Talk:Darian Rouge/@comment-10337166-20170131070700

Alrighty then there are a lot of problems with this OC

-How did a small child basically fight off two big storng white fang members

-Why did they even try to kidnap this girl in the first place?

-There's no evidence of this Underground fight club in Vale, Mistral's basically got dibs on that

-Why was he even kidnapped it makes no sense.

-Hahahahahahahaha, no, 30 plus people one small child, said small child would be the stain on someone's boot after two fights

-First semblance has no limitations, cooldowns or time limits

-Rage mode, is a really cheap way to try and have a second semblance

-How did he get into Beacon? Did he just show up there and Ozpin was like "You know that damaged, broken, mildly psychotic kid? GET HIM ON MAH DICK, I want him in my school.

This entire Character makes little to no sense

Rejected

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