Thread:Jadefire62/@comment-26570606-20170509012111/@comment-26570606-20170626012600

That's honestly me. Sometimes I force myself to write an actual response so I don't sound rude. XD

Aww, that's cute! That's kind of like my dog, except my dog would be full on sitting on her lap. :P

Anyways, earlier you said you wouldn't mind hearing more of my fanfic fuckups. So here are the next biggest two, the ones that are almost as bad as the Midity fridge horror.

I put in TOO. MANY. FUCKING. CHARACTERS. I introduced the alternate personalities then I forgot them at about chapter 35. Plus all the FT characters that I tried to make important... XD. I don't have much else to say on this point.

The whole love triangle. It was forced and unnecessary. I spent too long dragging it out, and it lead nowhere. It was literally arguing, moment with one guy, arguing again, moment with other guy. I have a lot more complaints about this one specific part of the fanfic... I'll spare you. :P