Talk:Calore Natura/@comment-27743663-20161206233428

CNR, link a source. You don't give anyone, and going on a manhunt couldn't find one.

Appearance is fine. Save, you know, being a half-sirit. Which isn't fine. Because it isn't a thing.

Personality is fine.

Backstory, what's this elemenal amulet? Going from pretty much everything else on the page, it's some relic that's horribly broken. No.

Weapons, Primary, how does it shoot molten rocks? Only way I can see is if it has Earth dust in it as well. Secondary is fine.

Semblance is nooooooo. Controlling fire and heat? There's nothing inherently wrong with that, so long as it has limits and demerits...which isn't listed here. At all.

Skills section, absorbing fire? Withstanding volcano temparatures? Not affected by heat? No. Spirit power, still, isn't a thing. Since you know. Half-spirts aren't either.

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

- No CNR source. Link one.

- Being a half-spirit.

- Elemenal Amulet relic

- Primay needing an explanation.

- Semblance overpowered with no demerits, might as well be a maiden. Which is a large no.

- A majority of the skills section.

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