User blog comment:Trogdor7620/RE:I've Just Pasted Myself In Red Sap and Wandered Into Ursa Territory/@comment-24105599-20131222234332

It's not bad at all. I don't know why everybody always assumes these kinda things are going to be bad. Given, I personally am not a fan of the particular genre, or anything to do with self-insertion, but writing-style wise and in terms of flow and consistency it works great too.