Talk:Corvus Dorifutā/@comment-24678303-20150519174453

Okay, let's do this again. I'm just going to read through the new changes here. Firstly, if he was a Grimm Magnet, he literally would have not been able to survive period. Grimm are powerful on their own, and with how many Grimm would have been coming for him, there's no way someone so young and untrained would have been able to fend them off.

Next, Night Vision wouldn't help him to aim better at all, unless he, i don't know, needed to aim at something in the dark? Night Vision doesn't give you super vision, boi, it just lets you see in the dark.

Refuge Academy? What? Again with the pale, ghoul-like skin. This doesn’t make sense canonically. Yes, one can have pale white skin, but pale grey skin that would make the character look undead? No, just no.

A Zastava M91...? Wow, you must be a fan of knockoffs, since it's just a ripoff of the SVD Dragonuv. Anyway, i'm digressing here, ignore me.

The weapon still seems to be a bit OP, simply because you wrote it as, "...a long piercing laser, which is used for sniping from a longer distance and does higher damage than its rifle form." What exactly is this supposed to mean? How powerful is his rifle? Does it have a muzzle velocity like a blaster rifle, or does it act like an actual laser? Specifics are your friend in this department.

Also, "The lasers for Mors can either be concussive or piercing, to knock out or end lives." Again, you can't bypass Aura like that. It can be damaging, but you must remember to factor Aura into the mix when comparing it to Human/Faunus opponents.

"The concussive knock out their victims, while the bullets kill." Same with the above, stop saying that a round knocks out or kills a target.

Ohoho, now we're to the Semblance. Okay, you say that "The minimum speed of an weapon that can hit Corvus is the quarter average speed of a bullet, as a bullet's speed is 1,700 mph, with the speed of 425 mph."

...So what you're telling me is that something needs to be traveling at THE SPEED OF AN AIRCRAFT to hit him? NO. JUST NO. I am about ready to just straight up make this Semblance idea Reject-worthy. This DEFINITELY counts as auto-dodging and i am sick of the whole idea of phasing through objects in general, even with these "nerfs" you have applied to it.

Last but not least, "He uses it to an advantage to motivate himself to keep on fighting, so he would never have to relive that past."

No.

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~