Talk:Sneg Natura/@comment-27743663-20161207000248

CNR, link a source. You don't give anyone, and going on a manhunt couldn't find one.

Appearance is fine. Save, you know, being a half-sirit. Which isn't fine. Because it isn't a thing.

Personality is fine.

Backstory, what's this elemenal amulet? Going from pretty much everything else on the page, it's some relic that's horribly broken. No.

 Weapon, odding ice to the staff to make it look cooler does not make it more effective. Contrary to popular belief, rule of cool does not raise effectiveness. Appearance = Power is a no. Just a note, fix it and remove it.

Semblance is nooooooo. Controlling ice and snow? There's nothing inherently wrong with that, so long as it has limits and demerits...which isn't listed here. At all.

Skills section, absorbing ice? Withstanding sub-zero temparatures? Not affected by cold? No. Spirit power, still, isn't a thing. Since you know. Half-spirts aren't either.

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

- No CNR source. Link one.

- Being a half-spirit.

- Elemenal Amulet relic

- Weapon and coolness = power.

- Semblance overpowered with no demerits, might as well be a maiden. Which is a large no.

- A majority of the skills section.

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