Talk:Cordama Verviel/@comment-22854550-20160422152732/@comment-28185759-20160422154418

No problem. As it was my first submission, I was sure that there would be a multiple of things that would be noted for rejection. Now that I know the experience and the criteria for being rejected, I will be able to flesh out my characters in a more orderly way.

Ill be sending him back into pending, once I have the changes done and in a more acceptable manner.

Thanks you for your assessment.