Talk:Lorenzo Anacona/@comment-24087318-20140118174532/@comment-5726563-20140118180632

Sel, don't worry about the team part. He does have to be in a team, but a lot have trouble finding people to join, or making other characters. We don't reject for that because we realize it can be difficult to find people to join. As long as he rewords it as if he's in a team but never mentions them, so as to allow him to put them in later when he finds one, it should be fine.

The weapons could use some spicing up though. The closest we've seen in Canon to that is Jaune, and his shield is also a scabbard. Not to mention he faked his way in, taking someone elses transcripts.