User blog comment:Varzan Deodinm Beldinm/Late Night One Shot (I'm Open to Critique)/@comment-5290299-20140105065447

Besides the dislike for script format this was rather good. Dialogue was...kinda cliche and then not...its difficult to say exactly what the word is....dammit either way its interesting. ^_^ I have to agree about loving the villains we all tend to hate but thats because they are good villains and yours is BAT-SHIT INSANE! XD A perfect villain that is gonna grab enough Karma for him to die...and I will relish the chance to see him burn in irony...hehehehe.....Oh boy already imagining it! XD

Good job either way. And this is comping form a fanfiction author who has been writing for a while. XD even though my writing sucks I have been told I have good ideas so I am going to base my confidence and experience on the words of reviewers and my beta XD