Talk:Kizutsu Tamashi/@comment-17970636-20131003030410

Very nice, I must say that making a fauna without using the general fauna characteristics was a risk, but you pulled it off well.

In her history, being shunned from humans and faunas alike makes her a unique case, as faunas generally are accepted as their own, so a nice twist to the story.

Next off, her weapon. Powerful, very much so, but for some reason, doesn't fit the image of the angel in my head. If you wanted to go for the full angel effect I'd go with her being either a pure aura user, as she uses her aura to fight the Creatures of Grimm, or if you wanted a conventional weapon for her, possibly a bo-staff or a kind of spear. I have no complaints about the weapon itself, just that it doesn't seem to fir her image. One thing I do haev to complain about her though, is the ability to fly. If flying caused her a bit of strain at least, then maybe it wouldn't be used as much in battle, but all I can imagine her doing now is flying away from adversary, maybe nerfing that just a bit?

Lastly, her personality, again, fits with the angel theme, kind, sympathetic, and very caring, I can't wait to see what you do with her in terms of expansions and RPing.

Overall score from me: 8.5/10