Talk:Diana Fritillary/@comment-4806269-20160304001351

Everything seems fine, including her backstory and Semblance. However, I feel that both her weapon and abilities need to be explained more in detail; it isn't mentioned from where the electricity of her weapons come from: how do you charge them? do they have some kind of internal battery or use Dust crystals or something else? Regarding her "Abilities" section, there's no mention of any kind of weakness in her battle style/skills, which should exist considering she's just 17 years old.

Rejected for now.

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