Thread:Gundam Legilis/@comment-13593058-20160301212310

Hey Gundam, Dust here.

I'm writing to you here because I really don't want to rejected Carmine for the second time for the exact same reason and after consulting with other reviewers on the matter so I'll state it more clearly here what the problem is.

This "loophole" doesn't really work in this case just by mentioning the fact that they're constructs. The way you "fixed" the Semblance still implies the constructed ravens can act accordingly on their own despite the direction of Carmine. This still counts as summoning.

Now even if you didn't mean the fact that the cosntructs were alive (which you will have to clarify how one can tell if they are sentient or not), you're still missing a source for the construction. Is it Dust? Or something else? I don't know and the page did not say.

To be honest, I would stay away from trying to play around summmoning, there are still plenty of Semblances you can make with a Raven motif to it.

Anyway, I'll remove him from pending but I won't reject him, take your time in this matter. 