Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-27603392-20131005025148/@comment-8182065-20131005033145

Sisel wins my vote here. I don't see a lot of things that are wrong with him. Just I'd say edit out anything that says "master" because in my opinion, it takes a lot of years to master something and the guy is only 18. Also the thing about him being a Master Dust user is contradictory seeing that it also says he doesn't know everything about it.

Safel's page was just... I got confused reading through it and just skimmed the rest of the page. There was just way too much history there and most of it was dialouge; I felt like the creator was trying to tell a story rather than give us an in depth profile of their character. In opposition to a regular OC page, Safel has all of the important stuff (his Profile, Appearance, Personality, and Abilities) down at the bottom of the page, and most of it is just so short and didn't explain much at all. I'll go with the fact that he doesn't remember what he looked like in the past, but what about present day? He has to have some idea of he looks like, I'm sure there were mirrors or even a pool of water to see his reflection in. The idea for a good character is there, but he just needs to be brought out more.