Talk:Diam Norda/@comment-25924729-20181215125838

Very short and simple character, not much to comment on.

Appearance, personality and backstory are fine, albeit very short and more details would benefit the quality of the page imo, but this isnt rejectable.

Semblance and weapons seem alright too, but do note that faunus with wings as a trait are not allowed to fly with them, since we havent seen any examples of such in the show. Gliding short distances is alright though, or using them to jump further. I only bring this up cause the last paragraph of this section mentions she uses her wings as a means of mobility.

I cant confirm that Dianne refers to any sort of pink colour. It is a valid CNR though, since Diana is another name for Artemis, goddess of the moon which brings to mind white and silver. You could change it to this, or provide a link or mention where you got the pink reference from.

So yeah... very close, its mostly just the name issue that needs clarifying. Nice try.

Rejected.

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