Talk:Aurelia Shadow/@comment-31408668-20191128005153

COLOR NAME REFERENCE

Color name reference is recognized. Aurelia is derived from the Classical Latin word aureus, which means golden or gilded.

APPEARANCE

Short and to the point, but there is enough to craft a full picture of the character. It is nice to see a costume change to, it helps to show that a character has evolved or changed in some way, and it can often be expressed with clothing. As for physical appreance, nothing to detract from. No problems here.

PERSONALITY

The arrogant friend. It is always nice to see a more happy character, they are often needed, especially in a world like Remnant. The note of her personal weaknesses, such as the very forward and arrogant attitude, as well as overthinking things, as it makes her feel more real. No obvious contradictions. No problems here.

BACKSTORY

Very reasonable, actually. Everything a backstory should have is here. Where they're from, how they became who they are, a call to action and then going on a journey to learn. It is the most classic story setup in the history of literature. No stepping on canon toes. I would like to note that we recommend having a mention of what the character was doing during the Fall of Beacon, and that it is noted in the backstory, especially considering she was a Beacon student. No stepping on canon toes. Noted as present in Vytal Festival. No problems here.

WEAPONS AND COMBAT

The weapon is within guideline specifications. We have a single, transforming primary in the form of the bo-staff Lover Strike.While the weapon doesn't have a defined description, the weapon combination is actually very simple. An energy rifle (kind of) in a bo staff? No issue. I'm also glad you noted the specific Dust types that are commonly used for the "Rod" mode. No problems here.

As for Aurelia's skill in combat, it seems grounded well in her backstory and personality. Very much the personal, up-and-close fighter which strikes first. It is good to note that this is a vulnerability for her as well. No problems here.

SEMBLANCE

Gold Pitch as a Semblance works fine. It is simple and easy to understand, her choice of weapon and style of fighting makes a lot of sense for someone with a general reaction time buff and speed buff. It is easily defined. The Semblance has necessary limiters, in the form of a vitality limiter. No problems here.

CONCLUSION: ACCEPTED

'''Aurelia is, for a lack of a better descriptor, a character as old as time. She is in the process of what would be described as a "Hero's Journey". Her abilities are simple and straight to the point, but they seem very effective for an agility-based fighter. Overall, solid effort. - Raikou'''