Talk:Corsaire Tyto/@comment-25924729-20190511033100

Pretty interesting concept for a character, sweet, but a litle confusing at parts.

Appearance and personality are good, nothing to comment on there. Backstory is also fine, but a little vague in regards to what his family's occupation is. Im getting an impression of assassins or criminals, but it isnt very clearly stated in the backstory, and you should mention it so people can understand easier.

Weapon is alright, though id advise adding more detailed limits like the number of arrows he carries etc. Combat stats are fair. Semblance... is honestly very unique. A little hard to understand exactly how it works, but really creative. Its acceptable, and i love it. :D

CNR checks out, no other issues found... yep, pretty good page, could use a little better explanations on stuff, but nothing really wrong.

Accepted.

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