Talk:Bryan Hyacintho/@comment-17970636-20131212022043

Okay. Let me tell you right now that this character will NOT be accepted by the RP Moderation Team if you do not do a few of the following.

1. Canon items. You CANNOT have your OC related to canon info. Being related to, having a connection to, or having even an interaction with canon characters is against the main points of OC creation. Change that up.

2. Nerf his powers. He is SEVERELY overpowered right now and easily the strongest character on the fanon. Having an IQ. that high is not even humanly possible. And being able to defeat Team RWBY multiple times is just unreal. It's not happening. And having the ability to counterattack within 3 seconds, and all those ridiculously overpowered weapons. To put it simply, no, just no.

3. Make him realistic. I'm serious here. His scope makes him seem surreal. It reminds me too much of a set of OC's once that we're called "The 4 Gods" or something like that, the page got deleted, and with good reason. And I think this will too if you keep up this scope of writing.

That's all I have to say, and ask anyone else who has had multiple OC's on the fanon, they will probably say the same, this is all for your benefit, do not take it negatively.

Leaf.