Talk:Gotham/@comment-26543176-20150210225041

This is just. . . . No, like did you even bother to read any of the OC's on this site, any of the good ones? Before you wrote this. In what world did you think this would be acceptable. My biggest question is probably, DID you even bother to read the rules before you wrote up this monstrosity?

Honestly, some of it is salvageable, like some of the abilities are okay and good work, were they not so attrociously written. But this trainwrek needs some serious fuckin work before it is even close to acceptable. Fix her personality and at the very least remove the Canon interactions and fix the formatting, NO ONE likes reading a text wall.

Look I get this is your first OC on here and all, but seriously, she needs a lot of work, I advise you to look up some of the better OC's on here such as this one, to get an idea of how to do this.

In short, fix this OC try better, and seriously, please read the rules before you start making fixes.