Thread:PurpleGrapes124/@comment-22439-20140710084958/@comment-13488655-20140710092649

Looks like a good OC. :)

I'd say the most interesting part is the weapon and semblance. It's quite interesting about how you gave an example about how she uses her semblance and how the weapon works, but I think the page should be fleshed out more. For example, does her clothing aid her in any way in battle? (For example, is it light weight and helps her move faster? Or does she have good stamina, speed or defence?) Just highlighting even small points can make your charater feel more unique. Does she have any habbits while doing things? (Like how some people pace to help them think.)

You need to add a background and trivia section.

For Trivia, you could add the meaning of her name and her color reference.

Hope this helps :)