User blog comment:Varzan Deodinm Beldinm/Late Night One Shot (I'm Open to Critique)/@comment-108.64.64.174-20140105053718

You say you've never wrote fanfiction? Fooled me, this is better then half the OC fics I've read on fanfiction.net. I'm surprised Ralis had to die though, I thought she would be like Akala's Blake Belledonna or something. Keep it up!