Talk:Daphne Birch/@comment-30530552-20181210031852

Let's see what we've got in store here.

-CNR works, as Daphne actually does refer to laurel trees or bay trees. Keep in mind that actual character or allusion references for color references can be dicey at times.

-Appearance is fine.

-Personality works very well for her character.

-Very neat weapon, I don't see any issues with it.

-Her Semblance feels like a different version of Jaune's, which in this case I'm okay with, given the amount of balances and enough variance to differentiate between the two.

-Backstory, aside from a couple of wording and grammar shticks (which are more personal peeves than mine, no real fault to you) is fully consistent and kept brief and concise enough to be an enjoyable read. No major plot holes, no noticable issues.

Overall, really solid character here. Nice work.

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-Accepted.

~RP Moderation Team~