User blog:StarlightAT/Original Story Synopsis

Okay so I need help...I got two story ideas, and one I got going farther than the other. As such the one I got going is going to be the first to be worked on. Problem is, I need to find a way to make this less generic and more appealing...what wait the hell am I saying....it wil still have cliches and be sorta generic.,..but you know what....its choosing between evils and I went with the lesser. Everyone I talked to about it says its a very interesting piece and that they would read it...but thats when I tell them the first or so volume of the series.

As such, I know there are harsh....helpful.....hopefully....critices on here and I am asking for your help.

Plot:'' Inferno Academy is an ordinary school; different school levels, different curriculum for each teacher, the extracurricular activities... everything is normal. Valente and Chiara are two students whom known one another since childhood. Having moved in together after the disappearance of their parents, they have recently started dating, and both can easily agree on one thing, the world sucks.''

''A Hell’s Gate opens up underneath their house and two pairs of demons end up coming out. One side wants to eat the humans, the others are willing to make contracts with them to keep them alive.''

“To hell with that.”

''Those words sparked the beginning of an adventure that would span not one but three worlds. The normal students lives take a drastic turn as they agree to help the demons repair the broken world. The only problem is, they go to a school that trains devil hunters. Once a devil is caught on campus, hell will raise.''

Oh well, not like they aren't used to fighting their fellow classmates and teachers if the time came.

Inspiration: Divine Comedy, YuYuHakusho, Phi Brain, No Game No Life, Mondaiji, “Scarlet Story” by nano

So...how do I make this more interesting, less generic, and something that looks like a rather good read. If you require more information, just message me on my wall.

Either way, I hope this sounds somewhat interesting and something that can be turned from fantasy to high fantasy. And yes. there will be romance/drama and me doing my damnest to explore the human mind that is fragile and fractures. Going Da Vinci Code on dis shit!