User blog comment:KuraiJack/Character help needed./@comment-23784953-20130815092006

I'll lend a few help.

1.Race: At the moment, due to how skilled he is, it's likely that he can be a Fauna that doesn't know his heritage.

2.Powers: Injury resistance seems to be something that everyone in planet RWBY already has, so he doesn't need it. Next, you can choose between his genius intellect, martial arts mastery and swordsmanship which you want to keep. You have to at least remove one. Alternately, you can make him older by a few notches to justify some of his skills.

3.Personality: Mostly decent. I'm terrible in giving personality feedback, unfortunately.

4.Backstory: A little expansion might be good. Preferably on his youth and heritage as he came from a line of skilled hunters.

Overall, a bit of fine-tuning may be needed. Though he's pretty close to a natural planet RWBY character once you've take him down a notch.