Talk:Avery Rachel Chere/@comment-17970636-20140427175346

Very detailed character, just a few issues.

It has been shown that Dust is volatile and used only in conjuncton with weapons. Ruby merely sneezing around some dust was enough to set off their properties, being able to weild dust in a fashion in which Lacy uses it, is currently unseen. Perhaps seeing Velvet in season two will raise some of the questions present.

In terms of semblance, creating weapons out of light is interesting. However, a Semblance has been shown to be either glyphs, which pertain "magical properties". Some other semblances that deal with elements, deal with the properties of elements, such as magnetism (Pyrrha). For your case, I recommend controllable glyphs that can form into certain shapes (kind of like Glynda) and put a limiter on how many she can make, how long they last, what they form, how long they can get, etc.

I'm certain you wont leave my anything to critisize on your next run around.

Welcome Back Terra.

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