User blog comment:Trogdor7620/In Dire Need Of Help/@comment-24052959-20131216035629/@comment-60.241.82.16-20131216061020

Okay, I like the look of the weapon. It's meant to spin via a gyroscope, right?

But while it looks cool, my character has only really used LARP weapons, such as polearms, swords, and a bow. If he uses a weapon like that, I'll need to write a part where he slices a limb off of himself to stop him from becoming a Gary Stu.

In short, your weapon's not overpowered, but a teenager living in a world where RWBY is just an internet show using it IS overpowered. So, unfortunately, I'll have to reject it.

If you have an idea when your focus comes back, please post on my message wall.