Talk:Shell Stillwater/@comment-24416658-20160322070512

Name fits CNR.

Appearance and Personality are alright.

Backstory fits well with the character, no big issues.

Seems like Weapon works out fine. Two identical primaries.

Semblance is worded to sound more like reality manipulation, which is not allowed.

Rejected for Semblance.

--RP Moderation Team--

Notes: Please, for the love of all things holy, change the layout. The paragraphs are too big and hard to read, the sections for the weapons and semblance get lost without bolding, and the entire page just feels really hard on the eyes. Please fix this.