Talk:Ryan Chartreuse/@comment-24087318-20140910072056

Character is very interesting, I enjoyed reading it. I like how his weapons gun form looks suspiciously like some of those really funky flintlock hybrids they had back in the 1600's that were really just excuses to put guns on things so they were at least semi-useful during reload times.

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/4/4b/Gun-shield,_perhaps_Italy,_circa_1540_-_Higgins_Armory_Museum_-_DSC05680.JPG

Decidedly less shield though.

Anyways, now for the actual review.

There's not really any issues until you get to the Semblance. Being able to absorb/repel any sort of dust is a little overpowered as it's written, since it essentially negates the threat of anybody who heavily utilizes Dust based attacks, and doesn't appear to have a threshold it can take before breaking, or anything of the sort. Plus it's a bit of an irony that it doesn't seem to effect his weapon in any way while using it.

Rejected for now.

~RWBY Fanon Administration Team~