Thread:DustpeltX/@comment-30202748-20170620191341/@comment-13593058-20170620194154

It isn't so about what "parts" of the section is contradictory but the section as a whole seems unwieldy at best and unnecessary at worst. The mere mention of a melee style based on countering seems literally counter intuitive in a character that has a almost mid ranged kit.

The control style of the melee also tries a bit too hard to cover all its bases without giving away a reasonable weakness. SO for example, I wrote an unarmed counter-based style for one of my OCs that I feel is a better representation of what you were trying to do. Give it a read and you might see what I mean.