Talk:Verde Gemelos/@comment-24087318-20140115082811

OCs can't have semblances that are too similar to Canon characters. His Semblance giving him speed being too close to Rubys in canon.

In his backstory, he was ten and fought off bandits trained guards were no match for...this a little unrealistic of an expectation, especially with how dangerous the Bandits were, and the destruction they brought.

Additionally, during characters Initiations, keep in mind that it took EIGHT characters combined efforts to deal with a single Deathstalker and Nevermore. Two people taking on multiple Deathstalkers at that experience level is highly unlikely, and makes the character incredibly overpowered compared to canon Characters of his age.

Due to these points, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~

Also...there seems to be an issue with your pages formatting, everything is set up in individual boxes and it looks rather cluttered and awkward, would suggest possible fixing this.