Talk:Akio/@comment-24087318-20141022124514

Reptile-like eyes on a Human? No. That's something reserved for Faunus.

In addition, giving him a stare that would work on "any" woman? That's a little boisterous and incorrect. Try to refrain from putting absolutes like everybody or always, there's always things that'd prove them incorrect.

The organization of the Black Talons is, according to the page, described as something that's world-reaching or at least world-threatening, for a fan-made organization, especially one that's pretty much the White Fang, that's a little too far in the scope of its power, and could easily be seen as powerful/influenced enough to alter the Canon due to connections and power. This is, for obvious reasons, not allowed.

Rejected

~RWBY Fanon Administration Team~