Talk:Noble Glasblazer/@comment-30530552-20180617013956

Alright, been a while since I've seen him, and looks like he's been changed up some. Let's see what we have for the new Noble.

CNR still works.

Appearance-wise, BMI still pegs him as underweight, but I won't get into that again. Outside that, outfit and such works well.

Personality works, even if I feel it could use a bit more detail.

Backstory works, though I feel it could use a bit more detail....you still haven't referenced Battle of Beacon since his age suggests that he's going and hasn't experienced the Fall....have you found a team for him yet?

Weaponry options are both fine.

Semblance could use some limitations. You mention that high humidity makes it easy for him to use and that it requires minimal Aura....to be able to combine it with Dust to form armor makes it a bit too difficult to reasonably counter him. It needs better time limits and should porbably be a bit more taxing on his Aura.

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Above issues are noted: additional detail, referencing Battle of Beacon if you've got a team for him, and a few more limitations on his Semblance.

-Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~