Talk:Zabrina A. Mayonaka/@comment-25924729-20191118091128

Interesting character, a lot of fun little details to think about when read more closely. I like that.

Appearance is alright, very good artwork as usual.

Personality is good. Ties pretty well with the backstory which is also alright, if a bit confusing at times with a whole ton of characters suddenly entering around the Fall with little explanation of who they are and what they're doing, it became hard to keep track of everyone. I assume there's a bigger story there like an RP or fanfic about those events. It's not rejectable, just could be either explained more or summarized for easier reading?

Weapons and abilities are alright. Semblance is a bit mindbendy, but has enough limitations to be fair. I like it actually.

Her name is alright, though using cactus flowers as CNR is a little vague, since it doent refer to a single type of flower a colour can be derived from. The desert part of that name is a more solid CNR imo, and quick googling also shows Zabrina is the name of a river. In any case a CNR can be taken from it so it's a valid name.

No other issues found on page. Pretty good.

Accepted.

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