Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-27603392-20130818011012/@comment-3286116-20130819080253


 * shrug* My turn I guess. Forgive any grammatical or spelling errors as it is 4:00 AM for me currently.

With Ririi, she made little sense in universe to me. The Beowolf summoning abilities are very arbitrary, as is speaking a language that may not even exist. While the adaption of their hunting styles to her own fighting style is more than possible through observation, I doubt she could become a pack leader or run at an increased speed. My main issue is her lack of back-story. To be honest, she seems like the idea for a character, not the actual fleshed out character herself. Plus her image (which has no credited source I might add, aside from the watermark. So plagiarism.) looks nothing like the described character.

On the flip side, Marcel is fleshed out more than Ririi and unique in a few regards. His hobby leading to his fighting style is new to me, not ot mention the fighting style itself. I am confused about the "master swordsman" part, as that is the first time a sword is mentioned in his page. His history can be more explained, but covers enough that none of his abilities are confusing. Bonus points for the color allusion as well.

Vote goes to Marcel, although both can be improved.