Talk:Tebukuro Lorica/@comment-13593058-20160611034940

 A Review of  Tebukuro Lorica

Appearance
Not much to judge on a technical level.

Personality
A reasonable personality. No contradictions.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed, however, the peculiarities of the weapon are still vague. Grounds for rejection.

Semblance is fine, but operation time should be included to make the use of it more strategeic coupled with the fact that even her weapon runs on Dust. Dust is finite, list the operation time and a reasonable amount of Dust she can bring with her. Grounds for rejection.

Backstory
No comment.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and acknowledged.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Weapon vagueness

- Semblance and up time required

Review Summary
The two issues I have with the combat portion of this character is merely just the limit of the weapon. I'd like to know what it is capable of generating. Regardless, I will draw the line for the construction of weapons only to "simple" ones like standard swords, axes, spears, etc. Bows and other range weapons are fine as long as they do not run on components like a gun would as that would classify as a "complicated" object.

The issue witht he Semblance is more about the up keep of the armour in relation to the the Dust that augments it. Since Dust is finite, please state a reasonable amount as well as number of uses/duration of use before the Dust runs out.

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