Talk:Jade Black/@comment-27743663-20170106015432

Well, semblance issue fixed. I personally would prefer for it to have some sort of lasting time, since while the way it works he can only really ricochet 1 thing, that doesn't matter much if he can do it endlessly, but eh. It has the appropiate ones as is.

As for eeeeeeveeerrryyyy other issue, still not fixed.

Beowolf, 5, still there. There's no arguing for this. 30 minutes implies a 5 year old child can even last that long in the first place, and that Grimm aren't vicious enough to end it in less than 2. Besides that, if he took that long, that's redundant in the first place more Grimm would likely just come in that time-frame, especially with Beowolfs.

As for Vytal winner, you switched it out with Haven headmaster I see.

Still not allowed.

That's the equivalent of Ozpin inviting some random kid because he's heard of their parent and has respect for their skill, and no, Ruby isn't a credible argument for this. He doesn't even have the noted skill to get accepted in the first place, since it's a timeskip from living in the orphanage after the accident and then 10 years later being invited to Haven for whatever reason.

On that, how'd he even pass out from blood-loss then wake up at the orphanage? No note of anyone carrying him there, no note of even all the Grimm being cleared out so as not to eat him while completely defenseless. There's not much sense behind it.

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

- Beowolf. 5.

- Headmaster personally inviting him

- Backstory clarifications needed to make sense

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