Thread:Takeshi kun21/@comment-13488655-20140113114648/@comment-8182065-20140113234548

Maybe not start off with drowning, go with something smaller and let the lies gradually increase as he got older. And If his sister was drowning maybe Yori would tie hmself one of the posts holding up the pier, the one the family uses for their fishing trips perhaps, since a street light wouldn't really be so close to open waters.

It'd also be good to make the story a bit more "unbelievable" like when his sister KO'ed started to sink below the waters, Yori dived down to get her, and there could've been an aquatic Grimm or 2 coming after the both of them. Yori couldn't waste time battling it since they were still underwater, so he fired Water Lotus' cannon at it, which also propelled them upward.

He would then emerge from the water, his family, police, a few hunters, etc would be there as well. Yori would tell his story, it was obvious that he did save his own sister, but the people that came wouldn't believe the Grimm that came after them (they'd just think he was lying to make him sound better). That's when a Hunter, one not from the area (otherwise he'd be agreeing with the crowd), would take his word for his efforts and grant him acceptance Beacon.