Talk:Arakuen Suno/@comment-24678303-20160502155839

Yeahno, you didn't really change much, if anything, from the last review.

The first part was a mistake on Jord's part, as Sanctum is a Junior school, such as Signal, and students there forge/acquire their weapons in that timespan, so that is excusable.

The Semblance seems to be trying to do way too much than what should be possible with a Semblance. He makes steam clones (?) and can shoot vapor bullets from them, as well as use steam itself as a shield. A Semblance isn't able to change the properties of any given element, should it be able to control it. Thusly, mist cannot really be used as a shield in any regard, unless your main enemy are bugs or cats.

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~