Talk:Messer Danam/@comment-6975131-20130801151544

Dat wepon :O. Your incorporation of his fighting style into his weapon utilization, is near perfect. Your incorporation of Dust is less than unique, but the way he uses his ice dust, makes for an extremely interesting weapon 4.5/5

Hmm, his backstory has a few cliches, him beating almost everyone he met in fight is a bit OP. But introducing your other OC into his life is interesting, and fun to read. The way he made his weapon is interesting. Using scraps, is very unique, and i loved it. Backstroy 3.5/5