Talk:Dusterious Winters/@comment-24678303-20160124005950

In Canon, the White Fang became violent only 5 years ago. You're saying the character was taken in by WF 13 years ago after killing the humans that killed his mother. So, this backstory does not work. Not to mention how i'm seeing similarities between his backstory and Blake's, since i know for a fact that it is not commonplace to leave the White Fang and head to Beacon.

He cannot have more than one Faunus trait, meaning you either need to lose the ears or lose the tail. Plus, Wolf Faunus are so severely overdone.

The weapon needs more clarification on its abilities. His Semblance is not only overpowered, but does not make sense. Water does not work that way, not to mention you wouldn't be able to do that in the first place. It also requires limitations.

He has no CNR, plus i don't see how that quote relates to his Semblance at all.

Rejected.

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