Thread:DustpeltX/@comment-13427943-20161002093557

First of all thank you for your review and a bit more precise error fixing.

I have spoken with people before hand in regards to the savior sibling thing and that has had no issues and yes i do feel like i should have given the reason to why she was kept and i believe i have.

I hope i have made her acceptable, once again thank you for an easy to follow review and where i went wrong 