Talk:Nero Sarif/@comment-26441997-20150608235122

Interesting character design you've got here, I'm curious to see of what you could do with this character! I have to say though, you may want to work out the formatting a little better; turning the sections into actual headers will help to clean up the layout a little bit better and make things more distinguishable.

You may want to talk about the semblance a bit more before it is actually reviewed, but aside from that and some simple grammatical errors throughout, this seems like a well balanced character. Good job!