Talk:Vesta Lionheart/@comment-24197653-20140114234834

First, I'd like to state the Earth and Wind part at the beginning. We don't know yet if those can be controlled it is true semblance can work with dust so that's good. I just saw earth and wind as something she can control and I would be watchful of elements that we know are available to control via dust.

Also, in the part where you said a "form of a ball" formed on the tip of her sword and exploded. Could you explain what could have caused this? Also, you should state some form of damage she would've taken via the explosion.

The last thing I wanted to state was to try not to go to close to mirroring RWBY characters because you said that Ozpin wanted to speak to Vesta after hearing of what happened with the robbery which is the same as Ruby Rose. So try not to exactly mirror characters as this will help avoid rejection due to copying characters from the show.

And lastly, her semblance, first of all, very creative, but I think you should detail it a bit more. Along with that, wouldn't she have to focus more trying to use her semblance on multiple people than one person? I ask cus it says that one person requires focusing while multiple people require little focusing and i think it would have to be swapped or changed to say that multiple people require more focus or some reason explaining why they require less focus

Other than that I like the character. Well done ^v^