Talk:Honara von Anhult/@comment-24416658-20160503060833

Name fits under CNR.

Personality is fine. Appearance has one issue. the human tailbone is actually inside the body, please mention that the rattle is outside the body.

No issue present with weapons.

It's gonna sound weird, but the Semblance is too underpowered. 6000 Newtons is about the same as a boxer's punch. That's likely not enought to send small Grimm flying. Along with that, its drawback is too extreme. If a Semblance uses up that much Aura, then it wouldn't be practical to use. Recommend changing that.

Rejected for now.

--RP Moderation Team--