Talk:Darian Nightshade/@comment-27743663-20170822222857

Sure sure, changes made are noted.

I'd only really note, not something of the character itself, but your style of writing in describing things. You used "usually" and "also" a lot, which has nothing wrong per se, but it made it feel like I was re-reading the same thing over and over, or feel longer than necessary. That's just a friendly note from me though that has nothing to do with the review as a whole.

Accepted.

~RP Moderation Team~