Talk:Charles Daorenzhidun/@comment-24262164-20140102205518

He is... a multicultural melting pot. That's really great but also a bit of a problem. Native Americans, Mongoles, and Huns don't exist in this world. Kendo is fine, I would just like to point out that Kendo isn't a practical martial art.

Ok, first of all I don't see any reason for this character to be so adament about showing his face nor do I see why he tackles anyone who tries to see his face?

His peronsaly seems a bit uninspired. Saying that he'd protect his friends is just super vague. Again, no reason why.

His weapon is pretty cool. Havn't seen it before, requires some interesting strategy.

I don't review along RP guidelines but I will tell you that the RP does not consider faunus to have any animal features beyond better vision and their physical feature.