Talk:Clover Sciron/@comment-25924729-20191121061850

Fun little character, I get the Sciron reference, he was a cool myth, though the page looks a little incomplete?

It's missing an infobox. While that isn't strictly required if the usual information in there can be conveyed in other sections, it's encouraged you include it, especially as without it important information such as age, birthplace, affiliation and huntsman team are missing.

Appearance section is alright, very cute design.

Personality secion is good, though its kinda tangled together with a Relationships section? Maybe thee was a mistake when typing the page or something. Both sections are alright, but you may wanna separate them for easier reading.

Backstory is great, nice little personal story. The octopus honestly steals the soptlight in this entire page, here and in the Relationships. Just... the idea of carrying her pet around in a little jar and taking it for "walks" in the beach to play is just adorable owo.

Abilities, weapon and semblance are all good. Semblance is actually kinda powerful when thinking about it.

There's no trivia section, and with that no explanation of a CNR. Clover is obviously a valid name referring to a color, but it must still be explained on the page under a trivia section.

So... yeah, very cute character. Just missing some important bits that keep her from being accepted. Still like it vey much.

Rejected.

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~RP Moderation Team~