Talk:Nevaeh Navajo/@comment-17970636-20131219054107

Well written overall. Just one small error that you can fix easily. The semblence is a bit out of canon. Generally semblences have been shown to give an person edge in battle, her semblence DOES give her an edge. But semblences which mess with other people's minds and cause them to be afraid, distorted, or confused, is out of canon. Also, in team battles, she could end up being a hindrance to her team.

Rejected.

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