Talk:Forest Drake/@comment-10337166-20160708193927

One main problem with this OC is his description as a 'sadistic sociopath.' Those two don't work together, either he's one or the other. Sociopaths lack empathy and are often overtly charming to cover this fault, they're either calculating and good at blending in, or they're social outcasts unable to function easily in society. Id you wanted to pair that with sadism he'd be a psychopath.

For example, if a sociopath is driving down a road and there's a person in the way, they'd drive through them if they were directly in their path. A psychopath, would swerve to hit them, does that make sense?

Anyway, just fix that up and you'll be fine, it's more a technicality issue as is.

Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~