Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-27603392-20140704110526/@comment-32064726-20140725042221

Idina Caliber  I'll throw my name into the bowl, and hope I do this right. It's been a year since I've done any form of Character review...

I will separate my review into sections.

Appearance: All in all, very descriptive and, with the help of the included image, allows for a proper visualization of the character and how she looks. .  I'll give this a Check.

Personality: A confident, flirty, sadistic character. That meshes well with the mental image of the charcter through the Appearnce. Very dominate, as you've described, and seems to be a 'good' person,, caring for her friends and being over protective. Spoiled rotton, as I like to call it.

Everything for the personality that I've mentioned is fine with me, except one thing: I only question the last paragraph, as that seems to be more explaining some of her skills/abalities than personality. I suggest moving it somewhere else, but that wouldn't affect being rejected at all  So Check.

History: Let's see... Yup. I can undrstand most how her personality was affected by her past. Though I am unsure about how she could become a Mercenary before going to Beacon... and why they'd let her become a student...

ahh but I can recall that this should be perfectly fine. If other students can get in with a past of working for organizations similarish to the White Fang, then this is fine. Check.

Weapons/Abilities,: I was quite shocked to see that Idina would have Electric Dust powered High Heels for her weapon. I was expecting some form of weapon she;d swing. These heels aren't over powered, and I can see that they fit her personality very well. Though I am a bit iffy on her being able to channel some of the lightning to her gloves, but since it is of a conductive material, I'll let you have it. Her abilities are perfectly fine. Check.

Semblance:  It doesn't have offensive capabilities, being just creating moisture in the air. It utilizes her heels' electicity making for a powerful combination. I see nothing wrong with this semblance. Meshes well with her weapon of choice, Check.

Over all Finale: The explanation of her name and color have a slight connection, and I'll let it be.I havn't seen anything that would immediatly make me reject this character. My only qualms is with the writing that needs some minor grammar correcctions here and there.

Final Verdict: Accepted. I hope I did fine, as I've stated, it's been a year since I've done a character review of any sort. I have reviewed this to the best of my abilities without a form of guidelines to review with.