User blog comment:Winter Edition/Original Character Creating Guide/@comment-121.74.115.197-20140307074339/@comment-24165339-20140325161757

First off, holy spelling errors Batman. Second, We have yet to see a bird faunus, let alone a bird faunus with WINGS. The bird faunus thing alone is really pushing it, but a whole town of 'em? With WINGS? Dude, unless he can't fly, he's definitely OP (Reason for saying this is that if he has the ability to fly he can avoid almost any enemy. This eliminates any need for him to fight.). There's also the issue of pushing the lore limits.

HOWEVER, bashing time aside, the character would be interesting. There is definitely a need for changes here and there, but it is a redeemable concept!

ADVICE:

First off, ditch the wings, and go with something else bird-like. I.E. Eyes, maybe feathers around the elbows and forearms?

Second, change his clothes. They are a tad bit, well, boring as it is. This character is inspired by an Egyptian god right? Well make him look like it! Pyrrha from the show is inspired by Greece, specifically, the Spartans. Give Horace a golden vest with blue and red designs in an egyptian styling. Have him wear a necklace that looks like a scarab, make him Egyptian!

That's all I got. By the way, love the weapon concept!