Talk:Messer Danam/@comment-14295500-20130813061959/@comment-5726563-20130813080329

Thanks for the review! I will say that I've been trying to work on his description, as I have seen the problem with no description. As for the training age, I had a bit of a dilemna when it came to time. I had to give him enough time to have trained in it without doing the whole "instantly becomes good at fighting" that most do. I figured 9 was a good balance, as my little brother has been taking Tae Kwon Do since he was 7. I wouldn't say he's great, but he could beat most his age that don't have training. Messer was supposed to be the same, one who hasn't really seen how good he could be because he hasn't met any better than him in his small town, something that will come back to bite him when he does. Hopefully this resolves some of the problems. If you have any more advice, I'd love to hear it. I like getting harsh reviews as it gives me a chance to improve my character or explain my choices. I will edit him after the competition is over.