Talk:Nox SteelArm/@comment-24416658-20160401071421

....I'll be as nice as possible.

Name does check out under CNR, albeit unoriginal.

Robotic eyes and a half brain? Where's the other half? Is it cybernetic? If so, that's not allowed. At all. Eyes maybe. Brain, no.

I cannot understand what his first primary weapons are at all. Along with that, you cannot have 3 different weapons. The arms, since they can input Dust, count as weapons.

Semblance....Okay. Look. To begin with, you must ask a reviewer whether or not you can have a hereditary semblance. Second, a semblance cannot do all those things. It cannot harden his body, lower his aura consumption, and grant him telekinesis. Too much.

Backstory is very difficult to read due to grammar and syntax errors. Also, you changed his sister's name like 3 times. There needs to be a page for the fanmade combat school as well, as it is not canon.

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--