Thread:JackWasup/@comment-13488655-20150521163505/@comment-25363089-20150618221829

Yaay and there are only minor errors in some parts of it which i can live with cause right now i like the backstory.I like how it flows well into  the next part.It all makes sense.No confusing plot holes nothing wrong with his reaction to things its all good.If i left it with him being a white fang member i would be fine with it cause i feel it all flows well.Now i just gotta nail his personality section down and i am good.Besides his fighting style but thats for a later thing.