Talk:Rosanne Kulta-Blitz/@comment-5726563-20140216012541

Her killing her parents and siblings honestly isn't needed, and depending on how old she was at the time could be seen as very OP. The destruction of the town is a bit cliched. Ask yourself this. If this happened to someone, would they actually turn out like what their personality is pictured? Do they actually need these events to become who they are now? Another question is whether they would be accepted in a school, as most likely a murderer wouldn't be allowed in.

Understand, you don't need a tragic backstory to make an interesting character. There have been characters who only become heroes because they want to, because they think it sounds cool, or because they want something. Your character can be absolutely amazing with a backstory of them being bored as a child. Just put yourself in the characters shoes, and imagine a life. It doesn't need tragedy to be good.

That's about all the advice I'll give now. If after you edit i see more, I'll post again.