Talk:Mimi Gardener/@comment-27743663-20170102205150

CNR checks out.

Appearance checks out.

Personality is fine

Backstory is noooooooot fine. You pass over fanon-canon interactiton on a casual level to the point it's a core part of the character, which iisssn't allowed. If it was, everyone would be best-friends/lovers/distant-cousins to XXX character in canon, and it would make an incoherent jumble of people claiming roles that contradict. It's fine to have a character as a teacher, but thiiis crosses over that line by a lot. Like, there's not much else to say, because it's practcaly all there is.

Semblance, well, you note aura usage and a distance, so it's passable. Just outline it a bit better, since it looks like there's not much stopping her from spamming it.

Weapon is fine.

Relationships section falls under heavy canon-fanon interaction as well.

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

- Heavy fanon-canon interaction within character

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