Talk:Orion Fenix/@comment-24296957-20140714163848

So far, it'a good, nicely-written OC. However,

The semblance. Turning invisible is a red flag. While the effect is incredibly similar to Halo's Active Camo, and I can evnision what it looks like, it falls under the illusion category. What you could do instead is say Rigel can silence her movements to a certain extent. Almost there, but for now,

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--

Oh, as a side note. When I read Fenix, I thought of Marcus Fenix. I think I play too much Gears of War...