Talk:Lucy Aureum/@comment-25924729-20190428125211

Pretty well written page and likable character.

Appearance, personality and backstory are alright, pretty good overall.

Weapon seems good too, though it's an optional thing to include how much ammo it holds too.

Semblance is honestly pretty unique, she's basically reverse Ren using that. Normally I'd be a little skeptical about negative energy being a tangible thing that can be manipulated, but it does exist in RWBY, Grimm respond to it and even Ren has technically has a semblance that manipulates negative energy by removing or masking it, so there is precedent... It's plausible, and the limits and balancing is alright.

Other combat abilities are good. CNR checks out. Yep... Nice work.

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