Talk:Deni Lowell/@comment-4806269-20161001223212

The only issue with this is that her Semblance needs more specific details...how much can she zoom in? and how many times can she use her Semblance without getting tired/burned out? Everything else is good, though you might want to check spelling as well, there are some typos out there.

Rejected for now, but fix those things and she's in

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