Talk:Rima Sheridan/@comment-24296957-20140619172111

Honestly, I feel like the backstory is lacking. Just feels like there's a void there.

And while it's not mandatory, I'd appreciate if you added ion a fighting style and a semblance part later on.

Otherwise, everything checks out. But I strongly recommend the aforementioned.

Welcome to the Fanon.

Accepted.

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