Thread:JayHart/@comment-26362067-20151001023730

As the title states, I want a little help. Specifically, I was wondering if you had any ideas on how I could compress Ravelyn's backstory. It's getting pretty long, and while I like detail, I feel like I'm putting in too much. Any thoughts on what I could cut out or edit?

Also, now that I'm here, I kinda want a review on her weapons. Do you think I'm going overboard with all the Dust arrows? Ideas for the effects of the Dust arrows I haven't filled out are appreciated, too.

I know I'm kinda dumping this on you (at least, that's what it feels like to me), but I'm just hitting a brick wall here, and have been for a while. Two minds are better than one, right? :) 