Talk:Heart/@comment-5726563-20131021223314

One, having the experience of a swordsman of 50 years is unrealistic, as that's sort of the point of being that old, you get better as you go.

Two, you didn't change anything from the last time it was rejected, just put it back in Pending.

Three, the whole "No one has ever seen her weapon outside of combat, whether she keeps it in her room or a whole other reason, is unknown", is insinuating some unknown power, as is the fact that you are still unclear on what the weapon can actually do.

As it is, it will not be accepted due to the fact that you are still being very vague about the weapon itself. You can't keep hide things about your OC, as everything about your OC has to be in this profile. If you continue trying to do so, you will be unable to ever get your character accepted.

Rejected.

-RP Moderation Team