Talk:Flavia Albidum/@comment-24087318-20140112092557

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Character mostly checks out, however, her weapons Travel form doesn't quite make sense...in order for one of the meteor heads to be able to pull her (as well as the other head) to it, they'd need to weight more than the User and the other half of the weapon, or be tied or otherwise anchored to something.

Though not an issue concerning Rejection: I had to google what a Meteor Hammer is for the weapon to make sense to me, including a picture or description of what a Meteor Hammer is would help people looking at the page a lot.

Concerning her backstory, the Faunus Civil Rights Rebellion, and the resulting war, is a rather historical event in the world of RWBY according to Professor Oobleck, it's unlikely that a Beacon students Parent/Older Sibling would have been involved actively with the war.

Due to the above points, Rejected.

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