Talk:Spectral Kaiser/@comment-13593058-20160225044738

 A Review of  Spectral Kaiser

Appearance
Nothing technical to note. Appearance does not interfere with Fanon Rules.

Side note, apperance section would benefit would benefit from an actual description rather than to allude to features of other other characters. Relevant information on the character should be presented on the character page, not on other pages. Not grounds for rejection but a fix would not hurt.

Personality
Point of personality made, distinct and consistent. Nothing else major to note.

Weapons and Abilities
Rule of one transformable and one vanilla followed.

Semblance checks out with no contradiction with Fanon Rules.

Side note, description in this section felt rather unprofessional resulting in a less impressive presentation as a whole. In my opinion, change in rhetoric would greatly improve this section.

Backstory
Nothing worthy to note. No contradictions but would like a more detailed summary of certain unexplained events like the assassination of the character's father or the company she will inherit. Information should be easily accessable without jumping through hoops or guessing.

In this case, story is not bague enough to warrant rejection but quality of work would grealy improve should these notions be fixed.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced. Character under Grandfather Clause.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- N/A

Review Summary
Certainly a refreshing read from the usual "nice person until he/she gets mad" individuals. Spectral definelty has her own personality that does not mirrior the stereotypical rich girl types or Wiess Schnee in this regard.

Appearance felt like a mess; there were little physical descriptions of which could be easily referenced without looking at other source material, something which should not be required. Not grounds for rejection but fixing it will certainly improve this page.

Weapons section felt too casual, unprofessional and certainly downplays the significance of the weapon. A weapon section should display the strengths and weaknesses of the weapon, not the esthetics or feasibility of it. Not grounds for rejection but review of this section should improve the quality of the page.

Appreciate the use of the music (yes I listened to both), did like the second remix of the song. Giga-P is quite the producer isn't he? Of course, GUMI's got a nice voice too.

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