User blog:StarlightAT/Story Summary

Okay I got two story summaries here and I need help with both of them! Tell me which ones sound good and which one I should focus on most! And also, which Summary needs fixing.

Story 1 (Inspired by GARO, Lord of the Rings)

''Light and darkness play a pivotal role as scales. Should one side tip in favor of the other, the World intervenes to reset the Balance. The radiance known as humans are now in danger from the darkness due to a mistake made by the world. Through the use of magical armor, the radiance known as humans pushed back the darkness, gaining a brief reprise at the cost of many lives.''

''The bearers of the armor scattered across the world, passing the armor from one hand to the next with each generation. The dream the Light adored would soon be crushed as reality began to show itself. This is the tale following the world through the eyes of the newest generation of knights. Through their vision will the war take a new course. The tale of the LION of the SUN begins with the determination of Ariel Samson.''

Story 2 (Inspired by Divine Comedy, YuYuHakusho, Phi Brain, No Game No Life, Mondaiji, “Scarlet Story” by nano)

“This world really is crap.”

''These words governed the lives of dropouts Valente and Chiara, two childhood friends whose parents went missing one day. Now living in the same house they make a livelihood through one of the more dangerous jobs the world has to offer.''

''On the eve of September 14th, the Gates of Hell open under the Ludovico manor, releasing two pairs of demons. When one faction plans on eating the household members, the second offers them a chance of salvation. Given the chance to change the world that had forsaken them, Valente and Chiara prepare to challenge the new order that governs the three worlds.''