Board Thread:Role Plays/@comment-13488655-20160803073656/@comment-5999656-20160808023750

(Try making the threat a little more intense, like you do with the Realm :) Because as it is now, it's two girls chasing a single guy whose MO and motivation are pretty textbook. Maybe amp it up a little? Higher stakes, more danger, greater enemy, more unique enemy etc)

"Whoa whoa whoa," Platinum said, rushing up so she was standing next to Zala. Sure, this guy was being stubborn, but plenty of people were dumb enough to do that. The young Huntress always tried to reason it out first before resorting to crude terror tactics. But maybe here she could play good cop?

"Look, Mr. Plantard. You sold a jacket to a murderer. If you refuse to give us his name now, you'll be charged with aid and abetting in a violent crime." Platinum reached up, and slowly but firmly pushed Zala's blade down.

"If you don't work with the police while you still can, someone else who isn't so willing to play nice is going to come along and paint that wall behind you with your brains and ransack your place instead. So I'd suggest that you think again before turning us away."