Talk:Akea Longxia/@comment-25924729-20190611085458

Does she download movies for free online? Heh... sorry, couldnt resist a pirate joke :v

Appearance and personality are alright, she sounds like a likable person.

Abilities, combat stats and weapons seem good, fairly balanced and well explained. Her semblance is too vague though. I auume its limited to physical items only, but being able to "locate anything she wants" is a very broad statement.

For example, i imagine she use it to find objects like lost keys and stuff. What about say... she wants to find something she should not be able to know, like "a hidden entrance into a vault"? Or she wants to find somehing that isnt an immediately obvious, like "an enemy's weak spot"? Would it still work then? What if she wants to find something vague and general, like "a good restaurant nearby".

What if a matching object doesnt exist, or several objects maching the description exist? Will she detect all of them, or only one. What if the object has been destroyed or changed slightly to no longer match her description of it. Say... shes looking for "the man she saw in a blue shirt". If the man changed his shirt, would she still find him?

How does it work anyway? Does she just instinctively know where to go to find certain things? Is there a visual or audio prompt of sorts, and if so can other people also see it? What is the range or time limit of this semblance's use, and does it have weaknesses, limits or ways it can be jammed or countered?

Questions like these must be adressed to get an accurate grasp of the ability's power. I have to ask this cause this semblance has the potential to be pretty broken, letting her know stuff she isnt supposed to know, or deus ex machina being able to pull anything she needs in RP out of the environment etc.

Backstory is pretty good, CNR checks out, no other issues found. Just the semblance needs more explanation basically, great try :)

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