User blog comment:WeissSchnee/Help With My OC/@comment-27369870-20160302044508

I think biggest issue is the force field and the story, like explain why the project was shutdown like was it the advent of penny or the aura research that got the project axed also i think it would be best to say that the force field is a prototype or something. But these are just my thoughts and such but I like the tron reference not many people liked her.