User blog comment:JackWasup/Need some helpful advice on somethings.Please/@comment-24617443-20150611000217/@comment-25363089-20150611022139

Right working the backstory haven't finish that one yet but okay i'll fix the fighting style section a little bit more an yeah i was worrying about the personality section.Well glad you gave some advice on it.Also working on fixing the semblance around make sound more like how i want to.Cause right now its yeah bad and i'll admit it.But yeah gonna work the personality section a we bit more.Cause i know where i am going with it just have a hard time getting the words out.An yeah grammar and spell is my weak spots been working on them still suck at them but working.Okay personality section here i come!Again thanks.