Talk:Verona Scarlett/@comment-31408668-20190227161011

COLOR NAME REFERENCE

Color name reference is recognized. Verona as a name has two meanings. It's Italian meaning, which is "from the city of Verona", but also an Albanian or Illyrian meaning, being "summer", coming from the root name Vera.

APPEARANCE

Nothing to detract from here. The description is short and concise, the only thing I would want are a few details like height, for example. However, this is not fully detractable, as I just imagine her as average height. No major problems here.

PERSONALITY

Her personality seems consistent with backstory and her general behaviour. A very strict upbringing, forming her into an orderly and strict person. No obvious contradictions. No problems here.

BACKSTORY

Her backstory gives me some Pyrrha vibes, but it's delightfully twisted in a different direction, with Verona really striving to stand with those expectations and not taking time for other things. It's also nice to see an evolution in her starting to get along with Perseus, because it indicates that there is something different deep in her. No stepping on canon toes. Noted no placement in Vytal Festival. No problems here.

WEAPONS AND COMBAT

The weapon is within guideline specifications. We have a single transforming primary in form of Airgead Sciathán. It is a nice idea for a weapon, having the interchangable arrowheads when ready to fire and such. Transformation sequence seems simple and easy to see in your head. But I agree with Delta's previous review; you should note down how many arrows she carries, and if she uses Dust Arrow Heads, for example. No problems here.

As for Verona's skill in combat, I would say it is very in line with her backstory and rather intensive training over time. It's a good note that she is a skilled unarmed combatant, as it paints her overall martial prowess better. No problems here.

SEMBLANCE

Iron Maiden is a very nice utility Semblance. It gives a lot of options, not just in combat, but in general for things like exercise or just walking around. It seems to have limiters, in the form of an Aura limiter and a duration limiter with variance, the variance being a pain threshold. I would maybe go into a tiny bit more detail about how long she can use it, but it's not detractable in this case. However, be vary to not overuse it in RP, should you find yourself there. No problems here.

CONCLUSION: ACCEPTED

'''When I first looked at Verona, I had no doubt she would be accepted. To be fair, I could have just noted the change in CNR, but I thought I would give it my usual review. Overall, a very nice job.'''