Talk:Siva Ferro/@comment-25924729-20190321135141

I really like this character. A lot of interesting little quirks, and they all mesh together really well~

Appearance, personality and backstory are fine. Lots of room for development there, and sounds like he could be cool to interact with in RP.

Weapons are also fine, lm kind of a sucker for lever action rifles too so bonus points there :v

Now onto his semblance... it seems fine in concept, balanced and fair,  but a little more explanation would be good. Im especially having a little trouble figuring out the 20 second limit. Does it mean he can use it over and over for 20 seconds each time? If so, how many times can he do that.

Or is 20 seconds the collective total of how long he can use it? Like in 20 short 1 second bursts, 10 seconds in 2 bursts, 4 seconds in 5 bursts etc?

CNR is noted in the trivia section, is valid, no issue there.

So yeah, very good try. Just needs a little more details at the semblance.

Rejected.

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