Thread:Takeshi kun21/@comment-25363089-20141120224324/@comment-8182065-20141130063425

Thanks for understanding. :)

And if you just wanna shorten his backstory a bit, I'd say you could take out the bit about his parents meeting each other. I'd also suggest removing the part on his father's sword technique; I don't think a 5 year old would actually be taught how to fight with a sword, more just let him play around with one (a toy sword not a real one of course lol). I guess he could learn a few simple motions, but that would be more like a thing for when he's older. The same could be said about the stength training too.

That's all I got so far. Oh and side note, might wanna leave out the "Japanese festival"-like mas bit as there's no Japan in Remnant. :P