User blog:McKringles/FanFiction Review

Wow, my first blog post. *Nervous Laughter* Hello people! I wrote my first FanFic and I'd like to ask anyone who is willing to give it a read of what you think about it. It's going to be a long story but it'll be in chapters. Feel free to criticize it all you want, I'm open to any criticism and will improve upon my story.

Here's the link: http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Operation:_White_Fang