Talk:Nock-To Blutrünstig/@comment-27743663-20170102211559

CNR checks out

Appearance is fine.

Personality, it's not given how either works. Do they take turns switching places? Do they constantly clash internally? You'll need to better outline the duo work.

Background, fail to see how a 15 year old, with no aura or noted weapon training, could kill a fully fledged Hunter, with an awakened aura and advanced training. Besides that, experimentation is laaargely an /iffy/ thing in backstory, and this one is a tad too vague. Like, they were trying to make a super-soldier....and? Where does that leave him? He doesn't have any noted advancments in anything, just an acquired dual personality as a result. On that, the advancments can't be extreme either, such as on the level to take on Grimm without aura, or kill a full-fledged Hunter while 15. If that was a thing, there's no reason to not have everyone have it.

Semblance, noted to not have one, which is fine.

Weapon, well, I don't see how it's going to kill any Grimm besides the basic kind. Plus, he doesn't even have an aura. I fail to see how he could fight any Grimm at all without horribly dying. From what you've given, he's grossly under-leveled to deal with any Grimm.

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

- Vague Dual personality working

- Vague experimentation on backstory and effects

- A 15 year old killing a full-fledged Hunter.

- Information given has him under-leveled to take on Grimm

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