Talk:Argent Acherbus/@comment-24087318-20140115024146

Character is mostly good, however there's a few problems with his weaponry and other abilities.

Two greatshields that are as tall as he would be would be likely encumbering simply because of their sheer size, especially with the characters wounded arm.

In addition, as far as well can tell, Dust alone only posesses elemental properties akin to Magic: exploding into fire, ice, electricity, and other forms of energy. Without the interference or assistance of some sort of Semblance, it's not likely that the shield would create a Glyph-like effect that helps nullify energy based damages. Essentially this particular ability seems something a Semblance would be capable of doing, rather than the weapon itself.

As well, Hunters and Huntresses, beyond Beacon, appear to work solo. (Glynda wasn't backed up by a team of any sort during her confrontation with Cinder) so having a character with absolutely no offence on his own would be quite problematic when he's alone against Grimm, or in a one on one spar or duel. There's nothing wrong with a focus on defence, but having no attacks whatsoever has a major flaw concerning what a Hunter does.

His Semblance seems to be a little strange, letting him absorb damage and turn it into a barrier of some sort. This isn't much of a problem, but it could use a little more detail like how long it lasts and how much the barrier itself can take before it breaks.

Due to these above points, Rejected for now.

~RP Moderation Team~