Thread:Taki-Tan/@comment-30202748-20170416202632/@comment-30202748-20170424104414

So I wanna say this first: English my be my primary language, but that doesn't mean in good at it.

I usually run by my works through some kind of editor to it fix up a bit, in this case you.

Appearance

So just include the weight? Shouldn't  be that hard. You mind if I use your edited version? I will give credit to you.

Personality

Aside from rewording. Ill add a bit more to him being selfless and such.

Changes will be made later tonight, so if you wanna continue, go ahead.