Talk:Blood Raserei/@comment-24087318-20140112105859

~Re-review due to Post-Acception information added~

Character checks out, new abilities that were added are fine except for one.

Shockwaves that would be fatal at point blank range would be severe enough to effect the user of them, who is also at that range.

In addition, if he ran away from home, but re-enrolled into a combat school, he'd likely need a mentor of some sort to assist him in it. They wouldn't just take in a stray kid. In addition, if he used his old name his parents would likely be informed he's still alive and kicking, and may have him sent back home. His backstory has a few holes like these examples that need looking at and possibly adjusting.

As such, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~