Talk:Mar Ekabs/@comment-13172690-20150210184115

Well this is a interesting character though it seems like some pieces need clarification or explaination.

Your bio is good though it is missing a piece of he was accepted to Beacon. It seems to have cut off after he returned to Signal. You could say he sent a transcript and that would be fine or did the test.

Also, your abilities section should explain his strengths and weaknesses in combat. Aside from the sea experience, the other information can be placed in trivia or even personality. Lastly, your weapon could use a bit of clarification since it seems a little confusing on the transformation with the harpoon though good concept.

Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~