Talk:Ranru Ishida/@comment-13593058-20170428010536

 Ranru Ishida Review

Appearance
Description of appearance noted. However, the presense of an "Aura amplifying gem" seems a bit iffy as the full extent of Aura is of yet unknown. Grounds for rejection.

Personality
Point of personaility made.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed. Semblance is okay.

Backstory
Really hard to read with the lack of paragraphs. Please condense and reorganize.

Miscellaneous
 Colour not referenced in trivia section.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Aura amplifying gem, unknown existence due to lack of information on Aura

- Confusing backstory format

- No mentioning of colour reference for the First Name in mandatory trivia section

Review Summary
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