Talk:Kurai Jack Jade/@comment-10356852-20140120211558

Hmm from what I can see nothing too bad sticks out except the continuos mentioning of people we know nothing about, I know this only for this single character but is just one of my pet peeves to see people we know nothing about other than what you mention here because it makes wanna see more about those characters so I try to always add in something about those people to clear up any confusion. Otherwise everything seems to be in order and nothing bad sticks out

Nice job