Talk:Yukon Goldsmith/@comment-24416658-20160308063524

Well, the name both fits under the CNR and reminds me of Calvin and Hobbes.

Now, backstory is well and fine, but there's a slight issue. IF his family lived close to Vale, why would his father send him to Atlas, across an entire ocean, for all his schooling? That sounds a bit iffy to me, but it's not rejectable. I can see it happen, but it still feels off.

Weapon being laser....well it doesn't really work. It would make more sense for the weapon to use dust to create something similar to what Velvet's weapons are made of.

Rejected for weapon.

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