Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-27603392-20130821040638/@comment-1618120-20130821205802

Jase is an older character. He's not 17 like almost every OC. His appearance is well detailed in my opinion however it doesn't fit his race not by one bit. His personallity is much better, but my main problem is he's like a Sasuke copycat. His demon powers had turned me away, but if he's part demon, give one human thing. I also don't like the fact that he's a demon, it doesn't work in the universe(people don't start by saying "they didn't say so", it just doesn't give me any feel). His attacks are too overpowerd, he's in his second year of Beacon correct? Well that's a good thing for him to be strong, but not way strong, you make his powers seem like he's an Ozpin Type Character and that just stopped me reading the rest of the page.

Like Jase, Grayson is also well written and detailed. He has such a strange storyline which I like. And his weapon turning into a violin is something I haven't seen here Props to him. That's all I have to say.

My vote is Grayson in my opinion.