Talk:Luna Minali/@comment-24087318-20140107080831

Her Semblance doesn't fit what we've seen so far from canon Semblances. In addition, the ability to protect, as wel as slightly heal wounds, is an ability Aura already posesses, which every character who's had it unlocked has the ability to use.

Her weapons are interesting, but she has too many. Canon character posess either one weapon, or a pair of the same weapon, and has them either transform, or have built-into its design ways to transform into whatever the user requires it too. Sometimes these are complimented by shields if the Hunter or Huntress wishes, but beyond this, try to limit the characters arsenal a little as per the above comment.

While on her weapon, we havn't seen guns consume Aura to fire. They use conventional ammunition, sometimes augmented with dust for varying effects.

As well, if she stole and theived enough that the Police were looking for her, it's unlikely she'd be able to apply to enter a Combat School, especially Beacon, where they require Transcripts and would likely see that the character is wanted by law.

She seems to be the leader of her Team at Beacon, but little in her backstory suggests any sort of Leadership quality, and her Personality specifically says that she is rarely there for her team. Both not very good qualities of a leader. In addition, it's a bit of a heel face turn that she goes from being so sweet she'll never hurt anything, to running away and stealing to get by.

Due to the above points, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~