Talk:Jackson "Jak" Hyachino/@comment-5431934-20140207135124

This character was quite hard to decipher, what with excerpts such as "unless his Sister,Brother,or the White Fang" and "for when his Sister,Brother,Parents,or at the mention of the White Fang". That being said, from what I could decipher, his weapon's scythe form is way too similar to that of CR, and his semblance is not only unexplained but also a copy of Ruby's.

His backstory brings a host of new problems - why was his brother 'captured'? By whom? How was he capable of fending off a pack of beowolves when a hunter, albeit a wounded one, could not? Keeping in mind, of course, that a Hunter has gone through Beacon and is a professional hunter of the Grimm.

And why did you bring up this absurd point of Ozpin requiring people to vouch for new students? This is never mentioned or hinted at in the series, and considering the number of new students on those airships, do you really believe that they all had to get approval of current students first? And, if Ozpin was asking the first and second year students, why would Ruby vouch for him, as they join in the same year? Not to mention that simply having Ruby vouch for him is cause for rejection.

For the above issues,

Rejected.

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