User blog comment:Tuckapenguin/The Review Game/@comment-13488655-20130817210534/@comment-13488655-20130818062152

My review of Jr.

You got all of the points in the overview. (Name, age, even bloodtype.)

Personality is quite good, you didn't got for any stereotypes I know of and you made sure he wasn't a genius with high IQ.

Abilities and weapons appear to match the power levels in RWBY, and also have been used to emphasize key points in his personality.

Backstory was interesting, but it would be more interesting if it was actually there.

Emblem is a candle. It's a interesting choice.

There were a few spelling mistakes, the characters history is missing, but it was still a good character and a good read.