Talk:S.H.I.E.T., or Self-made Hectic Intelligence Electrical Terminal/@comment-30530552-20170528011818/@comment-28970015-20170528144354

Oh, I changed the backstory because I never really liked the old one. I'll try to redo it again soon, even in summer I'm still busy. Do you have any suggestions for any reforms? I wrote this mostly in a annoyed haze, so I know it is far from perfect. Still, thanks for reviewing it. Have a good day.