Talk:Character: Teal/@comment-5431934-20131213232255

Aura manifests itself in the form of a tinted outline around a character, not as a "blood red dragon".

There is no mention of how he became a cyborg, his precise capabilities as such, or what he, in fact, looks like. You never said what he looked like; your 'Appearance' section is merely a poor description of his wardrobe.

Getting into Beacon is highly improbable at the age of fifteen, as is him evidently not being killed by whatever was capable of defeating an entire group of hunters.

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--