Thread:KuraiJack/@comment-25363089-20160917215742/@comment-25363089-20161101183212

I think it was the wording that is throwing me off. Its fine you get the general idea of what went down. The bad guys came back stuff happened and well yeah. Its gotta be the wording i used that is just throwing me off. I'll leave it alone for now and let a reviewer review her backstory and if something comes up then i'll fix it. Cause I am looking through her backstory and yeah it looks good leaves a lot to be told. But i think you get the general premise of her life.

Now I just gotta focus on finishing up Hoshi's personality then putting her back in pending then wait 24 hours and put Margrit back in. Then done. At least its minor stuff so far that is needing fixing in them. ^-^ I am glad.