Talk:Angelus Flos/@comment-24197653-20131221165739

In your characters case, I would ellaborate more on it in terms of your weapon and finishing move. As in how does she use the pole vault? As a staff or does she throw it? All we know is that it's collapsable

Also as far as we know in RWBY there's no such thing as thunder dust so we can't really be putting it in our oc's since all that we know about dust is that there's Red for fire, White for ice, and Cyan for impact so in this case we'd have to wait to see if more forms of dust are added.

And in your finishing move, what exactly causes the bolts of lightning to hail down on the enemy? Is it the staff or is it Angelus herself?

All the oc really needs mostly is ome ellaboration and consider that we don't know of there being thunder dust yet so keep that in mind.

Other than that i really do likke everything else ^v^