Talk:Seren Zurine/@comment-13593058-20160223233950

A Review of  Seren Zurine

Appearance
Physical trait for Faunus species missing. Feather is assumed to be decorative and not the physical trait. All canon Faunus are shown to have a physical trait but can be hidden. If the trait is hidden please state so. Grounds for rejection.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Rule of one transformable and one vanilla followed.

No significant comment on fighting style.

Backstory
Nothing worthy to note. No contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and source checks out.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Lacking physical Fanus trait.

Review Summary
This was kind of strange to look at so I got another reviewer, Alex Wingace, to comment on the matter of a physical trait being present. We both concluded that the feathers present plus the artist's rendition of it implies the feathers are decorative and not grown by the character itself.

An easy fix comes to mind, one could make her legs have talons like that of the g yrfalcon mentioned but since she wears boots/shoes, they are mostly hidden and can pass for human.

 Other than that everything else checks out. Just change the Semblance.

 If you require assistance in the matter, please feel free to ask other Fanon mambers for help. If you believe there to be a misunderstanding or mistake, please contact me via message wall or another reviewer.