Talk:Sinine Pael/@comment-24296957-20140724144736

I feel like this OC is lacking. You said she has a semblance, yet I don't see it on the page, nor do I see a fighting style.

Also, electric dust is yellow. Now light blue.

As for the...ribbon. Clairvoyancey isn't in RWBY. So change that how you may, but the ribbon part being her lifeline isn't truly canon. You could say it's a memento of sorts.

For now,

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--