Talk:Grayson "Forge" Smith/@comment-24087318-20140108031106

If the character grew up on the streets, how did he come across the resources and materials to construct weapons? He's need the metal, a forge, etc

In addition, his weaponry says "The darker one transforms into a spear, while the other transforms into a spear." which seems to be an error, especially when looking at the picture of him and his arsenal.

His Semblance is also a little OP, making him essentially immune to anything that's not a piercing attack. As well as it doesn't seem to be written in a way that really works together with the rest of the characters equipment and skills. Would suggest looking at http://rwbyfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Semblances_and_your_OC_-_A_Guide for ideas on revisions.

Due to the above points, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~