Talk:Solator Crimsona/@comment-10337166-20161030054300

Alright then So

-Who are the crusaders, you talk about them like they're this established thing, but I know nothing about them, and having read the page I still know absolutely nothing about them, aside from them....liking the sun? I guess?

-Such a large well trained organization should not have been at the battle of Beacon, simply put there was no way them being there wouldn't have turned the tide, lone studens are fine, well trained military, no.

-You talk about them going through a bunch of treatments, remove all of them, you've basically stakced enough on there to count as a weapon in it's own right

-Fanon characters CANNOT interact with Canon characters, so that means you're not allowed to have you character want to kill Salem, no one knows who she is, or what her plan in (in terms of fanon) and no special religious vision can change that.

-Remove one of the weapons all of them (I'm including the armor)could count as a primary because of how over designed and powerful you make them out to be.

-Semblance, no creating hard light structures one of which shoots out a giant lazer beam? no, plus him being able to create his own means he oculd possibly make any weapon and that's not okay.

Rejected

~RP Moderatio Team~