Thread:KuraiJack/@comment-25363089-20170518151347/@comment-25363089-20170716144452

yup that and i think i can shorten his whole being the youngest of five stuff. An cut out a little bit of his sisters's stuff and say something along the lines of. "Each of his sisters are doing their own thing or working within the family terrority.". Then I think I can shorten his meeting with Hoshi a bit. Like rather than doing the spill about him and her training and fighting bandits. It can be just him training with her; An during a festival or something bandits striked her village.

To which they both put their training together to use. Then some where in there saying how he got beat up pretty bad by the bandit leader but managed to scare her off with some of his magician/dust casting skills. ^-^ Then Shortening his intro to The Master with. It wasn't even five months after that event.

That a newcomer was in the village looking forsomething but what they found was Nickelae. Who got his butt kicked though put up a decient fight despite his lack of formal training and injuries. He had unintinally showed the newcomer. Something that was worth investing into. An so he became "The Master's". Next Apperitence. Or something like that. X3 Trying to do it like those Movie trailers with the epic voice over guy.