Talk:Alice Weston/@comment-8182065-20130815022806

I think she needs a bit more description in the Appearance and Backstory a bit more. What she wears, "shirts of many kinds and costumes" is really vague. And wear does her black battle armor come from after changing her form? The backstory is good, just needs a bit more explaination and it's also a bit bland.

Still a good character otherwise, but I've seen the dragon thing done so many times.