Talk:Terra Vi/@comment-27743663-20170118202935

While likely obvious just from reading it, the name's relation to the CNR does need to be noted on the page. It's a mandatory thing. Most people add a seperate trivia section at the bottom to do so.

Appearance is fine.

Personality is fine.

Backstory, how'd he make his weapon by himself, while before Signal age, so still a child? Kids and complex forging like that tends to end poorly. He would lack most of the knowledge and strength required to do so as well, especially for something like a bladed infared sniper rifle.

Weapon is fine.

Semblance is fine, just note for those 5 seconds it is all his senses, and the sudden rush of information from hyper sensitivity in most cases would overload someone, but it's short enough to not do much, and the breather afterwards helps as well.

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

- CNR missing.

- Making of weapon as a child

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