Talk:Marain Havhek/@comment-17970636-20160212053141

How did she get into Beacon? No training, no prior combat school. No alluding to anything.

You state that her eyes mark her has a faunus, but she's also got the flexibility of, well, an octopus. One faunus trait, it's either the eyes, or the flexibility, also, please note that reworking her entire skeletal structure akin to that of an octopus won't really work seeing as they have no bones whatsoever. You're going to have to do some work here.

Affecting of another's stats regardless of a downside happening falls under bodily manipulation, which is rejectable. The entire idea of it is. I'm sorry but if there was a way to salvage, I'd state it.

How is the dress made that individual sections can extend to 24 feet? Do certain sections of the dress give way to increase length? I'm unsure of how this works. More elaboration is required.

Rejected.

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