Talk:Ludwig Grunwald/@comment-5431934-20140804194610

The backstory has very little information, and hardly any on the particular character. This needs to be vastly expanded in order for this character to be accepted - for example, what was his life like growing up? What kind of family did he have? What kind of trials did he face? How did he get to Vytal and why was he accepted into Beacon?

For the above,

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--