Talk:Miyuki Winfield/@comment-24087318-20140919073515

Weapon seems interesting, and overall the character is great, but. Two outlying issues.

Aura doesn't, as far as we're aware, posess specific traits/leans towards certain things. It provides the same benefits to everybody, there's just the amount. But even then, a large amount of Aura still needs to be trained to use it properly.

The Semblance seems a little redundant given her weapons ability to create Ice. Why would she have this if she has her weapons?

Rejected

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Wouldn't a better Semblance idea be something that makes her feet/skates near-frictionless, allowing her to skate on any flat surface? Then in the case she can't properly set up the Ice for whatever reason, she can still fight.