Board Thread:Role Play Discussion/@comment-15792134-20131007022927/@comment-5290299-20131019022529

No not yet, Zaffre and Urdin still working on it. XD

Alright the idea was to start off with Zaffre sleeping in class, being taken off of cleaning duties....well all her jobs san Weapons crafting and improving, Ospin's orders through Professor Port. Then its combat training and Zaffre schools her opponent with no weapon by dismantling the opponents weapon and puts it back together in a matter of seconds. Along the time she learns her foster siblings are attending Beacon and uses a fake contact lense so they won't identify Zaffre through her right eye with the brown section.

They do find out who she is but since she is legally a student they can't do anything but alert their mother to where she was. Turns out Zaffre knew about some blackmailing and questionable dealings wiht criminals to keep the business afloat, at least the mother thinks so. Zaffre is oblivious to the company goings but once she does know she is on the hit list.

Zaffrewill see her old friend, learn  he is in white fang and her parents are killed, this causes the chance for her siblings to embarass her in combat traiing, and she goes to Professor Port for counsling. He inspires her and she begins to get back ot her old beat.

In the end however its revealed husband that Zaffre did respect and like, and who planned on returning Zaffre to her parents because he is a Faunus sympathizer, was killed by wife and blamed the fact on a buring warehouse. she trapped him in there to take over the company. She wa tired of the female persecution hgiher women suffer and wanted to prove she could be a competent CEO. Zaffre learns of this and gathers evidence against her.

Friend helps out, despite being on opposite sides and both reveal the truth. Sadly this comes with a price. Zaffre is fatally hurt by a Grimm (Haven't decided) but manages to kill them all before they could huirt eh workers. Zaffre dies but is reunited with her parents. The workers speak out agains the mother when she tried to frame Zaffre, even the step sisters try to frame her but are blinded by Bird Grimm (not nevermore but smaller ones) and the mother is killed by a Nevermore.

What do you think?