Talk:Organdy Marvell/@comment-17970636-20140111233211

Good overall, just once small thing that could do with some fixing.

It says that she was "a shut-in" as a child. Does that mean her parents kept her locked up in a room...? Or was she locked in a room by her won choice? Was the room even locked? Because you also say in her backstory that she went outside in search of a hydrangea. That could use some moer clarification.

Due to the above, Rejected.

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