Talk:Jazmina Del'Varak/@comment-26104528-20170910014302/@comment-33030175-20170910021948

Thanks for the feedback, I'll work on the points you mentioned.

I'll try to see what I can do with the semblance. I kind of figured mind-stuff would be touchy so I definitely wanted to keep it away from being along the lines of "I know what you're gonna do before you do it" or "make you think x" junk, as I know that's no fun in an RP. I'd like to keep it if I can make the possible changes to make it work, as I don't know where to start on making a new one from scratch to go with her theme.

Would it be better if it's something like she establishes some kind of connection to her target that constantly drains her until she reaches a limit and her own aura breaks? (Keeping the fact that the connection breaks instantly if she loses physical contact.) I don't know what would be a fair time limit, but I think maybe it would act something like a battery - it takes more aura to establish the connection and then a slow drain so long as she keeps it up.

Would adding a context limiter help as well? For example, when she's asking her target questions and reading, whatever pops into the target's mind comes to her in the same way, so she'd still be prone to misunderstanding what she's seeing/hearing/reading. For example, she asks someone about a location and they immediately picture it in their mind's eye. The image also comes to her but if she doesn't know where it is, she has to do more work/ask more questions/spend more time and aura/etc.

If that doesn't work I totally understand and I'll do something different for a semblance. Meanwhile I'll try to fix up her personality a bit.