Talk:Revan MacLeod/@comment-8182065-20130818024210

To be honest, the whole Dragon theme has been over-used so many times and to me is considered quite a cliche. And this Dust pen of his is from the future? There's just so much explaining I think you have left to do still; in his History I think you should really add more into it like where and when did he die, why did he wake up at Beacon, etc.