Talk:Hashigo Burakku/@comment-27743663-20161215020851

CNR, sure, it works. The spelling comes out as odd given you use singular words rather than the coherent sentence as it does in Kanji, so keep that in mind.

Appearance is fine.

Personality is fine.

Backstory, Just a note for his organization, given their targets, just remember they can't affect canon in anyway. They're not that major in the grand scheme, after all.

Weapon still has that issue of notathing-ium. The material described for the sword is so scripted and perfect, it shouldn't exist. Just stick to actual materials, or at the least a fanmade one that works.

Semblance, 10 second trade for 30 second cool-off is fine, just a note that doing it for long periods of time will make him tire out faster since he's technically moving more and at a quicker page.

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

- Weapon material

~RP Moderation Team~

If you believe there's been a mistake or need assistance on the matter, leave a message on my wall.