Talk:Salient Night/@comment-25763181-20131122003523

Mmmm I suggest using this:

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to seperate the character's parts for now, since it looks a little scattered. Should look like this if you're confused:

" His feet were hitting the ground hard. Rovell squinted into the afternoon sun, before his eyes came to rest on the mass of beowolves that stood before him, their long shadows cast back. The first beolwolf came within reach of Ora Querelis, and he fired the claw at it. It twisted in it's charge as the blade caught it's shoulder. He wound in the coil as they came together, Rovell  jumping and planting his fine shoes against the beowolf's chest, ripping the head of the whip from it's body. He kicked it away, flipping over backwards as he did. He stared at the beast as it growled at him, briefly noticing someone quickly dash by. He fired the claw again, catching it's elbow and shearing it off. Rovell pulled at the coil, aiming to start a swing and bring the tip down on the beowolf once more. It closed in on him, before the sharp head of the whip came crashing down on it's skull, cracking it open as the blade embedded itself. He kicked the now lifeless body away from him, searching for a new target...

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Margarethe charged past Rovell, plunging Kishin Muramasa into a beowolf's chest before it reacted to her. Another came for her, swiping at her head. Pulling her weapon from the first one she quickly cut upwards, slicing through it's arm. Turning with the cut, she did a complete revolution, swinging the katana through the beolwolf's neck as she finished. The body fell, and another replaced it. She blocked a swipe, the claws almost reaching her face. Flicking the claws away, she sliced at the other arm as it came, removing it at the wrist. As the first arm came back she sliced at it again, taking it off from the elbow. Continuing the swing she took out the beowolf's legs, dropping it to the ground. Margarethe put her foot on it's waist and reversed her grip. She drove Kishin Muramasa into the beowolf's chest, leaning on the katana slightly. She twisted the blade, making sure it was dead, before pulling the katana from the corpse. More beowolves were running in as Margarethe changed her stance into a ready position. She waited patiently for them to come within reach."

Looks a LOT better that way IMHO...for now.