Talk:Reina Kaminari/@comment-24296957-20140522230323

Okay, here's the verdict.

The...weapon needs work, to say the least. For starters, a bo staff only comes up up to the user's head or collarbone. Even Sun follows this policy. Now while this is, in fact, a universe where the absurd is normal, there has to be some logic. I have no problem with it extending out with chains...but evidently, the staff should be downsized, as well as the extended form.

Which comes to my next issue. How can a bo staff transform into a crossbow? Where are the cambers and wires needed to peform this transformation, let alone have a crossbow bolt, which has no sort of gunpowder charge, travel 2 miles, when the longest recorded kill in history is just under a mile and a half with a sniper rifle? How could Reina be able to aim that far without some kind of wicked high powered scope?

Also, 40 bolts at 5 RPS? A normal crossbow can only hold about 7, max. I understand this is the RWBYverse, but 40? It needs to be downsized. Speaking of, where is the magazine loaded? How does the weapon tranform?

As such,

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--