Talk:Eveleen Ouragan/@comment-25924729-20181115093344

Nice and detailed character, all looks good at a glance. Appearence, personality and semblance sections are good. I feel her backstory is unecessarily long and detailed, the details on the death of her squad especially could be summarized and cut out for easier reading, maybe written as a separate fanfic? But no real issue there.

Her primary and secondary weapons are good. As for transforming cybernetics... hmm. Dont think i've ever seen anyone do a transforming, non combat prosthetic before, usually its just weapons, but these have no combat use and therefore cannot be classified weapons, more utility item really.

We dont really have rules covering something like this, nothing to refer to, guess ill have to rely on reviewer's discretion.... and so it seems reasonable. Not too powerful, plausible given the show's use of technology, and this character's background.

Accepted.

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