Thread:PisceanWaterbender/@comment-31408668-20170906204635

Hello!

Thank you for looking at my character, it was a really helpful review.

I do have a few questions regarding it and a slight mistake I noticed.

- First, Arin started at Beacon the same year as RWBY began. In your review, you ask about what her and team CRMA has done through their first and only year at Beacon. As of the battle of Beacon, they would be on their third year at Beacon, not first. However, this might be me misunderstanding it. Do correct me if I'm wrong.

- Secondly, how important is it that I fill in the backstory? I have another character here on the Fanon Wiki, Caden Chrom, and his backstory only extends to where he currently is in the story I have written about him. With this, he was accepted. Therefore, I wonder if it is necessary to add in things that hasn't happened in her story yet? For me, the backstory is what brought her to the point she is, so it seems a bit strange for me to add what happens past the point that I have actually written.

- Thirdly, do you prefer to talk about these things on your wall, or do you prefer to have it as a comment on your review? Just so I know what is the easiest way for you.

Still, your review was quite eye-opening. I need to add more detail in a few places on my characters xD

- Best regards, Raikou. 