Talk:Savannah Pearce/@comment-30803571-20200124232531

- CNR checks out but not so much the team's CNR. i haven't been able to find confirmation of a shade of pruple called "tuscany", the only "tuscany" i've found is a grayish red, other than that there seems to be a number of "tuscan colors", most notably tuscan red. If you wish to stick to "tuscany", expecially as a shade of purple, you're going to have to show your sources and prove they're reliable.

- Appearance is fine

- Personality is fine

- Backstory is fine

- Weapon i think is fine, but i don't really understand what's going on with the "arms" on the thing, if possible it'd be good to make the description more clear.

- Semblance is fine

- Fighting Style is fine

- Trivia is fine (other than the team CNR issue mentioned before)

as a side note, i think you mean "caliber" not "calibur"

Rejected due to team CNR issue

~RP Moderation Team~