Talk:Team Havoc/@comment-1317707-20140224121736/@comment-24113789-20140402144331

I think I changed the "soft blue trees" into "blue hologram trees". The idea of "soft trees" seemed more and more ridiculous to me the more I thought about it.

I actually kind of get a kick out of Sara. She is actually kinda sorta named after my mother Sarah as a joke on how we sometimes do not get along. Hopefully she will have a noticeable effect on the story, but keeping track of multiple characters is my biggest weakness in writing. If I can pull it off, I will try to write an argument somewhere so that people reading it mostly sympathize with one but not the other... if I can pull it off. It will be tricky. But yeah if all goes well you will see more of Sara in future chapters.


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