Talk:Bryan Hyacintho/@comment-17970636-20140117052642

First off, emo people are not cold and ruthless, the term emo is used to often describe a form of rock music, and people who appear to eb standoffish and war very dark clothing with makeup, just a technicality there.

Why did the rage come from seeing his father dead? He wanted to follow in his father's footsteps sure, but seeing his father dead and his mother holding the said knife doesn't expiain much unless the two we're super close, also, how would a fully fledged hunter be killed by a mere housewife with no training whatsoever? Doesn't make much sense.

The weapon.... a gatling axe... kudos the art, but in reality, a gatling axe would need to be belt fed for the ammunition to be steady when he uses the gun form, no mention of how the bullets get fed in there, you ought to add that in.

The semblence is frankly, way too overpowered. 7 times heavier? He would kill anyone in one punch... Withstand bullets and whatnot? No sir, please reduce that power significantly.

Rejected.

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