Talk:Character: Teal/@comment-7497475-20131205110810

Ok, to start off, being at Beacon at 15 is unlikely. Ruby got in because of Ozpin, and he seemed to think she was special in some way and saw her fight. The only thing in the backstory is that Ozpin knows Teal's cousin. While possible, it isn't something advised. He'd had alot on his mind if he knew everyone's cousin. As for his weapons, they are somewhat vague descriptions and he has quite a few. But what really is the problem here is the "gun that shoots guns that explode into MORE guns and explode into grenades". That would have to be one very big gun, and I don't really see a tangible use for it as it would be immensely unwieldy.

Moving onto the eye, "he got an eye installed that allows him to look at a persons background and fighting styles and weapons", that is something that an eye couldn't do. He would either need it linked to a device to search for the style, or actually know the style himself. As for the EMP, "To counter this Teal has decided to make a weapon that he will have to carry around with him ON his BODY and not in his systems. As of now this is no longer an issue.", the only way to stop an EMP from frying eletrical systems is to have very thick shielding or shutdown the electronics. Being a cyborg, losing power for any reason would probably kill him if it was more than a moment, considering how extensive his implants are.

For these reasons, rejected.

-RP Moderation Team-