Talk:Marias O. Newastral/@comment-13172690-20160707030435

Backstory is still incomplete. How was she able to attend Beacon Academy? Did she attend another combat school? Forge her transcripts? When did her father die? How did she get her weapon? Lot of holes here and I would look at other accepted characters and guidelines for more info.

Also, your semblance still needs a cooldown limit and/or time limit. Place a limiter on the semblance.

Overall,

Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~