Talk:Kuro Maou/@comment-25924729-20191119121518


 * Puts on leather jacket and eyepatch, paints fake scar on chest*

Right, im properly dressed for this :D

Appearance is..... shit, I cannot say edgy cause all the edges are rubber. knowing you I'm surprised they're actual toys instead of balloon swords painted black or something. I can't tell if you're making fun of Stain from MHA. That aside.... It's actually a fun sounding design, I can imagine drawing this would be fun.

Personality is cringe, jeesus. He probably paints stuff like "Forbidden seal. Keep out or face death" with tomato ketchup on his bedroom door, doodles skulls and pentagrams in his textbooks instead of paying attention to class, and has a Steam Game ID like 'NightWolf69'.

Backstory sucks. Where's the tragic dead parents or friends? The childhood bullies who treat him like an outcast cause of his mysterious heritage? The dark secrets and tragic past he must keep secret from the world?? The shadowy organizations hunting him?! 0/10 not enough edge, shame on you.


 * V

Abilities and equipment are.... actually decent, holy shit. He may be the most useful member of KRIL on account of not sucking. Poop position rocket made me laugh. Rubber sword between the legs sounds oddly phallic... Phrasing man O////O

Weapon is surprisingly good, like, unironically nitroglycerin sword is a badass idea. I can see a lot of flashy fights and clever uses for this, along with the idea of a kid carrying tons of fake swords and one really good one that people just can't tell which one. Just go... "Slap, slap, slap slap, SLASH, slap, slap" It actually kinda sucks the character is too dumb to really make this work.

(On a serious note thou, like Alex said it's better to actually wrote what the weapon is in this page instead of making us go to another link)

Same goes to semblance. Surprisingly useful and decently powerful, but not excessively so. Im imagining he does the Megamind entrance scene everytime he enters a battle, or just for mundane shit like entering the cafeteria.

0/10 for trivia, no dramatic theme music. Seven Nation Army, Imagine Dragons or other generic AMV music is a must. How do you expect to have animu badass fight scenes without epic Latin chanting and orchestra?

"And so.... His perfection and flawlessness have graced this page. Death and despair will soon wash over our RP chats as OCs scream before his cring-.... Erm, ABSOLUTE AMAZING POWAH!! The Grimm demon king cannot be denied, he claims his rightful place on the throne of Accepted OC..."

Okay fukk, I need to go watch some puppy videos to cleanse my mind after writing that.

Accepted.

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~RP Moderation Team~