Talk:Akira Niebieski/@comment-25924729-20181114021624

Pretty simple character overall, but he is a ninja so... makes sense, avoid being flashy and too obvious. Appearance, backstory and personality are good.

For his weapons and equipment, the Tonfa sword itself is alright, but you must specify how many shurikens he carries, as they are considered stackable/set weapons under the rules and there is a limit on how many he can use. (Note: since he already has a primary weapon, the maximum he can carry is 3)

His semblance seems workable in concept, but needs a bit more explanation. Stuff like the heaviest or largest thing he can launch, how fast the object moves when launched, how far it travels, can he launch himself etc. Just to get a better idea how his semblance works and its limits.

The name Eiji does not comply with the colour name rule. Niebieski is a valid name, but the colour reference cannot be in the last name, only the first.

Overall not a bad character, just needs more explaining and a name change.

Rejected.

If you have any questions, please DM me on Wikia or Discord.

~RP Moderation Team~