User blog comment:Winter Edition/Original Character Creating Guide/@comment-121.74.115.197-20140307074339

I wanted to try this. Also my guy is hevily based off Horus, an egyption god, so trying to make him not OP as hell might be difficult. tell me if I could change anything for the better. also i suck at English

Name: Horace

Gender: Male

Age: 15

Born: December 8th

Team: None (he kind of just walked in, but more on that later)

Hair: neck length, strait messy brown hair

Eye colour: One gold and one silver

Race: Faunas (Hawk wings)

Aparrel: Simple trousers and t-shirt, no obvious and out there cloths

Weapons: Horace uses a Crook and flail, the crook is more of a staff but with a hook at the end and the flail is a handel that creates three energy whips.

Ability: Regneneration. This helps him alot as he is developing a fighting style uses the enemies momentem against them, unfortunatly, he is not the best at doing that and never will be.

Personality: Horace is a very energetic, outgoing and, unfortunatly, finds it very hard to focus as everything to him is new and exiting or just another stupid idea that never works out. He sees everyone as a friend, even the enemy, this leads to him almost dying, if it were not for his regenative ability. He also loves apples to the point where he would give up the world for just three, unfortunatly he will go to theivery just to get them and will lose all focus on a mission just to eat one, even if he is in a battle.

History: Horace comes from a well hidden town of bird faunaces and he had a good upbringing and had no troubles with his life, which he found a problem. So he decided to go on a big adventure because he found the town dull and boring, with no battle training and also they ran out of apples. after a month of traveling, he litteraly crash landed at Signal with a smile on his face, pointed at the sky and yelled at the top of his lungs, "NAIIIIIILD IT!". Now, the school didn't like the tresspassing and destruction of property, but he didn't care, he had found a new interesting place, with apples.

Weaknesses: Apples, horrible at battle, apples, no sence of direction, apples, easily side tracted and funnily enough, apples.

All right, i think i made it clear he loves apples, and i think he isn't OP and his personality is good, i might keep a copy of this so i can change it when I find a massive flaw or problem character wise.