Talk:Ravelyn Rouge/@comment-13593058-20160806174355

 Ravelyn Rouge Review

Appearance
Nothing technical to note.

Personality
Point of personality made, some redundancies here and there but nothing too major.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Backstory
Long, but no contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour reference acknowledged.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- No contradictions

Review Summary
Nothing wrong with the character, but I cannot really enjoy the length of the backstory. Yes characters can have rich backgrounds but for a reviewer this is absolute hell to go through. I would have a general backstory in the profile and link to a separate page for the more detailed pieces.

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 EDIT: Accepted per source provision.