Board Thread:Role Plays/@comment-8182065-20161103082555/@comment-8182065-20170211112031

Raine had shook his head, unable to remember all the details. "Unfortunately, no... they were cautious enough to keep everyone blindfolded when taking us away to their hideout."

"Did you see anything that stood out before being blinded? Landmarks? Signs?" Amy had asked, wishing that there was some more information they could go on.

"A tower... standing tall over the forest in the vicinity. I think that, I could hear a the ocean in the distance too."

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The blindfold was removed from Rina's eyes as well as the other captives. They had been taken into a large building, that appeared to be an old abandoned prison. The grunts were escorting everyone into whatever cells they had available.

(Well remember, rejected doesn't mean they suck; just needs a bit of a touch up, contradictions found, etc. I wouldn't say delete them necessarily; if you have to do a bit of a rehaul on a character, then take them back to the drawing board.)