Talk:Aeron Tepes/@comment-13593058-20180206052346

 Aeron Tepes Review

Appearance
Description of appearance present.

Personality
Is present.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed. Semblance is acceptable.

Backstory
Backstory present.

Miscellaneous
Colour reference mentioned

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- No notable contradictions

Review Summary
While there's nothing too stand out about the character, I'd like to point out something in regards to the way the profile has been structured. Namely the backstory, for all intents and purposes, is inefficient in telling a "backstory". Simply put, several paragraphs can and should be boiled down to sentences like, "This event occurred." rather than going on about how he jumped from Grimm to Grimm (and what type of Grimm) to avoid falling to his death. It's these little things that make the backstory tedious to read, something that shouldn't be an issue. The role of a character profile is for anyone to skim through and get a general idea of the character, not his life story told from his perspective or a narrator's.

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