Talk:Dust Strigidae/@comment-30530552-20190105024735

Alright, time to see what Dust here has to offer.

CNR checks out. Last name's pretty neat too.

Appearance works out. Neat art too.

Personality has no real contradictions, seems good.

Weaponry, Semblance, and Fighting Style all check out.

Backstory-wise, it checks out. Just make sure you fix the "maid teaching Ash" typo as well as "trio" to quartet or team when they return to Haven, seeing as a trio's 3 and a quartet is 4. Team sounds better and gives off all 3 too. Since you told me that they leave Beacon the day after their loss to IVRE, you'll want to change "several days" to "the day after" too, or something similar. Make sure if and when you do this you mark it as a minor edit so you don't need to resubmit.

All in all, well-done character, no major problems here.

-Accepted.

~RP Moderation Team~

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