Thread:BurningHype/@comment-25222469-20160425003848/@comment-24012109-20160428001058

Oh, I'm sorry. Finals week are one hell of a drug. Also I'm pretty curt when it comes to reviews, and my reviews are more spotted than simply. It ain't reviewer tier and it won't suddenly make your character accepted, but these words come from someone almost from the start of the website.

As for the OPness, yes. Here, fighting styles do count as a weapon type so that there aren't walking Masters of Martial arts when they're under 20 or something. Choose one and describe it or just stick to being decent with weapons and smart weaponless. Walking around with 6 different fighting styles is just plain broken.

Semblances should only have one ability. Strictly one ability. Said ability can do other things, but it should never be two different abilities just because. You can have a side effect that usually is cosmetic and actually doesn't do anything, but nothing beyond that. Like if I had a semblance that reduces wind resistance, that leads onto the fact that the OC is actually quiet in approach.

I don't want to nit-pick too much, so I'll leave the history and other things when you respond.