Talk:Leonore Albus/@comment-17970636-20151121084955

Alright, interesting OC, just, some issues.

First off, is he 6'6", or 6'8"?, your page says one thing and the FanCharBox says another thing. Also, one can't be muscular at 190 pounds at his height, literally impossible. That'd mean he has less than 0.1% fat in his body. to give you an idea, I stand at 6'2" and with my slight build from working out daily for a few years, I weigh close to 200 pounds, and that's with just a tad bit of muscle tone.

His helmet covering his mouth could lead to him collapsing in battle due to a proper lack of air. this is becase when one gets exhausted, they tend to breathe through the mouth in order to moisten the air, although athletes recommend breathing through the nose to keep the airflow long, the fact is that in a drawn out battle, he could very well collapse due to a lack of oxygen reaching his lungs.

Getting tough by just hitting an apple tree.... Really the only part of him that would be tough after that would be his knucles, granted they aren't busted pernanantly. There's always the idea that he went to do chest bumps with the tree. But let's be real here.

Making it that far with literally nothing but an aura enhanced stick and his guts really is quite outrageous. And highly unbelieveable. I notice that Sel had made reference to the food fight, but the fact of the matter is all of the weapons used in that fight didn't last that long, a stick VS a sword, and both people having aura, sorry, but sword wins every time, it's just logic. And then having to give up because his weapon broke. Yeeeeeeah no. I can see him being accepted to Signal via his gumption, but making it to the quarter finals, no, impossible.

Yeah, that's about it. Have fun.