Talk:Vera Million/@comment-13172690-20150303014300

Alright, nice character though there are a few problems that I found.

In your history section, I would say top 20-25 just to be safe since we don't know who was the best and they were probably in the top 10.

Moving on to your weapon, the concept is good though is there two of them or is there just one? As for the transformations and the section is general, it seems a little confusing like the terms that are used. If there is some kind of diagram, it would be more helpful to the reader. But it does go way over the transformation limit with 6 functions. Limit this to three please.

For her semblance, there is a chance for autohitting in each rp regardless of the limits and it seems to be a little too RPG like. Luck semblances are not allowed because of this.

Until you fix all of these issues,

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~