Talk:Kaltis Wahrsucher/@comment-24828824-20150828191526

Overall a good cahracter. while the casual outfit can use a bit more detail to differentiate it from other OCs it is not bad. However i do notice that while you have enough references to his journalist side there isn't that much that explains the whole armoured knight/lancer role that his equipment shows.

Also while fitting with his character the semblance is a psychic skill and not allowed because we simply dont know enough about wether semblances can grant power of the mind.

my advice to improve him would be to find a way to work the whole armoured lancer idea into his background and personality, how he came to chose that particular style of combat and how it suits his personality to fight like that.