Talk:Ignis Accendo/@comment-27743663-20161229193720

CNR is fine.

Appearance is fine.

Personality is fine.

Backstory, you know, at that age, most people would have kids focusing on developmental skills, because it's rather redundant to go to a Military skill if you don't even know how to read or write, much less talk correctly. And a military school ain't going to expend resources teaching someone that. That's my long-winded way of saying, why is a child being shoved into Military services? Most people have enough common sense to know how flawed that is. Aside from that, she doesn't have any mentioned prior Hunter training to get into Atlas, or even signing up to Atlas. She's just noted to be there after it mentions her mother's death, and that's that.

Semblance, what's the range for this? As it stands now with the informatiton given, nothing stops her from just "blinking" to the other side of the world or to a super-market in Vale.

Weapon is fine.

A note, that's the 100m sprinting record on Earth, this is Remnant. By default, most people are far faster than anyone IRL could hope to be :P. So it's a moot fact to bring up.

Tl;dr

Rejected on:

- Being a child in Military services

- No mention of required training to be in a Hunter school, just magically there.

- Lack of semblance range

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