Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-24296957-20150113152446/@comment-26543176-20150113161728

Breyal

Character seems good.

However the format is at times halting and hard to understand but not a major issue.

All in all interesting concept.

Accepted.

Denver

His weapon is hard to understand. When it becomes a bow, where does the string come from, does he keep the arrows on him or are they formed of pure dust? The wording makes it hard to understand.

Rejected 

Chole

No mention of what kind of faunus she is, along with what her trait is, is unacceptable.

Otherwise and interesting character which gave me a headache reading it.

Rejected