Talk:Zaffre Perrault/@comment-13593058-20160302023820

 A Review of  Zaffre Perrault

Appearance
Not much to judge on a technical level.

Personality
A reasonable personality. No contradictions and has justified responses. No additional comments.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon does not contradict with existing canon weapons nor the Fanon-Rules.

Semblance seems unbalanced and overpowered in several aspects such as range, limit and general versatility. See Summary for more information.

Backstory
Nothing worthy to note. No contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and source checks out.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Semblance contradiction

Review Summary
A preference to use a Semblance does not detract from what the Semblance is technically capable of doing. With that in mind, this Semblance is too simple without some sort of medium of application for it to not constitute as auto-hit. As it is worded now, this OC is capable of stealing energy from her surroundings and inputting it all into one concentrated object or point without much effort or conditions.

In addition, simply heating something up is too broad and succeptable to being overpowered as demonstrated by her supposed ability to create tornados/vortexes. The creation of such weather phenomenon, by the way, requires a lot more than just hot and cold air to manifest.

In short, the Semblance's simplicity, lack of appropriate limits and explanations deems the Semblance too potentially broken for use.

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