Talk:Rayven Vernal/@comment-24678303-20181008183705

I'm gonna stop you right quick here. There's several things here that are a blatant ripoff of Canon characters. "Ravyn Vernal"? No. High Caliber Sniper Scythe? Ruby wants her weapon back. "Semblance: Speed Swift"? Don't rip off Ruby's semblance too. Also, she is too young. Lowest accepted age is 16. Ntm you have bits about her being "summoned by the new Headmistress of Haven" by...Ciel?

Okay, firstly, do not rip off stuff from Canon. Secondly, don't do this Canon interaction crap. You can't get away with it just because you aren't interacting with Beacon staff. I'll spare you the hassle of finishing what you have now and getting rejected later on and tell you to stop and make an original character.

RP Moderation Team