User blog comment:DearlySkies/Thoughts of My RWBY OCs/@comment-13488655-20140629111658

Review of Eros:

A good name, but maybe you could put up how his last name is pronouced and if it alludes to a color. So far, though it has a lot of description on his stats, he could use a lot more detail on his appearance, fighting stance, background and personality. Try putting in all the little details, like why he doesn't talk alot, his favourite music and food, if he has any habits like scratching his head or chin, small things like that to make him more unique as a character.

His semblance seems pretty good, but magic altogether isn't allowed in RWBY.

Hope this review helps. :)