Talk:Sven Searfeld/@comment-24087318-20131219104010

Review as Requested by EvergreenLeaf:

...Well...where do I start really. This is probably the largest article next to Barths I've had to go through.

Some of his powers don't quite fit with what we know Dust to be capable of, such as his Eyes. And the power itself, even with the drawbacks, is a little overpowered, being able to win fights easily right away before the fatigue sets in. That being said, it could easily be moved away from his scar/eyes to a Semblance of some nature to make a bit more sense.

The split personality aspect of the character is interesting...but a little exaggerated in my opinion. It's hard to separate it from the typical trend of characters having a triggered "rage mode" or bloodlust.

The specific movesets both personae have access to have attacks that are really stretching the boundaries of overpowered attacks as well. And given the characters backstory of being bested in a tournament by Pyrrha (which would normally be disallowed due to Fanon/Canon interaction, but was given exception) He seems so powerful that it's VERY difficult to see him having lost that battle.

As well, he seems to be highly antisocial and not a team player at all. It's difficult to see how or why he was chosen to be his teams leader since it's not really explained in his bio that he's shown any skills in leadership areas.