Talk:Kaili Hart/@comment-10337166-20161030052535

Just some story inconsistencies that are sticking out to me.

So she was 6 years old and people were alredy approching her and trying to get her to join their organization? Were they planning a raid on the day care and needed an inside man? Some timelining would help A LOT.

Secondly, you don't say HOW she got into Beacon, fake papers, combat school etc etc etc You don't jsut show up and get in you need some kind of crediential.

Semblance. I'm generally uncomfortable with any multi use teleportation semblance which has no cooldown other than a global cooldown once charges are used. I realize it's limited by shadows, but at night she has 10 free teleports to anyware, adding a CD between teleports would help greatly.

Rejected

~RP Moderatio Team~