Thread:Verity Evermore/@comment-26362067-20160723030202/@comment-26362067-20161014232859

Can't wait to see that work! :P

Sandi's really turning out nicely, isn't he? :P ... *finally can't contain excitement* I know! Me too! I'm dying to RP with him! :D

Not at all. Honestly, it's impossible to avoid cliches when writing, so I wouldn't worry about it too much. The only trope I would use sparingly is the mistreated Faunus one - I think some of the reviewers are getting a little annoyed by it's overusage, when we've seen Faunus and Humans together peacefully plenty of times. Course, we never get an inner look at the common people's thoughts, so "peaceful" is a relative term.

That, and it'd actually fit in with her allusion to Cana. Cana wanted to be an S-Class wizard so that her father would notice her. Course, I wouldn't plaster that onto Sekhmet - that's more copying than alluding to. The idea you have, however, is allusion - a very good one, at that.