Talk:Kuro Takeshi/@comment-24087318-20131231200310

Character is cleaned up from last time, however, some things are still an issue.

The characters martial arts prowess doesn't fit in with the characters other weapons. They're separate weapons and trainings entirely, which doesn't fit with the spirit of RWBY (Ren, the only Canon character to display martial arts prowess, uses it WITH his weapons, as well as without.)

In addition, it's highly unlikely that he'd be taught so many stances in addition to his extensive weapons training.

Also, Aura passively applies its effects, like protection from harm. After Aura is unlocked, it does not need to be conciously used to protect from the average injuries. The character would not be unable to use it.

Due to the above, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~