Talk:Terra Baker/@comment-24296957-20141129212454

So, my only problems here are the backstory.

It's my understanding that the boys are living in a run-down Faunus town, only able to survive because of employment. Watts is said to be a banker. But this is a run-down, poverty-stircken town. Why would they need a bank? That should be adressed.

Also, the fact that Terra only stayed at Signal for a year and was accepted into Beacon in't acceptable. Ruby stayed two years and was accepted into Beacon personally by Ozpin - an extraordinary event. That should also be adressed.

Re-submit when you feel the time is right.

For now, Rejected.

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