Talk:Margaret Cavallo/@comment-27743663-20170207005701

CNR checks out.

Appearance is fine.

Personality is fine.

Backstory has some issues. For starters, how did her familly manage to hold off Grimm? Even if more advanced ones killed them, how did basics one do them off? They're only noted to be farmeres with no special training or Hunter background. Aside from that, taking down Atlesian Knights isn't /easy/, even canon characters had trouble with it. Don't see how your OC team could do it /easily/

Semblance I'm a bit hesitant on, but I suppose it has its limit. Just clarify if she cast it on other people or not, or if it's only applied to her. The way it's written makes it seem like the former.

Weapon, energy dust ain't a thing.

Tl;dr:

Rejected on:

- Family has no noted Hunter background to deal with Grimm, dealing with Atlesian knights /easily/

- Energy Dust ain't a thing.

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