Talk:Ardens Hedera/@comment-5431934-20131112010332

The main issue I currently have with this OC is the Semblance of weapon manipulation. This is either incredibly overpowered or very underpowered, depending on how it works. It would be much easier to judge this character if you described how exactly it worked, what the limitations are, etc, etc.

Either her semblance is to manipulate all weapons, which just makes no sense - what is she manipulating? The metal? If so, what prevents her from manipulating all metal? Not to mention that anyone who uses a weapon, which is pretty much everyone, would lose to her. This is what is very overpowered, if this is it.

If it's only this weapon, it seems way too specific to be a semblance. What's so special about this weapon that makes it the only one she can manipulate? What if she had been born on the opposite side of Remnant from where this weapon was made, would her semblance be useless?

Rejected.

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