User blog comment:Legends Storyteller/Seriously guys, am I invisible?/@comment-25279497-20150102041446

Your asking for opinions during the holiday season...not the best of time to ask for opinions. Star pretty much highlight any "cons" I would say about your story. It good, but overall sentence structure, canon characters are OOC, and fact it leave too much to the imagination of the reader makes for bad reading experience imo.