Talk:Kael Chipps/@comment-30803571-20190518002146

- CNR for "Kael" checks out

- Appearance is fine

- History is fine

- Personality doesn't really describe his personality. you're giving some backstory that, while it does give insight on how his personality developped, doesn't actually describe it. it'd be better if you included a proper description.

- Weapon has a few issues

first of all, you really can't have a plasma crossbow, at that point it can't work like a crossbow anymore since it's impossible to shoot plasma (ionised gas) with a string. it'd be more of a gun or blaster, it can however look like a crossbow if you want, how and why is completely up to you. - you could clear up the firying mode. from the wording i'm assuming it has multiple frying settings, since you state it's "fully automated" (i'm assuming you mena fully automatic). also you say it can work like an assault rifle which implies it has select-fire between semi-automatic, burst and/or full-auto, but only full auto-functionality is mentioned