Talk:Asteria Nova/@comment-17970636-20160122032717

If anything is added to the backstory once this OC is accepted please note that you'll have to resubmit into Pending. I'm saying this because I noticed the note at the end of the backstory.

Now for the review.

Your semblance is frankly far too multipurpose and overpowered to an extent. Mirages are created by the ground being hot and the air surrounding the ground being cool. This is not a diffusion of light or any other manner, it's simply a phenomenon prevalent in humid areas which causes light to become bent. As a result, naturally bending the rays of light can have much more severe implications like altering one's vision.

Then there's the absorbtion of light, while it seems alright, but regernation, aura regeneration? If so then this is a no go, the only thing that I can really see this working for is enhanced healing or something, absorbing light as energy is kinda, well, having been in a Skype with two other reviewers while reading over this OC, it was decided that this faction of the semblance is also a no-go while also acting as a different semblance as well from the first one.

Then there's the third ability, to create beams of light, this makes SENSE as well as the fact that more intense light means more power, can burn, alright, it's like concentrating a ray of light under a magnifying glass, it can burn, however, I didn't touch on her weapon until now because this portion ties into her semblance.

Light being loaded into a boy and then firing light at out doesn't make something faster or stronger, in fact, all she'd be doing is firing a glowing arrow. Light is pure energy and possess no actual propellant and thus would not make an arrow any faster or stronger or more accurate.

Rejected.

--RP Moderation Team--