Talk:Roy Pendragon/@comment-25924729-20181119112323

Pretty simple character, traditional hero type with potential to grow and develop many ways as a story goes on. I like it. Also appreciate the underlining thing you did on the page, makes it easier for us reviewers to do our job. Thanks.

Very few issues overall. Appearance and personality are simple, no comment. Weapons, combat ability and semblance are fairly balanced, confetti rockets made me smile a little, they're cute ^_^

The only problems are in the backstory. It doesn't properly explain who Clay and Ignis are, and what their relationship is with Roy. A little confusing, but their role in the backstory is minor enough that this isn't a rejectable issue, and it's optional for you to fix it, but I would advise to do it to make easier reading. A link to their pages if they're OCs on this site will suffice, or a short mention in the relationships section.

His ability to breathe fire also kinda comes out of nowhere. None of his semblance, weapon or other abilities seem to allow this. You should explain and justify how he did that, if it's one of his abilities please add it to the page.

Overall a pretty solid, likable character. But until the issues above are fixed:

Rejected.

If you have any questions please DM me on Wikia or Discord.

~RP Moderation team~