Thread:Winter Edition/@comment-25762649-20141204200513/@comment-25555436-20141204222651

I saw the character...and let me tell you, you're lucky I'm not a reviewer. For starters:

-Unknown angelic race?

-What kind of color is Crescent Red? Other than red, of course.

-Lots of easily-noticeable grammatical mistakes.

-The weapons, oh God, the weapons...."electromagnetic pulse that kills the target instantly"? Do you know the many things wrong in that sentence? And how the hell does 2 daggers turn into 1 "Death Scythe"?

-And to make her even more broken, it's not enough with her being capable of killing instantly, she can also turn into an angel.

-And also great speed and stealth.

-Character-not-remembering-anything-about-it's-past-for-no-reason-at-all cliché.

If I was a reviewer, It would be rejected to hell and back, it doesn't even look like you cared about the OC. But since I'm not a reviewer, I'll leave the OC accept/reject work to the real guys and girls in charge, though I'm sure they will say the same.

Also, is her weight really 159 pounds? I'm no weight expert, but it sounds strange how a girl with a rather-slim body could be that heavy.