Thread:Amet Revfold/@comment-24012109-20150103154306

Okay, here's my overall thoughts about the three.

First, your Lava Riding Blacksmith, Tahu. Don't change him actually, because there's a few things to catch in his page. I'd probably end up rejecting the guy on accounts of Aura being unable to give special attributes (It isn't shown to be unique to the person aside from Semblance). His semblance itself seems a little wonky and perhaps needs some work, but it works and is fine.

Then, Garnet. In honesty, I think you should add more to her. As she is now, she's pretty ordinary and I'd accept her. Or you could leave it and leave an example of a more ordinary OC.

Denver's last. I'd probably reject him on account of his semblance being really unspecific about his rune usage, but I suspect people would glance and pass it by and accept him anyway. That said, it also wouldn't really buff his arrows because theyre touching the staff, not his arrow, you know? A slight semantic, but it urks me still. I'd probably use him as a trip-up point, as there are ways of thinking and going on about it. 