Talk:Yumi Dokubari/@comment-24087318-20140926061811

Weapon needs more elaboration/description before it can be Accepted

In addition, her Appearance section is a little strange. It says she's not very fond of her curves on her hips/chest, but her outfit as shown from the pictures essentially glorifies both of those areas....little strange there. If people don't like how a certain thing looks, typically they cover it up instead of flaunt it.

Rejected for the first point.

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