Talk:Della Azure/@comment-17970636-20160219024251

Alright, just one small issue here dC, and that's the backstory.

Now, it's all good and well that her family's well known for their proficiency with weapons, but it's highly doubtful that Beacon, espcially Ozpin, would recuit someone based on their family history and not their own personal skill. Perhaps change it so that she lazily submitted a transcript or something and then got accepted because of her family as a reference?

Rejected.

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