Talk:Estellia Corlyson/@comment-13593058-20170613221950

 Casper Bluthardt Review

Appearance
Description of appearance present.

Personality
Point of personaility made.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Semblance is okay. Though I would justify its weakness more as "ludicrous speed" can hint at almost instant hit in some cases.

Backstory
Backstory has no contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour reference acknowledged.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- No contradictions.

Review Summary
I've mentioned most of the critical stuff in the sections but I'd like to reiterate one thing I find most annoying other than long backstories. This goes for any character in your clique.

It's hyperlinks.

And I don't mean it's bad to have hyperlinks leading to a more detailed article. I mean having a hyperlink for an object or element without brief explanation in the same page so that the reader can have a general idea without jumping through hoops. This issue seems the most prevalent in OCs with many connections and it is just plain annoying to try and wrap my head around it. It's not as bad here but there ARE some instances of it.

Just keep in mind that with complexity in interconnectedness while assuming the reader is willing to dive into your world will most likely result in a very bad time.

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