Talk:Aston Auric/@comment-27743663-20161217020856

CNR, it's the first name that needs to relate to a color. Not is to say the last name can't, it's just mandatory for the first.

Appearance is fine.

Personality is fine.

Backstory is concise and notes everything major.

Weapon is fine.

Semblance, I like.

Notes: You say fourth of 5 siblings than say he has two older brothers and two youger sister, so you mean third. Also, you say despite being left-handed, he wears the shield on his left-arm. That's a bit redundant, no :P? Just some notes though.

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

- CNR

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