Talk:Noire Mauveine/@comment-25924729-20191203112200

Changes in the backstory are good, ties wih canon characters are removed, and having a legit Huntsman vouch for her to enter Beacon is an acceptable way in.

Changes to semblance are noted, new limits are fine, i like the idea of lying about one's semblance to get an advantage in battle.

How her name fits a CNR is still not mentioned in the page, this is really the only remaining problem. Just one line like "Noire means black in french" is enough. Im sorry, its very close but this still isnt enough to be acceptable until the name thing is fixed.

Rejected.

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