Talk:Asher C. Stahl/@comment-24087318-20140831045448

Good character, semblance is interesting. Though there's two parts that don't quite make sense.

First is that his swords effect doesn't quite match what fire dust can do. Cauterizing wounds is fine, which does help prevent them from healing *properly*, but let's not forget Dust does likely need to be replenished, and the blade re-honed with it every so often.

Second is the last part of his Semblance "This ability also has a side effect of temporarily taking a portion of the targets weight and putting it onto Asher. One could say that he bears the weight of the other people’s burdens when he uses this Semblance. The only exception to this is the weight transfer between Heart and Asher as this has become permanent due to the accidental Aura awakening during their first encounter."

The first part, with the weight transfer, doesn't really match the Semblances effect itself, and the last part with the permanent connection is flat out. We don't know if Auras/Semblances/Souls are able to do things like that.

Until then, Rejected.

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