Talk:Kyarameru Sufure/@comment-13593058-20161106031613

 Kyarameru Sufure Checklist

Infinite Use Semblance: Not Fixed
While a draw back has been added, it contradicts with the actual ability and the wording is confusing: is the pause a charge up before a dash? Or does the pause apply after the dash finishes? If she has to wait two seconds to dash again anyway, why does she pause for an additional half a second?

What about the after image? The way its phrased, it's almost like she projects afterimages from the point she dashes all the way to the point where she ends. So essentially a wall of after images until she stops

Backstory Inconsistency: Not Fixed
There are only 4 main types of NATURAL Dust as far as the we know so mentioning a hidden Dust type mined from the ground with no explaination is grounds for rejection.

While the inner workings of your weapon need not be described, having a "mysterious" vibe to it raises questions on its true power and is vulnerable to god-modding during RPs. State what the ovens can and cannot do properly.

Verdict: Rejected
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