Thread:DustpeltX/@comment-27811212-20160830060203/@comment-27811212-20160831192006

Its all good and thank you for responding.

With my OC you reviewed, Travis Gabi, I would like to say I see your point with the reasons you said and I want your persective.

First, I did adjust his name Byolleta Travis Gabi, Byolleta being his first name and Travis like a nickname as well as the name he goes by. Byolleta is Tagalog for violet.

Next, his enhanced senses semblance, I can see why you think it does to much but I wasn't completely done with that part and should have fixed it before I turned it in. For example, I forgot to included the weakness to his ability which is that it makes him highly sensitive with his senses and vulnerable and some other things. However, I am going to be busy for a while becuase of school so I won't be able to change this anytime soon.

Lastly, his weapon is something I would like to elaborate on. Travis's main weapon is a short sword and explosive launcher as the main weapon and the knife/detonator as the secondary. He prefers to use the knife over the sword at times when the situation isn't so tire. The short sword is treated as a explosive launcher and the knife is the detonater. (This I do need help on to work with the OC guidelines.)

Thank you for reading and hopefully my OC can fit into the community soon.