Talk:Ash Steveston/@comment-13593058-20160301070715

 A Review of  Ash Steveston

Appearance
Not much to judge on a technical level.

Personality
A reasonable personality. No contradictions and has justified responses. No additional comments.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon does not contradict with existing canon weapons nor the Fanon-Rules.

Semblance contradicts with Summoning/Construct Clause, multiplication is not sourced despite being physical in nature.

Backstory
Too, long. No contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and source checks out.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Semblance contradiction

Review Summary
Semblance has unsourced power of duplication and enlargment. Can't add or create mass without a source, reasoning being physics.

Backstory is way too long for its own good. I am not questioning the quality of its content but nobody is going to willingly read that, especially with half the sentences being meaningless due to length and passive voice.

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