Talk:Grimm Amethyst/@comment-8182065-20150519214357

I'd advise adding commas and periods when appropriate, as your backstory is just a complete run on sentence. Speaking of, I don't believe any 13 year old would be able to survive alone in a forest, infested with Grimm for that matter. Especially the Emerald Forest for that matter, mainly because it's where Beacon holds their initiation, and with their hidden cameras and such used for keeping an eye on their students (possibly Grimm activity as well), someone should've seen him. From what I've read, he doesn't have any survival training whatsoever, nor any family willing to teach him.

The weapon, just a purple Crescent Rose, which isn't a great thing, but an alternative idea has been suggested for you down below. Also where did he get his weapon from? Who trained him? You can't expect to give a kid a dangerous weapon and say, "Go have fun. Wear a helmet!" and not instruct them on how to use it.

There are a lot of holes that should definitely be filled in, being the ones I just mentioned as well as the "friends" he is said to have in his personality section. Biggest thing, however, he's supposed to be living alone in a forest, yet he has a pair of headphones (assuming there's a device to plug them in to, which runs on electricity. And Dust can't be used right off the bat if he just happened to find some; you have to refine it), a subscription to a weapons magazine (to ogle some fancy new weapons), and clothes (he's apparently been living there for 4 years, and managed to obtain civillian clothes, and hasn't gone completely native).

Also, if you're going for amethyst as his color allusion, it doesn't work I'm afraid. Color Naming Rule applies to the first name, as per evidence we've seen in canon. Just browse through this here if you might need a hand on the name.