Talk:Grun Williams/@comment-17970636-20140503201033

How he got to combat school, how he did there, why his brother's didn't enroll there, are necessary components as this character's backstory is missing a loit of things that could make it into a very interesting character. Also, how big his appetite is and how it affects his relationships could use a bit more detail.

Rejected for the above reasons.

--RP Moderation Team--