Talk:Lock Mortifer/@comment-24262164-20140113053333

How I review

I'm confused as to how he fights while blind folded.

Really nice motivation.

You kinda glossed over the fact that Lock's family just took Blood in. It's not a problem so much as it begs for a little mroe explenation. Did Lock's parents just adopt the stray their son brought home? Was Blood cool with this? What does Lock think of Blood?

You mention Ruby in your explenation of your weapon. I find this a little annoying because it feels like you think you need to seperate yourself from Ruby to be accepted. That may be true but it's not the proper mindset. You should describe your weapon and we should never even think of Ruby, and if we do then we can bring it up with you. As you have it now you just made me compare your weapon to Ruby's.