Talk:Ebony Belle/@comment-24296957-20140913120709

Not bad for the first time around. Though, let me help you out with a couple things.

So far as we know, There's only three ways to get into Beacon: 1.) Go through a primary school like Sanctum or Signal, 2.) Steal applications and forge signatures/stats, 3.) Be an extraordinary circumstance, and Ozpin personally lets you into Beacon.

The third was Ruby's case.

And also, while it's not rejectable, you could add a semblance in there for her. Or, you could wait until we have more information. Also, could you add a part in the Trivia explaining her relation to a color? I know ebony is a type of wood, just type it down for me.

In any case, you did pretty well for a first submission. You can resubmit afterwards. But for now,

Rejected.

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