Talk:Jaescon Palderas/@comment-24416658-20160322013919

Name fits under the CNR.

No big issue with appearance or personality.

Backstory does not have any reject-worthy issues, but it hassome grammar mistakes. Please fix those.

Weapon is a dual identical Primary with two modes.

Comparison of transcript to Pyrrha and Yang make little sense. You're comparing the transcripts of two very different characters with very different strengths and weaknesses, which doesn't make sense because you can't be on par with two different things. Yang was never shown to have such a high combat prowess, only Pyrrha has been declared to have that. Also, make sure that you only have the battle prowess, not the fame.

Semblance is not approved. No transformation semblances, such as turning skin to stone, are allowed.

Rejected for above points.

--RP Moderation Team--