Talk:Veronica Castor/@comment-17970636-20140813024149

Good OC, just a few issues with her.

First off, the types of dust used with her weapon, some have not been seen within canon yet. Mainly green, orange, and indigo. Please change those to types of dust already seen within canon, also, the red setting is awfully similar to Weiss' consider changing that up.

Then the only other issue is with her semblances. We have perception semblances that deal with the slowing down of time, however, the complete slow down of time is... excessive. 1 second equivalating to three hours is really, for lack of better term, overpowered and unreasonable. Also, it doesn't state what kind of physical toll it would have on her body. Many pianists lose their physical composition whilst performing because their mind has gotten ahead of their fingers, leaving them disoriented and wondering what the heck happened.

Rejected for the above reasons.

--RP Moderation Team--