Talk:Gelbe Zahn/@comment-10337166-20161119233603

Rejected for Meiyo Clan affiliation

Her weapon section is confusing, the way I read it, she has 3, correct? Pistol, heat blade, and her arms, if so that's too many, remove the pistol

Semblance, the 3d analyzing is fine for an inventor, however construc weapons of an unlimited nature are not. IF she can recreate an 'olympus mech' it doesn't matter how fast it drains her aura if it just murks everything in front of her.

Faunus trait unclear.

Rejected

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