Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-24296957-20150113152446/@comment-25555436-20150113210314

Breyal Yoland:

-Personality-wise, reminds me a bit of Nora. Though she seems more..."manly", in comparison.

-Her semblance seems rather balanced individually, and could be useful in a teamfight. Though judging from how it doesn't work on Grimm, I suppose her Semblance is more "the more she hits something, the more weak spots she can find on it, but only if it's something she has knowledge about". Also, there's an incomplete sentence on her Semblance description, where it says "She can't find" and stops there. May want to fix that.

-So, she is brains and brawns at the same time. I'm happy to see you didn't make her as OP as you did a certain other purple guy called Amet Revfold Kying (at least, byt the time of the previous thread).

Accepted.

Chloe Chroma:

-Wait, how is she "Colors: All of them"? Considering her title was The Rainbow Professor, and a rainbow consisted of about 7-8 colors (If I remember right), shouldn't her colors be about 8? Don't get me wrong, this is something very minor, just asking.

-Why does her hair, eye and clothing change colors? You should probably explain it. And don't give me a "she's a chameleon Faunus", chameleons change colors based on their environment, not necesarily from day to day.

-Her Semblance seems a bit confusing. Let's see: First, Chloe from 10 seconds into the future appears from a portal to do...whatever she's going to do. 2 seconds later, Chloe is transported by a glyph into the past as Chloe from 10 seconds into the future. And if she is unable to transport herself to the past, esentially nothing changed then. That seems kinda like a time loop.

I imagine it would be useless if Chloe is gravely injured, or inmobilized in some way, as then the Chloe-from-10 seconds-into-the-future would also be gravely injured or inmobilized, right? I'm thankful you didn't make it as OP as I expected, though now I wonder how the fuck did Chloe get such an awesome Semblance.

Accepted.

Denver Verde:

-He comes from a line of doctors and healers, yet his weapon is called Wraith. Were they Witch Doctors? Or at least the Remnant equivalent?

-Being so tall, and with supposedly wide antlers. I wonder if he ever had problems walking through doors?

-Interesting Semblance. Though simply a more specific, support version of Weiss', I can imagine how useful it would be.

-His weapon seems balanced enough. And it's the first time I've seen someone make a staff that turns into a bow.

Accepted.

Those 3 seem better done than the previous ones. Good job.