Talk:Skylla Cloud/@comment-30530552-20171115190952

Oooh, Skylla. I remember seeing how you used her in the RP Discord...let's hope she's up to snuff so you have greater liberties with her.

-CNR is fine...you could've also gone with the snake = (x color) association but sky blue is fine.

-Appearance is fine, Faunus trait noted.

-Personality could probably use a bit more detail. For the most part, it's a general description of what she does in particular situations, but I still don't really get a sense of her general disposition. Does that make sense? I hope it does. Anyways, moving on.

-Electrical Dust function in her staff...does this mean it shoots an electrical blast? Because if not, then I don't think it makes too much sense. The dress counts as a secondary....but I will say, she would not blow her arms off from a backfire unless she had no Aura after using it because Aura protects against external damage. Simply having the potential to backfire and deplete some of her Aura instead would be fine. The clothing transformation ability is a no unless it was specifically tied to her Semblance. As with the fluids + metallic materials...would that disrupt it because the electricity would fall out of line in that case? I'm trying to understand what you mean there, because if that's not what you mean, then you want it to be insulatory which completely slows/stops the flow.

Current Semblance needs more specifications. For instance, if she's splitting the damage, I would recommend she take a higher percentage of it than her attacker, and the amount would still be relatively subjective, so you need lots of specification to make it work.

For the Fall of Beacon, you need to talk about what they did during the fall and after, but what you do have there right now is still acceptable.

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-Overall, decent start. You've got a few kinks to work out, but it'll be good in short time, I'm sure.

-Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~

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