User blog:JayHart/Request for Peer Review

I would very much appreciate some fellow character creators' honest opinions on a couple of my own creations. Specifically, Kaltis Wahrsucher and Camellia Thorne.

I'm not expecting essays or anything - just tell me what you think of them. Is there something you think doesn't fit their character? Could their weapon or semblance use some tweaking? Does their discription, personality, or background seem off? If you think so, let me know! I'd like to improve my creations and my skill at creating as much as possible, after all, so I'd be thankful for any sort of constructive peer input.

(I also hope it will take fewer tries to get them approved if I get another set or several of eyes to look over them before the official reviewers get to it.)  ^.^;

Please, feel free to post your thoughts on them here or in the comments on their pages (or ignore this completely if you so desire).