Talk:Talis Ebonmere/@comment-13172690-20160122051525

Ok a few things on this profile that really needs attention.

First of all, In his bio, the Rhino Faunus can only have ONE faunus trait. Choose only ONE of the traits you gave him.

Secondly, his semblance is rejected since it is extremely close to Nora's semblance. Please choose anothere semblance or keep it out.

Next, his fighting style. It sound like his armor can take a LOT of damage. It wouldn't be able to take that much. Aura goes over everything, even armor as weve seen with Cardin. Please dial it down since it cant be that strong.

Lastly, his weapon armor. There are way too many weapons and he has a ot of features which reminds me a lot of Fallout universe. Please change that section to match with our RWBY weapon rules.

Until this is all fixed,

Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~