Talk:Laven Demmick/@comment-28422967-20160515114743

I really feel like I'm missing something. I don't know if his weapon is acceptable, seeing as how it almost borderlines on being "responds" to him. I just thought it might be a cool concept to try and try. I read the guidelines and didn't see anything that definitively prohibited that, but I just want to be sure. And I'm feeling better about his backstory since the last time I edited it, but I'm still not entire sure if it's the direction I want to go. I'm still very new and not experienced with actually fleshing out these characters so feedback is greatly appreciated if anyone gets a chance.