Thread:Nice Things/@comment-25628022-20141215203644/@comment-26543176-20141216014437

I see him as cliched because you've tried to make him as special as possible, i.e. the hope of his people, the best on the island, the most conflicted and special. It just seems like you've tried to make him as special as you possibly can, with his perfect personality etc etc. Also saying you're trying to make him perfect, isn't exactly perfect, as he will never be perfect.