Talk:Marcel Skye/@comment-14295500-20130818195259

G'day Azure! I stumbled on Marcel by way of the Contest so let's get a wiggle on!

Firstly, your own art! I love seeing people take initiative and give it a burl! I love his appearance, the combination of blue hair with dark skin! From an artist point of view, throwing in a few extra details, threading, belts or patches to make it a bit more eyecatching and the design would be great! I also like his symbol too.

Secondly for which you've already one me over NORMAL! AVERAGE! Oh, so few do I see that these days and it's going to give him a good foundation to discover who he is through roleplaying.

His personality is good too, sweet and easy to get along with. I would like to see more flaws in him though because as it is now he's kind, a leader and excellent martial artist. What's the downside to these traits? Gullible? Too forgiving? Never list things (vegetables, needles and uptight people) when you can elaborate in a paragraph. Explaining why for many things really gives a personality a three dimensional feeling.

I also like the fact the loss of his parents isn't his entire personality and that he is on excellent terms with his stepfamily.

His weapon is very creative! Imagine seeing it in action but would enjoy seeing some weaknesses thrown in there as well. Having swordsmanship in there as well does seem a bit greedy though and combining rocket rollerblading with martial arts could be deadly enough.

All in all, I really like Marcel! He's creative and interesting without having to leech of personal tragedy or artificial    non-rwby stuff tacked on. Well done!