Talk:Shade Stygian/@comment-17970636-20160116111820

Alright, well, for starters, ignoring that his backstory appears to be Blake except male format and this statement is happily reinforced by his attire. You have the whole deal of him moving two years early into Beacon which is Ruby-reminiscent and frankly, unacceptable as she's a special case and the only one, surprise surprise because they'd be in the same year if she had and frankly, moving two years ahead is a no-no, doesn't matter if you're God reincarnate (which no OC can't be because frankly that'd be overpowered).

You're still trying to pull off the no weapon's deal, quit it, because frankly, it won't be accepted. I direct you to Arslan Altan once more who still used a Rope Dart even though she walloped Yang with her bare fists.

Glynda's semblance isn't anywhere near a proper explanation for making something like this. So just because Emerald can force people to see what she wants to see I can enforce mind control? No, I can't. And frankly, posting a link to another site to explain your semblance automatically tells me how little you've attempted to try for something unique, as well as the fact that giving something you can't grasp form and hardness? Yeah no sorry things don't really work like that.

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--