Talk:Iona winter/@comment-933831-20131009020151

Okay... A few issues here. 800 Meters is WAYYYYY too long for a whip. By a lot. Secondly, an omnidevice for computers on a whip simply doesn't work as a concept. How can something hook into/control computers with a whip? Third, it's very out of universe for a character to have a distinct hatred for Dust. They cannot live without dust. The ships use dust to move, her beloved technology uses Dust to work, it just doesn't make sense. Lastly, it doesn't make sense for Ozpin to seek out a student purely on grades, especially when they haven't done anything in particular noteworthy in combat. Beacon doesn't just throw around invitations, most people have to apply. For those reasons, rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--