Thread:Delta-06/@comment-26571677-20151219201754/@comment-25924729-20160206070951

Sorry it took a while, but i've finally read through Valka.

I like her appearance and weapon choices (*is impressed you know what an urumi is.*), the butterfly tattoo is especially a nice touch, and the appearence gives me a general impression of Stocking from PSG. Her weapons and abilities are fairly balanced mobility, attack and defensewise, even the ranged weakness seems fitting for the character from her personality and backstory.

Backstory is a little... dull. But relatable and combined with her personality could lead to nice character development over RPs.

May i suggest that her semblance explodes those ice shards at the starting point of her teleport instead of the landing. Because i've seen a similar skill in an RPG game, and this way, the ice trap can trap enemies who engage her in melee, teleport to safety, then blow up the guy. If the trap forms at her landing point, she may get caught in the blast herself.