Talk:Iris Gurgen/@comment-25924729-20200117054054

There are issues with her appearance. Its said she is a wolf faunus and the page has the fauns tag, but there is no faunus trait listed anywhere? If she has one, what it is and what it looks like should be added to the appearance section.

Personality is actually very relatable. Being a leader and symbol is a very stressful and difficult job from personal experience. I kinda like that.

Backstory seems alright. I like that you incorporate bits of the show's lore like the general attitude in Mantle being negative towards Atlas, and a drug industry in Mistral. Nicely fitting and logical imo. Theres also something about all this taking place in the general small region of Mistral and Atlas i really like, its hard to describe.... i guess it feels realistic? Most people dont really travel far or have the means to set up life in a completely different part of the world, keeping it all local is oddly practical.

Not having a single signature weapon is fine, as long as you remember to keep whatever she uses in RP reasonable. This shouldnt be used as an excuse to carry 10 guns on her person or deus ex machina and pull out whatever weapon  she happens to need in RP for example.

Other combat abilities seem fine. Lack of a semblance and aura is noted. Normally this would make her extremely weak but given she isnt a typical fighter but a strategist this seems okay.

CNR checks out, no other issues found. Pretty simple but neat character overall, just needs a very small fix at the appearance.

Rejected.

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