Talk:Nauta Azzurra/@comment-24087318-20140101094959

Character posesses above-average ability in unarmed combat with little explaination as to why. It comes across as just another weapon in the characters arsenal, and not one that is used in conjunction normally with their usual combat style, which goes against the spirit of RWBY.

In addition, her Semblance is non-canonical. Things we've seen like it are psudo-magical effects done with Dust. And Semblances do not manifest as attacks of any sort. They are abilities that work alongside the Hunter or Huntresses weapons and dust usage to create one singular fighting style, completely unique to them.

That being said, her weapon (Shield + Rifle/Spear) is dangerously close to a canon characters. (Pyrrha Nikos) and cannot be Accepted due to how close it is to canon.

As well, her backstory of a life in a rather complex and outward slave trade doesn't seem to mesh with the history and lore of the world of RWBY. Yes, there's been racism, and questionable labour practices with Faunus, but nothing that goes as far as outright child slavery of both Faunus AND Humans.

Due to the above points, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~