Talk:Roy Zaffire/@comment-13593058-20160225221559

 A Review of Roy Zaffire

Appearance
Not much to judge on a technical level. Faunus Trait present.

Creatively speaking, it’s a properly designed character focused on a motif. The design is appropriate, nothing too bland. Application of emblems as a hunter-in-training is also used justly..

Personality
A reasonable personality. No contradictions and has justified responses. No additional

Weapons and Abilities
 Weapon does not contradict with existing canon weapons nor the Fanon-Rules. Abilities are well explained and situations are appropriately presented in an easy to read manner where role plays should not be a problem.

 Semblance does not comply with Fanon Rules, quote, "No semblances that allow one to copy another's fighting style." While it is stated that it is more "adaptation", Semblance pedals back and forth from pure mimicry to adaption. Vagueness is grounds for rejection.

Backstory
Nothing worthy to note. No contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and source checks out. Character under Grandfather Clause.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Semblance does not comply with Fanon Rules

Review Summary
Edge.

 Other than that everything else checks out. Just change the Semblance.

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