Talk:Kohaku Säde/@comment-30530552-20190103040812

Alright, let's take a look here.

CNR checks out on all fronts. The links to such information is much appreciated.

Appearance section seems fine to me.

Well-faceted personality, details how he reacts to various scenarios and the range he can show is pretty refreshing.

Weapons seem fine, we've discussed them a lot on the Discord so they're pretty well fine-tuned.

Semblance is pretty interesting, seems okay to me. I'm intrigued to see how that would influence RPs...perhaps I should look at that one fight you've been doing with Amil for awhile now.

Abilities make sense.

Backstory--Saving the big boy for last, as usual:

-Simply put, it serves it's peurpose well, and while I still have questions about why Tuncay decided to adopt him, they're minor enough I don't really have much of an issue with it.

Don't feel the need to cover relationships that much, as a nonrequirement for a page. Does help flesh out his personality a bit more too, which is nice.

Overall, pretty solid work here. Nice job.

-Accepted.

~RP Moderation Team~

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