Talk:Remus Romulus/@comment-5431934-20131231163618

As with the somewhat new inspection of accepted OCs, I noticed a few issues with this character.
 * Being a faunus has no effect on the body other than enhanced night vision, ears, and a tail. Having an altered facial structure contradicts that, as well as having claws.
 * Additionally, being a faunus does not effect one's mental state, so it would not cause his village to have the pack mentality of Alpha/Beta.
 * Again, later in the profile, it does not give him heightened senses.

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--

Additional bits not related to rejection:
 * You should clear up when exactly he meets Torrent, as it's not very clear from the 'Background' section.