Talk:Orion Kane/@comment-17970636-20151120161937

Mang, rename it to the SSSD, Slicy, Shooty, Stabby Device.

Really, one small issue that I found, in no where in his backstory does it infer as to how he would get into Beacon? No previous combat school, no talking with Ozpin, no transcript to send? Maybe inferring to that would be a good idea. Also, you don't really make a reference to when his aura is unlocked so how would he find out his semblance? Just a small issue that can be added in. I apologize in advance if that's in the fanfic, I didn't read it. I'm a horrible human being.

Other then that, you've got yerself a fine OC yes indeedy.