Talk:Katsune "Kitty" Akatsuya/@comment-24487330-20140205041526/@comment-23929867-20140206055515

Thanks for the review! I made some edits, if you wanna have a look.



"It seems like Kitty's had some time to peek out of her shell a bit, but it's good that you left some room for her to really break out later on; I know that I personally have trouble leaving room for my characters to develop, as I often get ideas for later parts of their stories and start developing them before they've even begun."



Actually, that's an interesting point. Kitty has not actually been played on this forum, so why would she have had time to break out of her shell? The reason for this is twofold. In character, she's had time throughout her last year of what is essentially 'middle school' or 'high school', after having had a chance to mingle with some of the more serious students. Out of character, it's so she's paired up with people who will be a good fit for her, even after some character development has occurred.



"Maybe she's just sick of being treated poorly and needs to let off some steam, and she finds the perfect outlet in her fighting style, pumping all of that pent-up depression and righteous fury into every swing of Heaven's Maw's saw-toothed edge, every shot of her rifle, every blast from her glyphs...."



You hit the nail on the head with that one. Actually, at first her style was just wild flailing about in frustration, but after a while she managed to hone it down to an honest-to-goodness battle style. In fact, her semblance was also discovered out of frustration. She was practicing, trying to get it to work, and the other kids were teasing her, and finally she just got frustrated, and ... BOOM! This is actually something I've been wanting to expand on more in her backstory section, but I've been juuuust a bit lazy there. ^^; (As an aside, I'm not sure if her semblance will actually use glyphs or not. ^^;)