Talk:Pyralis Eurwin/@comment-25924729-20190706124318

DEUS VULT! DEUS VULT!

Appearance, personality and backstory are all good. I like some parts of his personality especially. Its rare to see OCs that are introspective and actually think about or doubt their own goals. Definitely unique.

Weapons, semblance and abilities sound very powerful... You should include some specific limits fo his weapon and semblance, such as flight time of his jet pack, amount of aura drain and time limit for use of his semblance. He just sounds VERY powerful atm, should have more limits and weaknesses to balance everything out.

CNR checks out, relationships and trivia sections work. No other issues found. Just needs some tweaking of his abilities.

Rejected.

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~RP Moderation Team~