Talk:Alabaster Heart/@comment-24087318-20140911222810

Looking at the comments, giving a delay so it can't immediately trap people is a bit on the right step, however.

The power itself is still incredibly strong, given anybody inside it is essentially slowed to the point of helplessness (Doesn't matter how little damage Alabaster can deal, he's got teammates.) I mean,  .01 seconds to every real-time second. That's barely moving. That's literally an iceberg.

Using it as a barrier I can see, since a vertical placement would cause things that pass through it once its active to slow down, at least until they're through it.

Platform as well is a little strange, since given its time-dilating effects, why wouldn't it slow the person using the platform aspect of it?

And about the cane as a weapon being useless, we have Roman Torchwick. Who, even though he uses a cane, is rather effective at combat with it, being able to take on two well-equipped Huntsmen at the same time.

If you wanted a real time based Semblance, that not only showed off his magic-esque combat style, but was a reference to the White Rabbit, why not a personal haste?

If he's based on "casting" dust abilities, some of which we've seen are quite elaborate, and take a moment to conjure, why not give him the ability to speed himself up, making his these "cast times" faster for a period, and allowing him to physically match or even beat some other close-range oriented huntsmen for a time.

Just a thought anyways.

22:28, September 11, 2014 (UTC)22:28, September 11, 2014 (UTC)22:28, September 11, 2014 (UTC)~

Moving onto the actual Review, since it's in pending again. You only changed the Semblance so the Glyph lasts 15 seconds instead of a minute...this is still more than enough time for anything that's stuck in it to be executed, I mean, look at Vol. 2 Ep. 5, Pyrrha managed to finish off sevral members of Team CRDL in less time with a single flurry of strikes.

Rejected.

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