Talk:Lycan Mystrite/@comment-25924729-20191201123224

Cute character, sounds like a very positive and likable person.

Appearance is alright. Persilonality works, but may be better if it were a little longer and more detailed imo.

Same with the backstory, details would make it better. It's not rejectable or a problem, just something that can be improved on. I actually really like the idea of a huntsman student leaving their team halfway through studies, how they deal with moving into a new team, and how the old team copes without them. It made some interesting stuff to think about.

Relationships section is alright, nothing much to note.

Weapon and combat abilities are alright, but the semblance is a little confusing. I don't really understand what you mean by "drawing ice"? Is it detecting and using ice from the environment? A way of saying she sculpts or shapes the ice? I really don't know how to interpret this, better explanation would be helpful. Aside from this, general limits like the amount of ice she can control, range or energy drain etc may also be added.

On her trivia section, how her name Lycan refers to a colour isn't explained. A quick search shows it means wolf in latin, which are commonly grey and a CNR can be argued for that. Unless you intended for her name to relate to some other colour? You must specify in the Trivia section a colour name reference.

No other issues found on the page, good try, just some things to be added.

Rejected.

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