Talk:Feray Säde/@comment-25924729-20191104072557

Thats an... interesting quote :v Joke aside, cool character, lots of nice little tidbits and details to think about when looked at closely, feels very warm and human.

Appearance and personality are pretty good. She parts of the backstory are not really clear, like what exactly the Vipers and Sade family are and what they do, what Kohaku's backstory is etc. It's possible to speculate based on context, and while it's not rejectable, some extra detail would be helpful if you ever rework this page.

Relationships section seems alright, if a little incomplete with all the TBAs?

Weapons, abilities and semblance are all alright, balanced out nicely.

CNR works, no other issues found. Some extra info and small tweaks at parts would be nice, but the page overall looks good.

Accepted.

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