User blog:StarlightAT/Original Story Synopsis Take 2

“This world really is crap.”

''These words governed the lives of dropouts Valente and Chiara, two childhood friends whose parents went missing one day. Now living in the same house they make a living through one of the more dangerous jobs the world has to offer.''

''Two rival factions from Hell appear to them one day, one deciding to kill them, the other, smaller faction willing to offer assistance to them. The crappy world they have come to disagree with, their chance to change it finally appears and they assist the demons in fixing the order of the three worlds. Sadly, by choosing this option, they will be at odds with the school they abandoned, Inferno Academy; a school that trains Devil Hunters.''

Alright, is it good, bad, terrible, tell me dammit!! XD

Okay so I need help...I got two story ideas, and one I got going farther than the other. As such the one I got going is going to be the first to be worked on. Problem is, I need to find a way to make this less generic and more appealing...what wait the hell am I saying....it wil still have cliches and be sorta generic.,..but you know what....its choosing between evils and I went with the lesser. Everyone I talked to about it says its a very interesting piece and that they would read it...but thats when I tell them the first or so volume of the series.

As such, I know there are harsh....helpful.....hopefully....critices on here and I am asking for your help.

Inspiration: Divine Comedy, YuYuHakusho, Phi Brain, No Game No Life, Mondaiji, “Scarlet Story” by nano

So...how do I make this more interesting, less generic, and something that looks like a rather good read. If you require more information, just message me on my wall.

Either way, I hope this sounds somewhat interesting and something that can be turned from fantasy to high fantasy. And yes. there will be romance/drama and me doing my damnest to explore the human mind that is fragile and fractures. Going Da Vinci Code on dis shit!