Talk:Tera Plum/@comment-27743663-20161210022703

CNR checks outt.

Apperance is fine.

Persoality is fine.

Backstory feels incomplete. She graduated Signal and then...? That aside, giving how Broken Heart Syndrome works, it really shouldn't have kicked in years later. It's a surge of stress that's more short-term, like job loss, losing money, divorce, death of a love one, surprises, etc. It works mostly a normal heart-attack, essentially. Going from Signal graduation ages, this is more than ten years after the fact. So really, it shouldn't have happened. I'm not a medical expert though and only briefly read up on it, so note I could be wrong on how it works. The medical part is really just a note.

Weapon is fine.

Semblance is fine.

Tl;dr

- Rejected on incomplete backstory.

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