Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-27603392-20140704110526/@comment-13172690-20140716040339

Eh, why not? I dunno if i'll do alright but ill give it a shot.

Sirce Marion

Reading her appearance and personality, they are both very detailed and well thought out. The appearance has a good mix with the allusions of Princess Aurora (Sleeping Beauty) and Robin Hood. Surprisingly, I can see a piece of both in the outfit. It also has a good color pallette which ties the outfit together nicely. Her personality flows pretty well and gives her quite a twist with her unpredictable and quiet combination.

Moving on to her backstory. It seems that she grew up outcasting herself from others (family, and eventually people) which makes sense according to what her father was like with him bankrupting serveral families especially with the reputation of her father on her. Though how could have her father abandon her if she was showered with gifts from him? That part kinda confuses me a bit. Though the rest of the history up to her decision to the forest would make sense since her father had such a horrible reputation with her trying to find a new way to live. Though she could have also lived with her nanny since you mentioned her in the beginning, but I know there is a good reason for her going that route. As for how she obtained a transcript and heading into beacon with the money, it was very creative especially with the hidden vault. Overall, good story but may need a little bit of explaination.

Lastly, her weapons and abilities. Very creative weapon with the crossbow and the one handed sword. The semblance is viable with the restriction of the concentration since it ties in well with her sniping expertise. I like that she has the capability for both close and far range combat. Though, prefering far range would assist her in guiding her team with her strategies. I like the twists of how she can fight dirty and do anything to have her and her team win in scenarios. With her speed, it could give her quite the edge when facing enemies or quickly move to different locations to snipe them down.

After reviewing her, she is a very detailed character. There are some minor improvements that you can make in the bio but otherwise,

Accepted.