Talk:Gwyrdant Raude/@comment-933831-20150901041629/@comment-1404252-20150901115802

Thanks for the response! I'll definitely make some changes, though I do have a couple of questions first.

I don't see how his semblance is an "auto dodge". He can't automatically dodge attacks (which I though I made fairly clear), and I personally think that the limitations put on it make it fairly balanced. Perhaps I should make them clearer or more limiting to the semblance's function?

As for the name, I wasn't aware that the first name was the one that required some allusion to a colour. It's not specifically stated on the CNR itself, but thanks for pointing that out. But my question is how would that work in the case of a character James Ironwood? As far as I'm aware, the name 'James' doesn't refer to a colour. Apologies if this has already been explained, but I'm a little unsure.

Thanks in advance!