Talk:Talen Multis/@comment-24087318-20140110040908

Previous issues addressed, however.

His new Semblance is a bit confusing, and seems to be covered by his weapons already having padding/protection against the Heat/Cold they make. Plus Heating or Cooling his bare hands would well...frostbite or burn him. In the end the way it's written doesn't really convey it's capable of much his weapon doesn't already cover directly.

Would suggest looking at http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Semblances_and_your_OC_-_A_Guide For examples of Semblances and a listing of canonical information so far.

Due to the above stuff, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~