Talk:Malachite Verdigris/@comment-25924729-20191223080600

Pretty good for a new character, sounds like a very likable dude.

Appearance is fine, he looks a lot like Chris Pratt and i cannot unsee that image now. DX

Personality and Backstory are simple, nothing wrong there.

Semblance and Weapon could definitey use a little more detail, but at the moment they seem fine too.

CNR works out.

Theres only really 2 issues on this page. The first being his Team Name does not adhere to our colour naming rule. Yuo seem to understand the rule already, but both characeters and the Team itself must have a name referring to a colour. Dynamic doesnt really bring any colour to mind, or if it does i dont get it? You will need to either change the team name to contain a CNR, or if it already has one explain it to readers.

This isnt a problem inheresnt to the character itself, but after discussing with the rest of staff they believe its a  wider problem that warrants rejection until it is fixed. Im sorry.

The second issue is just regarding formatting. The page would be easier to read if you used Wikia's editin features, put each section inder its own heading etc. Just a minor gripe.

No other issues, just some small changes needed. A very good character overall.

Rejected.

If you have any questions please DM me on Wikia or DIscord.

~RP Moderation Team~