Talk:Erebus Bedlam/@comment-5431934-20140213021011

Aura does not form any sort of appearance other than the occasional outline around a person.

His appearance words him as pinned to the ground, yet he is evidently free and capable of motion, as evidenced by 'the time he spent locked up'.

There is no mention of what type of Faunus he is.

How were the scientists capable of injecting him, when he could have blocked the needles with Aura? This also raises the question of why he apparently willingly complied to any of this, what with being sent to the room - implying no escort - and allowing them to restrain him in an environment where he is aware that experimentation is being performed.

The explanation of the semblance is rather poor, and leaves much up for interpretation, claiming to only affect the interior of his body. Does this mean that, say, a sword wound would heal on the deeper part than the farther part? Does it mean his semblance to be a passive ability - as in, one functioning automatically - as opposed to one that he consciously activates, like all the canonical semblances? There's also the mention, again, of the shadow.

For the above,

Rejected.

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