Talk:Ember Reus/@comment-13172690-20160102061046

Ok, a few things need to be addressed.

First, a faunus can only have ONE faunus trait. Either choose the fox ears OR the fox tail. It is unacceptable to have both.

Secondly, she has a weapon section, but I believe that you do not have a fighting style section stating how she fights (position, abilities, semblance(if applicable), etc...) Please add this section and looks to accepted characters for assistance.

Lastly, the biggest problem is her background. First, Emerald Forest is used in for Beacon Initiations from what we've seen so Mr. Pines cannot live there. Secondly, a simple note wouldn't get Ozpin to accept her to Beacon without prior training or schooling. That just doesnt happen im afraid. Please change this so it is more acceptable like combat school, training and with how she gets into Beacon.

With these issues,

Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~