Talk:Ecru Sovereign/@comment-13593058-20161126235515

 Ecry Sovereign Review

Appearance
Description of appearance present.

Personality
Point of personaility made.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Semblance acceptable.

Backstory
Backstory has no contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour reference noted and confirmed

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- No contradictions detected

Review Summary
One thing that automatically bothered me was the mentioning a thong. While I hoped the inclusion of this detail was for comic relief or has some unthinkably deeper meaning to it when you mentioned there was a reason for it to be there, alas, I did not find it.

So in my own opinion, that did not have to be there nor does it seem like to adds to the character in any way other than to fulfill some sort of fetish. It doens't hurt whether your character gets accepte or rejected, but it does, in my opinion, hurt the character's appeal over-all.

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