Talk:Sonshisu Seiketsu/@comment-25924729-20181114090744

Really good character, the artwork for him and the weapons are especially cool :D

So.... no issues with appearance or personality. Semblance, abiities and weapon are fairly well balanced.

Only the backstory has an issue of beleivability. Being able to defeat any adult at the age of 12 is a bit unreasonable. It is possible... like if he got in a sneak attack or the adult was trying to hold back and not hurt him. But winning a fair fight is impossible.

I suggest making him weaker, maybe increase the age where he could properly fight an adult (Like Ruby took out a small gang at age 15), or add special reasons that he won.

I really like this character, and i hate to do this, but i must...

Rejected.

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~RP Moderation Team~