Talk:Luna Kojote/@comment-25924729-20181108033108

Everything looks good, nice and detailed writing, just a few small grammar mistakes. No issues with her appearance, personality and backstory.

She seems pretty powerful in a fight, especially with the many types of attacks each weapon form allows, and knowing a lot of different combat skills. but she is an adult huntress with plenty of training, so it is reasonable to make her strong like that.

Semblance is pretty interesting, a sort of mind control, but since it only works on animals and has severe disadvantages, it should be alright.

Accepted.

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~RP Moderation Team~