Talk:Hitori Kazami/@comment-27581494-20160305054548

good character, you showed me him earlier which is why im doing this.

Peer Review(in no way is it a review to get him accepted,just an overall opinion)

Appearance

you have done a great job explaining his appearance, very detailed and clear to picture, i like how you changed a portion of his clothes for vol.3 as well.

Personality

well thought out, explained clearly, he reminds me of sakamaki izayoi up to this point, was he an inspiration for this character pehaps?if not forget i mentioned.

Background

little messed up, and well thought out and written, this is one of the more important parts for a OC or character in general for me, i dont like always happy backgrounds, and consider it's rwby, i dont think thats very possible.good mention of post beacon, poor hitori, great job overall.

Abilities

for me I do say this is well written, eight years of training paid off for him i guess, little curious as to how he was trained, how many people he trained with, and how many people he had fought previously to be at that level, but fine otherwise.I like his primary, being it chains and all, reminds you of iron man 2 movie and it reminds me of a certain game i play, which makes me picture him as high versatile and dangerous all the more.his seconday's fine, though only question, how many knives does he carry?well explained how he uses dust with his weapons

Semblance

well thought, little edge for me, reminds me of a certain character that in my consideration is isanely op, but i still like it all the while, cant really give any serious opinion on it.well explained how it can be used with dust and such

Weaknesses

very well explained, and thanks for adding this as a seperate section(not judging anyone.), thankfully he is a glass cannon and semblance weaknesses explained here, still a little edge for me though but it balances him better.fighting style is an added weakness as you stated he fights in a pattern or in rythme to music, fits nice(this is the fix up for semblance behalf)

Trivia

love the trivia.names are nice and he's the only one who has hitori for a name on the wiki.

well done, i'd love to take him on, i wish you the best of luck with pending dude!

IIThe RunnerII

(p.s if you want to know about the little mentions of people i made, feel free to ask! otherwise i did post the names, beside the chain reference i said, thats from a game.people your character may reference to are sakamaki izayoi from problem children and kumagawa from maedaka box, his use of screws to skewer people is what im reminded of here.)