Thread:Taki-Tan/@comment-30202748-20170416202632/@comment-29264888-20170424230109

Just to make sure, I'm trying to help, not to show off. :/

I usually get a personal assumption that I'm taking control of someone's character if I edit their descriptions.

But continuing from before:

Appearance: 

Use my version of your description as you wish. No need to credit me. Just say that I helped or something under the trivia.

Personality: 

Okay. Nothing else to say about this section.

Weapon & Equipment: 

I don't have much to say about the gloves. However for the puncturing attachment, you said that the spikes can also detach from the cartridge? Are you saying that the spikes can be fired as a projectile?

Also, if there is more than one variation of your puncturing attachments, you may want to give brief descriptions as to what they are. Nothing too big, just mention if they have different shapes or functions and whatnot.

Gun and its bullets; I have nothing to say. It's fine.

Same goes for the utilization of gravity dust in your weapons.

There is the description, "It should be noted that the more mods he has active on his gloves, the slower he is able to attack."

I don't see why this needs to be included. He should be able to hold his equipment quite easily if he carries it all at once. The only reason I can see this description staying is if the mods are noted to be weighty. Therefore when he attaches the equipment to his gloves, he is applying more weight onto his arms, taking more effort for the arms to move around.

Or something around that idea of weight.

Your secondary is fine.

Fighting Style:

A fighting style using a mix of pre-existing martial arts with karate as its foundation. The idea is fine by me.

 Skills/Abilities:  

Seems good.

History:

Nothing there at the moment, so nothing to say.

Trivia: 

This is whatever.