Talk:Niebieski Zlota Tarcza/@comment-10337166-20161111003136

They meiyo clan after reading, is a rejectable concept in of itself. You've tried to make your own kingdom and given them all these fancy techs (powerful AI's are a big no). Basically the entire concept of this kingdom sized clan doesn't fit into canon, because if they were so everpresent, why wouldn't it be mentioned in canon.

Any character relating to this clan will be removed from pending until extensive rewrites occur.

Rejected

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