Talk:Hydra Larkspur/@comment-25924729-20191104072944

Sounds like a really nice character, lots of potential for RP.

Appearance and personality section are alright. It's actually refreshing to see a genuinely nice and peaceful OC, instead of the usual dramatic type.

Which only makes the backstory hurt much more. I really feel bad for this guy reading about what happens ;-;. But to be more serious, only a small thing that can be added in is to explain a bit what his family's artifacts are, or call them something like heirlooms instead. It does get a bit confusing, but not really reject worthy.

No semblance to note. General abilities are fine. Weapon could use more detail, especially what effects his Dust has, and the capabilities of the pistol like range, power and ammo count. But I don't see how not having those would make him too powerful or anything, especially with a very simple weapon and no semblance. If you ever resubmit this OC or make another one just take note of details like these please?

CNR and trivia section checks out, no other issues on the page. Yep, overall nice work.

Accepted.

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