Talk:Hitori Kazami/@comment-25924729-20150306124625

Oh god...So many broken rules here.

According to the Fanon rules, faunus can only be half human, half existing animal, this means he cannot be half grimm. In addition, OCs cannot interact with Canon Characters. This rule was broken when he was attacked by Roman Torchwick.

The nature of Grimm is still a mystery as it was never touched on in the show, due to this fact i'm doubtful if the Reviewers will allow Black Dust made from Grimm DNA to exist. Even if it is allowed, Black Dust or Earth Dust already exists.

The name color relation must be in the first name, but because its a japanese name, which are backwards i guess it could pass. You also cannot say he can block ALL projectile attacks as there is a rule against that too.

One way i can suggest you to keep this OC as close as possible to his current state is you change his semblance to the Shadow Manipulation you originally planned. He could shape and solidify shadows to give an effect similar to the Grimm Manifestation he's currently having, without touching on the Black Dust, thus reducing the chances of rejection. And no Shadow manipulation is not OP.

Im unsure whether his working with the SDC or being attacked by Torcwick's gang is allowed. Techinically speaking, it's canon interaction, but i've seen people getting away with similar stuff. So maybe it'll pass?

Other than the above the OC is pretty good. Appearence and Personality especially, and the name color reference is very unique, never seen anyone refer their characters to a Dust Color.

(Not an official reviewer)