Talk:Remus Romulus/@comment-24087318-20131231192634/@comment-24105599-20131231200829

Again, while being a faunus has no change on mental behavior or pack mentality, many hunting villages and remote villages in the world do run on a caste system. I see no reason why this one cannot behave the same way. If you want me to change the names of the castes, so be it, but other than that there's no reason why that's unacceptable.

Claws I already said that I could, and would, remove. Torr has stated, however, that even among humans bone structure can vary fairly easily, and there is no reason why a slightly elongated jaw is out of the question. I'm willing to change it so that he still looks as he does, but NOT simply because he is a faunus.

My actual backstory really isn't that long. It also precisely states who he is, his history, his reason for being at Beacon, and his goals. It is just simply from a first-person perspective. It's not a fan-fiction, and the only real change would be changing each "I" to "he" and taking out the quotations.

The Meeting Torrent backstory is obviously for Grimm Chance, and that's how I was instructed to do it. I was specifically told to "write a story where your character meets Torrent." It is long, yes, because I had to include details and a reasoning.

All of these issues were already accepted by Torrent earlier. The "Accepted OC Inspection" was meant to review in case new canon info conflicted with the existing character. No new info has brought any of these issues into light, and should still be accepted. An example of a proper inspection-rejection would be if there was an aquatic faunus and somebody in RWBY specifically noted that all faunus are mammal-like.

Also "In addition, it's highly unlikely that a simple hunting villiage living entirely separately from Vale or any of the other four Kingdoms would surive attacks by Grimm without heavy defences of some sort." THat's kinda the point. They didn't survive. That's why he's at Beacon in the first place, to help protect the others. And it also states that the village was relatively isolated, but the fact that Remus knew there were other villages in the area, and even had at least minimal knowledge of their situations clearly implies that they at least interacted with each other.