Talk:San Yogan/@comment-24012109-20160816215340


 * How did he get cybernetic arms? I don't particularly see it noted anywhere, and it is significant enough to wonder how he got them.


 * Semblance is alright, although I would say it's too much for a steroid if it buffs his speed, defenses, and offenses all in one. I'd probably say, "He actively trades away his consciousness for unrelenting strength but also becoming more instinctive in his movements, shrugging off any damage he has taken for the duration of the semblance." It's just too loaded when he can maintain his mindfulness.


 * I'd also recommend getting rid of one of the weapons you have. It is also overloaded and I feel the weapons themselves are just too much for someone to use at instinct in a battle.

Rejected.

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