Talk:Elroy Osmail/@comment-25924729-20181206112643

>Goldwind Dust

JOJO REFERENCE!!! :D

Hehehheheheheh...... okay, lets see for real now.

Appearance, backstory and personality section are alright. I really like the presonality especially, he sounds like a really ambiguous character, not blatantly good or evil. I can see some users and OCs thinking hes a cool guy, others thinking hes a jerk. Its clever character writing that way.

Weapons and abilities are also good. The semblance seems okay in concept, but a little vague on its limits. You should add more details, like the maximum size he can make the glyph, and how much aura exactly is spent making it, to give an idea exactly how powerful he is.

Rejected.

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~RP Moderation team~