Talk:Raine Shiba/@comment-27743663-20180131002741

Not much changes from before except super long appearance section now and also the semblance, and semblance is the one that makes him rejection worthy.

It's fine in of itself, it has a decent explanation and a limit that makes sense, but it's still missing basic limits. Such as, how far away can he make a guiding glyph from his position? Also, just how many aim and guiding glyphs can he make before he's exhausted himself. Just basic clarification really.

Rejected for the reason above.

~RP Moderation Team~