Thread:Aldrasos/@comment-27332019-20151205182543/@comment-25389303-20160402204735

Looks like he's almost ready for pending. His equipment should be checked, though. I would recommend checking the weapons sections of the guidelines page, since it lays everything out well.

Grenades count as a secondary weapon, and he can have 12 of them max. I think you should play it safe and limit the grenades to a single type so that it can't be said that he has too many weapons, considering his bone saw would then be his primary weapon, and only two weapons are allowed. That doesn't mean, though, that they can't have multiple functions - so, it could be a flashbang/fragmentation grenade in one, which also has a built-in detonator or something.

I would also suggest you remove the Reserves section of the equipment, as they could be regarded as weapons. There's nothing stopping Medicus from using them in RP's though. You could just say that on occasion he carries certain explosives related to the job he is carrying out.

The portable lab, though, could still be used, since it's not a weapon, but a piece of equipment. As long as he has the components required to make the bombs prepared beforehand, I don't see how it could be a problem.

That's all I really have to say about it. I could do a quick spelling/grammar check if you want, but I don't really like the idea of changing anything without asking beyond that.