User blog comment:Ragadorus/Basic RWBY Fanon Roleplaying Tips/@comment-17970636-20131204044913

Err... I generally separate conversation and action at a time. I often do stuff like:

Raga zipped up his hoodie and grinned at Torrent before continuing on their trek. Halfway through the trek, Raga spoke.

"Hey Torrent. Can you tell me where you got your tags origination from? They're kinda peculiar." he asked breezily.

Torrent scratched at his neck for a moment before replying.

"Well... it's a long story...."

Raga grinned.

"we have enough time."

And such. Is there anyway to improve this?