User blog comment:StarlightAT/Review please/@comment-4109747-20140323032959/@comment-4109747-20140323062918

Like I said "Sorry if it sounds like I'm hating on the character, but she seems like a Mary Sue" never said she was one, I did notice some of the changes you made. I guess I should of said her stats were to high rather then perfect. As for the back story/personality. I don't understand how accidently killing two guys that she worked with would cause her to believe "... the only way to escape her guilt is to try and see the meaning of life as kill or be killed, sometimes having to kill more under orders just to numb the pain." It also seems contradictory or weird that she would kill more after "... always seeking forgiveness for her sin." So killing more will some how forgive her for killing, makes perfect sense, also considering she is looking for revenge for the murder of her family also seems hypocritical then. Also would the military allow a gang member's daughter to even enlist even if she did have high scores? Which is another thing you say she got high scores, but her intelligence is only B rank.