Talk:Peter Born/@comment-24087318-20140927042352

Character is good. I like his backstory, it actually outlines the tragedy.

Just one tiny issue. His Semblance says it can run for five minutes, but what happens after? How long before he can use it again? Does it tire him out? Does calming down end its power early?

Rejected, but very close, and I definately like what I see.

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