Thread:Fedorastorm/@comment-13488655-20161104184944/@comment-26104528-20170106085338

2. The way I had things planned out: everytime the news talks about Order/Gang activities, Fritz gets antsy which is way out of character for him. My rationale is that with most other frame jobs, they're about clients/people he doesn't care about. This time though, it's not about making money and instead about protecting someone he loves from the Realm eventually hunting him and Stella down. Based on what you've told me, the Realm is not a power that Flagg can take head-on. They need to wear them down/target thier supplies and influence to win. Since you said that the Realm is heavily based on Batman, I did some research on who has taken Batman down. The one that drew my attention was Bane who waited for Bruce to run himself ragged and then just showed up at the bat's doorstep.

Stella notices Fritz's OOC moments and perhaps catches him with enemy paraphernalia and puts 2 and 2 together. Think about Stella's motivations for joining Flagg. Revenge on the Order is a side-effect, preventing thier terrorism is her goal. What Fritz is doing is essentially aiding the Order's actions and since you said the Realm likes to build bases in plain sight, there's going to be a lot of collateral damage. He completely sold out on her values and at a moment like this when thier livelihoods and possibly lives are at stake?

4. Ok, so you seem to look at fanon writing as a play-by-post rpg, while I see it as round robin storytelling. What's the best way then to start moving our story forward?

And since it's over, maybe explain the ending of the 3 Krakens Incident? From what I read, Master let the ships fall in the hands of the mob and then he hired arthur to steal them back? I don't think I fully understand.