Talk:Delph Pythia/@comment-24678303-20180221010517

Alright, so there's a few points here.

Firstly, while you did describe the hair and eye color, you didn't put in any other description of her body than that. Though, that's an easy fix.

Next is parts of the Semblance. While it was a bit lengthy and a bit confusing, it's ultimately acceptable. However, you do need some more details in there. How long they take to create, how many they can create at once, if they're immobilized when creating them, and a cooldown on creating them. Do those and you should be alright.

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~