Talk:Micheal Korry/@comment-933831-20130815052332/@comment-5726563-20130818215133

Seems like you fixed the problems that Bori said you had, so I'm inclined to pass you, though I would still suggest toning him down a bit, or possibly adding a few flaws. He was sheltered so how would this affect his interactions with others? Would he be rude? Anyways, I imagine you can work on that later. As of now, accepted.