Talk:Nikolai Gaiz/@comment-5431934-20140311010909

It is highly overpowered for a notably frail nine-year-old to become strong enough to take on a Beowolf barehandedly after a few months of training.

Why were they ambushed by the White Fang? In the canon, the White Fang, whilst admittedly warlike, do not wantonly attack groups of humans for no particular reason - they made a protest violent, yes, and they attacked the SDC, but both were cases in which there were presumably some form of hostile human opposition, whether violent or not.

Dead people communicating with the living is neither an aspect shown nor one hinted at in the canon, and is thus out of setting.

Aura does not have any abnormal abilities not displayed in canon, including the ability to crystallize it.

His character box claims him to have been affiliated with both Signal and Beacon, yet there's no mention of him going to either of them in the profile.

There's no mention of how his name alludes to his color.

For the above,

Rejected.

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