Talk:Nemo Haiiro Niemand/@comment-17970636-20151210234433

Whether this OC is male or female truely is not understandable. You start off with female pronouns and then suddenly switch to male, and then the personalities are both female and male, which gender is he truely? The infobox provides zero information.

Split personality is one thing but it looks like he in essence has 6, each of the different names acting differently, no allusion to when his personalities developed is shown in his backstory as well as six personalities is just overly much.

Being able to use a variety of weapons without any formal training and the fact that it also implies that he's mastered a variety of hand-to-hand combat styles especially at the age of 17 is just way too unrealistic.

Not only that but in his Marksmanship abilities it's implied he has great skill in that too, well, which is it?

The art of blacksmithing takes years upon years of vigilent training to master, so he's basically a jack of all trades and a master of all as well. Blacksmith OC's on this fanon, or at least the one's I've read are a simple practitioner of a single style and focus on enhancing their abilities, they already aren't at a higher level.

Loner and can practically survive anywhere, no mental limiters, and a high pain tolerance, this guy literally cannot die no matter the situation. That and at his age, no matter what he's gone through, he literally can't be overwhelmed by opponents who have fought for much longer, as well as extremely unrealistic.

How in the name of Remnant can someone's soul be damaged when Aura is a manifestation of the soul and Grimm don't have any. And Aura can enforce attacks, taking on the base effects Aura has on everyone it's not a stretch, however, it's simply a form to make attacks stronger, not double someone's strength.

I'm not gonna get into the physics of the creation of plasma. Even with the incredible backlash which doesn't really seem that incredible having read the OC, he'll melt anyone in seconds, imagine having the sun dropped onto you, that is in essence what he can do. Plasma would do more than melt metal, it'd vaporize it in essence. There's a reason why plasma cutters are so precise, it's almost like they remove metal from existing in a sense. I know that's not it I'm just using a slight form of exaggeration in this response, as well as not getting into Nuclear Fission to explain why this semblance is completely illogical.

Not sure how being born as half Atlas half Mistral is a bad thing but sure.

You name a Kingdom, a literal Kingdom, outside of the 4 current ones. Small commuinities are fine but a whole and complete Kingdom. I'm sorry, but no. There's Atlas, Mistral, Vacuo, and Vale, and then there's Menagerie in which faunus were deported to, nothing else.

Killed his hundreth Grimm at the age of seven.... I'm sorry but even someone traimed from a child, no, impossible.

Child rape is one thing, but fighting at the age of nine at the front lines, being sexually abused, and surviving it all? Nope, nu-uh.

Sole survivor of a Grimm attack of thousands? Highly unlikely, unrealistic, and the fact that he simply lay there for a week without food and water after a battle even if he someone managed to survive should've meant his death by the fourth night. Adding on that he lay asleep for another week, unless they injected him wtih food or something he should've most definitely 100% died due to lack of nutrition and hydration.

How would he get accepted to Beacon when his only references are his two adoptive fathers and for a transcript he'd have "Lots of rape and lots of fighting". Doesn't really make sense to me.

Two weapons max without armour and only one can transform if they are different weapons. It looks like he has 3 weapons and all of them transform, not to mention the first one being a complete copy of Adam Taurus' weapon minus the fact that the blade extends, even being able to fire the sword out of the sheath mimicks his style.

Rejected.

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