Talk:Heaven Rahona/@comment-13593058-20160817023614

 Heavan Rahona Review

Appearance
Nothing technical to note.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Semblance which enables flight are instantly rejectable. Further comments in summary.

Backstory
Too lengthy but nothing technical to note.

Miscellaneous
 Colour reference acknowledged.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- No contradictions

Review Summary
As the guidelines have stated, any sort of flight via Semblance is instantly rejectable. However, in theory this should work but would include lots of easily spotted weaknesses. As well, I found the description rather confusing for a weight based Semblance but as far as I understand it, it's a Semblance that instantly produces an equal and opposite force (ie the normal force to gravity) to give the feeling of weightlessness.

For one, when Heaven is flying, she is in essence an air hockey puck very easily influenced by any sort of vectors directed at her, say a gust of wind from her weapon. Newton's law of equal and opposite reaction would probably send her blasting the other way of her opponent.

Two, adding "weight" as you put it here doesn't change its horizontal force as it's a vector pointing down rather than a vector pointing sideways. So adding "weight" here doesn't increase the damage of thrown objects unless you plan on crushing them with it.

Three, adding an additional 143 lbs to someone probably wouldn't make them kneel. I can piggy back a 200 pound fat guy, I think a Hunter in Training can withstand 143 lbs.

In general, the Semblance you describe can only make things go up really hard or go down really hard. No horizontal movement. You're better off with actual telekinesis.

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