Talk:Tamesis Melanthios/@comment-13593058-20161130232704

 Tamesis Melanthios Review

Appearance
Description of appearance present.

Personality
Point of personaility made.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Semblance acceptable.

Backstory
Backstory is lengthy, however, it has no contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- No contradictions found

Review Summary
I hate lengthy backstories. Not because I dislike reading but because its more work on my part as a reviewer. While I can comment on other parts of the character, I will address the backstory first because the length is just rediculous.

Lengthy backstories do not belong in character profiles, they belong in fanfiction. Most of what was included in this backstory was, well, an actual story. Nobody wants to read an actualy story when going through a character profile, a summary will do just fine.

A second point that really irked me the wrong way was her personality. She is a borderline Mary Sue in the fact that she was good at everything and that specific trait is her flaw. Being perfect is not a flaw.

However, there is nothing in here that I can reject her with, just some personal opinions that you can take or leave.  If you require assistance in the matter, feel free to ask other Fanon members for help. Alternatively, you may consult my  character creation guide   for further information regarding my reviewing process. If you believe there to be a misunderstanding or mistake, please contact me via message wall or another reviewer.