Talk:Dianella Mareggiata/@comment-27743663-20161204153631

CNR checks out.

Appearance is fine.

Personality is fine.

Backstory is fine, if overly long. I would recommend shortening it, since as a reviewer, long backstories are a pain and a huge turn-off. Note though, you name this Triton Academy, and...that's it. Like, it's made to sound prestigious, then offers no support or evidence to back this up. It might as well be any other Hunter school. However those are.

Weapon, secondaries can't transform. Her spear can change from a spear to a musket, and her arm changes from an arm, to a flame-thrower, to the so called S-rifle. Both transform.

Semblance, how much can she absorb? As in, what's her limit. Without one, she could pretty much become a god if she just keeps absorbing more and more energy non-stop. As for Thermal, how much would be needed to 2-hit a Beowolf? The way it's written, you make it sound like even the littlest amount could allow her to 1-hit anyone, which in most cases, is a no.

So, Tl;dr

Issues with two transforming weapons

Issues with semblance having no set demerit or limit.

Rejected.

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