Talk:Garnet Agatha/@comment-25924729-20200201074821

Looking much better already, but theres still some small problems.

Prosthetic limbs have been reduced to 2 and their usefulness in battle reduced, so i'll treat them as utility instead of possible weapons. Theyre alright now. Even if not, combining her 2 actual weapons into one is an acceptable change and puts the whole package into 4 points rule acceptability.

Nerf to the semblance is pretty drastic. Reducing it to 3 feet away is okay, but you could get away with a lot more if you like. Just an option.

Backstory is better now, but still too vague. Details about her early life should be mentioned. Why was she attacked and how? How did she survive when everyone else died? How did she lose her memory? What happened to her parents that made her an orphan? These are all important details to build a character and let people understand her.

Its very close, the backstory is the last real issue with this page. If those questions are answered then she will be good to go.

Sorry but still:

Rejected.

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