Talk:Geom-Eun Danjigja/@comment-27743663-20161210003535

CNR, couldn't find a source. Link where you got it from.

Appearance, haha, yes you do. Writing an appearnance is mandatory for everyone.

Personality, planning to outsmart an opponent is fine, but knowing you can is impossible. You can believe you know since being cocky is a thing.

Backstory, why would Atlas attack his family? Also, you just essentially labeled him as one of Remnant's most wanted criminals, which is no. The existence of LivGrid is an issue for a similar reason. It's fine to have an international organization, but one that's world renown and wanted on virtualy every list? Still no.

Weapons, the first two are fine, and that's it. There's a weapon limit of two. You surpass that by several.

Semblance is one final no. Being able to hack into literally anything is not alright. At all. Besides that, there's hardly any demerits for even using it. How would he even "gather the data?" It's not explained at all how his semblance works in a way that makes sense.

Tl;dr

Rejected on

- Lack of Appearance section

- Backstory with internationally one of the most wanted, along with his organization, plus Atlas just killing his family.

- Weapon limit

- Semblance

- Lack of CNR link

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