Board Thread:Role Plays/@comment-13488655-20150916094100/@comment-26104528-20151216004113

(...to be honest, this one felt a little weaker, mostly the pacing I wanna say.

Costructive criticism: Action sequences are perfectly fine and this is RWBY, but when 80~90% of the RP is action sequence without much pause, it gets kinda tiring.

Festival of terror felt like it had more going on in terms of encounters and enemies. This one just felt like: fight thugs on the street, fight in front of a church, fight in a parking lot, fight in a casino, fight near a mine...

I like "Rules of Nature" too, but c'mon man, re-using music?

Just out of curiosity...do you happen to draw inspiration from video games for RPs? There's nothing wrong with it; I do it too. This one had vibes of either Tom Clancy's The Division and Arkham Knight...)