Talk:Fēng Lán sè Kuang/@comment-7489529-20140205040739

Ok, you wanted my COMPLETELY HONEST OPINON so here it is.

It's rough. Very rough. And it could use some toning down. Maybe explain the science behind his semblance, like what it does to create wind. The sword sounds like a good idea, but still kind of can't wrap my mind around how its mechanisms would help you. I do think that you are onto something though, weapon-wise. I don't like the beard, but that's just me. Work on him a bit more.