Talk:Abby Azurine/@comment-37405391-20181104153426

Like with Jade, I like the concept of the character. I like that she's a pacifist with people and faunus so instead trains in self defence, it's a good way to develop a character by giving them situations that challenge their morals.

I do think one problem I have, and this might be personal preference, is that she has a problems, and I know you said you had all of them except anorexia as well, I'm not trying to be mean, but when you have that many things attached to a character it makes them defined by those things. To show you what I mean, the personality section is 7 lines long, 3 of which are about her disorders, I know not all of them are disorders but I don't know how else to describe them. Again, this might just be my preference but it's just something to keep in mind, other than that, good character so far, keep it up.