Thread:DustpeltX/@comment-5426254-20160308055652/@comment-13593058-20160308181632

That doesn't sound bad actually, but I think I'd like to tweak it a bit. Alice isn't a very vindictive type of character. While she acknowledges that Barne's is a criminal here, I don't think she would necessarily hunt him down. This is due to the fact that she percieves people like Barnes as a universal constant, however, I like to think that she would try and get Vert and the others kicked out of the club in the interest of their safety in the guise of still working for Barnes. She'd probably try to talk it out with her "co-workers" saying these were just some stupid kids trying to "play Hunter" and that the other guards were just being unreasonably rough.

She still doesn't know about the the arena so I don't think her view on Barnes is enough to get her to really "betray" Barnes in a sense. To her, it's just a gut feeling and I suppose she's more concerned about the kids in front of her that's about her sister's age who are at risk of being killed in something they shouldn't be involving themselves in.

You could write her with that kind of motivation in your next post, though I wouldn't put in her thought process. You should just use her as a text robot and present it from Vert's point of view. Obviously, he'd be angry at her for turning them over and/or ejecting them from the club. Something along the lines of "criminals stay criminals" or something. I'll explain Alice's actions in her point of viein my post.