Talk:Berde Bazahka/@comment-17970636-20151121060356

Aight, interesting character, glad to see so much detail put in, just a few things that I noticed.

It would be highly unlikely that his family would become impoverished being forced to buy his medicine as adderall pills generally cost $3-10 a pop, meaning that the most they'd be spending is $3650, or lien I guess, depending whether or not $1 = 1 lien. Regardless, taking into account the GDP Per Capita in America, which is a bit about $50,000, his medicine shouldn't be that big of an issue unless I missed something about his family being poor, I might've, but that's not a big issue.

Where is Patch? Is it an outside region? Is it a city in a certain region? You mention he was born in Vacuo, he's been to Atlas and Vale and Patch, but where is this Patch? I might've missed it but I doubt it having read through im carefully twice.

Where did he get the name Ragnarok? Again, not a major issue, just something that needs to be cleared up. Please note that all of the points I have mentioned above do not make this character candidate for rejection via the Rules and Guidelines, it's just my personal manner of reviewing as a non-member of staff. Focusing more on what questions arises rather than what makes this an incomplete character, if you know what I mean.

Finally, you state that he excludes hate to attract Grimm to him. We learn from WoR as well as Ozpin that the Creatures of Grimm are attracted to fear and negative emotions, I guess hate could be one of those, but most of all, they "spawn" because of it. In essence a construct of our own negligence. So wouldn't he be helping create more Grimm rather than attracting them?

Other then that, great OC, well written.