Talk:Sisel Armada/@comment-933831-20130922170520

So, there aren't too many issues I have, but this stands out to me. "They were the first company to have manufactured weapons with dust as ammunition." Please try not to do stuff like this... You are specifically stating ere that dust ammunition did not exist two generations ago, and your characters parents started it. What if someone else wants to have that? What if it's stated in canon to be something else? Just edit that and resubmit, then I'll re-review.

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