Talk:Onyx (My OC)/@comment-24087318-20141006102602

Character page is very bare-bones. Weapon is just a one-word description, what it does isn't even a sentence in length. Appearance is non-existant. The entire thing is very very short and incomplete. Look to other characters pages for ideas on the length the Fanon looks for and the details expected.

Rejected

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