Talk:Zilar Ander/@comment-24087318-20140114100314

Looking over character again due to the time it's been in Awaiting Canon Info to see if it's still the case.

Character is a Cyborg, which is a race we're not Accepting at this time still, but there's a few outlying issues that would lead to Rejection anyways.

His abilities are quite numerous and overpowered, posessing many different weapons for every single one of his cybernetic parts. Suggest toning these down or removing some of these. Look at other cyborg like characters in fiction, even if their legs are replaced too they generally don't have weaponry built into them.

As for his other abilities, optical camoflague is also quite overpowered and he posesses incredibly high amounts of all aspects of combat, strength, speed, reflexes and skills.

We havn't seen anything that generates Dust either. Dust is a crystal mined from quarries that is consumed when it's used to power things or used for its elemental properties in weapons.

Character needs an overall look at the scope and power of many of his abilities and adjustments to better fit canon in terms of them, as well as the above issues.

Due to this, will be moved into Rejected for now.

~RP Moderation Team~