Talk:Lilac Lavenderian/@comment-24012109-20170620183244

Alright, so. While it can be nice to not be long-winded in explanations, this profile is way below explanatory details. It's just incredibly vague in that she doesn't feel like a character; and I know you can add more to actually make it feel like a character that can feel things and experienced life.

It's also worth noting that Aura Sharing falls into Aura Manipulation, which is not allowed under our guidelines. Our Guidelines

As for such, Rejected for now. You are free to ask me for assistance, and also take notes and basic structure from:

http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Character_sheet_base#Profile

http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:EvergreenLeaf/Original_Character_Creating_Guide