Talk:Jason Fiore/@comment-933831-20140304062112/@comment-8182065-20140305020301

Well they can be affiliated with a canon character but only to a certain extent, depending on the situation and character, mostly as an aquaintance per say (like a student OC was probably accepted into Beacon by Ozpin would be fine, however, the OC cannot be his nephew, son of one of his drinking buddies, etc.). Otherwise Weiss would have over 50 best friends (not my words, but it was said by someone here on the Fanon).

You still have that thing about Roman in there, which still makes Jason rejectable, as it makes it sound like they're close friends/allies.

A few other issues you might want to work out:

You probably might want to mention what kind of experiments were being done exactly in his backstory. And was Jason's mother pregnant before the incident, because I find it unlikely that Dust can cause a pregnancy and then induce labor after just one week.

Also his weapon has quite a bit too many transformations (limit for now is 3), some seeming very unplausible for a suitcase to accomplish.