Talk:Veneziano Tiramisu/@comment-26104528-20170804193013

Super close, but...

At the current level of things, he's able to send off 1000 of these orbs from only 1% of his aura which is pushing too far on overpowered. When I mentioned that in my first review, I meant it to be the extreme opposite end of a specturm, not Gospel. So I apologize for being confusing.

That being said you still have to tone things down with it.

Again, you are close. Very close. This guy's a pretty cool looking OC so I want to see him accepted soon.

Rejected for now.

~RP Moderation Team~