Talk:Semblances and your OC - A Guide/@comment-50.161.100.101-20150315063309

Um, pardon but could I get some advice on semeblance making as I have so much trouble in this section. I have two semeblances made and two I need to create. I'm going to start with the ones I need to check if there overpowered as I have a bad feeling they are but I did create limits but still...

Okay, first one: the semeblance of creation; now I do have a basically paragraph of how it works that I'm going to copy and paste and edit if I see something wrong...and pray that people understand it...:

It is not limited to solid objects, it does include sound waves in such, but she is limited to one item at a time, without constantly draining her semblance energy, unless she makes the current one permanent, which drains 3x more semblance energy then went was created, the creation of anything and how much semblance energy it take depends on how solid it is (sound wave(3), gas(5/6(depends on visibility)), liquid(8), solid (11) and its size (x1 if small, x2 if medium, x3 if large, x4 if huge), if she tries to make more than one it will cost her the amount it is to make it, and will constantly drain her aura by the amount of objects extra(1=1,2=2, and so on) by every 15 seconds. Note: she can't make dust

Okay, second one now...:

Temporary Changing(this can range from just an appearance to their "stats") (They can only do one at a time, appearance being a freebie, and it costs 10 arua to do one and costs 5 to undo the transformation, except with appearance as that’s purely cosmetic use and costs 1 to undo and only 5 to do

So what do you think, could you please give construtive critism if something's wrong. Oh, and a side note: The first one's user (don't want to say her name as I want to keep her secerct until I feel it's okay to revile) constently uses the sound wave for telempathy imbetween her team mates so that will hinder what she can create while the other one needs their semeblance to be able to use their weapon. I just have one more thing, I need help for the other two as for one of them the semeblance I had in mind was far too powerful while the other I just draw a blank, so the first one I said is based off Alice form Alice's adventures in Wonderland and Alice through the Looking glass (yes they are both different books and yes I have read both, with annotations to help explain them) and the later is based on the Amazons from mythology. Thank you for reading and another thank you if you critqued or/and gave an idea.