Talk:Ivory Knight/@comment-24296957-20140609222658

Alrighty, so here's my issues.

As a Semblance, we don't accept being able to read a person's mind for any period of time. Having x-ray vision is still up for debate, as well. If you're unsure on a semblance, you can always say the OC doesn't know theirs. Perhaps we'll see more information is Volume Two.

I'd also like to see a fighting style, and how that carries onto the weapon.

Which, speaking of which, is kinda overpowered with the whole gleaming thing. I know what you're trying to get at with it. But being able to easily and effectively hinder someone's vision with it is bordeline OP.

Not that's there's anything wrong with the backstory, but I'd personally like to see this OC felshed out a bit more.

Rejected for now.

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