Thread:JayHart/@comment-26362067-20150730020153

Hello again Jay! So, first things first: I haven't gotten much farther with Hari, mainly cause I have so many OCs to do other than him. It's not that I don't have ideas, it's just that I'm focused on others right now. (I tend to be that way--ADHD and all)

Now, on to the second topic: I wanted you to take a look at Kaili Hart. And this time, I'm not looking for any suggestions. I just want a review. You'll notice I haven't finished her history, something which I plan to getting around to doing. I'm just being lazy right now. I'll probably add some things to her Personality and Abilities as well before I put her in Pending, but even if she's not completely finished, I'd like a review on how she is so far. (She's actually the one I'm really trying to finish right now, since I want to put her in this one RP, which is why I want a review in the first place--wanna know if there's anything I need to adjust or could use improving.)

(Okay, that was a long and probably unnecessary paragraph, but I did it anyway.) 