Talk:Lailah Farha/@comment-13593058-20160224071255

 A Review of  Lailah Farha

Appearance
Nothing technical to note. Appearance does not interfere with Fanon Rules. Kinda lewd.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
 Dust constradiction with "Gravity Dust", which needs explaination of production methods. Grounds for rejection.

 Semblance is interesting but contradicts the Summoning Clause with the summoning of energy based blades. Pride armour should  have a strength measurement to deter vagueness. Grounds for rejection.

Backstory
Nothing worthy to note. No contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and source checks out however, does not match with her colour of ivory. Contradictory colour names with colour representative.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Semblance does not comply with Fanon Rules

- Colour/Name contradiction

Review Summary
The Semblance I find the coolest but after consulting both Nice Things and EvergreenLeaf, it is determined that the anger portion of the Semblance counts as summoning and thus contradicts the Summoning Clause of the Fanon Rules.

Several other problems with Gravity Dust being non-canon which needs ann explanation and the character name meaning midnight not alluding to the colour ivory in any conceivable way.

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