Talk:Robert Arancio/@comment-17970636-20140416012636

Alrighty, well written OC, just a few errors that need to be adressed.

For one, it says that he did well in tournaments. Although that is all good and well, that means he must've had interactions with at least some canon characters, even if he didn't place first, I'm sure even Weiss would recognize someone who came 6th in a championship, as that's actually a really good ranking.

Secondly, how his name relates to a colour is not in the Trivia section of this OC - it's mandatory.

Interesting weapon though.... Kudos for that.

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--