Talk:Chris Kurimuzon/@comment-24678303-20150305221004

Okay, let's go about this down the line in order down the line, shall we?

First off, that art seems to have been stolen and recolored from Bryan Hyacintho, as Huynher98 stated (good on them for that, by the way).

The rules state that you can not have a Beacon Student under the age of 17 without valid reason for bumping them ahead a year, which there is not.

Next up, while it is alright to have a Tiger Faunus, you can't have one with multiple traits, as with all Faunus.

The personality is...Well, to be perfectly honest, it's badly written, edgy and not very good in general and doesn't seem to add anything to the character as a whole. It hardly even explains what his actual personality is.

His weapon...What even is this? You didn't explain what the weapon is, nor did you explain what it does.

Unnacceptable Semblance. You didn't explain it at all, so i'm guessing you meant it could be used as much as they want WHEN they wanted, which is a big nono.

The backstory seems to be as bad as the personality, as it only explain two or so events in your characters life, and a couple contradictions that i won't go into currently.

Overall, i think you need to go read some recently Accepted OCs and re-read the rules. Also, don't just steal and re-color art, that's a good way to get yourself booted off the Wiki. If you want art, just make it yourself or buy it. This will be your only warning.

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~