Talk:Black Weston/@comment-13488655-20130826072103

The height in the Profile and Appearance contradict each other.

Personality, you can just simply for one part of it just say he's a ladys man. As a commander of a league (You could make the league be something like a secret military branch in the RWBY world.) You could instead of saying he loves making new friends, that he has good friendship and respect for his men.

Weapons, try sticking to two for now, and a decent piece of body armour.

Backstory, there has been no travelling through dimensions in RWBY so far and untill they put RWBY in the next Smash bros game you can't make him be a dimensional traveller. You also need to make a new backstory that fits the world of RWBY.

It may seem like alot to change, I also hesitated to change anything about Kurai but I did change him (You can check his page in the other fanon wiki.) and he became a better character. Like a good friend once said: Grass grows greenest where you water it. :)