Talk:Nauta Azzurra/@comment-13593058-20160223234740

 A Review of  Nauta Azzurra

Appearance
Nothing technical to mention, complies to Fanon Rules.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Rule of one transformable and one vanilla followed.

No significant comment on fighting style.

Backstory
Nothing worthy to note. No contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and source checks out. Under Grandfather Clause.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- Nothing, move along.

Review Summary
Again, I want to say that the writing style on most of these characters have some sort of repetitive structure or sometimes even irrelevant information within inappropriate sections. It's not reject worthy but it does make the character out to be a lesser quality than I know it has potential to be.

Please fix some of the grammar and rhetoric if you have the time.

 Other than that everything else checks out. Just change the Semblance.

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