Talk:Absol Windstorm/@comment-13593058-20160909014507

 Absol Windstorm Review

Appearance
Nothing technical to note.

Personality
"Often cold and unfeeling... Absol is that of ice, cold and unfeeling."

Point of personaility made but rhetoric needs improvement.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed.

Semblance acceptable.

Backstory
Backstory is all over the place and confusing. Requires too much previous exposion. Grounds for rejection.

Miscellaneous
 Colour reference acknowledged.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Backstory inconsistency

Review Summary
I simply cannot understand the origin of this character nor her drive. The backstory requires navigating to another character's page to get the full story and thus, is not a complete backstory.

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