Talk:Xia You/@comment-24296957-20140519203819

Let's start on the backstory. Yin would've had to attend Signal in order to go to Beacon, or she would've had to steal applications and forge stats/signatures to be accepted. That needs to be changed accordingly, along with anything tying into that.

Now...for aura. Shockwaves...eh. She'd have to put A. Lot. of aura into it. And energy beams made of aura...that's not something aura can do. For a list of what aura can do, click here.

As for her fighting style, it seems...contradictory. She'll do anything to protect her tem mates, yet she'll rush headlong into battle? Also, it's said she tires easily, but has large stores of energy and knows how to use them efficiently. That's contradictory, as well.

I also don't see how her name alludes to a color. And her semblance, while there's not a whole lot wrong with it...it could use a longer cooldown.

Rejected.

-RP Moderation Team-