Talk:Charcoal Stone/@comment-13593058-20160323011933

 A Review of  Charcoal Stone

Appearance
Not much to judge on a technical level.

Personality
A reasonable personality. No contradictions and has justified responses. No additional comments.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon does not contradict with existing canon weapons but needs to be specific on the number of blades present or the average duration of fights theese blades last.

Semblance... what?

Backstory
Nothing worthy to note. No contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour referenced and source checks out.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Weapon clarity

- Semblance undecipherable

Review Summary
Addressing the most concerning part of the rejection first, the Semblance is written qutie messily. I could barely understand it with the amount of rambling and what it IS vs what it ISN'T. I would really appreciate if you just stated what the ability actually does and then state what others thing about it.

Also, if I got the Semblance description correctly, I can either completely reject it for forcing weakness upon someone or just call it extremely weak because it works off intimidation. I can count probably half of the characters on here than can break out of that trance. Or course, if the ability is suppose to work on weak minded individuals, fine. But guaranteed you will not get that ability to work willingly in an RP.

As for the weapon, while the Fanon rules state a max of 3, I can see that it's justified here as they are hidden razors no so much full out knives. I'm willing to accept it as long as the razor are finite (description of "hundreds of razors" is just too vague for me to accept). You can do this by stating literally the number of razors or state the time until those razor usually run out due to damage, throwing or whatever.

 If you require assistance in the matter, please feel free to ask other Fanon mambers for help. If you believe there to be a misunderstanding or mistake, please contact me via message wall or another reviewer.