Talk:Yoi Jun Anei/@comment-27581494-20160305045526

ok so im giving a review of what you got so far, cause lilterally this was one of the characters you or ark mentioned previously and i've seen his name come up, so i got to give my opinion of him

Peer review:Wip(work in progress)

Appearance

i can clearly see his appearance, and you have done a incredible job detailing it, which most people dont really do, they only give a brief description, which somewhat lacks in overall(not trying to be offensive in any way to anyone who reads this).You however have done an excellent job at it.

personality and background are not yet added, but i am paitiently waiting to see the both of them written out and expanded on from what i've heard this character has done.

Weapon

well explained, it's interesting since its a dual bladed katana, strikes me rather odd, all the better.it's uses of dust are well explained and how to use the dust and where it is stored is too.gloves a nice secondary, with the use of earth for both defensive and offensive as well.

Fighting styles/strength weaknesses

well addressed, helpful that you added a strength and weaknesses section to make it easier to read and find out.(this is something that i dont really leave explained so it stands out a bit more to me)

Semblance

no qualms about the semblance, hope to see how it fits with his personality and such

Trivia

names check out, first name is exlusive to your character(example:if there were 2 people using Yoi, there isnt, rephrasing cause i'm bad at asying stuff)

Great job overall, i enjoyed looking over this character very quickly and cant wait to see him complete!Best of luck when you drop him into pending!

IIThe RunnerII