Talk:Kyarameru Sufure/@comment-13593058-20161111035338

Kyarameru Sufure Checklist

Semblance Clarity: Fixed
Section would benefit from careful rewording as some statistics remain redundant.

Backstory Inconsistency: Not Fixed
Same issue persists located in the second paragraph of the backstory which still mentions a mysterious 5th base Dust Element.

Weapon Inconsistency: Fixed
Section would benefit from proper paragraph and grammar usage.

Verdict: Rejected
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