Thread:Takeshi kun21/@comment-25363089-20170225204349/@comment-25363089-20170319012254

Yeah same here. Had it raining and snowing one day then the next. Nothing but snow. An now all the snow is melting. Which is good though its still pretty cold. But at least i am not having to run the wood burner at full blast. ^-^. So getting there. An its fine. I been reworking some parts in his backstory and removing some bits. I think I did remove the section on him and his siblings working to try and keep the house.

I do like the reasons you gave as to why the humans would want his mother's house i An I can see it being about the previous owner hidding a large sum of lien hidden some where on the estate..plus it being in the right spot for a condo would add salt to the wound. An yeah I'll age him up and probably add in there got training from either his father or some ex cage fighter or a friend of his dad. An yeah Coyote left to settle a few scores with some vary old "friends.". An when he heard about Rasuk's mom passing away.

He had to return to keep a promise. An yeah Rasuk doesn't trust him but he does respect him..to a degree. An no he don't call him father only thing he calls him is "Sir". An the only thing Coyote called him was. "Runt". Or "Boy". An boy was when he did good. Coyote was a hard man to please but he raised those kids to be tough as Vacuo's desert. So that way when the world fought them they fought back twice as hard. >:3 An thanks man i really do apperitation the advice. ^-^ really helps me grow as a writer. I think I am getting better at it too. Cause I am getting more Oc's accepted. An I am making less and less mistakes. ^-^.