Talk:Amber Grace/@comment-25763181-20131002014611

Very nice OC there! A little short but it'll do. Don't be fazed when someone says that "mercenaries are overrated" because that's not really the case, although I really appreciate a unique OC. Now, the grammar isn't what I expect in an OC IMHO: everytime I see someone use "u" in an OC I kinda lose it a bit because it's not formal. A good OC ALWAYS uses formal grammar and spelling. Also, how does a six-foot-one 17 year old weigh only 100 lbs? I know the OC lives in a universe where sniper rifles can apperently propel its wielder upwards without the weapon itself breaking but really? I suggest the OC to be at least 140 lbs but that's really your call. I just think that's ridiculous IMHO. I also suggest elaborating on your OC, since it feels like it just gets to the point without revealing any specific details (expecially the backstory).

Overall, good OC, but with a little elbow grease, you can have one hell of a character here.

7.7/10