Talk:Jerrick Dawn Knight/@comment-24087318-20131231093032

Review As Requested by Rukatin:

The characters semblance doesn't quite make sense. How are the barriers formed? When we've seen abilities like this, they've been Glyphs in origin, and can be played with, altered or manipulated in other ways with Dust.

In addition, the characters two weapons arn't fitting with the spirit of RWBY. Characters generally only posess a single weapon set, where the weapon in question transforms to be everything the user desires. If his sword is newly forged from his grandfathers', why not forge in these alternate functions?

Other than that, good work.