Talk:Luna Black/@comment-5431934-20140226005227

The personality ("Luna was a sweet... violent tendencies.") makes it sound as if this was her personality prior to said massacre - as in, she flipped personalities on a regular basis. There's no mention of her being bipolar or anything else, apart from an offhanded remark about her having mental instabilities from a young age.

A character's weapon description should be on the character's page, optionally with a link to the weapon's own dedicated page. Simply stating it to be similar to that of another character does not count.

The semblance is not explained, it is merely mentioned that it deals with shockwaves and is a destructive force.

For the above,

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--