Talk:Rose Egya/@comment-25924729-20181127115518

Good character, and holy crap, I feel bad for her! D:

Appearance and Personality sections are good, character is cutesy and likable. Abilities, Weapons and Semblance are also good, have balanced and fair strengths and weaknesses. The entire page is overall detailed and easy to read, nice work writing.

Her backstory is tragic man, having a lover die and nobody even knew... just damn.

Small issues about that though. Her backstory is missing a lot of details, like how she managed to enter a Huntsman academy, and why she wanted to do that. I dunno, i bring this up because going from being abused and wanting to find a friend to being a warrior and monster killer just seems like a big leap to me, especially if her friends and family constantly abuse her, it doesn't seem likely they would support such a decision or let her fight.

Questions like what made her want to be a Huntsman, how did she get the skills, training and weaponry necessary to do that, and maybe how she and her boyfriend met should be addressed and answered. But other than lacking a few details, this character is pretty solid. Nice job.

Rejected.

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