Board Thread:News and Events/@comment-27603392-20130814012951/@comment-14295500-20130814060935

I cast my vote for Sapphire.

While the grammar and wording could use some editting and rewriting I liked Sapphire more than I expected to. I would encourage the use of an art generator such as ChibiMaker or TekTek in Sapphire's rewrite because that's what really kept rubbing me the wrong way was her reference picture. Her personality could use some clarification but the character felt earnest and I really loved her mother was a supportive figure in her life. Too many orphans RPCs!

Seth, while certainly striking out in a good direction felt like a love letter to John Marston rather than a stand alone OC. Reading through his history was a bit of a drag, listing all the amazing thing's he's done. In his rewrite I'd love to see the focus more on his personality and his humanity and flaws. Still, a journey of a million miles begins with a single step, and the road to a great RPC starts with putting them out there for the world to see.

Good on both Challengers!