Talk:Rackley Moonacre/Future/@comment-24911350-20140603152117

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For the child version there isn't much content, but that's to be expected. The only thing I can recommend there is some expansion on her parents. The ability to unlock aura isn't a common or natural thing, it's a very specific skill that's pretty rare, so how could his parents do that? It also presents a bit of a logic problem, as anyone with that kind of skill can definitely afford to live in a better naighbourhood.

As for the future version, there still just isn't a whole lot of content, and a lot of it is just restated from the child version. No major problems with Rackley here, it's pretty well done.