Talk:Clancy Servius Carlisle/@comment-24678303-20180217194321

I think I only have one issue with this character, being in the Personality. I dunnos if it's just badly worded, but it seems like he has a major contradiction in there regarding being easy going, but then right after stating he has a dark side and uses violence to get...Something. The wording around that second paragraph is very difficult to decipher.

Beyond that, the only other thing of note, and this isn't really a point for rejection, mearly an observation, but I don't know if Grimm actually have heartbeats. Though, they tend to make themselves heard with growls and roars regardless. I digress.

Rejected for the first point.

~RP Moderation Team~