Talk:Maluna Argentum/@comment-24296957-20140708142703

All in all, a good starting OC. However, there are a few things that stick out.

While we do have semblances that work with Aura, there's no way to suddenly get more Aura. Aura has a set amount.

And, she's seems a bit...too perfect. Super-human strength, acute senses, and incredible durability? All of this borders on OP. While I can understand it's an environmental thing, saying all Rimescape faunus have these things implies it being a trait. And the only trait we know of faunus having is night vision. I suggest toning down the OC a bit.

Almost there, but for now,

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--