Thread:Elektro7/@comment-28257386-20140624062533

Hey uhh, I was wondering if I could you to do another review. I wrote another little story. It's actually a collection of short stories. I finished the prolouge and the first story, and I would appreciate another review of if thats alright.

http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/A_new_home,_a_new_life 