Talk:AMBR Story/@comment-10380701-20131107140553

So I've got some free time today, and I wanna get some inspiration to keep my brain juices flowing, so I decided to read this.

Besides a few minor typos, it's pretty damn great so far. My personal favorite character is Rina, because she's a fan of Ruby AND just happens to have her weapon be an ordinary stick early on. That, and she is incidentally the reason Team AMBR even formed.

I'd also like to praise how in-character Elena is. Out of most of my friends, you're the very first who got her correct, down to the way she talks.