Talk:Carmot Arken/@comment-31408668-20190304034650/@comment-31759930-20190312042326

Thank you for the detailed review! I understand your points and want to work with you guys to make Carmot workable for this Wiki/Community.

Prose and Compression

Regarding the prose and compression, I understand the need to shorten the profile and will do so as suggested, but I also don't want to lose the detail/depth I have created for those who may be interested in reading more.

Is there an existing category I can use to put that information or should I create a new one?

I will create separate pages for Nitro Dust and the DAEC and link to them.

Vytal Festival Problems

Could you be specific about where the minor problem regarding Carmot and team's Vytal Festival placement so that I can correct it?

Semblance

I knew I was playing with fire for the Semblance since I wanted to try and create something unique and ambitious, so it's only natural I get burned. I'll do an overhaul of the Semblance and see if I can try and salvage the concept. If you guys believe the entire Semblance conept should be scrapped, I'll completely change it to something more sensible.

Again, thank you for the detailed review. I look forward to working with you guys in the future this character and more.