Talk:Rosetta Silversmith./@comment-30530552-20171008003251

Let's have a look here.

CNR reference must be denoted in a Trivia section, though I do see what you're attempting to go for.

Appearance is fine, however; you must list an Age. Perhaps inserting a character profile as with other pages would benefit in info organization for matters like that.

Her personality's alright, though in some areas grammar and spelling could use some work, though if English is not your first language, it's not really an issue.

I find the weapon more implausible than usual given the gauntlet's "Nevermore killing punch" you describe from simple Gravity Dust...so I'm going to say no for now. Additionally, you're only allowed 1 secondary (or if its knives/daggers, a couple)...so at max you can only have one khopesh. Pick one Dust type if you want the secondary.

Semblance is nonapplicable, so that's fine. (Be aware that if this is put into Accepted in the future and you decide to give her one, you will need to resubmit it to Pending.)

Backstory is okay, but reads more like an actual story than a character's backstory bio in my opinion.

Overall, you still need some work, but what you have so far is alright.

-Rejected on: Lack of CNR reference on the page, no age, weapon power + too many secondaries.