Thread:Tsubori/@comment-25851029-20141212062050

I've been working on my OC for a bit, thinking Algernon Rusting through for the past... I dunno, few weeks? Finally joined the fanon (and wiki, learning on the go and checking pages I need to learn from, any tips are appreciated), made a page and threw everything I had down. I checked the rules (I think I'm ok there, but I could be wrong) and tried my best to balance everything so my character isn't OP (I hope not, he's not designed for actual combat). I'm wondering if I could get some critical thinking on what needs to be changed or what looks good, as well as some questions involving making the sheet: Does it require a Fancharbox on the right? I'd have to trim and re-trim the whole clothing lineup (worried I put too much info, even though I thought I needed to flesh him out). Just wondering what needs to be the standard character sheet, as I don't really see a requirements list anywhere beyond some basic information (checked character creation, characters, rules and I know about the templates), unless I completely missed it in which case I'll immediately change what I have and apologize ahead of time. If the character seems too unorthodox, I have another take on him that I can throw in (and completely redesign the character, not a biggie, 4-5k words isn't hard. Any and all modifications aren't difficult as I thought of quite a few plan Bs and Cs). If you aren't able to provide the critique, or this isn't supposed to be the place to ask, might I ask if you would pass this along to those who provide that feature or are available? :) 