Talk:Whinter Vanderburgh/@comment-17970636-20140523231143

Alright, good character, just a few small adjustments.

One, dust hasn't shown to be able to form into solid shapes. I recommend changing it so her weapon turns pure energy into waves, not aura, but energy. That way, she'll also have a limitless supply.

How name realtes to a colour ought to be in the trivia.

Other then that, you never fail to impress time and time again.

Rejected for now.

--RP Moderation Team--