Talk:Lapis/@comment-30803571-20190801204949

not even gonna try with this one.

- no CNR trivia anywhere, and while it's obvious for "Lapis" it isn't for "Perusia" which would be the one that matters here

- there's no weapons nor ability section, the former would be fine if she doesn't have one but it'd still have to be mentioned somwhere that this is the case, and again no abilities section.

- semblance lacks detail, needs more description and such

- history has very little information, it could at least have more detail as to when what happened

- most of all though is like in other cases with your characters, what's outside the page is what's the most problematic. OBLVN, Orpheus, an entire "Lost Kingdom", none of these are acceptable.

Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~