Talk:Yu Yun Shan/@comment-27743663-20161229000808

CNR checks out.

Appearance is fine.

Personality is fine.

Backstory is fine.

Weapon is fine.

Semblaaaaaaance is, while I do like its concept, where the problems start. From my knowledge since static cling doesn't inherently work like that. The second portion with electromagnetism is fine for the most part though, at least on paper, but RWBY so it doesn't really mater. Only note about that is if it's powerful enough to pull a car, it's going to likely bend her weapon as well. Thaaaat aside, back to the static cling, it wouldn't work much. Reasong being, a looooot of the things she's planning to stick onto is electrically grounded, which in turn would ground her, completely nullifying it.

Essentiaaaaally, it's scientifically impossible. If the main thing you want is the mobility, you can just get by saying her semblance allows herself to adhesive or something along those lines. Less creative, yes, but it's /kinda/ possible with how semblances work. If you wanted to  keep both functions, sorry, don't know how to help you much there :P.

As an additional note, I doubt Atlas doesn't have anti-electrical counter-measures. It's a world Super-Power, that should be incredibly basic to think up of, especially since Lightning Dust is something a child could get their hands on with a store down the street :P. That's just a note though.

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

-Semblance is scientificaly impossible.

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