Talk:Flare Constiare/@comment-24087318-20140115045202

Character Weapon/Abilities sections seem to be worded a little oddly. Example being "The sword will expand creating a shield that can easily dodge most attacks except for the head or legs" Shields arn't exactly known for dodging, they're for blocking.

Suggest cleaning up Weapons/Abilities a little to remove awkward wordings like the above.

In addition, using Glyphs as direction changing platforms is something a little too close to what we've seen in Canon, specifically as Weiss' Semblance.

In addition, having her shield form enchanted to repair itself from any sort of damage isn't something we've seen in RWBY so far. Magic and other such things don't seem to exist in RWBY, everything is explained by use of Dust and other mechanics and bits of lore, and it's likely none of these would create a self-repairing weapon.

Rejected, but don't give up! You're getting there.

~RP Moderation Team~