Talk:Albus Silvermoon/@comment-24296957-20140627155246

While the basics of the backstory are covered, I feel like OC could be fleshed out a bit more. I'd appreciate some more info.

Also, he seems...too perfect. Amazing with his Aura, survivability skills despite being indoors a lot, able to plan effectively, a freerunner...and saying he's the clan's best...all of his perfections make him bordeline, if not OP. Tone him down a bit.

For the above,

Rejected.

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