Talk:Cinnamon Trebass/@comment-24678303-20150422194754

Again, there wasn't actually a reason to expell her from Beacon. She was defending a helpless creature, right? I don't think she would get expelled from a combat school for attacking a couple guys who could have killed a bird and may have attacked her, given the provocations.

Then, you still have her being recruited by Haiyang to come back to Beacon to be on his team. I think that it would recquire some sort of Administrative override, not just some random student deciding to scout some people from outside the school. That's not how Team Recruitment works.

Just a heads up, the "top part of the breasts" is called cleavage and it's "dyes", not "dies".

Otherwise, she looks fine. Appreciate the fact that you actually fixed quite a bit.

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~