Talk:Kage Alemana/@comment-24087318-20140921055812

When he was 8 he got into one little fight, and his mom got scared.

She sent him to live with his auntie and uncle in the town of Val-air.

Jokings aside, the review.

25 rounds per minute is 1 round every 2.4 seconds. That's along the lines of a bolt-action gun assuming you had to reload it a bullet at a time, like some ancient WW2-era guns. Are you sure that's right for an AK-47?

In addition, how does a backpack, likely cloth looking, transform into a sword and a gun? That doesn't seem very plausible, even for RWBY.

As well, Black aura isn't something we've seen to exist. Even Blake, who's character is themed after the color black, has an aura that glows purple when she uses it.

Beyond this, the page seems very Work In Progress, with little detail on backstory, history, equipment, etc. (Like, how did he get that Grimm-skin trench and armor?)

Rejected

~RWBY Fanon Administration Team~