Talk:Celina Cavell/@comment-17970636-20151201144741

Aight, we got an interesting one here, just a few things really.

First off, strategy and board games oftentimes haev more rules and regulations to follow than actual sports thanselves, taking into account her above average intelligence as well as physique, it's difficult to believe that she unwittingly breaks the rules.

Rather than saying that she's one of the smartest girls in her grade (which would be implying that she has higher mental strength than some canon characters who have shown strong mental fortitude in a classroom scenario, Weiss for example), perhaps stating that she gets high grades would be better.

For such a well rounded individual it seems hard to believe she would feel inferior to anything, why her elder brother? Did it influence her decision to attend Beacon instead of Haven? Some more clarification on that would be desirable.

Yeah I don't even know about the semblance right now lol.

Other then that, looks good, have a good day!