Talk:Glen Ashwood/@comment-31408668-20190209033702

Here we go, first official review, let's do this!

COLOR NAME REFERENCE

Color name reference is recognized. Glen means "Mountain valley". It is derived from the word gleann from Gaelic, which has the same meaning.

APPEARANCE

Nothing to detract from here. Appearance is consise and gets to the point.

PERSONALITY

Personality looks consistent. No obvious contradictions. Good notes toward personality change from Battle of Beacon.

BACKSTORY

Backstory seems to check out, placement in Vytal festival is noted. No stepping on canon toes. Good and simple overall.

WEAPONS AND COMBAT

Weapons are within guideline specifications and seems to function realistically. Dust use in Scary-Go-Round is clearly defined. Cutmore is in exquisite detail, which is much appreciated from a sword enthusiast. Skills with said weapons is defined, with his preferred non-use of Cutmore because of it's "backup-weapon-ishness".

SEMBLANCE

The semblance "Grayhound" seems fairly balanced. It has spatial limitations, with the teleport requiring enough space for Glen to place himself there. It has limits to what it can pass through, and it has a fatigue limiter which I would say is more than fair. I would also say that the Semblance is very fitting for a hyper person with decision-making problems, where it reflects his rather airy personality.

CONCLUSION: ACCEPTED

'''It is my pleasure to accept the first OC I review. Glen is a wonderful character, as he can go in so many directions, both literally and figuratively.'''