Talk:Tai Lucian Lefebrve/@comment-25924729-20191025133318

Ah a dinosaur!

Heh... This guy is old, he was around the wiki since I joined like, 5 years ago? Still have no idea how to pronounce that last name DX. Anyway...

Appearance section is strange? It mentions the outfit being a Volume 1-3 version, but there's no mention of any change in outfit afterwards. Did you forget to include it or something?

Nornally I'd just review the old outfit and treat it as what he's currently wearing, but there's also issue because the old outfit mentions him still having his card pistol, which is supposed to no longer be in his updated weapon set. The rest of the outfit is fine, but the implication he has 3 weapons, even if it's a mistake is something I can't accept until it's clarified, sorry.

Personality and backstory sections see alright. The faction terminology part was very helpful in review. Thanks ^_^

New weapons, semblance and combat abilities seem balanced and good.

Relationships and trivia section is alright.

Yeah... It's just that thing I'm his appearance section that needs to be fixed.

Rejected.

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