Alyss Poole

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RWBY OC II

Name: Alyss Poole

Nickname: ---

Age: 16 (initiation day)

Gender: Female

Race: Human

Symbol: A blue and white door behind a leather-bound book

Affiliation(s): Beacon Academy student, former Torchwick goon

Hometown: Earth

The Character’s Appearance

Height: 5' 5"

Weight: 55kg

Eye Color: Cerulean Blue

Hair: Straight dark brown hair usually in a neat ponytail

Complexion: Fair

Aura color: Sky Blue

About the Character

Status: Active

Occupation: Student

Handedness: Right-handed

Clothing: (Casual) A plain white polo and blue shorts, and black stockings plus leather boots. She also wears a light brown military hat with her symbol on the front. (Combat) a snug fitting black and white bodysuit, under a long blue and white trench coat, plus black combat boots and white fingerless gloves. The coat has several metal attachments along the back, this is where her weapon will attach itself when powered down.

Outfit Colors: Sky-blue, grey, and white

Physical Characteristics: Athletically fit and agile,

Accessories: Sleek blue bracelets

Personality: Alyss would have been a generic “modern girl thrust into a fantasy world” if not for her (destructive recklessness and near chaotic persona, plus the fact that she keeps referring to the reader). She seems like a walking bomb, but under that disguise is a very caring individual who just wants everyone to be happy, but knowingly makes sacrifices in order for the story to go the way it did in the original canon.

Fear(s): change in the inevitable future

Likes: mushrooms

Dislikes: Unexpected events

Habit(s): Muttering to herself, saying “this didn’t happen” or “this is new”, randomly addressing no one in particular, occasionally calling some people “filler characters”

Fatal Flaw(s):

Strengths: Memorized the timeline of the RWBY universe, and very familiar with the lore of everything.

Weaknesses: Surprise attacks and magic. Also extreme long range attacks

Weapon: Twin meter long staves that have beam emitters at one end, both can combine to form a long bo staff with beam emitters at the opposite ends.

Weapon Name: Funnels of Freyr

Weapon Description: Freyr is the entirety of the wing shaped weapon and is capable of remote combat.

Chrome blue and matte white metal appendages are referred as ‘Funnels’, which attach to the back of Alice’ coat. Its arrangement is very similar to angels wings although each funnel can detach and become weapons of Alice choosing. (refer to strike freedom and hi nu)

The funnels are capable of flight, being able to lift Alice up in the air for a short amount of time. It is also capable of emitting beams of energy which can function as blades, shields, or as projectile attacks. Each feather will have to return to Alice after some time to replenish their energy.

There are six funnels in total. And Freyr has an energy battery of +100, each function drains that amount relative to its power requirement. Flight has a -0.25 power drain per funnel per minute, and a -20 power drain per minute if Alice is flying.

Alice has to constantly monitor her energy consumption especially during combat. She replaces her battery packs every now and then with spare power cells which she has on hand with her at all time.

Fighting Style: Alice performs hand gestures which the bracelets on her wrists will detect.

Gun: fingers pointed at target. Funnels will fire beams of energy at the specified target, and will return to Alice after firing three times. Alice can coordinate the firing patterns and formations of her funnels in many ways. -1 per beam

Sword: a flat open palm mimicking a blade. One funnel will emit an energy blade and will move across the battlefield according to Alice’ motions. -2 per hit

Greatsword: two flat palms held together. Several funnels will join to create a five meter long energy blade that can easily cut an Altesian Knight. This function has a lengthy recharge time and requires the funnels to immediately return to Alice. -25 per slash

Shield: one arm in a defensive gesture. Two funnels will combine together with their outer surfaces facing the point of attack, and the inner surfaces towards Alice. -0

Aegis: fists closed and both arms crossed in front of Alice’ chest. Funnels will position each other at certain angles, and then a film of solid energy will materialize between the funnels. The more funnels Alice would dedicate to this action, the stronger the barrier is.

Relationship with Others

Reputation: “

Friends: Teams RWBY and JPNR,

Team: Team: August Jeaga, Copran Brutian

Enemy(ies):

The Character’s Abilities

Agility: 7/10

Weapon Mastery:    9/10

Long Range Accuracy:   8/10

Defense: 8/10

Offense: 8/10

Aura: 4/10

People Skills:   5/10

Special Skill(s): She can exploit the plot armor of the main characters. And, with her excellent hand-eye-coordination, she can manipulate the battlefield with her funnels.

Semblance: Unknown (Vol 1-3)

Brief History: Alyss would have been a generic “modern girl thrust into a fantasy world”, except for the fact that she killed herself before she was reborn in Remnant. She appeared a year before Vol 1, and has been investigating on everyone. She briefly went undercover as a White Fang operative in order to keep watch on the villains while the protagonists were in their trailer scenes. She was also present during Blake and Yang’s trailers. She also had a second reason to join undercover, which was to watch for any major changes caused by her arrival to Remnant.

Additional Information:

-       when asked about where she got her combat suit and weapons, she answers “it came from Vacuo.”

Trivia:

-       She is based on Alice in Wonderland, thus her blue and white color scheme.

-       This instance of remnant that she entered is her very own fanfic.

-       Her weapons are heavily based on the Dragoons from Gundam Seed Destiny.