Talk:Raymond Han Petrie/@comment-24296957-20140616144015

While the semblance is okay, please don't overpower it. And I assume the person sipping the coffee was Ozpin. but just to make sure, could you add somewhere in there that it was him?

Also, I don't see a relation to color in his name. That's grounds for rejection.

So, for now,

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--