User blog comment:StarlightAT/Original Story Synopsis/@comment-25555436-20150220011658

It...I'm slightly confused.

"Two pairs of demons end up coming out. One side wants to eat the humans, the others are willing to make contracts with them to keep them alive". I assume each side is 2 demons, making a total of four...which judging from this sipnosis and semi-understandable lack of in-detail explanation, means that there would be 2 possible villains(?), and Valente and Chiari would both make a contract with a demon.

I have honestly no idea why the demons would like to "repair the broken world". And I assume from the last bit that they would try to hide their contract with the demons at first, then everyone would find out, then they would either beat them into leaving them alone, or proving they are not a danger (to them).

Seeing how you said "3 planes of existence", I assume Angels are involved too. And judging from this, at least most of them will not be nice guys. If I'm right in this part, I got no surprises. Gotten used to seeing Angels perfectly willing to anihilate humanity in so many Shin Megami Tensei games...

Overall, this whole thing sounds like you combined a series of different clichés and non-clichés, to make something different. Not too different from RWBY in that regard: It's got clichés of all kinds, yet it feels like something unique, never seen before, when refering to RWBY at large.

And that "contract with demons" part...how is it? Is it like a fusion of sorts? The demon lending you it's powers temporarily? One summoning the demon and commanding it? Or something else? (Also, how did No Game No Life inspire Inferno Academy?).