Thread:PisceanWaterbender/@comment-28425055-20170714110238

Hello, Creator of the Gay Bowman Wolf called Douglas M. Randall here.

Anyways, the reason why I'm writing this after two month was because I had JUST came back to see if anyone had read my creations yet.

I have now fixed a few things as you have mention to me, from minor things like "Armour," which is now switched to "Uniform," and ways to carry (and limit) the Dust Vials. You can see it in the Hunter's Uniform section.

However, there are some mistakes in your review:

For one: Douglas is 17 and is a Third Year at the time of the Fall of Vytal/Vale. If we follow US High School Age per Grade, then Douglas would be in the correct age group, him being a Junior at age 17, and would've been 18 at Senior Year. Still, I'll provide a birthdate just as a precaution.

Secondly: Crystals are impure Dust. Through processing does it become Pure Powdered Dust, and would yield a stronger charge than Impure Dust Crystals, though the latter would produce some interesting effects with other Elementals mixed in.

I would also like you to clarify what you didn't quite like about my Earth's Effects, though my guess is on the "Generation of Armour once Upgraded" comment.  