Talk:Bloody Hydrangea/@comment-25763181-20131230053732

Excellent work, so far! Very detailed imagery is almost dream-inducing - vivid yet perfectly balanced between length and attention to detail. Well done. And the music is the icing on top of an already delicious cake - they fit well in with the story.

As for Organdy, I liked how you display her innocence. Nothing exaggerated, but also well balanced. The only improvement that I think that could be done is that "Dream" seems like it can have more content to it - like it seems as if it was rushed a little IMHO.

Overall, I'm really liking this story! Keep it up - and I cannot wait to see the final product!

9.2/10