User blog comment:StarlightAT/Review please/@comment-4109747-20140323032959/@comment-5290299-20140323043252

Gee thanks point out all the bad, label her with a VERY LOOSLY used term nowadays, and not even give advice on how to fix the character and get her accepted, and then say you could rant but can't huh? -_-  I'm asking for criticism, not a flame or a rant, a proper feedback so I can fix her and fit her into fanon/canon.

Most of the stuff you admitted was my fault since i was witholding infromation/not adding it in until I knew for certain a reviewer would say those things, till the RP commenced. The armor is going to break during the initiation RP, like i said it was experimental. It is used with Aura to try and raise a person's defense and raise their speed in combat. But since it is imperfect it will break.

The stats i can agree with. I have been mulling over the last few days If i should change them, but I love it how you call them perfect....they are not perfect. Its to show that she is strong, a Lightning Bruiser compared to her partner and to be a foil to said partner.

I have already decreased several of them since now I can without incident like the stupid edit page telling me I haven't made edits when I had!! DX

The backstory is opinionated. It is meant to get yay's or nays to properly see if Iris' present actions are justified or what the actions coming up will be justified or not.

As for the tough occupation for a 17 year old to have.... It is possible for her to have it. A weapons tester, yes a questionable occupation, being a child soldier, no. She enlisted when she was 15, and she already wanted to be a weapon's specialist anyway. At signal you are possibly asked to create your weapon, Ruby made her own that is why the theory is sparked.

Now once again, I will admit this is my fault for witholding information or not adding it in for fear of breaking canon and thus why I was awaiting for her to be either accepted or rejected so I could possibly fix her or kep her as she was. I will change some of it since you bring up good points, such as the stats and backstory since i was beginnig to grow iffy on those anyway.

I respect your opinion....however....please do not use the term Mary Sue here. It is used far too loosly nowadays it has lost its meaning to the point it is used everywhere by people to call a character one, even a new fan character.