Talk:Grace "Artic" Take-Ra/@comment-25924729-20190209075739

.... oh god, we have a new contender for the wiki's best mom! D:

Backstory/biography and personality are alright, very cute and likable character.

Semblance seems cool. I was a bit worried at first when you compared it to lightning, cause a character being able to move like lightning, presumably with the same speed as lightning, over 20000 mph is definitely OP. But i looked up Larxene, and her speed looks quite managable, so this is a pass too.

She lacks a weapon and Appearance section in the page though. Even though there's artwork provided and you have filled up those details in the template, youre still required to give a brief description of them in their own sections on the page.

The colour name reference of Grace isnt listed either, but i did a quick google search and theres actually a blue Dulux paint called Grace, so it is valid, you just have to add it on the page.

So yeah..... everything youve writen so far is good, you just have to add a bit more stuff. Nice job.

Rejected,

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