Talk:Holly Londres/@comment-24678303-20150210205706

Everything seems to check out, aside from one small detail in the backstory. You said her and her sister were fighting a Goliath and were chased off by Beowolves. WHY were they fighting Grimm before they went to Beacon in the first place? Students at Combat Schools don't fight Grimm, and aren't capable of doing so, until they achieve Beacon level. The other problem is that they were fighting a bloody Goliath. Ruby and Oobleck, as the latter stated, would not be able to do anything but aggravate it if they attacked it. It would take a full team of full fledged Hunters to take down a Goliath, so if they did attack one, i seriously doubt they'd be able to live to get chased off by Beowolves.

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