Talk:Jade Black/@comment-24828824-20170105140412

Ok i'm just gonna drop this in between the reviews and just ask you a few questions i'd hope to see an honest answer to because it might solve some problems that keep the OC from getting accepted:

1 Why does he get to kill a beowulf at age 5? why not 10? or 13? what is the specific reason for 5 when a child isn't nearly strong enough to fight with any competence.

2 Why does he have to be 16? you already mention in the background he's a Haven student because he was recognized as having potential, why does he get to go a year early? most every character starts at one of the four academies at age 17, is there a specific reason he needs to be 16?