Talk:Hárr Ulfrson/@comment-13172690-20150303024251

What a character. :)

Unfortunatly there are a couple problems that need to be fixed.

First of all, his name, even though it means wolf is not acceptable on account that it can resemble multiple colors. Please use another name to fit this requirement or elaborate on what the color you are trying to connect it to.

Secondly, his weapons. They have a good concept but could you explain what seaxes are? Some readers would get confused and probably won't know what they are. As for wind dust, it is seen to be green than light blue. I think I want this to be fleshed out a little bit.

Lastly, in appearance, I would remove the part with the claws from the prey he kills from the hunt since if its grimm that you refer, they evaporate and nothing is left.

The semblance also passes because of the limits you placed.

Just a couple things go fix and it'll be accepted,

Rejected for now

~RP Moderation Team~