Talk:Lily Emereor/@comment-24087318-20131215095119

Her weapons seem like Adam and Yang lent her both their equipment with a new color scheme. It's entirely too much. I'd recommend taking only one and elaborating on it so it becomes a unique thing.

We don't know much about Vacuo or the other regions of the world in RWBY, try to keep the character to areas we know more about. But even if she was from Vacuo, why would she be attending Beacon, a place that is most likely a long boat ride away?

(Also, age for attending Beacon is 17, character bio is listed at 16.)

Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~