Talk:Bartholomew Varega/@comment-25857155-20150822000936

I must say, he seems quite well done to me. The backstory has plenty of detail, and the timeline makes sense. Contrary to what others have said below, it is quite common for a person not to start a college-level school (which Beacon is) several years after highschool. (I am planning to start university myself in two years, some time after my 24th birthday.)

I am also curious as to how "this guy hardly works as a [RWBY OC]" (quote revised for spelling errors). He fits what we know of the world well enough, and he's an interesting character. I especially like the sword design - it looks great.

The only complaint I would make is a lack of clear explaination of CNR, though I may well have simply missed it.