Talk:Glendedren Drachen/@comment-24087318-20140117055600

Weapon section missing. In addition his backstory says he grew up until the age of 13 alone, with nobody even caring for him. For most of that he'd be literally helpless.

In addition, the whole page is a little off with how it's written, jumping from being a formal biography page to stuff with specific quotations and wordings that take away from that appearance.

His backstory also leaves a tonne of questions unsolved, like who are the Rocshiers, and why would he secretly enroll if his adoptive parents were the ones that instilled in him dreams of becoming a Hunter/Huntress. There's also a tonne of details that should be added and in general the whole page needs a bit of cleanup.

Rejected, please keep these in mind when you re-submit.

~RP Moderation Team~