Talk:Alexandrite Kingfisher/@comment-25924729-20191220060057

Very gritty and rough character, i could see him being interesting in a story.

Appearance is alright. Backstory is good and Personality is really cool, like a cross between Japanese Yankii stereotypes and hard boiled noir/detective novel gruff protagonists. A very interesting mix, and will be nice to see a story like that.

Relaionshis section really helps. If there one thing this page could improve on is maybe putting that before has backstory? Because it has important information that answers some unclear things about the backstory. I was a bit confused until i reached this part and went "Oh that makes sense now". Not a rejectable issue or problem, just a suggestion.

No semblance to speak of. His weapon and general combat abilities sound pretty good. very simple and a little weaker than the average OC, but makes sense given his background. I really like the brutal and gritty underdog vibe to the way i imagine him fighting.

CNR works out, i like the tidbit about the King chess peice. No other issues found.

Overall a very neat character, good job.

Accepted.

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