Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-24296957-20150113152446/@comment-4806269-20150114012908

Breyal Yoland

Being a Faunus, there isn't mention of which is her physical Faunus trait in the article; this being the only issue with her. Personality, abilities, weapons, and backstory are OK, though explaining with more depth why she decided to behave in a more violent way instead of keeping her original attitude would be nice for adding more depth to the character itself.

Rejected for now.

Chloe Chroma

Her having both changeable hair and eye color is a conflictive characteristic; while things such as eye color change and things like Yang's hair getting on fire been seen in canon, this kind of traits have been only seen as a manifestation of Semblance so far, and the article doesn't point out that it's a side effect of her Semblance. Also, it isn't mentioned which Faunus trait she has, and which kind of Faunus she is. She also lacks a backstory.

Rejected.

Denver Verde

Everything is alright, though I advice you to put the "weapon" paragraph before the "abilities" one so the article can be easier to read and understand. Also, I advice you to add more depth to his abilities and weaknesses in battle, since there's no mention of significant weaknesses in his profile (though one might assume he's a "jack of all trades, master of none" type with focus in supporting).

Accepted.