Talk:Yara Aeriver/@comment-24087318-20141017113641

A carbine shooting at an effective range of 1.1 miles? That's over 1700 yards. The average effective range of a typical sniper rifle that can still accurately aquire kills is a little under .9 miles. And that's a Sniper rifle, with a trained sharpshooter and a purpose built weapon. This is a Carbine.

When it says she can use Dust, use it how? In her clothes? In her body? Something like Cinder did? It's not described or explained HOW she uses Dust at all.

Her Semblance is a little incorrect. Changing the soundwaves around peoples ears wouldn't change where they perceive the sound. Only what sound it was. So misdirecting with it wouldn't be possible with how it's written. There's also no apparent drawback to this Semblance or limitation. If it does indeed change the volume of sounds to mimic coming from other directions. (Fainter in one ear, louder in the other) then by what amounts can she even change the volumes in the first place?

And, to be honest, the entire Semblance falls dangerously close to mental/psychic based Semblances, based on altering other peoples perception/mind. I'd strongly recommend against using it.

Rejected

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