Talk:Pan Everest/@comment-24087318-20140103071549

Review as requested by KuraiJack:

Nothing really stands out, character is well made and written. However:

Psycology wouldn't help predict attacks, just how people are *likely* to react to certain outside stimula such as their opponents behavioral patterns. For example. if your character keeps making it look like he rushes from the front, his opponent will think less and less of an attack from the side or rear, or if he uses his right sword dominantly (and an opponent picks up on this) they'd start focusing on its movements, and less on the left, among other things.

In addition, his sword-mounted guns firing missiles would likely be harmful to him at a close range, and both them and the energy blasts arn't explained. How do they even both fit on the pommel of the blade? What's their ammunition? Missiles are large and bulky, he'd doubtfully be able to even use more than one per blade as well.