Talk:Eventi A. Takeshi-Meso/@comment-24087318-20140118030439

Her drones show a level of self-awareness and artifical intelligence we havn't seen in anything in RWBY so far, being able to defend her without input and communicate with her to inspire her. As well, their dust etchings wouldn't give them powers involving that specific element. Dust is a fuel that is consumed when used for its various effects, the etchings would get one use and burn out if the drones themselves posessed no Dust crystal or anything of the sort.

In addition, the drones don't seem to posess any real combat abilities in their inate form, which sort of removes why they'd even be like that besides rule of cool. We havn't seen things like them either, in terms of small-self propelled drones that could fly around similar to Quad-Rotors IRL.

As well, she seems to posess a secondary weapon in a wrist-mounted dust launcher that fires a ball of electricity. Characters in RWBY only posess one weapon, or multiple copies of the same weapon, and just have these weapons posess everything they need. The only sidearms we've ever seen as Shields (and with Jaune, the shield is a part of his weapon in essence.)

Her appearance also has a slight unknown spot, she's described as sporting a gear shaped tattoo on her forehead, but her backstory makes no mention of how or why she has it.

In addition, despite the village having trained knights and guards, and them falling to a Beowolf attack, she manages to fight them off despite given NO apprentice training. And there's a slight contradictory with how she took them all down with minimal effort, yet passed out from that strain.

The village of Titan seems to have a contradictory in itself, since her job as its mechanic states that she worked with robotic servants and vehicles, yet their guards are simply mideval inspired knights with little to no technology to their name. (For reference, Guns were invented long before Robots.)

Due to these above points, Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~

As well as it needs to be said, this character, personality aside, bears a striking resemblance to Eve from Elsword (even sporting the name, considering she prefers people call her "Evey" instead of "Eventi" due to her weapons and physical description. It's against Fanon rules to have characters that are simply exports, and I feel you may or should change a few aspects of the above to be less obvious in the reference/homage.