Talk:Spruce Evergreen/@comment-25924729-20190414075206

Pretty fun read, a lot of extra details that do make it a little hard to find relevant information, bu add detail to the character and make him interesting.

Appearance, personality and backstory are fine, no real issue there, and its pretty well written.

Moving onto the combat sections, and the only major issues i find with this character. Being able to regularly shoot things from 4000 meters is pretty OP. Googling tells me even the best sniper shots in history were all at around 2000-3000 meters, and even those are VERY rare cases, so being able to regularly break that record by nearly 2x the distance is a little too much... I'd suggest reducing the effective range of his weapon to something more reasonable.

Portal Dust is also a little too outlandish to be allowed. It could be plausible using semblance shennanigans, but thats just not how fire, electric and gravity work. There's also issues with creating miniature black holes, as well as seeming like just an excuse to have infinite ammo, both of which are pretty OP and problematic in themselves, so i wont allow this, sorry.

As for Steel the wolf... since he is a combat trained pet, he will be treated like a utility tool for combat, it will be necesary to wrote a section for him too in this page, detailing briefly things he can do, how he fights etc. (There are new rules on this coming soon, but he seems fine, just needs a mention on the page. )

His semblance is fine, well balanced and all.

CNR checks out. And yeah... theres stuff that needs to be changed, but good character overall.

Rejected.

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