Talk:Cinnamon Trebass/@comment-24678303-20150417193652

There's a mistake in the first paragraph where she was in Atlas and somehow got bored and left Vale.

Next up, it states that she just decided to go to Beacon one day with NO combat experience prior to it. This is a nono. All Beacon students have gone through a LOT of combat training before being able to even be CONSIDERED for Beacon. Plus, there was no real reason for her getting expelled.

Let me get this next part straight. Taiyang chose her, an ex-Beacon student, to come BACK to Beacon and be a student once more on his team, despite having claimed that "she didn't need it in the first place". Something here doesn't add up, i'll leave what exatly that is to you.

Nice smartassery in the Apperance.

What exactly is "hand fire"...?

Grimm hate loud noises according to what/whom...? Last i knew, sound actually attracted Grimm, not run away.

The listed stats need a bit of nerfing/balancing.

So, she's apparently part of Haiyang's supposed harem...? Well. Correct me if i'm not understanding this correctly.

Anyways, rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~