Talk:Vi "Vix" Valentine/@comment-5431934-20140226010158

There's no mention of what makes the knife Dust-powered. Why would one need to power a knife?

It seems odd that a relatively large weapon like a longbow could turn into something so small like a bracelet.

What did you mean by Myrtenaster's long-range capabilities? In addition, there's no mention of how the Dust is applied to the shots - there's nothing on, like Myrtenaster, integrated Dust resevoirs, as well as such a thing would make it work even less as a bracelet.

This semblance of advanced speed is already used by a canonical character.

There's no explanation of how this character's name alludes to their colour.

For the above,

Rejected.

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