Talk:Kurayami Mitsugo/@comment-24087318-20140907060817

Character seems very good. However, two things are a little iffy.

First being her Semblance. Even when you use light bending optical camoflague, it's generally imperfect at best. Or would require a lot of focus to keep it perfect, especially in motion. There would be a shimmer, or the occasional blip or distortion that would give it away to a watchful eye. Nothing's perfect after all.

The second being the characters name. I cannot find any resemblance to a color at all. The trivia section attempts to relate the themeing of a fallen angel to black through the wings. But this isn't satisfactory. http://static1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20131130235255/rwbyfanon/images/2/2d/ColorNameRule.png Says a name must make you think of a color. But what this does is make me think of a second thing entirely that makes me think of a color.

See Neopolitian and Yatsuhashi as examples. Their color comes from being named after a food. But their names are directly after the foodstuff. It goes Name -> Color of said food. Not Name -> Translation to another language -> Color. It's too many steps away from the mark.

As such, for the above two points, Rejected.

~RWBY Fanon Administration Team~