Thread:SideShot/@comment-28607333-20160531091054/@comment-24828824-20160531114433

well to start off I'll suggest you read through the Guidelines of the Fanon and I'll point out two problems that definately need alteration if he is to become accepted:

First we try to avoid as many references to the canon plot and characters as possible, while reference to professors can be allowed it is smart to remove the comparison to Ruby from his personality and weapon, it will work just fine without referring to canon characters.

Second: The minimum age for normal Beacon students is 17, 16 under rare circumstances or depending on their date of birth. 15 is not allowed as it is often a cheap attempt to be special or similar to Ruby which takes away from that point in Ruby's own story and really doesn't work if everyone does it in Fanon. make him 17 and it should be fine.

That being said I like the weapon design and your drawing of it, it's similar to crescent rose but the crook is very much unique enough to be allowed by the guidelines and has a nice plausible transformation. Also you don't need to count the compact storage mode as a seperate form as we only count active modes for the transformation limit of 3 modes.

Given that he uses ranged weapons mostly and a crook that can be used to disarm or dismember targets gives me the impression of a careful and stealthy indirect fighter and his semblance would have to complement that style. I'd say with an ability that lets him either set up his win-conditions without interruption or that lets him alter the factors of the battle to better suit his style.