Talk:Cappollo Helios/@comment-17970636-20151208224138

Few issues here.

First off, Aura is either unlocked by another person or by training and willpower. Since none of this happened to her in her youth, the fact that one day she randomly uses her semblance is unlikely. People like Pyrrha have had their aura unlocked via training, whereas Jaune had his aura unlocked by Pyrrha.

Moving onwards, the Homing, Orbital and Dumb Fire settings on her guitar are not properly defined, requires more elaboration as to what they are.

3rd mode isn't fully explained, by deafened, is it temporary? Or permanant. We know that Aura protects one's hearing so it's somewhat vague.

Aura's forcefield like ability hasn't shown to knock enemies back, change that up.

Sound travels in waves around the point of origin, circular ones. It's why when something drops everyone around the area of impact can hear the drop. As a result, although her being able to control how far the waves travel in a radius around the point of origin, it doesn't make sense for the waves to travel in a kind of arc. In relation to Flynt's trumpet, the difference here is that everyone could hear his trumpet, however, the area of impact was in a conical area that was circular simply due to the condensation of dust that travells in waves spiralling outward from the bell. Long story short, everyone can hear it, but it's limited to a range that's set, the size of the area is increased by 4 due to his semblance because it's like the waves absorb the other waves. Seeing as her semblance acts like an amplifier, it's different from Flynt's trumpet abilities. I recommend altering it up a bit so it makes a bit more sense.

How the first name relates to a colour isn't properly written: i.e, what colour it is that she realtse to, just what she's inspired by.

Rejected.

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