User blog:BRTE500/Salient Night updates

Heya people! So, because I'm taking a bit longer with this fic than I thought I would be I came to the decision that I would put up some little bits for people to read while I work on it. I'd be more than happy if you would give me feedback about what you think, and if you've got a suggestion to make it better, that is just as welcome!

This first little bit was my character Rovell, and with some help from Jet I tweaked it a bit. So, I'll probably put up some more things as time progresses, but not a huge amount. Feel free to comment about whatever! Even if all you want to do is tell me to hurry up!

Thanks, and here is the link! Salient Night.