Talk:Ama Topaz/@comment-30530552-20171110180931

Okay, let's take a look here.

CNR checks out.

Appearance - typically if your Faunus trait is ears, they are an extra set of ears, like with Blake, Fennec, Sienna, etc. I would adjust it so they're right over the human ears. Aside from that, you're good.

Personality is okay, though a couple of points could just as easily have been put in the Trivia section as they're more of personal quirks.

First major problem: You're missing the general combat section(s) - Weapon, Semblance, etc. As a Huntress, at the very least you need to establish her weapon and what it does and considering you've outlined her Semblance in the profile, you need that detailed as well. Therefore, the page is incomplete, so it'll be a simple removal from Pending until you add those.

Backstory looks okay, more or less.

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-Removal from Pending due to being incomplete.

~RP Moderation Team~