Thread:ZackOJ/@comment-26362067-20160505161811/@comment-24490414-20160506165828

 Wikia does seem daunting to fiddle and edit pages at first. Thankfully, even if you DO screw up, reverting pages to its previous state is a thing. :D (Especially handy in case of vandalism from another user.) You'll eventually learn how to format and edit pages to your liking without much help, but it does take a while and at least we're here for questions lol.

 I'd still say be more elaborate in your sections, especially Skills/Abilities. "Skilled" is far too vague of a description. Give an idea on   how  he fights, what role would he be on a team, drawbacks to his fighting style, etc. You also mentioned a semblance in the template: You got to have a section or paragraph on just that. Expand on the semblance too, explain further on what it does and its limitations.

 Appearance section is still missing. You got his clothing but what about everything else? I know it might seem redundant with the FanCharBox, but think of what's shown in the template as a "preview" and general gist of the OC while the rest of the page is the actual, more detailed info.

 Jade mentioned fixing up some grammar, and I'll agree on that. Backstory is just too large of a text block and in need to be broken up into a couple paragraphs or so.

 The format of the page can still be worked on, giving actual headings to sections and increase legibility. You can choose to do it yourself or have Jade or even me do it if that's too daunting.

 Remember to mention the name in the trivia section. Can't really stress this enough. :P