Talk:Molaris Vitrum/@comment-24296957-20160326004223

Couple of things here. Let's start with the semblance. Just being able to summon fire without any sort of catalyst is no good. However, you can say Molaris creates a rune that summons the fire. In any case, there needs to be a clear limit: example, he can only use 'x' amount of runes at once, if he uses too much within a short period of time it's heavily taxing. Stuff like that, there needs to be balance. Manipulating fire from any source is a no-go. All-in-all, this Semblance is like...3 semblances in one. So it needs to be toned down. A lot. Like, pick your favorite and stick with it. Also, take that last bullet out in the Trivia. That's another Semblance, so make that...4.

Backstory (edgestory). There's continutiy issues here. How could a little boy, with just his Semblance, make people explode? Not to mention the fact he just awakened his Semblance? It doesn't matter if it's 'tied to his emotions' or not, that automatically makes him OP. While on the topic of the backstory, I don't see how he got into Beacon. That should be added. Was there a reason the WF attacked them, or were they doing it just for fun?

As for the stats chart (I personally don't use them), being a speed attacker implies he's a glass cannon. These stats are all over the place, and with the aforementioned, a glass cannon doesn't have a lot of natural defense or health. And his secondary role doesn't properly fit with who this OC is - he's a fighter, not an assassin. Again, these stats need to be corrected and toned down.

Fix this and we'll go from there. Until then,

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--