Talk:Jade Black/@comment-27743663-20161211015317

For starters, this page is horribly incomplete.

Guidelines.

Read those to see what's up. Besides that, going from just what's currently on the page.

CNR needs to be noted on the page.

SIlver eyes are generally a no given its correlation to canon and canon-fanon interaction, but given how its from an injury and not actually the canon super special power, it's fine. Just change it to a more suiting color as soon as you can.

Personality isn't even there.

Backstory I wouldn't write like that. At all. It's supposed to cover the point of birth to present all in a quick, summarized form that lists all the key important parts and basic info. Not filler. Doing that in 1st person would make it unnecessairly long. So pretty much, it's a no. Not is to say you can't keep what's there, you can, just not on this page. You can keep it in a separate section as a fanfiction as some others have.

Weapon isn't even there.

Semblance isn't even there.

Tl;dr

Rejected on

- Incomplete page missing key features

- Backstory

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