Talk:Sitruuna Yellow: OC/@comment-24678303-20150212174658

The first thing i've noticed is that there is a lack of proper formatting and a lot of text walls, which are both pet peeves of mine. It makes the article look very unattractive.

I don't get the Semblance. Does it just make her jump high? That doesn't seem useful in ANY situation, to be honest.

The Backstory...Was honestly kinda hard to read. There were a lot of things that didn't quite make sense in it, like how she became a 'murderess' after being betrayed by her friend who was stealing Dust. I don't get how that really makes sense.

...Okay, now that you've said not to question the name, i am GOING to question it. Upon looking into it, it DOES mean Lemon, but putting that sentence there is a good way to get questioned about it.

I see a lack of weapons, aside from the plain daggers she had in the backstory. I don't get it, is she a Huntress in Training or what? Overall, the character needs a lot of work, as a good majority doesn't add up.

...What is a Murderess, anyway...?

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~

It isn't really a wise idea to make a character when you don't have a Wikia account. It makes it really hard to do much of anything, especially since you can't go on the Chat and get guidance for your character. I reccommend making one as soon as possible.