Talk:Quaralia R. Rosalinda/@comment-31408668-20200110210902

COLOR NAME REFERENCE

Color name reference is recognized. Quaralia is a deriviative of the name Quarraalia, an Aboriginal name meaning star.

APPEARANCE

Quite the fashonista indeed. There were quite a few different outits that she wears or has worn during her tenure, but they are described in very digestible chunks. The descriptions of each outfit are short, but they are easy to follow, allowing you to earily create a picture in your head. On a personal note, I really like the description of her Mistralian outfit. No problems here.

PERSONALITY

The caring critic. It's a stereotype often applied to the fashonista archetype, but with good reason. To work with fashion requires a keen eye for detail. I like that she has emotional highs, and also a flaw in her being very easy to agitate. The progression of her loosing faith, and turning to her family to regain is also a nice touch. No obvious contradictions. No problems here.

BACKSTORY

Quite the childhood genius when it comes to fashion and design. It is interesting to read about a figure that is meant to have some amount of fame, a foray I have only started going into myself, as it does make a lot of sense that someone eventually makes a name for themselves. Thank you for adding the clarification about Nightmarian Eye, as it was needed context. Noted the nod to the Fall of Beacon and her actions afterward. No stepping on canon toes. Noted as absent at the Vytal Festival, however was present in Vale. No problems here.

WEAPONS AND COMBAT

The weapons are within guideline specifications. We have, post BoB, a set of stacked primary rings in the form of Crystal Casters and a secondary dust boom in the form of Light's Path. It's always cool to see someone not have any obvious weapons, before they deck you with a Dust infused punch. I like that her fashion accessories are her primary weapon. The effects seem well measured, the limitation of one dust type per ring was needed. Overall, Crystal Casters are a good way of merging her Huntress side and fashionista side.

As for Light's Path, it does make more sense a secondary. It is less handleable, more bulky, and seems more like a mana battery, in essence. However, I am happy to see she kept it with her, as I would imagine the Dust rings would run out somewhat quickly. No problems here.

As for Quaralia's skill in combat, it is measured well. She is less direct in combat, which would make sense with her specialized role as a Dust caster. I am curious to see how she handles being forced to fight without Dust, to see how she handles it. No problems here.

SEMBLANCE

Star Step as a Semblance is very simple, but nontheless effective in it's application. The ability to create a matter that you can stand on in midair is very useful for everything, as an escape tool, as a distraction or as a weapon in a few select cases. The Semblance seems to be balanced well, with the amount of glyphs she can call forth at any time. I wish you were more specific with how much Aura one glyph costs to hold up, but I will assume it is average to the Semblance's effect. The glyphs being breakable is also a necessary and appreciated touch. We have necessary limiters, in the form of a vitality limiter, an amount limiter, as well as an object damage limiter. No problems here.

CONCLUSION: ACCEPTED

'''Quaralia will be a fine addition to the Fanon, Ruby. Everyone needs a fashionista, especially with the outfits that these Huntsmen and Huntresses wear. Much like I said about Miyuki... solid effort.'''

Also, as noted by the Guidelines update, the Grandfather Clause has been repealed, and will therefore be removed with this review.

- Raikou