Thread:EvergreenLeaf/@comment-24953498-20151207183412/@comment-17970636-20151207185202

Semblance is still an issue, if you don't change that up it will be rejected consistently simply because his semblance in a convoluted manner deals with aura manipulation. I'm sorry if you don't like it but that's how it's going to stay. I can't tell you how to make it better, I can only give suggestions, it's your OC at the end of the day and you need to make the changes. If you're stuck, there are plenty of good OC's to read and get ideas on how to format and write and such like Aureole Falken