Talk:Keiri Aozora Hogosha/@comment-26388029-20140803081256

First of all, see a lot of influence from her brother. Then again, I guess it's acceptable, since they're blood-related.

I see no real problems with the OC so far. She seems like she'll be fun to RP with, and her personality is detailed as well.

The thing that irks me a bit, though, is that her weapons are, fundamentally, the same thing as what her unknown brother possesses. While I don't think it's serious, it's just a detail that kinda bothers me.

Other than that, I don't really have any problems. I look forward to seeing this OC completed.