Talk:Chorna Bomba/@comment-27743663-20170218172206

CNR, being a fluent Spanish speaker, that is nowhere near black bomb. At all.

Appearance is eh.

Personality is eh.

Backstory, she's 17. Meaning, Atlas hired her, some time before this. Why would Atlas. Hire a child? Even if they were somehow magically skilled with super highschool level bomb defusal powers. They are still below the age of 17, so I view this as highly unlikely. Also highly unlikely someone under the age of 17 could even be classified as a "bomb defusal expert," given just how much training that takes, which she shouldn't have given her age. You also make it sound like she graduated, even though she's still a listed 17. And the portion with somehow magically knowing that he was her half-brother is odd. But eh.

Weapons, I've said this before to you. Having many, many grenades. Counts under having a secondary weapon. So ditch the piston, or ditch the grenades.

Semblance, various issuses. For starters, that  bit in the trivia should be placed in the actual semblance description, noting that live creatures can go through it. As live creatures can go through it, rather moot that blunt attacks do anything to it since they can just walk through and hit her. That aside, it lacks demerits. How long she can keep it up? How big can she make the dome? Can it take elemental attacks? What about explosive? Sharp focused ones like knives? It also can't be impervious. It needs to break at some point if enough damage is given. Being impervious breaks the no limit fallacy.

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

- CNR is false

- 17 and hired by Atlas before then.

- Written in a way that makes it seems like she graduates at 17

- Secondary Weapon limit passed.

- Semblance lacks demerits and clarifications, also breaks no limits fallacy

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