Talk:Noir Nightshade/@comment-27743663-20161210043746

CNR checks out.

Appearance is fine.

Personality is barebones and mostly trope, but it's passable.

Backstory is not passable. Genetic modications aren't a thing.

Weapons are a no as well. Her secondaries, her pistols, are stated to transform. Only the primary can. Then later on you state a surplus of weapons that would fall under secondary as well, including her armored jump-kit. So, choose between all her secondaries.

Semblance is a no since genetic modification isn't a thing.

Skills, guess what still isn't a thing? Genetic modification. No Enhanced abillities. Well, as for adjusting eyes, that'd be an issue all Faunus would have to deal with, and it hasn't been shown they need to. While interesting, don't think it poses much of a problem. Just a minor note.

Tl;dr

Rejected on

- Backstory, genetic modications.

- Pick a secondary.

- Semblance

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