Talk:Ririi/@comment-8182065-20130818183329

I completely agree with Maki on this. I don't mind the fact that Ririi learned how to talk with, fight like, and call Beowolves to her aide. You just need to explain that a bit more. Kudos to you though for steering away from "I was raised in the wild by wolves" but you really need to add into that. Did she fight and kill a pack leader, or did her family help raise them in some form?

Just some things that need further explaining.