User blog:Rukatin/OC Help

I need help! Two of my OCs have been rejected and need major review. And currently, I have no ideas. So have come to you people for help. I'm open to ideas from anyone.

Here are my OCs.

http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Axion_Numernera

http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Fridolf_Dufrane