Talk:Character: Teal/@comment-24052959-20131209081257

You really need to be able to synchronize what you wrote here such as if you already put his race as a human, then the rest of his biography must be related to that. Perhaps this Tutorial can help you out.

Just keep learning without flinching. Its your first OC anyway so mistake will likely be commited. Its not like all infant will instantly learn how to walk when they first try to walk.

And if you think you're not good at this, then let me tell you something. I know certain shennanigans who do a much more worse. You at least able to write down a collection of words. But these two schmucks....... They are messed up in their own way.

Schmuck #1 - He made his OCs as a paradise to satisfy his love lust and he wrote them way too simple. Worse he lacks variety in his cast, He mostly respond to compliment than to other type of comments such as critiques.

Schmuck #2 - He claim he couldn't came up with original idea. He mostly plagiarize things and put shipt randomly without synchronizing them. He also not good in writing his own OC biography. Its too simple, worse than being cliche and most of his OC are described in a collection of alternate universe counterparts (He ridiculously has many of them) instead of collection of words. He also share several same trait as Schmuck #1 which is he developed some of his OC as his love lust paradise. Even worse, he sometimes seen self-proclaim to be more epic than the author whose stuff is plagiarized by him. He also can't differ what is criticism and what is flame. He tends to quickly jump into an ignorant decision such as using his super move called Giga User Blocker .

Now there you have two bad examples. Do you at least think you had something better than these two? If you do, then let it motivates you to improve.