Talk:Nyx Starshine/@comment-29116378-20150908004856

Hey, Rajani. Nyx is looking good so far, but there are a few things I'd like to point out.

About her gliding: Now, you said that she couldn't fly, which is okay. But the gliding... to some people, that could be considered very similar to flying. Not sure about that, but might be reject-worthy.

For her Semblance, once again, I'm not sure. Because she creates ravens out of shadows, there is a slight possibility that it could be rejected. But Shade's Semblance allows her to create things out of shadows, and she was accepted on my first time putting her in Pending, so I think the Semblance is fine.

And you might want to describe her weapon more. I doubt it's reject-worthy like that, but a bit more detail is nessecary.

Also, all characters are required to have a backstory on how they got to Beacon. You should probably add that in at some point.

I know I'm not a reviewer, but since you're a good friend of mine, it felt right to help you out.