Thread:Amet Revfold/@comment-24693472-20140806104235/@comment-24296957-20140806133051

I think his backstory is fine, however, the way he uses his Aura isn't. See, Aura can only be used to heighten someone's perception, amplify an attack, create a defensive barrier, provide minor healing, or unlock someone else's Aura. To say he uses it as a force field isn't following what we've seen in canon.

And for the semblance, there's nothing wrong with the concept, except...does he have to slash again to cause the frostbite? And with something like this, there should be some sort of cool down between usages. Say...10, 15 seconds. Plus, the frosbite shouldn't have the traditional kind of frosbite: after it's contracted, a simple touch with shatter the part. And the efect should be able to fade within that cooldown time.

You could change it to a numbing effect rather than frostbite, if that's something you're willing to do.

And...it's Accepted, but I see no comment saying he is...?