Talk:Selena McCauly/@comment-24087318-20131216084641

My previous points of critique have been dealt with, but reading it over again I found something I missed earlier, many apologies.

Characters must be aged 17 to attend Beacon academy, barring incredibly special permissions like Ruby was given.

I'd suggest changing the age to reflect this.

Rejected, but very close.

~RP Moderation Team~