Talk:Safran Reise/@comment-24087318-20140103032005

Very well made character. That being said, there are still a few points of concern.

Auras perception enhancement doesn't enhance any senses of sight, hearing, or anything. It simply acts as a sixth sense, akin to the feeling of being watched, when danger is looming.

In addition, while his Semblance is very nicely made, it's likely tied to ones Aura, and thusly, needs to be unlocked and awakened to be discovered and used. Likely some form of mentoring or combat training as a Hunter would be nessicary.

As well, his weapon, which is quite similar to something like Romans cane, which is a nice idea that it's a functional tool as well as a weapon, has one small issue. It's not explained how he came across it, or wether he made it himself.

Due to the above points, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~