Talk:Linus Krigyllene/@comment-30530552-20170419205530

Alright, here goes.

CNR is all good, both with the flax flowers (a blue) and the last name (a gold).

Backstory sounds good.

Weaponry, how long can he use his jetpack for? You say short bursts, but that could range anywhere from 2 to 10 seconds, or longer depending on your definition of it. Please be more specific. Otherwise, you are within the weapons / equipment limit, which is all good.

Semblance, it's quite a powerful and useful ability but it has a really strong counter to it with the recharge time, so I think it works. [The person who monitors this, feel free to dispute this if I'm wrong.]

Overall, I'd say just make mention of the time the jetpack can shoot for, and this can be accepted, as you have a good and balanced character here.

Accepted (after the jetpack revision occurs).

-PisceanWaterbender, reviewer-in-training