Talk:Sanuye Sinclair/@comment-13593058-20170329082058

 Sanuye Sinclair Review

Appearance
Description of appearance noted. No errors or contradictions.

Personality
Point of personaility made.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed. Semblance is okay but would benfit from a indicated range limit.

Backstory
Clear and concise, no contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced. Art credit sourced.

Verdict: Accepted
On the grounds of:

- No inconsistency

Review Summary
It's not often I get to say this but this is one of the more well written character profiles I've come across in the past months. Good job on that. Reminds me of the initial designs of some of my own characters. I also wouldn't mind RPing with this and or other characters sometime.

Just one thing in particular that should be fixed, you should really indicate a range on the Semblance as so far the attack can technically travel indefinitely. Something I could rejected this character over but since the rest was put together so well I'll let it slide.

Another thing to note when finishing any organizations since I see that your Oroboros Corp. isn't exactly done, don't try to make it a big or well known party. The key here is to fit in and have an excuse for the organization to exist but not known to the canonical characters. How you do it is up to you but I wouldn't go, for example, with a huge floating fortress or somthing. Other than that great job.  If you require assistance in the matter, feel free to ask other Fanon members for help. Alternatively, you may consult my  character creation guide   for further information regarding my reviewing process. If you believe there to be a misunderstanding or mistake, please contact me via message wall or another reviewer.