Thread:Tierhalibelbrylle/@comment-26543176-20140804105942

Okay look Tier. Everyone here has been really patient with you. Despite your attitude, the problems we have with your OC's and your habit of running away, from chat if someone starts to talk to you about their problems with your creations. But personally, I've had enough of being kind and understanding. And honestly, you need to start listening to the problems's people have with you.

Firstly, Your OC's (not including Bryan, he get's his own paragraph)- Tier, people's main complaints with your OC's, are that most, if not all of them have little to no description in terms of personality or history, and apperance, though this is less important, though it is annoying. Zucchini Aquino Butch Flour Austin Schwarz These are examples of characters whom, have little to no description in terms of history/personality/appearance. Along with this I will broadly generalise, however an overarching theme that I have noticed with most of your female OC's is that in some way, they are connected to Bryan, have a crush on him, related to him, Or in some cases, like Austin and Zucchini, the largest part of their already limited personality, is DEVOTED to Bryan. He is seemingly the biggest part of so many of your OC's personalities, he is the center of their world, their rival or prospective lover. Their ENTIRE personality revolves around his whims. This makes many of your OC's feel blank and underwritten, with little or no description, where their defining personality trait, is their connection to Bryan, and how he is the largest part of his life. Along with this, their histroy is often simple and quickly written however, this can be forgiven as a lot of people do this. however I would suggest that you start trying to learn how to be more detailed as it would help your writing. As another side note, there is nothing wrong with loosely basing your OC's on things like RvB characters. However, it isn't something that should be a regular theme, and when your OC's are directly lifted from RvB then it begins to border on plagarism, which if you ever read my first notice, is bad ~mkay~.

Secondly, Your actions in chat, and your ways of dealing when confronted by others- Tier, I am going to level with you here, your personality, when dealing with people who come to you with concerns or problems with your OC's. STINKS, more often than not you will run away from your problems in chat, when people come to you. You Leave chat running away with your tail between your legs, when someone comes to you with legit concerns about your OC's or your personality in general. It is honestly one of the worst ways to deal with a problem that I have ever seen. You run away into your own little safety bubble where everything is okay, and all of your OC's are the works of the Gods themselves, and that everyone who says otherwise is just stupid. No matter how many people are telling you what is wrong. This section is quite short compared to the others. That however is because honestly, I can't think of how to explain to you, that running away from your problems, is a terrible way of dealing with critics. It makes you seem cowardly and unwilling to listen to people, and it encourages you to continue putting out substandard content that you think is acceptable.

Thirdly, Complaints about your art- Okay so this is something I have heard from a lot of people. I am not an artitst so I don't know. However i do think it needs to be addressed. From what I have seen you often lift art from thing's like AC, or RvB, now this in itself isn't that much of a problem. However you don't seem to credit the artist for their efforts which is almost cliaming the works as your own. There are numerous other complaits which i myself do not understand, and I would HIGHLY recomend that you talk to Samjay, who will explain people's problems with your art.

Fourthy, Bryan- Okay, so this is the big one. Now Tier, I know you love Bryan, so much so that many of your other OC's personalities are all about their relationship with Bryan and nothing else. However, you're going to have to listen to me here when I say. STOP WANKING OFF TO HOW AWESOME YOU THINK BRYAN IS. I get that Bryan is your OC and you don't like hearing people's problems with him, but you have to listen to me man, Bryan has some serious flaws, that make people really really dislike him as a character. Bryan, is a cliche. He fits into the cliche mold of the tragic good looking hero who lost everything, but is given a chance to redeem himself. But still has serious self loathing issues, blames himself, hates himself, etc etc etc. Does this sound familiar? That's because I am describing Bryan to a tee. You've made him out to be this godly tragic character who is so broken inside and awesome on the outside that you think he should drop the panties of all women withing a mile radius of him. Along with this, Bryan's page is at times poorly written and hard to understand. Along with this, he becomes even more cliche as you seem to alow his past to become his defining characteristic. compare this to say my OC Vermont similar past, however, Vermont is condsiderably more well ajusted and isn't a tragic person who I wank allover because of how proud I am that I made something cliche. The worst part however, is that you treat bryan, like a golden goose who can do no wrong. Everytime someone comes to you with complaits about Bryan you quickly RUN AWAY, to avoid them. You need to Leanr that Bryan isn't a god, in fact he is just another OC that can be judged. And I am here to tell you, Bryan is far from the perfect OC you think he is. I could go into further detail but I doubt yo would listen to me.

Finally, You, sorta- Look i will keep thisshort sharp and sweet. You don't listen to people Tier. You are hard to talk to and at times infuriating. And I have tried the nice way with you I really have, and you just won't listen, so here I am waving a flag trying to get you to listen. On top of all this, after having seen you not listen to people multiple times about simple things like Cannon and OC interaction in Fanfics, and having personal experiences with you in RP's. I just want you to know Tier, that I do like you, you're an okay funny sort of guy, who I could see myself getting along with. However, I just want you to listen to me, please man, this isn't just me talking either. So many people have complaints but you just won't listen. So please tier please, freaking listen, even if it's just this once.

Thank you for taking the time to read this essay. Good luck Tier.

~Jordan~ 