Talk:Lutto Limetta/@comment-25857155-20150531033811

I haven't read too deeply (and I'm hardly one to be judging others' characters) but I wanted to point something out. You seem to be trying to give him too many personality traits, to the point where some of them seem to conflict. He " has the need of feeling a little “superior” over others", but has "self-deprecating tendencies," for example. I've learned that simple is often better.

Not to say I would simplify him to the level of some of the RWBY cast, but - well, I'm going to butt out here. :) Just tryin' to help out.  Seems like a decent start.