Talk:Pitch Norfolk/@comment-25924729-20190516082411

Sounds like a really smart, menacing type of guy. If pulled of well could be a fun RP character.

Apearance and Personality are alright, nothing much to note there. Backstory is interesting and easy to follow.

Weapons are really simple, could make a cool fighting style when paired with his semblance.

The semblance is the only real issue i see with this page. It seems okay in concept, we dont allow semblances to make the user's body immaterial but this is only the aura constructs themselves, so it should be fine, as long as it isnt used to bypass aura, which is against our rules. You could add that a a limitation.

However i cannot allow the ability to solidify inside objects, as that would also come with the ability to telefrag and pretty much instakill any enemy, possibly do the same thing to the user, or otherwise do any number of OP feats and abuse the laws of physics and reality. Phasing through and solidifying behind objects to hit targets behind cover is alright, but no solidifying inside the objects. You will have to remove that bit.

CNR checks out. Nothing else to note.

Yep... just a few changes needed on the semblance.

Rejected.

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~RP Moderation Team~