Talk:Brunor Lawson/@comment-25924729-20190518030537

Very short and simple dude, not a lot to note about him.

Appearance, Personality and Backstory are alright. Humble dude, sounds like a genuinely good person.

Weapon section is a little lacking in description... but this may actually be okay, given how simple it is. Some more details like the apearance and material the shield is made of would be appreciated, but thats optional, and this is fine too.

However the same cant be said for his semblance. It seems okay in concept, but needs defined limits like how hard he can reinforce an object to be, how large an object he can cover and for how long. As it is now its very difficult to get a grasp on how strong the ability is.

CNR checks out.

Its mostly the semblance that needs work. Good try.

Rejected. If you have any questions please DM me on Wikia or Discord.

~RP Moderation Team~