User blog comment:SkittyTheTwit/Kyron Bondad (My OC)/@comment-25291880-20141005005657

Pretty good for a first time OC. But there are a couple of things here that would get your character rejected by a reviewer. One is that a student has to be seventeen to attend Beacon. A fanon rule. However, they can be sixteen, but must have a valid reasoning to be attending so early. Another thing is that our OC's can't be tied to the RWBY show (Such as connecting them to characters such as Lie Ren) or any of the teachers. And I am not entirely sure that telekineses is completey accepted, as OC's can control certain elements and objects, but they can't downright control everything. But, besides that, I like your OC.

Here are some pages of the fanon to help you in character creatioon for the future. Good luck!

User blog:ThanhnuFia/Original Character Creating Guide

Character sheet base

User blog:SamjaySyndrome/Character Designing Guide

Semblances and your OC - A Guide