Talk:Anna Hudges/@comment-24087318-20140120084203

Not sure how or why she was given special permissions to go to Beacon early. Her page should elaborate on this a little more.

As for her weapon, "A gun that can turn into a sniper" seems a little redundant and confusing, since a sniper rifle IS a gun. Unless it can turn into something else I'm not sure what's at work here.

Barring these, the entire page is at a rather lacking of detail in all areas. I'd suggest adding more to all aspects of the character to flesh out their backstory, abilities, and what not. Perhaps look around at other peoples characters for ideas on what to add or think about.

Due to these, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~