Thread:KuraiJack/@comment-25363089-20180102044615/@comment-13488655-20180210171643

That's the thing with RT. Too obseesed about pushing out 'cool things' that they don't even manage to develop the plot correctly.

First thing they did wrong was devide the story too much and tell it all at the same time. When a comic series does that, it devides the fans.

For instance, Weiss's fans want to see how she escapes, does her own thing becomes her own person, while Blake's fans want to hearmore about her history. cutting them off with switching to X's story, is gonna devide them and subconsciously lead them to disliking that character who interupted their favorite part of the story.

For you to pull that off well the stories have to be more related to each other and interact better.

There was even a book, where i remember it was about these two friend who were separated. the chapters were devided by their viewpoints. They had their own tasks but in the story you could tell how their actions affected each others story, for better or worse. It made it exciting, dramatic to read because you could see that if one of them made the wrong move to help them complete their task for themselves, it would be terrible for the other.

In RWBY, the stories are too disconnected. Too focused on adding things that aren't even there long enough to be fleshed out.