Talk:Emerald Verona/@comment-26104528-20170726173806

Still incredibly minimalist to the point of having too little content. Being more detailed and specific will only help you at this point in time.

Summon semblances need a lot, and I mean a lot, of explanation to be considered acceptable. I need to see aura expenditure, time limits, exact survivability before I can accept that.

Your backstory implies intelligent Grimm which I don't know if I want to agree with. Grimm can be strategic no doubt, but deciding to capture someone for seemingly no reason? I don't think so.

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~