Talk:Judge Falk/@comment-19541665-20130916040908

Okay, first things first. A solid piece of writing, withgood detail to boot. Second, you should have physical details and appearance in the same category, just have them in seperate paragraphs. Third, biographys should be up the top near appearance and personality rather than the bottom. As I've said to someone else, people will want to know about who our character is first, then find out about his other attributes and details.