Talk:Veneni Sitis/@comment-13593058-20160319015455

 A Review of Veneni Sitis

Contents
[show]==Appearance== Nothing technical to note. Appearance does not interfere with Fanon Rules.

Personality
Point of personality made, nothing major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Rule of one transformable and one vanilla followed.

"Punching through Aura" - discretion is advised* see below in summary for explanation.

No significant comment on fighting style.

Backstory
Nothing worthy to note. No contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and source checks out.



Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- N/A

Review Summary
Though I have seen my fair share of antagonists that are "insane" I personally don't perfer those types of characters. Not that there's anything wrong with them nor is there any thing wrong with the character here. Only a personal opinion that they don't make very interesting villains.

 Anyway, what I do want to address is a minor detail regarding his daggers being able to "puch through Aura". While that is contradictory to Fanon Rules,  sub-text suggests that a dagger being a more focused point means it should do more damage as the attack is more focused,  which I can see. So it's not really reject worthy but more a technicality which I personally think you should fix.

 Good job.

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