you might want to fix that. Also, I've noticed the "Abilities" section somewhat lacks clarification, specially considering that there's no mention of any kind of weakness in her, which by logic she should have considering she's just 17 years old.

Rejected for now.

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