Talk:Beige Valentine/@comment-30530552-20171110192542

Here's what we've got:

CNR is obvious but still needs to be noted in Trivia.

Outfit-wise, you could go for more description. Similarly, a character template and such would be quite beneficial, I'd wager. Category placement is still a problem carried over from the other page.

No true personality again, and very minimal backstory put in its place.

Her weaponry is okay, save for how it interacts with her Semblance.

Semblance is a no. Pocket dimensions are too dangerous for use and are essentially reality-breaking.

-Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~