Talk:Elise Mindre/@comment-25291880-20140928004626/@comment-25464065-20140928164913

Hey, thanks for reviewing! It's kind of a small thing, yeah, but I like getting feedback.

Addressing your first point, her nobility thing mostly stems just from having a mother, I suppose. It was more of a tactic to save face, and it worked generally well, as no one questioned exactly who her father was. It was that air of "confidence" she gave off that made people stay at bay, when really all they had to do was ask and they would get a shy girlscratching her head and shrugging most of the time. She starts off being quiet and introverted in the village, but it becomes worse when she begins housekeeping, as she thinks it's a "job" rather than a "home", per say. Will she grow out of it? Maybe, with time.

Yeah, I was actually having a bit of trouble with her backstory! I had some main points written, but not really a......solid idea, I suppose. It was less her idea to begin with and more her boyfriend's, who thought the village really didn't have much to offer the two of them, so he convinced her to flee to the city with him.

Yeeeees more chakrams, please. Thanks again for giving me your input!