Talk:A Song of Ringing Steel/@comment-8182065-20131014005557

So I left off at Impact, and I have to agree that most of it is very similar to what happened in canon. In my opinion, I know that you could have your characters be in the same places, and go through the same initiation, but I felt your characters observed the canon characters a bit too much in the beginning.

I'll continue reading though, because your work was well-written. Your character's personalities were shown quite marvelously.