Talk:Urdin Meadows/@comment-24911350-20140602161615

--Requested Review--

I've actually looked over him a bit earlier just from surfing around the wiki, so one thing I noticed right away was his nickname. It seems pretty wildly uncharacteristic of him, even if "hesitant" is in there. Maybe something like "Storm", or even "Juggernaut", but "Walking Genocide" is a pretty big stretch, and pretty well unsupported by his history and personality.

There's a bit of a contradiction with his fighting and personality as well. It seems kinda inconsistent that he can be so crippled by potential failure, but is willing to do so little to actually work on his flaws, adapt, or think things through.

Usually I see some kind of issue with the weapon, but you're all good there. I believe that you mean the hilt on Harbinger detaches though, not the pommel. The pommel is specifically the part below the grip that widens so your hand doesn't slide off. You may also want to expand a bit on how long it takes harbinger to separate into a sword and shield, and if switching forms is something feasible in the middle of melee combat. It really doesn't seem like something that could be done without creating a big opening for the enemy, but if it is, it may be good to explain how.