Thread:Delta-06/@comment-26571677-20151118224057/@comment-25924729-20151119133514

Given Asper's view on the White Fang, it would be interesting to see how he'd react when he meets one of them. So i recommed the Agnus Brothers as our antagonists. Maybe the cops are sending them to help deal with a sensitive WF operation?

The plot seems good on all fronts, but maybe instead of a member being left behind, we can have one of the team get captured by the brothers, then the rest return to save him/her afterwards. It would make a more dramatic/less confusing plot don't you think?

POV style? Like we write for one character in each post and a full rotation has 4 posts?