Talk:Seiriol Pierdid/@comment-13593058-20160224074809

 A Review of  Seiriol Pierdid

Appearance
Nothing technical to note. Appearance does not interfere with Fanon Rules.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon Rule and Flight Rule followed, no further comment

Backstory
Nothing worthy to note. No contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and source checks out.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- Nothing, move along.

Review Summary
Oh come on Spud, I know you can do better than this. Again an acceptable character with lots of potential to add detail and you don't.

It's like every one of these OCs are a good concept to begin with, you write a long detailed life story for them and then wimp out on the personality, gear, everything else!

I know you can do better than this.

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