Talk:Penelope Reina/@comment-13593058-20170802034716

 Penelope Reina Review

Appearance
Description of appearance present.

Personality
Point of personaility made.

Weapons and Abilities
Weapon rules followed, however, further details on the cards themselves are needed. For example, what mechanisms allow the cards to operate as they do? Are they actual playing cards or are that metal mimics? If they're actual playing cards, why can they cut flesh and inflict damage? How can regular playing cards be controlled with zero explanation? What is the approximate range the cards can be operated in? How strong are the cards physically in terms of offense and defence?

Semblance also suffers from lack of required detail. Range, up-time, weaknesses, etc.

Backstory
Backstory has no contradictions.

Miscellaneous
 Colour reference acknowledged.

Verdict: Rejected
On the grounds of:

- Weapon details of both old and new unsufficient

- Semblance details insufficient

Review Summary
Nothing I didn't mention above. However, I do like the concept of operating a weapon through cards. The only thing that I think could be better is the way the concept is integrated. As it stands now, the Dust magic is completely separate and does not look like it belongs within the character skillset. I would find it more interesting if the cards and the Dust magic could somehow compliment each other.

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