Talk:Kael Chipps/@comment-25924729-20190509093605

Eco friendly cabbage boi :D

Appearance, personality and backstory are alright, sounds like a chill, fun dude.

His abilities seem fair and balanced. Semblance seems okay in concept, but could really use more detail like the volume of smoke he can manipulate, range or area the smoke can cover, etc.

His main weapon is also alright, but like the semblance needs more detail, especially with unconventional amo like the energy bolts. How far can it shoot, how much damage each shot does, how much ammo he has, potential weaknesses etc.

Id also argue that his steam pen counts more as a weapon than a utility device, since its used directly to fuel his semblance and fight. But this is just a technical thing, its alright, just optional to put it as a secondary weapon instead of a utility item. (Also im convinced he definitely vapes with that thing and his semblance :v)

CNR checks out, no other issues. Yep... pretty cool, funny dude. Just needs some extra stuff to the weapon and semblance. Nice work~

Rejected.

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