Talk:Amber Vulcan/@comment-30530552-20170708033833

Let's have a look here.

CNR can work, but once again you haven't explained it at all on the page.

Appearance works.

Weapon is okay...I guess.

As BurningHype outlined earlier, the rest of the profile is barebones and incomplete.


 * While your slight nerfing of the Semblance cyclone is fine and dandy, you still haven't given any measure of how strong it actually is, or what it really does. Not only that, but the circumstances for recieving that Semblance are not something considered possible, or even plausible.


 * Backstory, "two of the most revered scientists in Remnant" screams canon-interaction, since that overstates your character & her parents' importance. Not only that, but you didn't mention how long she was in the hospial for. The rest is barebones.

Overall, you need more work on this character before it's even close to acceptance.

-Rejected or above reasons.

PisceanWaterbender, ~RP Moderation Team~

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