Talk:Laelia Furfuracea/@comment-4773581-20140127074011

While obeying orders is standard for a soldier, absolute and unquestioning obedience is unlikely, especially if, going by the way you've worded it, she obeys any order from anyone. Moreso since she's supposed to be arrogant, as arrogance makes one less inclined to follow orders than normal. Also, "when not off duty" means she'd be on duty, which would mean she wouldn't have free time. Why she studies the styles could also do with some explaining.

Elaborating on the abilities and limitations of her equipment, like how far off the ground she can get (and whether or not she can actually fly) or how the wings affect her movement and how important they are (as well as how durable they are), is definitely something you could do with. And 1/3rd of a meter is 33cm, or roughly 13 inches, which is under half the length of just the blade of a normal cutlass, which is usually 70-80 cm (27-31 inches), and makes the weapon more of a dagger than anything.