Talk:Busy Day/@comment-4809613-20171212210531

First, description of Armand and Jade. Then, Phoenix's story feels so far to be just on a whim. But of course, you could probably expect that from a once-rich kid. Staged his death, eh? That could be interesting if we delved more into that fact instead of Pheonix insisting to move on. Like perhaps the officer would just ramble out the details on what had happened, or how they concluded he was dead in the first place. Leaves much to be desired here.