Talk:Viola Lindynn/@comment-24087318-20131225135211

Unfortunately, it appears you have added and changed quite a bit on this page since this character was Accepted. As such, I have to issue a re-review. That being said.

There are contradictions in her personality, she's said to be quick to anger and show emotion, yet also described as reserved and hides them from everybody.

In addition, characters with significant histories of criminal activity are VERY unlikely to be accepted into Beacon, or any other combat school. They're a professional institution that functions similar to a Police Academy, only with a focus on slaying Grimm.

The tragic past she has involves her parents death (which isn't a Rejectable issue, but is VERY overdone) but leaves a burning question of how she managed to aquire Transcripts to attend Beacon Academy with.

Furthermore, Aura does not posess abilities unique to its bearer, it only provides, as far as we know, set abilities: sheilding against harm, healing minor injuries, and giving the wielder SLIGHTLY more sharpened senses. These abilities are availible to every user of Aura and do not need to be mentioned on a page.

The Semblance isn't something we've seen before in Canon. Semblances are, from what we have seen in Canon so far, specialized and unique traits posessed by Hunters and Huntresses that work in tandem with their Weapons, Skills, and/or Dust usage to create one singular, focused, and unique fighting style. They are not separate attacks entirely. In addition, this Semblance in particular acts as a contradiction towards her fighting style. If she is based upon speed and agility, she would not desire at all to use her Semblance, which requires her to get hit.

Due to all of the above, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~