Talk:Ormand Tyr/@comment-13593058-20171031001244

Changes noted.

Comments:

Most of the problems have been cleared up. However, I would still like it more if the Semblance had a more distinct weakness considering RP purposes. Things like a rate of neutralization and such once exposed and taken out of the are of exposure or like a more distinct way of avoiding said gas. I mean, an invisible gas that has such minute effects seems literally unavoidable.

Not really reject worry but just things to note.

Accepted

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