User blog comment:Winter Edition/Original Character Creating Guide/@comment-162.201.66.200-20140422054319

Name: Mitchell Brown

Date of Birth: August 25

Age: 16-17

Team: Not in one at the moment

Weapons: M4A1 with Masterkey and bayonet and Glock 17 with tactical laser light combo (primary); Longsword and collapsible riot shield (secondary)

Description: Filipino American male with light brown skin, brown eyes, black short hair (butch cut), and a very light stubble. Average body type.

Apparel: Black hoodie, blue jeans, black military boots, tactical vest, and knee and elbow pads.

Race: Human

Personality: Somewhat clumsy, but he does his best in school. Is very cautious to where he can be paranoid sometimes. Can be socially awkward, but he is a good guy overall. Has a strong preference for normal weapons.

Abilities: He is a jack of all trades. He mainly relies on training, experience, and faith in combat situations.

Aura and Semblance: His Aura was already unlocked before being in Remnant, its strength depends on faith.

Bio: Mitchell Brown came from a military family in the peaceful suburbs in the United States of America on planet Earth. He had a decent childhood, a loving family, and a twin sister named Amy. His mom worked as a surgeon for the US Army. His dad had recently retired from the Marine Corps. Dad found a way to bond with them, by teaching his kids what he was taught by the Marines. They underwent a lot of training, which included but not limited to exercise, learning how to shoot and improving marksmanship, and hand-to-hand combat. Mitchell took up swordsmanship, because he was bored and wanted to learn other types of combat.

History: One tragic day, the Browns were supposedly killed in a plane crash; but miraculously, they weren't dead. Instead, they found themselves in Remnant. A group of students from Beacon Academy found them in the middle of the forest during their recon mission. They were taken in by the students to tell their story to the headmaster, Ozpin and his associate, Glynda. After telling their story, Ozpin at first was reluctant to take in the Browns, but he saw that they have abilities that can contribute to their school. Ozpin and Glynda gave them a brief history of Remnant and how the Grimm have been threatening them until they discovered Dust. Armed with this new resource, they managed to push the Grimm back and form civilization. The Browns slowly absorbed the information, seeing that it was totally different from Earth. Mom and Dad were then given positions as staff; Mitchell and Amy were sent to a teacher who specializes in weapons production to make their own weapons before they go to their dorms to await initiation.

My OC probably broke Monty's rules, I don't know about here about here. What do you think?