Talk:Tangelo Pandora Wartall Taupe/@comment-24087318-20140908064341

I'm confused by this page overall. It starts by describing and listing her like she's five, but then goes back and forth between five and seventeen constantly. Please only use the oldest age as the main one, and refer to things from the younger ages as part of the backstory.

Her name doesn't fit the Fanons policy on names as per the Color Naming Rules. Her surname includes a color, but her first name doesn't refer to one. (If you'd notice, every character in the Canon RWBY has their first name, or most common name if they go by a title like Doctor, Professor, General) refer to a color somehow.

If I've made a mistake, and it does, please place information about it in the Trivia section.

Rejected for the above points.

~RWBY Fanon Administration Team~

In addition, there's quite a few spelling errors present, but they arn't Rejection grounds. They could use cleaning up, however.