Talk:Azura MacLeod/@comment-24087318-20140101071108

I left my opinions of the Children of Grimm faction in another review I did, so I will not include them here.

That being said, this characters Semblance is too close to a canon characters, and cannot be accepted.

In addition, it's not explained where she aquires these abilities of enhanced eyesight or reflexes.

In addition, the characters "innocence" decoy is contradictory to the rest of their behavior. The character doesn't have any amount of cunning, only following orders. And her emotional drive has been too ruined for her to plausibly be able to commit to this surprise attack. Not to mention her lack of speech, which is a substantial amount of human social interaction.

Due to the above, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~