Talk:RWBY oc-Jupiter Akane/@comment-30530552-20170503013102

Alright, let's take a look here.

CNR, while Jupiter is passable (given Neptune's name), but it needs to be noted how it's being used. I'm going to assume you were referring to the Big Red Spot specifically, given his last name is relating to red, but I might be wrong.

Appearance is fine.

Personality is fine, if a bit contradictory at some points.

Weapons are fine and within the transformation / amount limit. For his combat skills, however...remove his sparring matches with Blake and Ren, as that steps on canon toes.

Backstory, again with the heavy canon interaction, which is the main issue of this character. The other stuff is semi-plausible, but Adam Taurus and Blake Belladonna make up your major problems here. Just remove the canon character interaction. Your original character should be able to stand on his own, not riding off being better than a pre-existing character.

-Rejected for the noted issues above.

-RP Moderation Team-

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