Talk:Tsubaki Silvius/@comment-17970636-20160324165826

One issue here and it's the semblance. I see you've taken the idea straight out of Fairy Tail, but frankly, it doesn't work out. The application of a band which shares pain only one way (from what I can see, she'll take zero pain if the person on the other side of the link is hit if I read it correctly) and emotions and whatnot is basically aura bypass. Not only that, but applying it on a Grimm, seems practically redundant. If anything, you'd just receive a boatload of anger and whatnot. I'd go into further detail but I'm kinda tired right now.

Rejected.

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