Talk:Dunstan Herman/@comment-25924729-20181124120601

Surprisingly, one of the better character's ive seen from you so far... O_O

I mean, he's still very simple, and grammar is problematic (but getting better), but the guy's actually got an interesting concept and abilities behind him. I like characters that use tactics, smarts and skill to win instead of powerful weapons and stuff, if you pull this off, it could be great actually.

Anyway, down to business... Appearance and Personality section are fine. Theres a tiny contradiction in his backstory where it says he can keep up with his father's skill in a fight, but is also nowhere near his skill. But this is just a minor detail and not worth rejecting over.

No semblance or aura section to note. Bringing variable weapons instead of a single customized one is rare on this wiki, but there's no rules saying it cant be done. I'll allow this, but just remember we still have a weapon limit rule of 2. He can bring different guns into a fight, but can only be using or carrying two at any time, no more.

Being traumatized by recreating his family's death scene is... too specific to be a weakness. Like, if he can feel traumatized by seeing something similar but more general, like a dead body, blood and stuff, maybe it will pass. Being this specific is like saying a character can swim, but his weaknesses is his swimming can be negated by tying him to a rock before throwing him into the water.

Its hard to properly explain... but yeah, too specific to be a valid weakness. Still, having no aura, semblance, or Dust in his arsenal already puts him at a huge disadvantage against most OCs, so he aready has plenty of weaknesses i feel.

So yeah..... some issues, but nothing i can really reject for here.

Accepted.

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~RP Moderation Team~