Talk:Dianella Mareggiata/@comment-26104528-20170404210707

Grammar errors and mis-used words are making reading difficult, I'd advise revising these since it makes crucial things hard to understand.

So her cybernetic arm is used as a component for her primary weapons transformation. Using this as a "legal" Precendent, I'd say its ok.

The semblance is still the main issue here; the amount of limiters is kind of excessive and in my eyes, the main reason why it doesn't make enough sense to pass. The grammatical errors only make this worse, although the idea seems ok: an absorption semblance that can either be used as a passive buff or offensive blast.

Rejected for muddy grammar/writing + excessive limiters semblance.

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