Talk:Jaden Hjarta/@comment-30530552-20180617010228

Hi, Bad. Let's see what we've got here.

CNR works. You could probably list "Hjarta" as meaning heart as well, to add extra colors.

Appearance is descriptive and does it's job properly. You could probably do to update the names on the gallery images too, but that's up to you

Personality works, and is well-detailed. Nice job there.

Weapon is fine, neat limitations and usage.

Skills & abilities make sense for her and her profession.

Semblance works quite well, proper limitations in place.

Backstory's all in line, and quite solid.

All in all, everything's cool here.

-Accepted.