Talk:Avery Rachel Chere/@comment-24087318-20140114074541

Re-reviewing due to the time this has been in Awaiting Canon Information.

To be honest, I don't see why this was even in there to begin with. I don't seen any traits or circumstances that would require it.

That being said, the character does have a few points that would prevent it from becoming Accepted.

The idea of Dusters: A town that sees people who use Dust and Aura and other various key abilities to Hunters and Huntresses is a little skeptical, given that these things were originally Mankinds first and only tools against the Creatures of Grimm that really gave them a fighting chance until more advanced weaponry came along. And even then, these weapons work WITH both these past elements.

Organizations/Towns that would be weary of Hunters/Huntresses are likely, given their skill and power level, but not to the degree a whole town would consider them witches and heretical unless the town itself was either somehow safe from Grimm activity, or had quite a good defence against them where Hunters/Huntresses wouldn't be nessicary.

Consider the Amish, people that live off the land and live very old-fashioned lives, shunning things like modern technologies. The town of Kymafos may be the same with how they consider Dust and Aura, but they'd have to be more than capable of handling themselves without it, and would distrust more than execute. Not to mention that contact with the outside would be severely limited. The character would have to find some way to know about the outside, where "Dusters": Hunters and Huntresses, exist as heroes and people that exist to use their trained powers against the Grimm.

As for her Semblance, controlling gravity, and telekinesis are two separate things entirely, and both run the scope of easily being Overpowered. Keep in mind that the only characters in Canon who've shown abilities like these are Pyrrha with her Polarity (which she generally only uses on her own weapon or shield to pull back to her after she throws them, or on other Hunters weapons in dire situations. I'd suggest looking over http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Semblances_and_your_OC_-_A_Guide for ideas and help as to creating a Semblance that truly works with her Weaponry and other skills according to what we know Semblances do.

As well, having this characters enrollment into Beacon being one of the reasons Weiss also decided to attend interferes with canon, and may not be the real reason Weiss even wanted to go to Beacon. (It may have been her own ideas and wishes, not her parents, who may have opposed it.) And is one of the rules the Fanon has. OCs can't interfere or be involved with canon characters beyond Professor Ozpin concerning their enrollment in Beacon.

Due to these points, character is being removed from Awaiting Canon Info, and being placed into Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~