Talk:Ardon Springfield/@comment-13593058-20160301063620

 A Review of  Ardon Springfield

Appearance
Not much to judge on a technical level. Well explained.

Personality
A reasonable personality. No contradictions and has justified responses. No additional comments.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon does not contradict with existing canon weapons nor the Fanon-Rules.

Semblance contradicts Summoning/Constructs Clause. See Review Summary and reread Fanon Guidlines.

Backstory
Well written, easy to follow. No contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and source checks out.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Semblance contradiction

Review Summary
Guidelines did change this past day but I know for a fact the Semblance would have been reject worthy regardless.

The simple problem isn't the fact that they are constructs but simply that they have no finite source and thus counts as Summoning which is a Schnee only ability.

Other than that, you phrased and constructed this character beautifully. It was easy to read and follow. The progression of the character really brings him to life.

 If you require assistance in the matter, please feel free to ask other Fanon mambers for help. If you believe there to be a misunderstanding or mistake, please contact me via message wall or another reviewer.