Talk:Senka Kasun/@comment-27743663-20170114231709

CNR checks out.

Appearance is fine.

Personality is fine.

Backstory is fine.

Weapon is fine.

Semblaaaaaance is where I see an issue. I'm having a bit trouble understanding it. From my current understanding, she summons her shadow and controls it entirely with her consciousness while she's left there. A few things already I'll break down into points to make it easier to go through.

A). Shadow's don't have any form or mass, so rather than her shadow itself, she'd need to summon something that looks like her shadow from her shadow and then control it, essentially being a separate entity and material altogether.

B). What's the maximum range it can go? Could it just roam freely and leave her there forever until she calls it back? On that, what happens if someone damages her while her consciousness is in the shadow? Would it get called back and stop the semblance midway? Also, how long can it last, as in, how long can she keep it up?

C). While the shadow can be defeated, it is essentially invulnerable unless it's specifically taken down by decapitation. While interesting, that does go over the no limits fallacy. Things like bullets and Dust still need to harm it.

D). The strength and blocking is fine, just wanted to say that :P.

Tl;dr

Rejected on;

- Semblance requiring clarification, lacking demerits, and breaching no limits fallacy.

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