Talk:Evelyn Scarborough/@comment-13593058-20170530021003

 Evelyn Scarborough Review

Appearance
Description of appearance noted. No errors or contradictions.

Personality
Point of personaility made.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed. Semblance is acknowledged.

Backstory
Clear and concise, no contradictions. EXCELLENT.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- No inconsistency

Review Summary
FINALLY, someone who actually writes concise backstories thank you for making my job easier. Also good distinctly themed character all round. However, I would suggest to break down her weapon into clearer concise sections in relation to the abilities of different forms. Just a small presentation suggestion really, not too big of a deal.

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