Talk:Ari Dusk/@comment-24490414-20160110011052

For a character to be in Pending, there's a format you ought to comply because one giant paragraph with information all over the place does not suit well for anyone reading this ESPECIALLY the reviewers. Refer to the Character sheet base as a guide and take a look at some of the OCs in the Accepted Character category so your page would look a bit more organized and better-read.

That also goes without saying that you need to flesh out this OC a lot more and he must have a backstory for him to be reviewed. Again, the links provided above should give ample information on how you can do that.