Talk:Argent Salazar/@comment-13593058-20160322010316

 A Review of Argent Salazar

Appearance
Nothing technical to note. Appearance does not interfere with Fanon Rules.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Flying equipment counts as a secondary, therefor you have three weapons on this character with the wing pack, wrist-blades and sword. The maximum is 4 as per the Fanon-Guidelines. Instant rejection.

Semblance contradicts with the Transformation Clause of the Fanon-Guidelines. Instant rejection is required.

No significant comment on fighting style.

Backstory
Nothing worthy to note. No contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and source checks out.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Semblance contradiction with Fanon Rules

- Weapon limit breached

Review Summary
 As stated above, transforming your body into a shadow is against the Fanon rules. In addition, a flying apparatus counts towards the weapon limit of two weapons max.

 A side note, please use paragraphs, they make reading easier. This problem is very prevalant in the backstory section.

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