Thread:KuraiJack/@comment-25363089-20150314202601/@comment-25363089-20150421213254

Thanks i'll take any help you or any one can give cause i am wanting to good on my reviews i want to where the reviewers will say this oc is a well  written oc an i can see the flaws an how that will effect them an stuff.I want to start working on koray since he is the basic frame for how nickelae and flint became rivals of sorts.Then i want to work on Nickelae an his relationship with flint an the nightingale family.