Talk:Echo shadow/@comment-27393198-20151214035346

This needs a lot of work...and by a lot I mean total scrapping and rebuilding everything from scratch. Honestly, it reminds me of how I used to write characters...when I was 12.

Hate to make like a broken record, but seriously: ''read the guidelines. ''I'm doing so after having already written an OC and plan on making adjustments and corrections on a somewhat decent job and I'm fairly certain you should too.