Talk:Reynardo Kojote/@comment-25924729-20191209052351

Pretty nice character as always, just some small problems here and there...

Personality section is good. Small problem with the Appearance section. It's said he is a faunus, but no trait is listed anywhere. Maybe you forgot to mention it? If so, please state breifly on the page what the trait is, where it is and what it looks like?

Backstory is alright, save for a small issue. At one point it says the girlfriend's name is Ilia, then later it says he moved in with a girlfriend named Teal. Are they the same person....? Or different? I'm assuming they're the same, in which case it could just be a small error in the name you might wanna fix. Not a rejectable issue, just to avoid confusion. If they're different people then nevermind, I derped o.o

His general abilities and semblance seem very powerful, but he does have the background to justify them and enough weaknesses to balance them out. Weapon is mostly alright, except for the amount of ammo he has. 12 gauges are pretty big, and I have trouble believing anyone can carry 200 shells around their body. Even if they could, I feel that's still a lot especially given how powerful each shell is. I suggest reducing their number by a lot.

CNR works. No other issues found, just a few small fixes overall. Nice try.

Rejected.

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