Thread:DustpeltX/@comment-27811212-20160830060203/@comment-13593058-20160902024820

Okay, let me break it down for you then.

First, changing his name to "Byolleta" is a good start but by having "Travis" as a 'nickname' you are still infringing upon fanon-guidelines. Doing so is unfortunately just side stepping the problem. Unless there is a good reason for his nickname to be Travis, neither me nor the other reviews accept this fix. You should also link the source for the name "Byolleta" to mean violet.

Second, the Semblance is up to you but my take on the Semblance isn't such that it does too much and is then, too stong, but that since it does so much it must be a marginal improvement to his senses or takes up so much resources he might as well use it. However, all that is besides the point and merely a preference on my own account but the core problem with Semblances like these is that they "Superman" the character, often resulting in the appearance of a lazyily crafted character. Just enhancing all five senses makes you a jack of all trades kind of character which is nothing special.

Last, I don't mind the weapon as much, it just did not make sense in terms of number at the time. Although, word of warning, some multi-purpose weapons fall into the trap of trying to have a small weapon that turns into some sort of impossibly big weapon. So just a tip, if you can't imagine a way for your weapon to reasonably mechanically work and specifically describe, it's probably stupid.

Hope that helps. If not, you see that I have mentioned my own guide at the bottom of my reviews that you can consult.