Thread:Eldelbarrio2/@comment-25898318-20150130191543

Eldel, don't put  the theme in the heading, because that adds it to the table of  contents and looks  terrible. I will be back home from work at 11:30-45 EST. Talk more then about finishing it out, and working on  the introductory story. Also... add a bit more to your OCs on it. Feels a little shallow considering the short paragraphs I have on my end on Meph and Clayton. They have to have more than just one job that could be good at, right? 