Thread:Taki-Tan/@comment-30202748-20170416202632/@comment-29264888-20170609005052

I'm unsure where the changes are in the backstory.

For the semblance, we did discuss it out already right? Or is there something you added that we didn't talk about?

And for prowess and abilities, it fits, but not all of it. Are you sure this fighting style works with his semblance? The fighting style utilizing quick string of attacks doesn't seem fit when he uses telekinesis.

Shouldn't he be relying more on the bursting power and damage output behind his attacks rather than accumulating small strikes to equal bigger ones?

You're neglecting the semblance when his fighting style is made more for agile duelist types.

Do I need to reword this to explain?