Talk:Sable Storm/@comment-27743663-20161122224150

Well, he has weapons, and a semblance. But you need to actually elaborate on what they can do and what they even are. Is it just plain pistol and sword? Anything special about them? No Dust? Thermal Absorption might give a hint to what it obviously does, but it needs to be described how it works in the first place. And have limits. Rejected based on these two points.

As a note, you should elaborate on backstory as well. There's hardly anything revealing his character. Why'd he decided to go to Beacon? Why'd he want to suddenly become a Hunter? These are just notes though, and don't need to necessairly be followed.

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