Talk:Organdy Marvell/@comment-24087318-20140112064831

Glyphs arn't a thing we've seen Weapons do, they're generally things manifested by a characters Semblance.

Moving onto that, having a Semblance that is both Dust-manipulating glyphs, as well as an orb that works with both these glyphs and Dust, is a few too many things for a Semblance to have. In addition, these orbs appear to be able to be used as their own attacks, producing electricity without any sort of Dust or other influence. It's too many things being put into one ability.

On top of it, the abilities are described a little vaguely for her Weapon, Semblances, and other things. Could use more clearer detail to describe how they work when you revise them.

As such, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~