Talk:Cyzarine Bluthardt/@comment-EvergreenLeaf-20151208212932

Alright, just a few issues.

Still seeing a complete Jack of All Trades regardless of the fact that she's a glass cannon. The fact tat she's able to master so many disciplines at such a young age especially becoming proficient in hacking/engineering at the age of ten, puts her on a completely different level from the rest of the characters we have seen as hacking is one thing, however, her apparent mastery of it as well as other disciplines such as fighting, violin, etc. Even though she was literally born into it, requires some toning down.

Her semblance is multi-purpose and very similar to Glyphs expect more specialized. Even Weiss at her age and the training she would've received as a Schnee, still has difficulty with some matters and cannot fully utilize her semblance to its fullest. Not saying that it ins't possible, however, there are some issues with the semblance itself.

Take for example, being able to dismantle an Atlesian Paledin in 20 seconds. From what we saw of Roman using it, it has mechnical and a computerised system as well, being able to destroy something that complex so easily, I use the word easily in a loose sense, is kinda overpowered in itself, as it took Yangry Yang and the entirity of team RWBY to take down even one. Oobleck taking them down is a different matter whatsoever simply because he is a full fledged badass caffeinated hunter.

Other then that, good character, nice design, well written, and I have zero doubt that you can improve upon her greatly still.

Rejected.

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