Thread:BluueAces/@comment-1618120-20130724122129/@comment-1618120-20130725213844

Doesn't work like that. LOL

Anyways there's stuff we need to do.

You can make Jorey Diamond(get it Jade?) and Rufus Sabbia(Sabbia meand sand, which is brown colored, he is Russet, which is brown). I've already made Onyx Rocker(Onyx is some type of rock) and I'm going to create Emile Lightning(Electric) Like the pic? Also you can make the weapons for your two..

Now the plot stuff. We could start them as just guys joining Beacon, then we follow the history stuff on their team page. We could also include some canon characters?(Ruby, Glynda, obv we're gonna include Ozpin) For a future chapter, we could have the professors force them to disband because of something then they did, but they don't and get expelled. After they run off into hiding and do stuff?

Drama format or Story Format. Drama format is basically Girl:*slaps girl 3 around head*

Girl 2:*angry*WHAT DID YOU DO TO MA FRIEND?

Girl: I just slapped her.

Both of the girls start to fight.

Story Format is this:

Girl 1 sends a rapid slap towards Girl 3's head, sending her down on the floor. "WHAT DID YOU JUST DO TO MA FRIEND?" Girl 2 asked angirly. Girl 1 looks to to Girl 2. "I just slapped her." Girl 1 announces. Both of them start to fight each other.