Talk:Yukon Goldsmith/@comment-10337166-20160428052547

'Unmatched destruction and power' ^Vibe I'm getting from your weapon. Which is basically No limits fallacy which is not okay, go back to the drawing board and figure out better wording, just say what the weapon does. I get you're on the Gurren Lagan power trip but it isn't helping get your character accepted.

Onto the whole tremors thing, same issue as in previous review, tremors are destructive, and your wording isn't great, go back to the drawing board, honestly I'd scrap the idea and move on.

Rejected

-RP Moderation Team-