Talk:Scarlan Soturi/@comment-27743663-20161217184206

CNR needs to be noted in the trivia, so if thorn relates to a color list it there.

Appearance is fine.

Personality is fine.

Backsory is concise.

Weapon is fine, I like it.

Semblaaaaaance is where it gets iffy. So, having too much iron in your blood is generally a bad thing, since it causes hemochromatosis, which leads to severe organ damage and eventual failure. This isn't a problem in of itself, since the way to deal with it is simple. Just get your blood taken out periodically. In this case, assuming he uses his semblance periodically, it does that for him automatically. However, the amount of iron to cover the entirety of his skin would leave him dead in no time :P. I'd be fine with turning patches of skin into area though, or select areas. A more limited version of it pretty much.

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

- CNR not listed

- Semblance limit

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