Talk:Rasuk Kojote/@comment-25924729-20181109033131

Looking pretty good so far, appearance, personality, weapons and abilities are nice. Poor guy had a tough life and came out like an old, grizzly strong man.

The backstory doesnt really give much explanation how he became such a good businessman imo, as his personality and abilities suggest. Its a small thing, not a problem worth complaining about, just maybe consider adding more details if you want to resubmit next time?

Semblance touches a little on mind control, but since it only works on animals and has severe drawbacks, its alright. Should mention that hereditary semblances exist, but are supposedly very rare, and i remember reviewing his daughter with a similar semblance yesterday. These two are alright for now, just keep in mind if you make too many family members with similar semblances it could get unreasonable.

Accepted.

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