Talk:Wynston Arkwright/@comment-28932554-20170108191016/@comment-25582638-20170108201311

Thanks for noticing those grammatical errors. 'Not a fan of reviewing such details when stuffs are done.

Hm, the shotgun. A pistol would suffice.

Beyond that, the act of killing another man is, generally, not logical imo.

All in all I'll just stop my personal review here and say that you should re-read your OC's page to check for logic holes and guildine discrepensies.

Suggestion: dude, next time, don't mention that again because no one (presumably) asked for your personal review do this to begin with. Not to say that your feedback is not welcomed but the sentence is irrelevant.