Talk:Devasur Ejder/@comment-25924729-20190707031722

Umm.... this page look kinda incomplete. The stuff thats already here does seem to follow the correct template, but a lot of stuff is missing.

Appearance section. Small issue, faunus can only have one animal trait on their bodies. He has wold ears and a tail, counting as two, so you will have to remove one. The rest of the outfit seems fine.

No personality or backstory sections. There are some basic details in that beginning section that could be applied to both, but a full, detailed section for each must be written on the page.

No weapon, semblance or abiities sections. These too must also be included in the page to provide a basic information about his abilities, gear and to gauge how strong he is.

No trivia section, and thus no explanation of CNR either. You should at least provide an explanation how the name Devasur can relate to a colour in an appropriate section.

I will assume this was just submitted to Pending prematurely, and you'e still working it out, so i won't reject this. But i will remove it from pending until the necessary parts have been added. I recommend you take a look at some other Accepted OCs to get a better idea of how its done.

If you have any questions please DM me on Wikia or Disord.

~RP Moderation Team~