Talk:Zerrin/@comment-13172690-20150303020038

Interesting character though there are a few problems here.

First off, what does Zerrin's name mean and does it have a color meaning? All characters in RWBY have to follow the color rule.

The weapon seems pretty solid and could use a little detail on how many bullets is in the weapon though what are his abilities? Every character has a fighting style when they are in combat.

For his bio, I feel like it could be fleshed out more since he's an older chatracter. Like what happened after his first mission and what is he now in the family?

Lastly, his semblance cannot have the enhancement with dust. It would make his semblance too similar to Blake's in the canon.

This profile really needs to be more fleshed out and will make it a better antagonist.

Until these are fixed,

Rejected

~RP Moderation Team~