Talk:Elizabeth Ann Holstein/@comment-31408668-20200108222846

COLOR NAME REFERENCE

Color name reference is recognized. Elizabeth in this context refers to a specific species of flower Queen Elizabeth Rose, a grandiflora rose cultivar recognized for it's unique pink coloration.

APPEARANCE

Beth is certainly memorable when it comes to her appearance. It's always good to see a good cowgirl, even with how many innuendoes can be made with that statement, the look works. It's solidly defined, and creates a very vivid picture. The art also helps cement a bit more of it. Overall, an extremely well sculpted character appearance. And it needs to be said; 'DAMN, SHE THICC''. '''No problems here.

PERSONALITY

The quiet maiden. This is a known personality type, but it's one you don't see very often. I really like the contrast between what people would assume about her, considering her appearance, and how she actually acts. I like the quiet and motherly approach to her, contrasting her somewhat wild side that she shows in RP, considering her riding Grimm and such around, because she can. No obvious contradictions. No problems here.

BACKSTORY

It's always refreshing to read a backstory that isn't dark at all, but instead uses family as a focus point and then extrapolates into someone formed by her upbringing. It's nice to see where parts of her attitude comes from. Noted the nod to the Fall of Beacon and her actions afterward. No stepping on canon toes. Noted as absent at the Vytal Festival, however was present in Vale. No problems here.

WEAPONS AND COMBAT

The weapon is within guideline specifications. We have a single, transforming primary in the form of the lever action rifle spade Vera, and a secondary in the form of Big Iron. I really like the primary, it plays so well into the farmer raised angle, and it's such an unusual weapon. That, and combining it with such a classic weapon is good civilization. Big Iron is also interesting, as I have to say it's a first that armor has a seed spreading mechanism. That is very original. No problems here.

As for Beth's skill in combat, it seems grounded well in her physique and upbringing. It's always nice to see someone using an unusual martial art, and some good ol' fisticuffs. She sort of reminds me a bit of Jax from League of Legends, who is said to be able to use anything as a weapon. Also, as a personal note, the fact you brought up volcanic pistols... oh lawd, pride is comin. No problems here.

SEMBLANCE

Green Thumb as a Semblance works well. It is a very well rounded form of phytokinesis, which also involves an aspect of change that is often left out when talking about similar abilities. It is very well documented, it has the necessary limiters. We have a fatigue limiter, a range limiter, a size-of-effect limiter and even a component requirement for parts of it. Overall, very well crafted. No problems here.

CONCLUSION: ACCEPTED

'''To be fair, I had a feeling she would be accepted, as I had read up on our lovely maiden beforehand. As for everything, Elizabeth is solid character which can really go any direction, especially when she gets her Huntress License. All in all, very solid effort, Phaze. Your cowgirl will ride on into the dawn on the back of a King Taijitu.'''- Raikou