Thread:TheoldStone1000/@comment-33419273-20171021235518/@comment-33419273-20171101000045

ah ok.

I need help filling in the gaps to my OCs story. Phantom is actually kinda helpful.

Family history, explain his childhood, did he have any specific inspirations for becoming a huntsman?

Siblings, parents, grandparents even.

Why did he choose the weapon he did? What defining moments happened in his life? What about his team at Beacon? Who were they, and how did he get along with them? Why didn't he stick with them during the fighting (and no, being able to fly isn't an excuse even if you continue to ignore common sense. In that kind of chaos you don't just run off on your own, you stick in groups.)

DETAILS man. Use them. They're the bread and butter of writing.

If you're struggling with filling them in, I would honestly suggest removing him from Signal, make up a different combat school, and then you can make up your own teachers and stuff who taught different specialized subjects and make them more integrated into his story.

The reason I have so many characters is that, in order to avoid the characters being flat, I have woven an intricate web of people who know people; their relatives, friends, and family members. The people who inspired them to become Huntsmen in one way or another.