User blog:KuraiJack/Character help needed.

I need to improve my character http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Kurai_Jack_Jade, but unfortunately I have run into a few dead ends when deciding how to change him, I would like your opinions on certain aspects of my character that I was told to change.

1. Race: He's currently a cyborg, since there has been no cyborgs in the actual show I was told to change it, but I can't decide if he should be a human or a fauna.

2. Powers: He's too OP. But I can't decide what powers to keep.

3. Personality: Do you think it's O.K.? Or are there some parts I change?

4. Backstory: Is it O.K. or is there something I could change to make it better?

I appreciate the help I receive, but I can only edit the page after the OC contest.