Talk:Volkan Tinuviel/@comment-13593058-20160718000329

 A Review of Ashor Ladon

Appearance
Appearance is acceptable.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Backstory
Vague, but not vague enough.

Miscellaneous
 Colour reference checks out.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- no contradictions

Review Summary
Nothing entirely wrong with the character except the vague backstory. It's not vague enough to warrant rejection but it does make a duller character and probably makes some actions hard to justify. I would work on some spell check and grammar though. Some sentences sound repetitive.  If you require assistance in the matter, please feel free to ask other Fanon members for help. If you believe there to be a misunderstanding or mistake, please contact me via message wall or another reviewer.