Talk:The Life of a Graduate/@comment-5431934-20130929163613

Ragaview time!

Your grammar, spelling, and punctuation were abnormally good. The only bit that annoyed me was a lack of a comma, but everyone makes a mistake from time to time.

Some of the classroom elements may seem more unrealistic now that we've seen some more episodes, what with there being over 100 students (a larger number than there were podiums from which they could retrieve chess pieces) and team RWBY not sitting together, as they seem to be in Port's class. The remark of unusual attire seemed somewhat out of place, as there seems to be very little standard in how people dress, apart from the uniforms that are understandably absent in the story.

Overall it was well-written, descriptive, and a good read. I liked it and look forward to the sequel fanfic hinted at in the last sentence.

Ragascore: 4.8/5 Stars