Talk:Indeever Enata/@comment-13172690-20150603183646

Interesting character art, though a few problems with this charater have to be addressed.

First, in your species section, A faunus can only have ONE trait from it. And all faunus have good sight, not sense. You can look into rules for more information.

For the places you mentioned, could you explain where they are? Ambrose? Arcadia? Magna Opus? What are these?

Lastly for the semblance,  no matter how much limit you put on it, it is rejectable by the reason that it could result to auto dodging. So no.

With these points stated,

Rejected.

~RP Moderation Team~