Thread:Jadefire62/@comment-26571677-20160203101808/@comment-26362067-20160203135128

Okay, I am seriously liking this gal. Anyway, just a few things to ask about:

Her title and alias. How did she get them? Where? When? Why, even? Not really a reject-worthy thing, but I know some reviewers will be asking as I've seen them do it. Plus I'm curious myself. :D Also, "Freezing Funeral" seems more like a combo name to me. "Frozen Funeral" would make more sense, in my opinion. That said, aliases are usually either fake identites, or, in this case, street/mercenary/something names that are made by oneself. Titles are most often names given by the people. I can see where these come from - her Semblance, dress. But how'd she get them?

Then, what's with "Born: 141?" I'm going to guess that's a typo. Oh, and don't forget to put her mother in relatives.

Also, can you give reference pics for Doppler and Schwartz? I'm having a hard time imagining two blades going into one hilt, unless it's something like this gal's weapons.

Anyway, have fun with her! I don't see anything reject-worthy, as the ice part of her Semblance is basically a side-effect rather than another function. (Might wanna stress that point, now that I think about it)

But, yeah. Interesting OC. Can't wait to see her in action. :)