Thread:Verity Evermore/@comment-26362067-20160723030202/@comment-26570606-20160915222550

I know, you're right, I shouldn't beat myself up on mine. I just didn't revise them at all, I just wrote them down. Now that I know what makes a good personality and backstory, I'll get to that when their problems are fixed.

If Metagh were a real person, I'd want her as my friend. Also, I found Ember's Semblance really creative, but can't wait to see what you do if you change it.