Talk:Grimm Amethyst/@comment-26543176-20150519092842

Okay, so this guy needs a lot of work, just reading over him, I want to offer some suggestions to help you, and prevent him being rejected.

1) the formatting, it's all over the place, with titles everywhere and messy writing, just look over it and fix it up, or ask someone for help, either or works.

2)His weapon, I don't care if you think it fits having your character's weapon be a carbon copy of Ruby's is going to get him rejected out of hand, change it. IF you want the whole tasmanian devil thing, change it to claw hands or something.

3) Other than that he's alright, a little generic, but otherwise solid, just fix up the formatting because that is a glaring issue right now, and his weapon. Good day