Talk:Rain Allenbow/@comment-25924729-20190612092654

Raindrops keep falling on my head, lalalala...~

Personality and backstory sections seems good. I like the idea of a person suffering a a result of her semblance. Its been done before, but still pretty unique among most others OCs here whose semblances are useful and mastered easily to make them uber badass.

Semblance seems very interesting, if not in concept, then in what effect it has on her. Reminds me of Juvia from the early seasons of Fairy Tail actually. Still, more explanation of its limits are needed. Like how big of an area the rain falls over, for how long, how intensely etc, to get a grasp of its power.

Page is missing an appearance and weapons section. There is nice artwork, and basic details about her looks in the template. Still, even a short mention of it in paragraph form is preferred. Same goes for weapons, even if she doesnt have one it must say so on the page.

She also doesnt have a trivia section, and with it a CNR explanation. Rain is very obviously coompliant with the CNR already, but you must still menion it on the page.

It a great character, but missing so much. Come on... i wanna read more about her.

Rejected,

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