Talk:Greyson Clarke/@comment-25555436-20150312022220/@comment-8182065-20150324222607

It's better now, no objections from me. However, don't be afraid to branch out and do some research on a couple of names to be a bit more creative with the name if you want to. Greyson is fine, but anyone could come up with that; maybe you could find a name that relates to music as well as a color.

To quote the RP Moderation Guide, "Names are creative and unique, break the mold! Use other languages, find something that fits, then spin it a few times to make it your own!" so feel free to experiment with a few. You can use this site (http://www.behindthename.com) to find a couple of meanings for names as well as just searching online.

And also as Live mentioned, Time control based abilities are deemed too OP for Semblances at this time. How it's used on your character is overpowered in the sense where it seems like he can dodge pretty much any attack.