Thread:Fedorastorm/@comment-13488655-20180421031130/@comment-13488655-20180616030440

So, if I make the writing more ling how Marvel does it, you'll continue? o.o

As for all the dark stuff, well actually it was mostly for a different side of my OCs that, honestly I haven't really explored. It was the first time I ever written Kurai getting lost in his anger, or Gretel being sad and questioning why the world can be this cruel. Usually they're fairly upbeat and chill. So I wanted to kinda see how I could write them out of their comfort zones. owo

Also, I, actually felt that, our characters showed a nice blend together. Your characters showed very little attachment to the fallen loyalists, mostly questioning their sanity because they were used to this kind of conflict. They fought for survival and focused on it.

Kurai on the other hand never felt that kind of betratal or hate before. It swelled up inside him before forcing him to become even more brutal at his lowest point in an RP Gretel ended up having to be his emotional pillar for once when usually it was the other way around. A stark contrast compared to the Flagg members that fought alongside them.

Osiris also was opening up more and willing to socialize with her new teammates. Where as before she used to be tbhe lone wolf and you can kinda see from the way she talks how much she isn't used to it.

I'll try to improve on the points you mentioned :3