Thread:DustpeltX/@comment-5426254-20160325035130

Hey Dust,

I'd like to know what I can do to improve her backstory here.

I'm trying to have her backstory avoid being a "Blake clone", an "Adam clone", a "Velvet clone", and a "Sun clone" without making her background come off as bratty and over-privileged.

Do you have any advice on this?

-GL 