Talk:Dahlia De'Luna/@comment-25197246-20140804182014

I had to see Dahlia next... of course, because she's the next-door fan user :D

It's sorta misleading to change her to a gazelle faunus while her concept art and featured art remains a rabbit faunus. Is this because of the introduction of Velvet? Well, either way, something should be done with the primary art, because I honestly keep thinking her of a rabbit faunus >.>

The outfit is cute, though I'm reminded more of a jester than an oriental dresser? Picture still does the magic.

Personality: Since I already looked to the backstory, it seems sorta hard for me to think of her as an ettique-based, mannered person. But putting that aside, her intolerance for dirt...does that have anything to do with blood and guts? You should mention that up there if it does.

Backstory: I have a feeling this sort of fighting background will be seen throughout the team, but I'd like to know who's from where. I'm guessing Blaise is from Mistral being a graduate of Sanctum... and Dahlia... Menagerie? It's all optional stuff, but just wanna see if each team member is from a different region or something.

The uprising Dahlia makes her seem extremely powerful O.o I mean, didn't she have accomplices or something? (Also, the text turns gray in the story after the 2nd paragraph, not sure if it was intentional, just thought I'd mention it.

Weapon: Tiaowu de Yue Guang technically means "Dance of the Moonlight" too :O And now I can see that your char uses the fans as boomerangs and takes full advantage of dust (mine has daggers in them and doesn't use dust or throw the fans often like such). I'm surprised you didn't simply name them "Yue Guang," the full name seems sorta lengty for me, ah well.

Ability: Nothing wrong there. Expected stats.

Yuna huh? I totally didn't see that one coming, Anyways... hrmm... I think I know who to look at next.