Talk:Amphitrite Pickerel/@comment-24087318-20141015074453

Character seems good all round, though her weapon needs more definition on how far the spear and net can be shot.

Also, due to simple physics, if she was reeling in anything heavier than HER, making her weapon description say she's over 300 lbs. She'd need an anchor of some sort to reel in anything heavier than her, otherwise she'd be pulled to it, instead. (Think of how a grappling hook works, the object is bigger than you, so you get pulled to it, not it gets pulled to you.)

In addition, I can't see how her Team Name is a color, and it needs to be according to Monty Oums Color Name Rules.

Rejected

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