Talk:Akari Auburn/@comment-25924729-20190209035954

Oh my gosh a fossil! o.o

Hue.... seriously though, this page is probably the oldest one ive reviewed yet, even still has grandfather clause.

Appearance, Personality and Backstory are alright, nothing to really note. (Is that a One Punch Man meme i see there? o.o)

Weapon and Semblance seem alright in concept. Both could use more details though, such as how long the semblance's strength boost lasts, and how long is the reach of her weapon's grappling function. The way its laid out also makes this section kinda hard to read, like, it would be better to separate the abilities, semblance and weapon sections so finding and referring to each becomes easier and faster. A small note on the weapons like "Proteus was her first weapon, she later changed it to Dead Mans Gambit" would also greatly help, i got a little confused there until i re read a few times and realized there were two differeent weapons, its better to specify that.

Character is subject to the gradfather clause, absence of CNR is justified. Though really, Akari (Light) and Auburn (Red), light red or red light could be a valid CNR too if you wanted.

So yeah.... overall a decent character as usual. Just might wanna add some minor details on the weapon and semblance thats all.

Rejected.

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