Talk:Oneida E. Merald/@comment-24296957-20140630163604

Alright, so here are the issues.

Now, while having that semblance is fine, there needs to be a downside to it. Fire needs oxygen to burn, but a human needs oxygen to breathe. Hence, if the fire is kept up too long, the OC will suffocate. There should also be a duration and cooldown time. To add, fire breathing is...eh, at best. I'll have to think about it more.

Also, about the weapon, what's the fuel for the fire? It could be red Dust ignited by the flame, which isn't hard to work around. You could add an area for the Dust to be loaded and then say it leaks out onto the blade via membranes.

Faunus, as far as we know, only have night vision, and no other trait. The levetation part should be removed.

So far in Canon, we haven't seen any sort of reptilian faunus. So, even if everything is fixed, the best this OC is going to get is Awaiting Canon Info.

Due to the above,

Rejected.

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