Talk:Lavender du Lac/@comment-13593058-20161002023658

 Lavender du Lac Review

Appearance
Nothing technical to note.

Personality
Point of personaility made, very well written.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Semblance acceptable.

Backstory
Backstory is acceptable but too long; please shorten it to a 2 to 3 paragraph summary. The detailed stories can be covering in another page.

Miscellaneous
 Colour reference acknowledged.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- No inconsistencies

Review Summary
Every once in a while I get lucky and find a character written well where I can say, "Individuality isn't dead." This is one of those times.

The character is written well despite being tropish. She is likable and believable and the weapons and Semblance are just simple enough to imagine that no one can deny its plausibility.

Just summarize the backstory a bit and move her relationships into a category of its own and you should do fine. Thank you for not being absolute garbage.

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