Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-27603392-20130825020138/@comment-8182065-20130825025432

Swordlash0 you should really add some punctuation in that, because that is just a full run-on sentence right there...

This was a tough descision for me. I looked at TK and liked his battle axe as a weapon, but in my knowledge the weapon is supposed to be used for heavy attacks and not so much quick strikes. I don't see how he'd be able to swing one efficiently enough for a controlled swift attack; that kind of conflicts with his battle style. I'd also like to know what exactly gives him a "poor background" because the both of his parents dying dosn't really show that. There was no real mention of them being low in funds, or anything of the sort. Also there are a lot of things I saw which were repeated within the page, so I suggest finding some synonyms or word somethings differently.

When I saw Maki, I liked her personality as a mean girl and the idea of her coming from a land where people used to hunt and eat the Grim they have killed for their power. I'm not sure how the human who ate them would eventually turn part Grim though; I understand that it could be similar to eating an animal with a disease that caused some negative side effects, but does it affect their humanity at all? If they become part Grim, do they start showing the tendancies of one: killing the innocent, losing their soul, turning evil? It doesn't seem so unhealthy if they just gain some of the Grim's powers. Then there's the thing that bugs me about Maki starting to hunt at age 9. When you say personally I think by herself, which sounds hard to accomplish for a 9 year old girl.

I'm going to place my vote for Maki though, just because of the cultural background she comes from. That is something I haven't seen done before for an OC here, and I like the idea.