Talk:Sienna Nicoletta/@comment-30530552-20170624181240

Alright, let's see what we've got.

CNR is an easy pass.

Appearance is okay.

Personality's okay. What you're elaborating there is that she's bisexual, from what I see?

Backstory works.

Weaponry is fine, though the heat resistance and weight carrying seems a little far-fetched.

Semblance could use soem toning down, because while the hollow effect and placement limitation is all fine and dandy, the clones act autonomously and can be made within 5 km of the mark, both thigns within the show that haven't been shown as possible yet, since Sun needs to manipulate hsi himself, Blake's are static, and Weiss' glyphs usually don't appear very far from her. That, and replicating up to 8 times at once. At least 2 of the 3 things need a tonedown or removal.

Fighting Style's okay.

Commission and artist credit was given.

Overall, you're close, but it still needs some work.

-Rejected on: Too little limitation on Semblance and potentially far-fetched limits of weapon's feasible capabilities.

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