Talk:Risa Ishida/@comment-30530552-20170528185732

Let's see what we have here.

While your CNR relationship was not noted, I did find something about a Japanese pear, which could be denoting a brownish color. Either way, you need to mention it because that's part of the guidelines.

Appearance and Personality appear okay.

Semblance is quite interesting, and I believe it's acceptable.

Weaponry has an interesting concept.

Backstory, while I'm okay with reading through stuff like that, it's very confusing and difficult to do when formatted like that both for me and other reviewers/readers, as was stated with your other character, Ranru. Please reformat, at the bare minimum.

Overall, please reference the CNR tie-in and reformat the backstory for readability, and I believe you'll be good to go.

-Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~

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