User blog:Xanneer/Here we go again.

Alright, 3rd time go. I am still looking for people to give my story a read. Again, all I ask is for a few people to give me their honest opinions on the quality of my story. http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/A_Pawn%27s_tale.

The story is about maybe 10-15 minutes long depending on your reading speed. Theres a few spelling and grammatical errors but those are like once in a blue moon. If you do read my story and write a review of it, I would like you to go into detail about you thought about it, especially concerning the characters and the combat. Thank you for your time.