Talk:Vérdant B. Zemli/@comment-13593058-20171118063406

Verdant B. Zemli Review

Appearance
Appearance present.

Personality
Personality present.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Semblance is ok, but the description should include the rate of energy transfer and an indication of sensing/transfer range.

Backstory
The backstory is ok. However, it would be better if you state the location like Vale, Mistral, etc.

Miscellaneous
Colour reference noted.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- No inconsistencies

Review Summary
Nothing to talk about but some polishing

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