Talk:Cole Carules/@comment-17970636-20160105193621

In the appearance section there's no indication to his hair nor his eye colour, simply stating it in the FanCharBox doesn't sum it up sadly as the picture isn't painted, I see everything but the face.

Creating a separate page for weapons make it a straight pain in the rear for reviewers, please input any and all weapon related information onto the OC page itself and merely use the weapon page for any extra info that isn't necessary, what you find necessary and what you find unnecessary is completely up to you but if you think it effects the review then please state it in the OC page.

Semblance, frankly, overpowered. That and literally using the shadows from one place to another means a complete breakdown of one's body from one place to another, or, teleportation, while characters in RWBY can do many things, travelling through another dimension, through mediums, or breaking down/altering their own bodies they cannot do. Neo simply alters her hair/eye colour, she doesn't alter her body itself, the change in colour can merely be described as an illusion.

Finally, standing still for hours is impossible because... (enter biology lesson here you don't want me to write nor do you want to read). As a result, I recommend removing that.

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--