Talk:Cold Steel and Fiery Vengeance(Crossover)/@comment-24304510-20140217020359/@comment-24304510-20140218053003

Okay. You fixed the plotholes I pointed out, and pretty well too boot.

The only thing I have left to say is to work on the grammar issues. They can be glaring at times. My advice is always to go through your story one sentence at a time, make sure they're a complete thought, and rework it if needed. It's a long and ardouous process, but one that will pay off in the recognition you recieve from readers.

- Sparky