Talk:Sonnis Wrathaeris/@comment-13593058-20160724222402

 A Review of Sonnis Wrathaeris

Appearance
Appearance is acceptable.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Semblance is too vague in terms of range and method of application. Grounds for rejection.

Backstory
Too long. The backstory of the character is not a full on story but a quick summary. Grounds for rejection.

Miscellaneous
 Colour reference checks out.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Semblance vagueness

- Backstory length (long)

Review Summary
The vague Semblance of "force projection" seems to be your only big problem here. The wording is rather confusing and not much is expanded on it such as range and strength.

The other worthy thing to note regards the length of Sonnis' backstory. It is simply a too long containing information I, and others wanting to get a quick idea of your character, simply do not have the time to care about. No quotes unless they're important and no desciptions of fights. Describe what happened, when it happened, and how it shaped your character.  If you require assistance in the matter, please feel free to ask other Fanon members for help. If you believe there to be a misunderstanding or mistake, please contact me via message wall or another reviewer.