Talk:Kage Tamashi/@comment-24087318-20140106054644

Character lacks incredible amounts of detail concerning history and personality.

As well, his abilities and weapons are leaning towards being overpowered and unfitting for RWBY. We don't know if anybody is capable of seeing or sensing others based on their Auras, or how this would lend to seeing how someone is going to attack as well. It gives him a sixth, almost mind-reading sense that's too overpowered and completely unfitting to the RWBY lore and world.

His accuracy, skill and speed are also on levels that are bordering on being overpowered, suggest toning these down extensively.

In addition, his backstory mentions a mercenary gang he was in when he was 12, when he was that age, likely he had no skills or real training to stand up to anything a simple gang would be put up against. Same with his friends and other members if they were all around his age since he "hopes to find them in Beacon".

Due to the above, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~