Talk:Dr. Alexander Nobel M.D./@comment-17970636-20160105140403

Alright first off creating grenades takes minutes, not seconds, especially since it has to be done in controlled environments, preferably machines, especially if one is going to use phosphorus because it reacts violently with oxygen/water. As well as preparing the chemicals required to time the explosion correctly and whatnot, basic chemistry lesson aside, you need more than a few seconds to make a proper grenade so that ti doesn't blow up in your face.

Allusions to the Great War having had chemical warfare involved and that masks specifically like that were used in performing experiments. Overreaching due to lack of info, no thank you.

Same story with After the Faunus Rights Revolution, we have no idea of when that happened, only that the White fang rose up because of it and that the White Fang changed leadership 5 years ago, once more, overreaching.

Calling Atlas soldiers a Dead Space enemy as a sign of insult? can't really see that working out unless you went for some other meaning like "dead being" or whatever.

Once more, overreaching with the assumption that Atlas used chemical warfare in the Faunus Rights Revolution.

Formulation of acids and bases can take much much longer than seconds, once again, it doesn't matter when you put in the components, the reaction has to happen at its own rate.

Once more, overreaching with the assumption of knowledge of when the Faunus Rights Revolution happened.

Gas that can kill human and faunus in small doses, AND he gave it to the Atlas military, first off no  the the killing gas, secondly, for all his intellect he couldn't forsee what they would do with the gas? They're a military, they aren't gonna put it on display and be like "This is what we can do fear us".

And the trial of traitors, once more, overreaching.

Mantle was the name of Atlas before it was Atlas,  Mantle was a defunct region, it no longer exists.

As for the end note of the backstory, and revisions done after will force this character to be re-input back into Pending if you add anything in once accepted.

For now though.

Rejected.

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