Thread:DustpeltX/@comment-12726710-20170407024555

Hello, you recently reviewed one of my characters (well, my first one), and the character was accepted. However, you did mention that a few sections were somewhat overly detailed and tedious to read. You suggested " revision and condensation." So, if I was to make the page easier to read by cutting it down in length and detail, would that mean I should take the character out of the accepted category, revise the page, and then put in in pending again?

Thanks for reading through the page and leaving feedback, btw. ^_^  