Talk:Akiba Tanegashima/@comment-24678303-20150417183642

You have personal intereaction with Ozpin and a non-existant (and quite questionable) Grimm in the backstory.

Masamune is WAY too OP. Tone down it's power a few notches.

Those drones are claimed to be controlled by his semblance/mind, but that would mean it is a dual purpose Semblance, which is unacceptable. While i'm on the subject, the Semblance itself is quite questionable. I'm not quite sure if that is very valid in itself as a Semblance. Plus, if the drones can attack too, technically they would be counted as a weapon along with his primary and grenades, which would break the Weapon Limit rule.

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~

On top of that, i'm quite skeptical about the whole "eyes that change color with emotion". Not really breaking any rules (now), but i still advise against it. It's been WAY too overused as of late.