Thread:PisceanWaterbender/@comment-25363089-20180617144808

Hey Piscean I'd like to first say thank you for reviewing my character and that I am working on making the necessary changes to her. As we speak but I'd like some things cleared up for me as I'm having some trouble understanding what you mean by it.

Which is in Personality you said that it is somewhat lengthy but it's in depth...some of the points feel like they could be condensed for legibility purposes, but what's there works. I'm wondering what those points are so that I can make the changes to them to make it more condensed and less lengthy.

Thanks again.  