Talk:Cyzarine Bluthardt/@comment-25924729-20181222140826

Cyz waifu! :D

Appearance and personality are alright (Holy damn her body is messed up) . Backstory has some iffy elements at the beginning. Artificial wombs havent been shown to exist in Remnant, and definitely havent been made in our world either. Though irl scientists have made breakthroughs with sheep and claim it should be possible to birth humans that way within a few years. Given Remnant technology is slightly more advanced than ours, it is plausible... so i can accept that.

Both her main weapons are alright, but further down the page... her Invisible Field can be considered a utility item, even though it aids in combat it cannot directly damage opponents, but rather acts like a medium or catalyst, so it won't count as a weapon. However her Scorch Ball can damage a target directly, im imagining it functions like a flash grenade, and having that is considered a weapon. Adding this onto her other two, the total is 3 weapons, you will have to remove one to adhere to the weapon limit rules.

Everything else seems okay, semblance is fair, balanced and thoroughly creepy o.o. Dust spells are very versatile and many, but not overpowered. All other utility items are alright too.

Rejected.

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